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    For D RIP

    2 Day we celebrate your life, not just this day but every night.
    4 U God shined his light , now watch over us while your in flight.
    We can't fully understand your plight, wrong feelings I will always fight.
    Looking at the clouds I see u in sight, those demons speaking are never right.
    We all try to live so righteous, I wish I could of helped U in your time of crisis.
    This world mixed together with salts and spices, but our souls inside are always priceless.
    No matter how much evil trys to thrive, I can sense your love coming down from the sky.
    No need to lie I cried when u died, I share that sadness we all feel inside.
    And going fwd I will fear no more, I know the glory of our Lord.
    They say when it rains it pours, but I think their tear drops falling from heavens door.
    I know you got your wings now soar, I can hear the golden lions roar.
    peace And happiness forever more, I'll remember you til I am no more.
    So please if you ever feel pain, just know there is so much to gain.
    feel the love douse out the flames, remember from where u came.
    Don't let them tell you life is a game, never take a ride on that long black train.
    I'll keep your picture in a frame , without Devin here this world won't be the same.

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    Re: For D RIP

    Give me min and I will post two links forgot aboutr that sry

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    Re: For D RIP

    This was aight.... coulda been set up a bit different but i liked your like whatever verse for your friend.... good idea just coulda been more well thought out...

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    Re: For D RIP

    I loved this... I thought it was sweet as hell and not shit you typically read on the site - worded more poetically. I agree about the rain and the tears from heavens door - it was my favorite part... more metaphors like that would make this piece amazing.
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