Week 10 Mag

[Barcotic]

again
allll good

i knew what i had to do

[Smog]

ok
his verses usually look like this (to the tee & obv with real words lol) ...

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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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esentially a square, including the right side where it shouldnt be unless ur contantly editing/changing wording to make each 2nd line fit with the last bar's 2nd line (setups as well)
hence the 90 degree concept on his square/rectangle shaped verses

Fresh had those verses down packed

[Barcotic]

hah

[Wuxia]

Lmao. I liked the 90° bar because I really think a bar should be clean, easy to read and impactful. He nailed it. Sometime's I'll shorten the length of my bars, sometime's I'll increase it. But I always use the same template. Alot of ppl have they're own writing styles. Bar's angle reminded me of Unfuk's when he clowned boyznblack for his longbar, bold text, highlighted, italics, noob af garbage he drops in every verse. That shit started in the mid-90's and died by the late 90's. Yet he still does it take 22 years later. Roflz. It slays me.

[Lenox]

Lmaooo

[Wuxia]

ur eyes all [I]syrupy[/I cuz ]these rounds are buttered up just for u, pancakes are delicious nigga

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ur eyes all syrupy cuz these rounds are buttered up just for u, pancakes are delicious nigga

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ur eyes all syrupy cuz these rounds are buttered up just for u, pancakes are delicious nigga

[Smog]

Lmao

[Barcotic]

rofl
class

[Spree]

[GrimmZReaper]

lmao... long as I don't waste my life doing an FBI background for a fictional net battle, im good...

[Notti]

lmao... long as I don't waste my life doing an FBI background for a fictional net battle, im good...

i actually run/co-own a business doing level 2 FBI background checks lmao.. instant results

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everyone sayin they liked the 90 degree bar.. that's cool it jus helps prove my point which is that you can't really teach someone how to get better as for concepts and shit because everyone like different shit

[Letterman]

For concepts you just gotta think outside the box. Getting better is more with the technical stuff like wording and execution.

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There are millions of concepts to be used lol a lot of battlers just focus on the same ones.

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Although it's also a thing of where your audience has to understand your concepts. So they have to be relatable.. like Barcotic could use mad Canadian references as concepts but a lot of people wouldn't get em. So I guess it is kinda limited but that's where creativity comes in

[Barcotic]

agreed
there's endless concepts out there, it's about being creative enough to form em
also taking into consideration how abstract/outta the norm theyll appeat to some folks. that's my problem at times. gettin too excited knowing for a fact that a concept i jus thought of is 100% fresh, then using it without putting myself in other ppls shoes

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*appear