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    Triangle ⭐️ A Disciple's Avatar
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    Iím no professional but I have a lot to say
    Airing out I was taught in an educational way
    Keep writing, keep assuming, keep fighting
    ďStay busyĒ until you waste your life away and keep citing
    Cause maybe you will catch the next one
    It feels like a genocide and weíre done
    Because of people who had no rights to hate any way
    Without permission they slip their elixir and lie all the way
    And for the treason they get sicker and sicker
    Here have some more, itís just liquor
    Helpless we have no way to protect ourselves from her own stare
    We fight eye to eye, and itís not fair
    Survival of the fittest, we see
    Light your candles up and send it back to me
    The suicide note on my computer was because I wrote another song
    And you can make the worst decision and itís ok cause itís still not wrong
    Itís hard as hell but Iíll still stand strong

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    America’s dumbest threat caught on record!!!

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    2 on and I’m gone LOL

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    I’m back home... at least make sure it stops here too

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    Like I told the cop there was no suicide note (if they are still on here)

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    Re: Already gone

    I’m no professional but I have a lot to say
    Airing out I was taught in an educational way
    Keep writing, keep assuming, keep fighting
    “Stay busy” until you waste your life away and keep citing
    Cause maybe you will catch the next one
    It feels like a genocide and we’re done
    Because of people who had no rights to hate any way
    Without permission they slip their elixir and lie all the way
    And for the treason they get sicker and sicker
    Here have some more, it’s just liquor
    Helpless we have no way to protect ourselves from her own stare
    We fight eye to eye, and it’s not fair
    Survival of the fittest, we see
    Light your candles up and send it back to me
    The suicide note on my computer was because I wrote another song
    And you can make the worst decision and it’s ok cause it’s still not wrong
    It’s hard as hell but I’ll still stand strong


    Alright I think this verse had a lot of potential to be good, however, you try to touch on so many subjects in a multi-faceted level and fail to connect the dots. Its like you're trying to touch on the pressures of the world and the whole issue with people trying to bring a person down...but these type of verses have been expressed in so many ways as is. Be more specific...stick to a specific subject and your verse will really hit home.

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    Triangle ⭐️ A Disciple's Avatar
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    Re: Already gone

    Thanks @Inmate

    Btw, that chicken parm was like 3 weeks fucking old bitch

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    How you get in my house?
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    Why does everyone think Iím a boy?

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    What the fuck? Chicken parm is old bitch? I know you weren't calling me bitch....

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    Re: Already gone

    Nah this chick that was talking shit to me on the site @Inmate sorry for the confusion
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    Why does everyone think Iím a boy?

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    Re: Already gone

    No worries

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    Re: Already gone

    Quote Originally Posted by a disciple
    Btw, that chicken parm was like 3 weeks fucking old bitch

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    Quote Originally Posted by Inmate View Post
    What the fuck? Chicken parm is old bitch? I know you weren't calling me bitch....

    lmao!

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    Re: Already gone

    Quote Originally Posted by Sammy View Post
    lmao!
    bwuahahahahah hilarious

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