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    Cunnilingus Oxymoron's Avatar
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    Free thought

    My thoughts are nothing, something, and everything inbetween,
    I could be you, him, me, her, it, or the unseen,
    maybe ive been, maybe im just a dream,
    I could be a figment, a part of the unseen,
    but believe me im real, more than imagination,
    gradualy waiting to be discovered
    connected and uncovered,
    I exist, but i dont,
    believe me if you wont,
    free thoughts are free.

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    You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.

    The mind without a brain
    \i/

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    Re: Free thought

    That could be your theme song... especially with the contradiction type oxymorons... you should change your closing to that and it’d be too perfect.
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    Re: Free thought

    i like this. The back and forth works well and i like to identify the unidentifiable trying to be identified. very nice and good read

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    Re: Free thought

    Uh, cool.




    Nah, this was alright. Simple. Not too hung up on complexity, rather just give it to us in black and white. Sometimes I forget you can tell a story that way. Anyways, I like it. We don't have to get into details, but the subject matter was dense enough give this clout. It isn't just talking about your cliche-typical drivel, but you're switching things up and being abstract. And in that, it's refreshing to read.





    Keep it up.



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