Week 10 CHAMP Match: Barcotic(4-0)Vs Unfukwitable(5-3)[Open For VOTES!!]

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@Barcotic @Unfukwitable

[Unfukwitable]

16....

[Spree]

Peep the new line limit for champ matches @Barcotic @Unfukwitable

[Barcotic]

cool
gl

[Unfukwitable]

20 sent

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@Barcotic

[Spree]

Confirmed

[Barcotic]

Unfuk aka Noq aka Recycles twice a year

guy's a fraud who's pride is lost. line for line ur not a purist
that style aint just fishy ..
someone catches something every time u try to drop allurin'
i keep my gf's pussy wet. she crazy in the saddle, magic!
her top 3 priorities are: D, V, us... no relation to ur battle tactics
shady af + u a biter. do heads believe it's appealing?
inoculate on those nameflips, no special treatment for stealing
i thought u wanted 16. damn, retire the pen
20 each is gonna drag, un... considering u can't spit fire for ten
u a beast at breaking rules, but dont claim ur fucking strapped
altho u aaare a recycling machine
.. so i guess u could say ur busting caps
this lame's a goner, not even my haters wanna spare this cunt
ill kick a rib-in quicker than soccer players on awareness month
gettin old but i still got it. then again, will ur geeks align tonight?
if im over the hill & the belt moves, u better leave my line of sight
go ahead n use broke's personals, i aint even sayin it's cheap
yes i am a landscaper ..
ur girl's boxwood welcome me any day of the week
I got a lethal tommy, but let's see how the heated shotty fares
the steel will transport this crooked man -that's steven hawking's chair
i give him 2 stars. sorry, this mark isn't cool to me
noq off the chain? nah, he's fallen apart w/ his jewelry

[Unfukwitable]

Ya Unconnections are gon b harsh on the ears;
Aero sparred w/ this queer;
& Aer plain mode was enough to make Bars disappear!.
then Murda Sho made u shit soy beans,
so talkin bout ya 5th only tends to annoy me;
From the commotion Mur-made, mann... any chance of me being scared of Bar-nickel?, boy please!.
&Allen got ya back?, well I got beams like Cyclops..
But I’m Jon Snow — the reason why Cro's gettin lead On Knights watch.
U'll hear a BLOAW for even Speakin a name;
I'll Show Bartering, give him shots & take his life... An even exchange!.
Switchblade was Rusty & weeks back I pumped up my aggression;
Guess Letters shook up something Devine & now u another nigga that the Butterfly effect'd.
Crying to sway votes issa cheat tactic that you use dog;
EVERY POST! We like There goes that Bar whine'n cheese again... Im puttin the whole Groupon.
U wouldn't be a Marshall Artist... if he heard ya raps & schemes @ the D,
So bow to a 'Sensation'... or get left in fetal at ya Masters knees.
If I give 'Barc shots' when these tool sparks,
He'll have a funeral In Yonkers, I’m turnin flesh into Juice, Bar.
U talk guns like those are what u market for bread;
Picture him strapped pushing a 38 B's only walkin round w/ nana's bra on his head.

[Wuxia]

Unfuk aka Noq aka Recycles twice a year

guy's a fraud who's pride is lost. line for line ur not a purist
that style aint just fishy ..
someone catches something every time u try to drop allurin'

☆☆☆☆☆

i keep my gf's pussy wet. she crazy in the saddle, magic!
her top 3 priorities are: D, V, us... no relation to ur battle tactics

☆☆☆

shady af + u a biter. do heads believe it's appealing?
inoculate on those nameflips, no special treatment for stealing

☆☆☆☆☆

i thought u wanted 16. damn, retire the pen
20 each is gonna drag, un... considering u can't spit fire for ten

☆

u a beast at breaking rules, but dont claim ur fucking strapped
altho u aaare a recycling machine
.. so i guess u could say ur busting caps

☆

this lame's a goner, not even my haters wanna spare this cunt
ill kick a rib-in quicker than soccer players on awareness month

☆☆☆

gettin old but i still got it. then again, will ur geeks align tonight?
if im over the hill & the belt moves, u better leave my line of sight

☆☆☆

go ahead n use broke's personals, i aint even sayin it's cheap
yes i am a landscaper ..
ur girl's boxwood welcome me any day of the week

☆☆☆☆☆ FIRE

I got a lethal tommy, but let's see how the heated shotty fares
the steel will transport this crooked man -that's steven hawking's chair

☆☆☆☆☆

i give him 2 stars. sorry, this mark isn't cool to me
noq off the chain? nah, he's fallen apart w/ his jewelry

☆

Ya Unconnections are gon b harsh on the ears;
Aero sparred w/ this queer;
& Aer plain mode was enough to make Bars disappear!.

☆☆☆☆☆ i'll excuse the played aer/plain nameflip because you're not using it on Aero, nice personal

then Murda Sho made u shit soy beans,
so talkin bout ya 5th only tends to annoy me;
From the commotion Mur-made, mann... any chance of me being scared of Bar-nickel?, boy please!.

☆☆☆ longwinded but same expo as my previous statement, just thought it was a bit wordy

&Allen got ya back?, well I got beams like Cyclops..
But I’m Jon Snow — the reason why Cro's gettin lead On Knights watch.

☆☆☆☆☆ sick

U'll hear a BLOAW for even Speakin a name;
I'll Show Bartering, give him shots & take his life... An even exchange!.

☆

Switchblade was Rusty & weeks back I pumped up my aggression;
Guess Letters shook up something Devine & now u another nigga that the Butterfly effect'd.

☆☆☆

Crying to sway votes issa cheat tactic that you use dog;
EVERY POST! We like There goes that Bar whine'n cheese again... Im puttin the whole Groupon.

☆☆☆☆☆

U wouldn't be a Marshall Artist... if he heard ya raps & schemes @ the D,
So bow to a 'Sensation'... or get left in fetal at ya Masters knees.

☆

If I give 'Barc shots' when these tool sparks,
He'll have a funeral In Yonkers, I’m turnin flesh into Juice, Bar.

☆

U talk guns like those are what u market for bread;
Picture him strapped pushing a 38 B's only walkin round w/ nana's bra on his head.

☆☆☆☆☆ roflz

This made for a fun read. Both guys had their faults, there were some exceptional bars, average bars, and mediocre bars. The exceptional ones hit at the right time, however there were instances where you guys stunted the momentum your verses were getting from the haymakers you landed. I wish you guys wouldn't have focused so much on nameplays. I've read enough battles from both of you guys to know that you both have had to deal with the same played material from opponents for years. There shouldn't have been any bar/un/noc/cro nameflips unless they were imaginative enough to distract the reader from how redundant the nameflips themselves are. I made that mistake in my last battle. You guys should have replaced those nameflips with wordplays. There were 2 standout lotb's that were awesome. Bar's pre-rebuttal with the landscaping concept, and Unfuk's Jon Snow bar. Both were immensely enjoyed. Unfuk, you are at your best when you use personals. You should do it more often. You're finding a comfort zone and it's a good look. Bar, you are at your best with clever wordplay. You're one of the best at it. You took a personal approach, too, but I wasn't feeling the wordplays you chose to execute them. They weren't as clever as the material I've come to expect from you. This battle was split down the middle. You both had high spots. You both had low points. But Unfuk's verse came off as more aggressive to me, so that decides it.

v-Unfuk

[GrimmZReaper]

i keep my gf's pussy wet. she crazy in the saddle, magic!
her top 3 priorities are: D, V, us... no relation to ur battle tactics
i thought u wanted 16. damn, retire the pen
20 each is gonna drag, un... considering u can't spit fire for ten
I got a lethal tommy, but let's see how the heated shotty fares
the steel will transport this crooked man -that's steven hawking's chair

vs


Ya Unconnections are gon b harsh on the ears;
Aero sparred w/ this queer;
& Aer plain mode was enough to make Bars disappear!.
U'll hear a BLOAW for even Speakin a name;
I'll Show Bartering, give him shots & take his life... An even exchange!.Crying to sway votes issa cheat tactic that you use dog;
EVERY POST! We like There goes that Bar whine'n cheese again... Im puttin the whole Groupon.


good overall battle... a lil weird Un formed his bars like Barcotic ususally does.. but I can see why....

I got Un with more hits overall,,,, and the opener was better than Barcs...which was the BOTB to me

V- UNFUK

[Lenox]

Nice bandwagon vote faggot ^^^

Anyways


Bar: lurr was good not great. Devious was slick asf. Nice. Inoculate was fire. Dragon wordplay?? Nah lol. Wasn't feeling busting caps. Awareness month was good lol. Line of sight was creative. Boxwood was dope. steve Hawkins chair was lol. Off the chain? No

Vs

Noq: bars disappear was good. Second bar was fucking terrible. Jon snow was dope. Bartering was bad. Butterfly was okay. Group on was bad.. masters knees. Was that even a diss? Juice bar was terrible. Closer was solid

Overall: lol at the other votes. But yea. Uns wording this battle was pretty terrible which is weird cuz it's normally solid which gives him an advantage most of the time along with his slick and creative concepts. This battle wasn't the case. Bar just outbarred this nigga.. SIMPLE.

Vote: Bar

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Re: Week 10 CHAMP Match: Barcotic(4-0)Vs Unfukwitable(5-3)
Unfuk aka Noq aka Recycles twice a year

guy's a fraud who's pride is lost. line for line ur not a purist
that style aint just fishy ..
someone catches something every time u try to drop allurin'
ok
i keep my gf's pussy wet. she crazy in the saddle, magic!
her top 3 priorities are: D, V, us... no relation to ur battle tactics
ok I get the devious part but idk what d, and v refer to..
shady af + u a biter. do heads believe it's appealing?
inoculate on those nameflips, no special treatment for stealing
didnt like
i thought u wanted 16. damn, retire the pen
20 each is gonna drag, un... considering u can't spit fire for ten
dope
u a beast at breaking rules, but dont claim ur fucking strapped
altho u aaare a recycling machine
.. so i guess u could say ur busting caps
you know this stuff is played
this lame's a goner, not even my haters wanna spare this cunt
ill kick a rib-in quicker than soccer players on awareness month
this was cool
gettin old but i still got it. then again, will ur geeks align tonight?
if im over the hill & the belt moves, u better leave my line of sight
alright
go ahead n use broke's personals, i aint even sayin it's cheap
yes i am a landscaper ..
ur girl's boxwood welcome me any day of the week
yooo, fire
I got a lethal tommy, but let's see how the heated shotty fares
the steel will transport this crooked man -that's steven hawking's chair
alright cool
i give him 2 stars. sorry, this mark isn't cool to me
noq off the chain? nah, he's fallen apart w/ his jewelry
lol nah


Solid showing this week, this weeks verse receives an 8.9/10!


Vs



Ya Unconnections are gon b harsh on the ears;
Aero sparred w/ this queer;
& Aer plain mode was enough to make Bars disappear!.
oh shit this was flames
then Murda Sho made u shit soy beans,
so talkin bout ya 5th only tends to annoy me;
From the commotion Mur-made, mann... any chance of me being scared of Bar-nickel?, boy please!.
this loses some points because it was forced yo
&Allen got ya back?, well I got beams like Cyclops..
But I’m Jon Snow — the reason why Cro's gettin lead On Knights watch.
dope
U'll hear a BLOAW for even Speakin a name;
I'll Show Bartering, give him shots & take his life... An even exchange!.
nah didn't like this
Switchblade was Rusty & weeks back I pumped up my aggression;
Guess Letters shook up something Devine & now u another nigga that the Butterfly effect'd.
decent
Crying to sway votes issa cheat tactic that you use dog;
EVERY POST! We like There goes that Bar whine'n cheese again... Im puttin the whole Groupon.
i expected you to finish a bit different here, didn't like how you ended it
U wouldn't be a Marshall Artist... if he heard ya raps & schemes @ the D,
So bow to a 'Sensation'... or get left in fetal at ya Masters knees.
nah?
If I give 'Barc shots' when these tool sparks,
He'll have a funeral In Yonkers, I’m turnin flesh into Juice, Bar.
if you're referencing styles p's business this was actually kinda cool, creative bar
U talk guns like those are what u market for bread;
Picture him strapped pushing a 38 B's only walkin round w/ nana's bra on his head.
nnnnnnaaaaaaah

Aero & Jon snow were both LOTB, but your verse was either hit or miss imo. This weeks verse receives an 8.6/10!


Close battle, to me it balls down to barcotixs consistency vs unfuks couple of hitters. I'm going with barc for consistency


Vote Barcotic

[Sizurp]

Allurin
DV us
Drag un
Rib in
Line of sight
Boxwood

Vs

Knights watch
Bartering
Butterfly effect
Juice bar

V/Bar ... This was a decent battle. Wasnt feeling the execution on some of Uns bars this week. Still a solid drop. Props to both

[plethora]

i keep my gf's pussy wet. she crazy in the saddle, magic!
her top 3 priorities are: D, V, us... no relation to ur battle tactics
shady af + u a biter. do heads believe it's appealing?
inoculate on those nameflips, no special treatment for stealing
i thought u wanted 16. damn, retire the pen
20 each is gonna drag, un... considering u can't spit fire for ten
u a beast at breaking rules, but dont claim ur fucking strapped
altho u aaare a recycling machine
.. so i guess u could say ur busting caps
gettin old but i still got it. then again, will ur geeks align tonight?
if im over the hill & the belt moves, u better leave my line of sight
go ahead n use broke's personals, i aint even sayin it's cheap
yes i am a landscaper ..
ur girl's boxwood welcome me any day of the week
I got a lethal tommy, but let's see how the heated shotty fares
the steel will transport this crooked man -that's steven hawking's chair


Vs


then Murda Sho made u shit soy beans,
so talkin bout ya 5th only tends to annoy me;
From the commotion Mur-made, mann... any chance of me being scared of Bar-nickel?, boy please!.
&Allen got ya back?, well I got beams like Cyclops..
But I’m Jon Snow — the reason why Cro's gettin lead On Knights watch.
U'll hear a BLOAW for even Speakin a name;
I'll Show Bartering, give him shots & take his life... An even exchange!.
Crying to sway votes issa cheat tactic that you use dog;
EVERY POST! We like There goes that Bar whine'n cheese again... Im puttin the whole Groupon.
If I give 'Barc shots' when these tool sparks,
He'll have a funeral In Yonkers, I’m turnin flesh into Juice, Bar.
U talk guns like those are what u market for bread;
Picture him strapped pushing a 38 B's only walkin round w/ nana's bra on his head.




V/ Bar

[Smog]

Bar

Opener
Devious
Inoculate
Recycling machine
Ribbon
Boxwood
Steven Hawkins chair

Vs

Opener
The whole sponge bob joint was pretty creative
Knights watch
Butterfly effect
Groupon
Sensation


Dope match, lotta creative shit just felt bar one more quotable.. didn't really like fuk cliser n bartering is pretty played so was the dragon one from bar.. close imo but I got it 7-6 bar.. enjoyable read fellas


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