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    Cunnilingus Oxymoron's Avatar
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    Ive found a place where i can relate.
    relay interesting information to characters that seem to be distant,
    Nobody is who they are, its a facade,
    the fascia of people seems to be nothing but a scar,
    n thats not right. we could be perfect with our imperfections.
    Poision impure, injected in the wrong direction,
    so please, be pure, scour the nethermost of this slum we call home,
    and just write the intentions that inspire and motivate,
    lifes about knowledge n passing it on,
    no matter your background if youre true you might not be wrong
    so dont worry about the little details,
    just live n be free, all i want is for people to be free.
    Believe in yourself and be free.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...p?495812-bored

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...?495815-waitin
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    You never fail to say interesting shit. I wish I could do the same tbh. I loved this, shirt but sweet.

    Favorite lines, almost all of them tbh

    Critiscim: too short

    Kinda wish it was longer, I’ve bedn kinda down lately but a short piece on positivity def helped . Well done, again

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    Cheers dude. You actually Just spoke on one of my main messages in life. While I dont always adhere to it, I try to be positive and look for the good in things. I happen to believe that emotions are contagious from personal life experiences. and its true, if you walk down the street and happen to look at somebody at the same time they look at you, if you smile, they will smile back. It cant be helped unless you or they really dont want to be happy. But most people like to be happy.
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    I read this in a deep, almost Morgan freeman voice in my head. The underlying message is nice. I got it as to be peacefully free. Very deep my friend. will definitely look for more of your work.

    I felt this was from the heart and for that fact i would offer no criticism other than to not stop listening to that voice.

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    You start off unqiue
    look ing forward to see post more verses and longer verses

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    i like the positive message but it feels too generic (<- negative message)

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    fuck you haha, nah, yeah, I didnt revise this at all. All i did was speak/type my mind, and post, free thought is free. Cheers for the responce at least.
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    Loved this... since 2012 member and one of my favorites ever... why? Because your dead on point and it’s true but using the words you made it lyrical as well as little bit of allure to it too... guess that’s why you got the awards
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