Week 11: Authentic (0-0) vs. Skurj (1-2)[open for feed]

[Wuxia]

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LLL SEASON XXl RULES!

verses due thursday 11:59PST
Minimum Lines = 10 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines

CHAMP MATCH IS MIN 14 Lines

Extension: Up to opponent
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Failure to provide these links will result in vote deduction In fallowing week
Failure to meet these requirments two weeks in a row will Earn yourself an L on your record & 3 weeks till Title contension
3 Week Failure = Season Ban

1 no shows you out for the fallowing week.
3 no shows you out for season.

Since everyone MUST Vote on Champ/Contenders
Those battles will be Majority Votes WIN!!

NO BITING OR RECYCLING!!!!
Biting results in a SEASON BAN
Recycle Once = DQ
RECYCLE TWICE = BANNED FOR SEASON

Contender match loses result in 2 weeks till contension

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@Skurj. @Authentic

[Skurj.]

Check

[Authentic.]

Tis what tis gone be

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14 or match who drop first.

[Skurj.]

May need the ext just in case

[Authentic.]

In case of what? Key a verse.. Thats literally what i JUST did.

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Let's get this over with..

Scientists' ultimately proving that God n Jesus is in nonexistence
n like ^ I've did my research. Its no ^ or concepts in ya writtens
Kill Spree was bein a jerk.. knowin i wrap my knuckles n fill hurses
cuz ur 1-2s the worsts... record on LLL n in every bar in ya verses
U can take champ out ya avy n put a MacLemore up, cuz u homo
or write him a letter man, cuz yo verse 'ginst him u shudda noshowed
Rejects get respected doe.. now days. That seem to be the trend
Spree needed a slot to fill how u got in, cuz yo only W's no show win
Just sign out the league, n meet me in Frontlines w.tactical gear on
so after i leave u bloody&mangled on the ^... i, at least, wont feel wrong
. We can leave it at this, so long, anotha L. After the battle, just no bitchin
and shout out to yo shout in Week 8 Mag... for the top WTF bar to get mentioned..

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[Spree]

@Authentic you going to grant skurj the ext or no

[Authentic.]

Dont wanna bitch about it, but i didnt agree. He never replied back either. He said he "may need it".

[Spree]

Dont wanna bitch about it, but i didnt agree. He never replied back either. He said he "may need it".

So no you don't grant it?


Authentic wins by no show skurj banned for the season

Open for feed

[Lenox]

Lol

[Authentic.]

Keeping the rules in place...

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...open-for-votes

[Wuxia]

In case of what? Key a verse.. Thats literally what i JUST did.

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Let's get this over with..

Scientists' ultimately proving that God n Jesus is in nonexistence
n like ^ I've did my research. Its no ^ or concepts in ya writtens

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Kill Spree was bein a jerk.. knowin i wrap my knuckles n fill hurses
cuz ur 1-2s the worsts... record on LLL n in every bar in ya verses

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U can take champ out ya avy n put a MacLemore up, cuz u homo
or write him a letter man, cuz yo verse 'ginst him u shudda noshowed

☆☆☆☆☆

Rejects get respected doe.. now days. That seem to be the trend
Spree needed a slot to fill how u got in, cuz yo only W's no show win

☆☆☆
Just sign out the league, n meet me in Frontlines w.tactical gear on
so after i leave u bloody&mangled on the ^... i, at least, wont feel wrong

☆

. We can leave it at this, so long, anotha L. After the battle, just no bitchin
and shout out to yo shout in Week 8 Mag... for the top WTF bar to get mentioned..


☆☆☆☆☆

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Decent verse here. I think you could have done better with your "^" bars so they had more impact. I like how you used personals in the majority of your verse, just work to make them more inventive, maybe flip some idioms into fresher concepts and use wordplays. Keep it up, bro.

[Authentic.]

Yup.. I appreciate that. I'ma utilize that feedback.

[Join The LLL]

Nice verse but quick question


Why did you think doing s k u r j was a good idea?

[Authentic.]

Cause nobody else do it. plus it was a personal verse. just to play off the personal attack i lined it up.

[Join The LLL]

I see the potential in you bro, shoot me a PM if you're feeling lucky.