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Thread: Week 16: Smog (7-4) vs. Late Bloom - OPEN FOR VOTES

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    Week 16: Smog (7-4) vs. Late Bloom - OPEN FOR VOTES

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    Re: Week 16: Smog (6-4) vs. Late Bloom

    Here i am...
    a labyrinth of power.....

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    Re: Week 16: Smog (6-4) vs. Late Bloom

    Right look i know the fundamentals i guess
    but i couldnt find anyone in lll with a dope enough example of text
    all they do is throw threats
    aint no one dope earning shit round here cause this shit already dead
    man i aint like fifty tho he say he take men for much less
    im happy this man is sharing even if it fills him with nothing but stress
    i guess you could mention the league er something
    but ill still have you twisted round my fingers guess this battle a ring
    see your upset cause i can drop with dope concepts even when im using similies
    your punches are cheese stake holmes guess smog just aint from philly...
    a labyrinth of power.....

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    Re: Week 16: Smog (6-4) vs. Late Bloom

    I'LLLL murder this guy, straight facts late's trash, this herb gonna die
    When it comes to writin my penultimate.. ur lucky to rank 2nd worst on the SITE
    U suck n it proves that bein lethal means nothin to dudes
    Got me Fucked Up they let Trip, in... buuut Dot musta been buggin on shrooms
    Go head n celebrate ur album droppin.. cuz u bout to see my piece
    So after ur record release party, ull be a victim of a mean body.. B I G
    U ain't pullin hoes dawg, unless it's a whale lookin fat chick
    I mean if late whistles at a dime, she'll just deny the foul lookin faggot
    So fuck ya hopes n kill ya dreams, cuz bein lame is hurtin ya
    Pussy, Only time u fuckin wit a big screen.. is rearranging furniture

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    Re: Week 16: Smog (6-4) vs. Late Bloom

    Quote Originally Posted by Late Bloom View Post
    Right look i know the fundamentals i guess
    but i couldnt find anyone in lll with a dope enough example of text

    ☆ nice

    all they do is throw threats
    aint no one dope earning shit round here cause this shit already dead

    ☆ dope

    man i aint like fifty tho he say he take men for much less
    im happy this man is sharing even if it fills him with nothing but stress

    ☆ fire

    i guess you could mention the league er something
    but ill still have you twisted round my fingers guess this battle a ring

    ☆ wow

    see your upset cause i can drop with dope concepts even when im using similies
    your punches are cheese stake holmes guess smog just aint from philly...

    ☆ fantastic




    Quote Originally Posted by Smog View Post
    I'LLLL murder this guy, straight facts late's trash, this herb gonna die
    When it comes to writin my penultimate.. ur lucky to rank 2nd worst on the SITE

    ☆☆☆☆☆ rofl nice

    U suck n it proves that bein lethal means nothin to dudes
    Got me Fucked Up they let Trip, in... buuut Dot musta been buggin on shrooms

    ☆☆☆☆☆ dope

    Go head n celebrate ur album droppin.. cuz u bout to see my piece
    So after ur record release party, ull be a victim of a mean body.. B I G

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    U ain't pullin hoes dawg, unless it's a whale lookin fat chick
    I mean if late whistles at a dime, she'll just deny the foul lookin faggot

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    So fuck ya hopes n kill ya dreams, cuz bein lame is hurtin ya
    Pussy, Only time u fuckin wit a big screen.. is rearranging furniture

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    Well. Lmfao. 2tripp's gave a stirring performance. At times I could tell he was really making an effort to formulate a cogent sentence. Smog was the complete opposite. His first bar was better than 2tripp's entire verse, and his 2nd, 3rd, 4th, and 5th bar were probably better than anything 2tripp's has typed in his storied career. This was close but I have Smog winning definitively. No debatable.

    v-Smog

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    Re: Week 16: Smog (7-4) vs. Late Bloom - OPEN FOR VOTES

    I'LLLL murder this guy, straight facts late's trash, this herb gonna die
    When it comes to writin my penultimate.. ur lucky to rank 2nd worst on the SITE
    this was okay, cool concept, wording could've been harsher
    U suck n it proves that bein lethal means nothin to dudes
    Got me Fucked Up they let Trip, in... buuut Dot musta been buggin on shrooms
    lol this was cool
    Go head n celebrate ur album droppin.. cuz u bout to see my piece
    So after ur record release party, ull be a victim of a mean body.. B I G
    wording got meh in the end but it was a cool concept
    U ain't pullin hoes dawg, unless it's a whale lookin fat chick
    I mean if late whistles at a dime, she'll just deny the foul lookin faggot
    same as the last one, wording fell off but it was a legit concept
    So fuck ya hopes n kill ya dreams, cuz bein lame is hurtin ya
    Pussy, Only time u fuckin wit a big screen.. is rearranging furniture
    eh not really feeling this one. concept got bland in the end

    Overall a cool verse, some solid concepts. Wording could've been better, as in better setups would've made the concepts more savage. But as it, I'd say a solid 3/5

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    Right look i know the fundamentals i guess
    but i couldnt find anyone in lll with a dope enough example of text
    wait, what the fuck are you saying bro? This isn't even a punch.
    all they do is throw threats
    aint no one dope earning shit round here cause this shit already dead
    another statement. yeah, LLL is dead, be more ruthless about it holmes
    man i aint like fifty tho he say he take men for much less
    im happy this man is sharing even if it fills him with nothing but stress
    .............................
    i guess you could mention the league er something
    but ill still have you twisted round my fingers guess this battle a ring
    see your upset cause i can drop with dope concepts even when im using similies
    your punches are cheese stake holmes guess smog just aint from philly...

    Look man. I get it. Your a rapper. Not a battler, and I can appreciate you trying by showing up and spending your time writing these verses. But you NEED to understand the difference between a punch and a statement. You need to learn the difference between a setup and just saying something to get to the end. It's like your writing a blog or a diary entry instead of a battle verse bro. I respect you, you're a cool guy, but you NEED to read more verses or watch some rap battles and understand what the hell you're doing if you wanna do this. If you can't manage, then let's see this record release party fam!

    Vote smog for the landslide victory, much better verse.

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    Re: Week 16: Smog (7-4) vs. Late Bloom - OPEN FOR VOTES

    nothing

    vs

    U suck n it proves that bein lethal means nothin to dudes
    Got me Fucked Up they let Trip, in... buuut Dot musta been buggin on shrooms
    Go head n celebrate ur album droppin.. cuz u bout to see my piece
    So after ur record release party, ull be a victim of a mean body.. B I G

    smog got it easy

    v/smog

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    Re: Week 16: Smog (7-4) vs. Late Bloom - OPEN FOR VOTES

    N/A
    VS
    OPENER, TRIP IN, LATE WHISTLE, CLOSER

    V/SMOG... LANDSLIDE, NOT MUCH TO SAY. 2TRIPP HAS TO USE WITTIER CONCEPTS AND WORD THEM HARSHER

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    Re: Week 16: Smog (6-4) vs. Late Bloom

    Quote Originally Posted by Late Bloom View Post
    Right look i know the fundamentals i guess
    but i couldnt find anyone in lll with a dope enough example of text
    You couldn't? lol this is a generalization, not a punch
    all they do is throw threats
    aint no one dope earning shit round here cause this shit already dead
    Some as above
    man i aint like fifty tho he say he take men for much less
    im happy this man is sharing even if it fills him with nothing but stress
    PAUSE
    i guess you could mention the league er something
    but ill still have you twisted round my fingers guess this battle a ring
    Smh..played and kinda random concept
    see your upset cause i can drop with dope concepts even when im using similies
    your punches are cheese stake holmes guess smog just aint from philly...
    Attempted a personal, but it's incoherent
    Quote Originally Posted by Smog View Post
    I'LLLL murder this guy, straight facts late's trash, this herb gonna die
    When it comes to writin my penultimate.. ur lucky to rank 2nd worst on the SITE
    Good opener
    U suck n it proves that bein lethal means nothin to dudes
    Got me Fucked Up they let Trip, in... buuut Dot musta been buggin on shrooms
    Decent, a bit simple
    Go head n celebrate ur album droppin.. cuz u bout to see my piece
    So after ur record release party, ull be a victim of a mean body.. B I G
    Decent
    U ain't pullin hoes dawg, unless it's a whale lookin fat chick
    I mean if late whistles at a dime, she'll just deny the foul lookin faggot
    Lol nah, you're writing like him now
    So fuck ya hopes n kill ya dreams, cuz bein lame is hurtin ya
    Pussy, Only time u fuckin wit a big screen.. is rearranging furniture
    It's a closer *shoulder shrug*
    Overall SMOG won it with his first 3 bars, tbh.

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    Re: Week 16: Smog (7-4) vs. Late Bloom - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Smog wins

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