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    Week 12: Basic M (2-1) vs. BROKE LESNAR (8-1)[open for votes]

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    Re: Week 12: Basic M (2-1) vs. BROKE LESNAR (8-1)

    Here

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    Re: Week 12: Basic M (2-1) vs. BROKE LESNAR (8-1)

    Check. 12?

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    Re: Week 12: Basic M (2-1) vs. BROKE LESNAR (8-1)

    Quote Originally Posted by B Dot LESNAR View Post
    Check. 12?
    Sure thing

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    Re: Week 12: Basic M (2-1) vs. BROKE LESNAR (8-1)

    Quote Originally Posted by Basic M
    Ya bitch calls from time to time. Apparently ur a poser. LOL, its got me ravin.
    Any time she brings up Pleather response is, “ I want you, he’s just a silly imitation”.

    another fuckin alias huh, didn't spree warn u to quit?
    no wonder u put up affront, ur stupid insults are corny as shit
    what's ur real username?, ur a patented fraud n geek
    it's obvious m isn't authentic, cuz he's battlin smog this week
    m dickin some foul puss, all them sluts is mad poor
    dimes refuse to touch base, so he only fux wit crack whores
    n yo my goons'll disappear u, ur odd wit nerdy habits
    bet if this gonorrhea peers, its cuz he squad wit dirty faggots
    ur average at best dawg, while i'm rather fresh often
    i'll show emigrate time...to leave was after pleth washed him
    ur bland generics n filler, my personal game is clean
    just look how regular basis, every verse it's the same routine

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    Re: Week 12: Basic M (2-1) vs. BROKE LESNAR (8-1)

    Quote Originally Posted by plethora View Post
    B dot Lesnar vs. Lenny isnt a batlle, its a lovers quarrel
    Quote Originally Posted by Lenny View Post
    Good verse

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    I guess u didn't read either of our verses faggot
    Quote Originally Posted by B Dot LESNAR View Post
    lmao i'm just fucking with u ur verse was fuckable
    Quote Originally Posted by Lenny View Post
    I rushed but I still had decent material. Maybe I'm getting better lol
    Quote Originally Posted by B Dot LESNAR View Post
    i would definitely put my dick inside it
    We figured lenny was a virgin but those quotes changed the game.
    He went from barely having guts, to having them totally rearranged.
    Japanese culture fucked ur mojo, on the big stage u lost ur groove.
    Cuz it was fuckin ironic Bar took all ur bark and turned it into food.
    Pop ur lid off and slide off, its dangerous whenever the sticks hawkin.
    Get bodied n forgot about so quick we all thought u were joe boston.
    If these thoughts lift off, they’re sick dawg. It all involves a serrated blade.
    If you saw these ideas, you’d break my lightbulb n slit ur wrist w/ sucha haste.
    1st my shottys taken you apart. Piece by piece im ending u, bitch.
    Then the C-4’ll blow ya scrap yards away but trust me i aint recycling shit.
    My crew on some b n e shit. We’ll hit ya house, tie u up, n torch ya kids
    This tortures a workout. Me n my homies doin box jumps in n out ya baby crib.

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    Re: Week 12: Basic M (2-1) vs. BROKE LESNAR (8-1)

    Tbh either verse wowed me, Lesner's wordplay was creative, but at points he somewhat neglected to make it balanced. I'm old school towards wp, meaning I prefer wp & flips to work 'both ways' as in I should be able to both read & say it naturally. But I digress, overall that was a good verse, nothing special, yet not at all wack. As for Basic M, the verse was average, no BARS hit crazy. Had some good usage of imagery, but didn't have any true punches, which caused it to be a dull read. Both had clear wording throughout & to me delivery is key, so I appreciate that. Overall after comparing the verses side by side I vote BROKE LESNER, he just had more to offer his audience.

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    Re: Week 12: Basic M (2-1) vs. BROKE LESNAR (8-1)[open for votes]

    Dot


    Opener was ok
    Authentic was cool, light tho
    Touch base Is played
    Gonnoreha peers was a nice wp,
    Thought emigrate time was dope
    Cliser was nice to

    Basic

    Opener was cool lol
    Bar took ur bark was iight, considering japs be eating that shit
    Didn't really like the joe Boston line mainly how it was executed
    Ideas/ light bulbs kinda played but u switched it up enough to land a jab
    Scrap yards was cool
    Closer was ok

    Pretty cool battle, felt M started strong with a personal approach then let it slip away. still had some cool bars didn't really like the JB line n cliser was light.. the idea joint was light also.. dot went all out on wp, not a huge fan of a whole verse like that but u still connected well on them.. touch base is played, authentic was cool but light.. overall I felt dot landed more effective punches here.. it's close but I got dot edging this out.. good read y'all

    Dot

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    Re: Week 12: Basic M (2-1) vs. BROKE LESNAR (8-1)[open for votes]

    gonorrhea peers
    emigrate

    vs

    opener
    scrap yards

    broke's shit aint really hit hard this time tbh, the dope concepts were there but the impact/disses were soft at times. a little rewording coulda fixed that, but i think he was more concerned lining up even lines again lol still a decent verse but basic's was just harsher. better nonquotes too, clear difference in impact imho

    v/basic

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    Re: Week 12: Basic M (2-1) vs. BROKE LESNAR (8-1)[open for votes]

    BROKE 2-1

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    Re: Week 12: Basic M (2-1) vs. BROKE LESNAR (8-1)[open for votes]

    another fuckin alias huh, didn't spree warn u to quit?
    no wonder u put up affront, ur stupid insults are corny as shit
    ^3/5
    what's ur real username?, ur a patented fraud n geek
    it's obvious m isn't authentic, cuz he's battlin smog this week
    ^3/5
    m dickin some foul puss, all them sluts is mad poor
    dimes refuse to touch base, so he only fux wit crack whores
    ^4/5
    n yo my goons'll disappear u, ur odd wit nerdy habits
    bet if this gonorrhea peers, its cuz he squad wit dirty faggots
    ^3/5
    ur average at best dawg, while i'm rather fresh often
    i'll show emigrate time...to leave was after pleth washed him
    ^5/5
    ur bland generics n filler, my personal game is clean
    just look how regular basis, every verse it's the same routine
    ^3/5


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    We figured lenny was a virgin but those quotes changed the game.
    He went from barely having guts, to having them totally rearranged.
    ^4/5
    Japanese culture fucked ur mojo, on the big stage u lost ur groove.
    Cuz it was fuckin ironic Bar took all ur bark and turned it into food.
    ^4/5
    Pop ur lid off and slide off, its dangerous whenever the sticks hawkin.
    Get bodied n forgot about so quick we all thought u were joe boston.
    ^0/5
    If these thoughts lift off, they’re sick dawg. It all involves a serrated blade.
    If you saw these ideas, you’d break my lightbulb n slit ur wrist w/ sucha haste.
    ^2/5
    1st my shottys taken you apart. Piece by piece im ending u, bitch.
    Then the C-4’ll blow ya scrap yards away but trust me i aint recycling shit.
    ^4/5
    My crew on some b n e shit. We’ll hit ya house, tie u up, n torch ya kids
    This tortures a workout. Me n my homies doin box jumps in n out ya baby crib.
    ^2/5


    16/30






    V/Lesnar

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    Re: Week 12: Basic M (2-1) vs. BROKE LESNAR (8-1)[open for votes]

    3-1 I'll vote on this shortly

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    Re: Week 12: Basic M (2-1) vs. BROKE LESNAR (8-1)[open for votes]

    @Kill Spree go ahead and close this up. Lets get next week goin. Good shit @B Dot LESNAR

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    Re: Week 12: Basic M (2-1) vs. BROKE LESNAR (8-1)[open for votes]

    dot wins

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