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Thread: I'll empty my OWN Clip

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    MAD! A Disciple's Avatar
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    I'll empty my OWN Clip

    My kids live...
    What you think they're cabbage patch dolls
    Lie vs truth did we even get divorced or was it just analled
    I mean not to be a bitch butttt
    You wanna act like I was cursing YOU out well fine I'll be more abrupt
    I CAN tell you what I am and what I'm not
    What's the point of a facade you paint if you ain't live up to sign on that dot
    You can be anyone you want to be
    Most people... but see... I just can't be what was destined to me
    And I know and I get it
    Go give my title to any bitch you like that wants to scream at me set it
    Forget it, I KNOW that you let it
    3 years talking to a wall like Tom hanks was talking to his ball
    But you still ain't, the truth still ain't clear?
    But yet each year...
    It's all up in your face, every word in rhyme I ever posted that can't be replaced
    Did I know, no but I assume you did
    Can anyone tell how much longer I'm the political prisoner on this bid
    And for what...
    You want me to be a bitch well hey she here
    You could have told me any fucking time during these 23 years

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    Even the liquor store told me only Vsop
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    Re: I'll empty my OWN Clip

    if joe budden was wack

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    its was ok tho.
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    Re: I'll empty my OWN Clip

    Structure needs work, might not seem important to most but if your written isn't structured it doesn't read how you think or say it.
    Aside from that it was alright.
    In my oppinion this was your best line cause it made me laugh a little and I can relate to it.
    3 years talking to a wall like Tom hanks was talking to his ball

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    Re: I'll empty my OWN Clip

    Thanks I just worked hard on structure for this one I'm about to post... let me know @Monolith
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    Re: I'll empty my OWN Clip

    LMAO

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