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    BROKE LESNAR vs. Schadenfreude[Open For Votes]

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    @B Dot LESNAR @scha denfreude

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    Re: BROKE LESNAR vs. Schadenfreude

    Check. Probably going 20.

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    Re: BROKE LESNAR vs. Schadenfreude

    Schadenfreude checked in.

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    Re: BROKE LESNAR vs. Schadenfreude

    @B Dot LESNAR
    I have Caj verse

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    Re: BROKE LESNAR vs. Schadenfreude

    made an alias to pad his record, ur an evident weasel/stealth cheater
    u plucked so many green herbs on nc, u can fill a resident evil health meter
    i brought that dragunov with me, remove u with a stupid insane shot
    schaden get quickscoped n dropped so fast, u'd think i was usin an aimbot
    facts: u ain't brolic or tough pussy, your beefcake image fuckin blows
    look all of that macho bullshit's invalid, i'll leave u crippled as one of those
    ur false confidence got u twisted, i'm bout to coat ur flesh with scars
    it's unproductive to be optimistic here, a fat lady sanguine she read ur bars
    there's no question ur street af tho, yeah this plain faggots a vagrant
    cuz when broke clap the macadam, his fuckin brain splatter the pavement
    i heard ur girlfriend got crabs nigga, it's that garbage cooter u scoop
    bitch so familiar with handlin bugs, she can train a starship trooper recruit
    and schaden flirt with ratchet hoes, ur peoples busted as hell square
    so if dude got friends with benefits, they're leechin off government welfare
    your simple multis got no halo effect, this youngin finnah get floored
    all it takes is a single elite melee to drop u, that's a covenant energy sword

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    Re: BROKE LESNAR vs. Schadenfreude

    Shads verse



    Sent a callout aggressively as if testing Me w/ his style-void raps
    now Broke back mountin’ an attack..looking gay af for his cowboy act.
    Got many recordings of his wife whoring, getting her mid rattled
    while the only way Lesbian porn, is if ever him & Bar had a vid battle.
    Heard yo fathering’s trife, I raise twin Ruges, popping ‘em right,
    better appreciate ya kids ‘fore these terrible twos take ya toddler’s life.
    Gon’ cyber stalk much as ya like, just to post weak verses of text
    s’not really an achievement if writing wack personals is yo personal best.
    Yo shitty votes either mean u need literacy or a Lasik operation,
    fool how do u use a star system, yet lack capacity for stellar observation?
    Phony dickriding tactics due to this two-faced faggot’s awful taste
    I bet yo favorite ‘play’ list got more Fake Love than Aubrey Drake’s.
    Bitch this one more of my suite victories, I’m laid up comfortable,
    can never call u the Radisson RB, when there remains room for The W.
    Bout 8 spots into yo drops, readers are usually seen nodding..
    in comparison to my writing depurate’s little more than a clean body.

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    Re: BROKE LESNAR vs. Schadenfreude[Open For Votes]

    idk, broke came in tough. wasnt diggin the resi evil bar. dragonuv bar was a little more raw.couldnt really figure out the macho beefcake line. idk. sanquine was a miss for me. the gvmnt welfare bar was dope. the halo shit is meh. sry broke. seen better from you bro. idk

    schad. the opener was kinda homo, guess that was the point. didnt dig the porn bar much. terrible twos was a bit more raw. liked it. personals line was ok. not following the star system line much. where is that coming from, maybe i missed somethn? aubrey drake line was cool. not sure i like the radisson line a whole bunch but ok. closed out ok,

    nothing spectacular here or really LOLable imo guys. i know your both capable of much more. close battle though. i gotta go schad here. both verses were kinda meh and not very exciting but schad a little more raw to his shit. i think the resident evil and halo games bars pushed me towards schad more. just seemed like you dug to far back for those and im sure they been used millions of times over. thanks guise

    v- Schad
    Adolf Spitler.

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    Re: BROKE LESNAR vs. Schadenfreude[Open For Votes]

    No love, really?

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    Re: BROKE LESNAR vs. Schadenfreude[Open For Votes]

    Broke - res evil was coo;; aimbot, idk wasn't really feeling and more gun bravo to me plus I can't do two nerdy references in a row;; I don't get the Macho line;; sang when don't really like those type of bars unless executed well this was just ok;; macadam I like the wordplay but I feel like you're being lazy in approach;; starship was cool & clean;; friends w benefits has been done but good attempt;; covenant sword another nerdy bar I'm not looking up.

    Overall this was pretty cool. Some jabs, kinda played it safe. Coo coo.



    Schad - broke back is just ok.;; Les be in porn was a very light diss no sting;; terrible twos was nice, good set up & delivery;; personal best I see what you tried to do but it fell flat;; stellar observation was really good and a good personal;; Aubrey Drake fake love I don't get the entire bar and don't feel like looking into it;; raddison the W was aight I liked the clever attempt;; depth your rates? Forced


    Overall this was cool. Two really nice lines the rest seemed like you tried to adapt to their style.




    I came in wanting to vote Broke but Schad got the W here.

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    I may have to edit my vote to include a point breakdown. It was too close.
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    Re: BROKE LESNAR vs. Schadenfreude[Open For Votes]

    am I allowed to vote?

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    Re: BROKE LESNAR vs. Schadenfreude[Open For Votes]

    Quote Originally Posted by Heise View Post
    am I allowed to vote?
    Go ahead

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    Re: BROKE LESNAR vs. Schadenfreude

    Quote Originally Posted by Kill Spree View Post
    Shads verse



    Sent a callout aggressively as if testing Me w/ his style-void raps
    now Broke back mountin’ an attack..looking gay af for his cowboy act.

    I used a wp similar to this, I didn't think it hit but appreciate the attempt

    Got many recordings of his wife whoring, getting her mid rattled
    while the only way Lesbian porn, is if ever him & Bar had a vid battle.

    Didn't like this.. Les be in

    Heard yo fathering’s trife, I raise twin Ruges, popping ‘em right,
    better appreciate ya kids ‘fore these terrible twos take ya toddler’s life.
    Gon’ cyber stalk much as ya like, just to post weak verses of text
    s’not really an achievement if writing wack personals is yo personal best.
    Yo shitty votes either mean u need literacy or a Lasik operation,
    fool how do u use a star system, yet lack capacity for stellar observation?

    favorite section of verse, worded well..

    Phony dickriding tactics due to this two-faced faggot’s awful taste
    I bet yo favorite ‘play’ list got more Fake Love than Aubrey Drake’s.

    eh, didn't like the concept

    Bitch this one more of my suite victories, I’m laid up comfortable,
    can never call u the Radisson RB, when there remains room for The W.

    once again appreciate the plays....but I'm not messing with hotel concepts lol

    Bout 8 spots into yo drops, readers are usually seen nodding..
    in comparison to my writing depurate’s little more than a clean body.

    nah forced...
    made an alias to pad his record, ur an evident weasel/stealth cheater
    u plucked so many green herbs on nc, u can fill a resident evil health meter

    ok..

    i brought that dragunov with me, remove u with a stupid insane shot
    schaden get quickscoped n dropped so fast, u'd think i was usin an aimbot

    straight, but not dope

    facts: u ain't brolic or tough pussy, your beefcake image fuckin blows
    look all of that macho bullshit's invalid, i'll leave u crippled as one of those

    Invalid and invilid? Nah aren't pronounced the same.

    ur false confidence got u twisted, i'm bout to coat ur flesh with scars
    it's unproductive to be optimistic here, a fat lady sanguine she read ur bars
    there's no question ur street af tho, yeah this plain faggots a vagrant
    cuz when broke clap the macadam, his fuckin brain splatter the pavement

    not quite getting the double meanings here, I know macadam is a road of a sort, but I'm not tiring in the whole..wp

    i heard ur girlfriend got crabs nigga, it's that garbage cooter u scoop
    bitch so familiar with handlin bugs, she can train a starship trooper recruit

    eh.. 1997 semi known flick.

    and schaden flirt with ratchet hoes, ur peoples busted as hell square
    so if dude got friends with benefits, they're leechin off government welfare

    straight but nothing crazy..

    your simple multis got no halo effect, this youngin finnah get floored
    all it takes is a single elite melee to drop u, that's a covenant energy sword

    Idk man... Ok I guess

    I have schadenfreude here. Ionno....not adam of the homonym wordplays with loose associations. But other than that, u didn't have too much misses. While shade had duds too.

    V schaden

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