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    Disappointed

    i'm the penman without a name
    my ink ran dry and coloured me blank
    it used to be so viscous and vicious
    my pen used to be sharp as a blade
    it's bloody trail exposing many victims
    scriptures were sacred and fictitious
    used to sharpen my steel every day
    now i fill my time in an empty way
    i lived for weekly improvements
    until i became useless, a nuisance
    like postmen i delivered in all the weather
    until the day i stopped writing altogether
    once a keener became braggadocio
    i'd always find a way to no show
    deemed myself a Master Craft but you can call me Canadian Tire
    because my quality and reliability is seemingly expired

    i once wrote with my blood, tears and perspiration
    struck down by lack of motivation and inspiration
    the time's arrived to conclude this vacation
    i've grown feeble in this time of stagnation
    i'm depending on what muscle memory remains
    keep writing whether my wrist severs or strains
    like planning to read the books on my shelf
    it's another promise i've made to myself
    these are the ones I never seem to keep
    maybe it's the reason i've been losing sleep

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    Re: Disappointed

    this is dope .. i flowed it to the disappointed beat...

    "used to sharpen my steel every day
    now i fill my time in an empty way"

    maybe your sword is shape enough... some osf us need to observe meditation instead of fighting...
    "he had 3 down and bet 3 m's ... so you know what happened to him ... he got 3 rounds" - Lord Superb

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