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    One wife

    One wife

    I missed your touch and I needed to feel that heal
    Listening to too many lyrics I learned the deal
    I flipped...
    like the clip clicked and locked
    Sacred in my virgin now after shocked
    Every cold moment replaced by any and every emotion I now feel -
    Physically... To remind this is all real
    Fiscally I maxed out at 84k
    But I now have $16 to make it to Monday
    It never was about that bag
    It never was about that brag
    It was a search for family and true love
    That I didn’t realize was already stolen and sealed by above
    It was betrayal and back stabbing
    It was climbing to the top with everyone grabbing
    The naive heart they all love to pick on
    WAS my survival they all used to stick on
    Left with a decision for everything I live for and would die for too
    Left with an unconscious fear that they never did that for you
    Walking with enemies trying to clear them off my path
    Stuck alone in some sick matrix like an unknown aftermath
    Every time I start to pull myself together I fall back down again
    Doing it mostly by myself cause somehow I’m the one that lost all the friends
    All alone, every day, alone
    Why do I have to go thru this instead
    Wondering why god just didn’t leave me dead
    Enough said...
    I would never play a game with only one life
    And I would never stay the same if I wasn’t sure I’d only be one mans wife
    I wonder all the time if you ever think of me
    I wonder all the time why you left this for me to see 💔
    I guess it’s evident he’s not coming back for me

    Link one: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...re-have-i-been

    Link two: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...ou!-You-got-me
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    Re: One wife

    i liked reading this it had a smooth flow and it felt honest and that goes a long way.

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    Re: One wife

    Thanks @cz
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    Good read. leave him be. gotta buckle up and hit the road, otherwise youre just standing there with your pants down in the middle of the desert somewhere in Arizona wondering if it'll rain soon. im joking but seriously, i enjoyed reading this.

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    LOL... dang... pretty much and thanks @twistalyric
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    Re: One wife

    This was great to read
    Rrhyme well
    Stayed on topic
    Keep dropping

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    Thank you @Brilliant
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    Re: One wife

    Quote Originally Posted by twistalyric View Post
    Good read. leave him be. gotta buckle up and hit the road, otherwise youre just standing there with your pants down in the middle of the desert somewhere in Arizona wondering if it'll rain soon. im joking but seriously, i enjoyed reading this.
    Sounds like a country song.

    I was, pants down, in Ar a zona....Bitch, stole, my last Ca Rona...Wish it would rain and take away this pain...

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    Re: One wife

    Yeah this was decent although I honestly felt like your were forcing a lot of lines just to make it rhyme or sound catchy. Keep working on it. Again, be more realistic

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