Week 10 Contender Match: Smog(4-2) Vs Letterman(3-3)[Open for votes]

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@Smog @Letterman

[Smog]

Smfdh... here.. 14 good my man

[Letterman]

Lol sigh.. gotcha

[Smog]

14 done @Letterman

[Smog]

Sent

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Confirmed

[Letterman]

He a contender? He makes up personals.. half his shit aint true
So you only C-Span's of greatness, cuz in every single verse you fake news
Ur crew step in my hood? My team armed & gunning yall way
Cuz we'll show em 40 K's & I guarantee that they'll be running all day
He wins off false personals. Don't say this dude's become a soldier
We only see this conceal the deal cuz he hides the truth from the voters
In school he had a bully problem. We know what happened with him
They'd bash him til his nose bleeds, & leave this nerd hanging in the back of the gym
I dare u to speak a tough word. Say it, my men is waiting
And you'll get drug throughout the street like the Reagan administration
I told ur girl "let me give ya Chesapeake Bay" cuz that body made me quiver
Good news for you, she said no.. but the bad news is I left her drowning in the river
I've survived the best of the best. Top tiers and legends, I'm a king
What about you?...
...Oh, when heart is questioned we all know that you're the first to die in the ring

[Smog]

Check me out

Ion write crazy when facin lames, but still what I key up'll leave sump'n within hurt
So if u think Smog is Simple, Man s'cuz Ion Need Much ta get under ur Skynyrd
See I write up to my level of comp, but believe every win imma own it
So if this verse is fuckin wack dawg? Im just key'n a lil better than my opponent
U say u spray ar's ak's n M-16's..smh.. why spread a lie to us hommie?
u could rap bout pullin whatever Sticks Out.. just makes it Easier To Recognize ur a PHONY
Takin part won't label u great, so if ur hated on ur heart is ta blame then
See pussy, This ain't physical Ed.. ur NOT bein graded on ur participation
From afar we'll keep it rap cuz where I be peeps who yap tend ta get hurt, foul
I'm sayin, I'll fuckin touch ur chin up over a bar... n it ain't gon be no strengthening workout
Ur inconsistency fucks wit voters, 1 minute it's good, now it's some weak shit
I mean first ur penalties um.......then leave um LOOKIN OUT FOR THE REACHES!
If u quit text I wouldn't give a shit less, never thought u could rap
Think Joe Boston hanging it up.. ull retire from sump'n u was Never good at

[GrimmZReaper]

I told ur girl "let me give ya Chesapeake Bay" cuz that body made me quiver
Good news for you, she said no.. but the bad news is I left her drowning in the river

vs

U say u spray ar's ak's n M-16's..smh.. why spread a lie to us hommie?
u could rap bout pullin whatever Sticks Out.. just makes it Easier To Recognize ur a PHONY
Takin part won't label u great, so if ur hated on ur heart is ta blame then
See pussy, This ain't physical Ed.. ur NOT bein graded on ur participation
If u quit text I wouldn't give a shit less, never thought u could rap
Think Joe Boston hanging it up.. ull retire from sump'n u was Never good at


Not much here..alotta misses and ill advised angles by Let, including that Reagan bar
Smog won this easily with some decent hits

V- Smog

[Wuxia]

He a contender? He makes up personals.. half his shit aint true
So you only C-Span's of greatness, cuz in every single verse you fake news

☆

Ur crew step in my hood? My team armed & gunning yall way
Cuz we'll show em 40 K's & I guarantee that they'll be running all day

☆☆☆☆☆

He wins off false personals. Don't say this dude's become a soldier
We only see this conceal the deal cuz he hides the truth from the voters

☆☆☆☆☆ i pronounce it "cunceal" not "con ceal" but i'll let it slide, this was dope

In school he had a bully problem. We know what happened with him
They'd bash him til his nose bleeds, & leave this nerd hanging in the back of the gym

☆

I dare u to speak a tough word. Say it, my men is waiting
And you'll get drug throughout the street like the Reagan administration

☆☆☆☆☆

I told ur girl "let me give ya Chesapeake Bay" cuz that body made me quiver
Good news for you, she said no.. but the bad news is I left her drowning in the river

☆☆☆ okay, let me explain this, i'm not being a stickler on the wordplay, i actually thought it was ingenious even though it was a wordplay more tailored for a live battle delivery than in text, it was nice, my problem is that it was the best part of the bar, and you used it in the setup, i understand you needed to mention it sooner to build the concept, but nevermind i just woke up and i'm probably being a dick right now, you know what, i liked it, it was actually pretty dope so i'll give it ☆☆☆☆☆

I've survived the best of the best. Top tiers and legends, I'm a king
What about you?...
...Oh, when heart is questioned we all know that you're the first to die in the ring

☆☆☆☆☆ that was a super played wordplay BUT it was a fresh flip with impact

Check me out

Ion write crazy when facin lames, but still what I key up'll leave sump'n within hurt
So if u think Smog is Simple, Man s'cuz Ion Need Much ta get under ur Skynyrd

☆☆☆☆☆

See I write up to my level of comp, but believe every win imma own it
So if this verse is fuckin wack dawg? Im just key'n a lil better than my opponent

☆

U say u spray ar's ak's n M-16's..smh.. why spread a lie to us hommie?
u could rap bout pullin whatever Sticks Out.. just makes it Easier To Recognize ur a PHONY

☆☆☆☆☆ nice

Takin part won't label u great, so if ur hated on ur heart is ta blame then
See pussy, This ain't physical Ed.. ur NOT bein graded on ur participation

☆☆☆☆☆

From afar we'll keep it rap cuz where I be peeps who yap tend ta get hurt, foul
I'm sayin, I'll fuckin touch ur chin up over a bar... n it ain't gon be no strengthening workout

☆☆☆☆☆

Ur inconsistency fucks wit voters, 1 minute it's good, now it's some weak shit
I mean first ur penalties um.......then leave um LOOKIN OUT FOR THE REACHES!

☆☆☆☆☆

If u quit text I wouldn't give a shit less, never thought u could rap
Think Joe Boston hanging it up.. ull retire from sump'n u was Never good at


☆☆☆☆☆ lmao

☆☆☆☆☆ Lett = 5, Smog =6
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☆ Lett = 2, Smog = 1

I have Smog winning in a close battle. Some dope wordplays by both. Great stuff.

v-Smog

[Join The LLL]

He a contender? He makes up personals.. half his shit aint true
So you only C-Span's of greatness, cuz in every single verse you fake news
mmm didn't like this
Ur crew step in my hood? My team armed & gunning yall way
Cuz we'll show em 40 K's & I guarantee that they'll be running all day
alright
He wins off false personals. Don't say this dude's become a soldier
We only see this conceal the deal cuz he hides the truth from the voters
like Lesnar said, we don't pronounce conceal like that. But this was a cool bar nonetheless. Good
In school he had a bully problem. We know what happened with him
They'd bash him til his nose bleeds, & leave this nerd hanging in the back of the gym
nah man this is tooo basic, you know better
I dare u to speak a tough word. Say it, my men is waiting
And you'll get drug throughout the street like the Reagan administration
i just love how you worded this, bravo!
I told ur girl "let me give ya Chesapeake Bay" cuz that body made me quiver
Good news for you, she said no.. but the bad news is I left her drowning in the river
lmao it works but thats a helluva reach lol
I've survived the best of the best. Top tiers and legends, I'm a king
What about you?...
...Oh, when heart is questioned we all know that you're the first to die in the ring
ok you definitely could have worded this better but still wasn't bad.


Wassup letterman, seems like wordplay is becoming scarce these days eh? I know you can be nasty with the gun lines too yo, don't dumb it down for these people. I've seen you come brilliant in battles before, here you were a small lightbulb. Nah but good job pal, this weeks verse receives a 6.9/10!


Vs



Check me out

Ion write crazy when facin lames, but still what I key up'll leave sump'n within hurt
So if u think Smog is Simple, Man s'cuz Ion Need Much ta get under ur Skynyrd
ok clever wordplay, punch wasn't that harsh but overall not bad here
See I write up to my level of comp, but believe every win imma own it
So if this verse is fuckin wack dawg? Im just key'n a lil better than my opponent
nah didn't like this, oddly placed question mark also? <--- you see bro..
U say u spray ar's ak's n M-16's..smh.. why spread a lie to us hommie?
u could rap bout pullin whatever Sticks Out.. just makes it Easier To Recognize ur a PHONY
i had to read this a few times, take a deep breath, walk around my apt a bit, but I've decided this line is decent yo
Takin part won't label u great, so if ur hated on ur heart is ta blame then
See pussy, This ain't physical Ed.. ur NOT bein graded on ur participation
alright
From afar we'll keep it rap cuz where I be peeps who yap tend ta get hurt, foul
I'm sayin, I'll fuckin touch ur chin up over a bar... n it ain't gon be no strengthening workout
yowza! This was dope!
Ur inconsistency fucks wit voters, 1 minute it's good, now it's some weak shit
I mean first ur penalties um.......then leave um LOOKIN OUT FOR THE REACHES!
so gone, shoulda used this on barcotic tho. Good line tho guy
If u quit text I wouldn't give a shit less, never thought u could rap
Think Joe Boston hanging it up.. ull retire from sump'n u was Never good at
more of a diss to jb if anything, and this punch was predictable. Meh at best for me


Believe it or not I don't think I've ever read a smog verse. Not bad though, some lines were worded a bit weird but overall I liked this. That chin up bar was LOTB hands down. This verse receives a 7.5/10!


Before reading the verses I would have thought letterman would have won just based off name and status. But nah smog did good and letterman didn't do as good.

Vote Smog

[Lenox]

Let: cspan was dope, 40 k's was decent, conceal was dope, wp was a little off tho. I know you southern faggots like to stretch ur vowels but yea it was still dope. Hanging from gym was barely a punch. Regan administration is okay. Chesapeake bay was good lml. Wasn't feeling the closer at all

Vs

Smog: skynard was bad, second bar was even worse. Phony wasn't good. Physical ed was okay. Penalities was bad. Closer was your best bar.

Overall: worst verse I've read from smog in a long time. Seemed like he rushed his verse. His concepts didn't seem that well thought out so I don't know wtf the other voters are talking about, plus his wording was pretty shit. I got letterman just based off his creativity alone

Vote: letterman

[Sizurp]

40k
Closer

Vs

Keying
Physical ed
Chin ups

V/Smog... i wasnt feeling a lot of Lettermans material this week. I think Smog edges it

[plethora]

He a contender? He makes up personals.. half his shit aint true
So you only C-Span's of greatness, cuz in every single verse you fake news
^seems like something played but we'll let it slide
Ur crew step in my hood? My team armed & gunning yall way
Cuz we'll show em 40 K's & I guarantee that they'll be running all day
^simple but effective
He wins off false personals. Don't say this dude's become a soldier
We only see this conceal the deal cuz he hides the truth from the voters
^slight reach but passable
In school he had a bully problem. We know what happened with him
They'd bash him til his nose bleeds, & leave this nerd hanging in the back of the gym
^noo
I dare u to speak a tough word. Say it, my men is waiting
And you'll get drug throughout the street like the Reagan administration
^ehh
I told ur girl "let me give ya Chesapeake Bay" cuz that body made me quiver
Good news for you, she said no.. but the bad news is I left her drowning in the river
^dope
I've survived the best of the best. Top tiers and legends, I'm a king
What about you?...
...Oh, when heart is questioned we all know that you're the first to die in the ring
^ok

Vs.

Ion write crazy when facin lames, but still what I key up'll leave sump'n within hurt
So if u think Smog is Simple, Man s'cuz Ion Need Much ta get under ur Skynyrd
^statement
See I write up to my level of comp, but believe every win imma own it
So if this verse is fuckin wack dawg? Im just key'n a lil better than my opponent
^no
U say u spray ar's ak's n M-16's..smh.. why spread a lie to us hommie?
u could rap bout pullin whatever Sticks Out.. just makes it Easier To Recognize ur a PHONY
^cool
Takin part won't label u great, so if ur hated on ur heart is ta blame then
See pussy, This ain't physical Ed.. ur NOT bein graded on ur participation
^lol
From afar we'll keep it rap cuz where I be peeps who yap tend ta get hurt, foul
I'm sayin, I'll fuckin touch ur chin up over a bar... n it ain't gon be no strengthening workout
^dope
Ur inconsistency fucks wit voters, 1 minute it's good, now it's some weak shit
I mean first ur penalties um.......then leave um LOOKIN OUT FOR THE REACHES!
^cool
If u quit text I wouldn't give a shit less, never thought u could rap
Think Joe Boston hanging it up.. ull retire from sump'n u was Never good at
^statement



Thought smog was more creative & had more quotables, but at the same time more misses. Lettermans verse was light tbh, consistently light. fortunately for him that consistency was enough in this match


V/letter

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