Week 10: Lenny(2-4) Vs Dzaster(4-3)[EXT]

[Spree]

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@Lenny @DzasteR

[Lenox]

10.

[DzasteR]

10.

cool with me

[Lenox]

Strapped to end this faggots life, Lenny known to keep the gat tucked,
twin duels, with more hollows in dzaster's face then a kotd matchup.
Acting like u carry chrome, lol.. no one believes this sped coward,
U never had the black tube in ur history, unless its the one u deleted from ur web browser.
I got full metal jackets for false claiming faggots, listen kid I'm evil,
Anyone thinking u Paxton's retarded, I'll put dzaster in the sky like I'm planning a twister squeal.
acting tough without backing it up?? this dweebs getting slated,
Ur an usher to the text scene. & everything out this faggots mouth is disease related.
I ether fools, I'm either cracking heads or packing led, I can't stand this sped,
everybody knows he's a korn, & I can't wait to talk mad shit when this faggots dead.

[Spree]

@DzasteR your verse is due tonight!

[Spree]

Lenny wins open for feed

[Barcotic]

i liked the twister line
opener was ur best tho, fire

rest of the verse was light

[Wuxia]

Strapped to end this faggots life, Lenny known to keep the gat tucked,
twin duels, with more hollows in dzaster's face then a kotd matchup.

☆ this was too predictable and his name has been referenced to dizaster alot already, i know their promo battle just dropped, which is why you're mentioning it, but still

Acting like u carry chrome, lol.. no one believes this sped coward,
U never had the black tube in ur history, unless its the one u deleted from ur web browser.

☆

I got full metal jackets for false claiming faggots, listen kid I'm evil,
Anyone thinking u Paxton's retarded, I'll put dzaster in the sky like I'm planning a twister squeal.

☆ forced wp

acting tough without backing it up?? this dweebs getting slated,
Ur an usher to the text scene. & everything out this faggots mouth is disease related.

☆☆☆

I ether fools, I'm either cracking heads or packing led, I can't stand this sped,
everybody knows he's a korn, & I can't wait to talk mad shit when this faggots dead.

☆

There were simplistic bars, such as the played Dzaster np and the Korn wp, Paxton's was forced the way you used it. For example, "anyone thinking u paxton's retarded", worded as is, doesn't work. BUT if you said "anyone thinking HE Paxton's retarded" that would have been fire. Your wording screwed you over, and the error of putting "squeal" instead of "sequel" cometely deflated the impact. I've seen better from you.

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*completely

[Lenox]

Thx

[Join The LLL]

Strapped to end this faggots life, Lenny known to keep the gat tucked,
twin duels, with more hollows in dzaster's face then a kotd matchup.
alright coo
Acting like u carry chrome, lol.. no one believes this sped coward,
U never had the black tube in ur history, unless its the one u deleted from ur web browser.
i like what you were going for but nobody refers to any type of gun or watevr as black tube lmao
I got full metal jackets for false claiming faggots, listen kid I'm evil,
Anyone thinking u Paxton's retarded, I'll put dzaster in the sky like I'm planning a twister squeal.
lil stretched and forced here
acting tough without backing it up?? this dweebs getting slated,
Ur an usher to the text scene. & everything out this faggots mouth is disease related.
this was cool
I ether fools, I'm either cracking heads or packing led, I can't stand this sped,
everybody knows he's a korn, & I can't wait to talk mad shit when this faggots dead.
[b]not bad but had potential to end it better, still worked tho

Yee

[Lenox]

A black tube is a barrel of a gun but I can see what you mean