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  1. #1

    This shit is too easy

    Right yeah i been jotting lines for a while i guess
    I know how to set up a line drop a bar write some text
    Whatever man even say some shit without repeating my major theme
    Dont really care much guess its just a dream
    It dont mean much its not that hard to do
    Im not trying to impress anyone not really doing anything new
    Most a this shit already been done before
    Drop a topic and shit and start texting some lines nothing i aint done before
    I guess it takes a bit of skill er whatever to rhyme the bar or whatever
    Still aint got no holes in my sweater and i aint flop like i was a feather
    Dont care at least im being nice to most people
    Some dudes aint though they total dicks and i aint get it gotta sweat it aint no eagle
    I dont get what the point is though who cares really
    I guess ive got a bit better at it but i aint dope and a real gangster g
    Whatever man its just some lines i guess
    I aint trying to be no preachy weirdo forget what i just said
    Cause i aint got no one to talk to and i aint got no friends
    Guess i know a few people and i get out some
    Sorry man that im just not really loads of fun
    Sorry man that you cant be straight with me
    You gotta make a joke outta everything you trying to be
    You dont get rhymes you dont care if this story works
    You aint give a shit about hip hop or the community of this verse
    The history of rap and rhymes cause half yall are retarded fucks
    Whatever i aint even that good at this shit to begin with cause its simple as fuck
    So there it is im getting distracted and probably didnt do this correctly
    Too busy to understand why i didnt try hard enough and didnt want to edit this shit b
    Whatever i guess i could look it over and see where i went wrong
    But what the fuck i dont understand what the words even mean in this song
    Sorry man guess im just a trashy writer
    im just no good at it anyways whatever so instead just going put some meat on the fryer

  2. #2
    The 0bserver
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    Re: This shit is too easy

    I don't know man you're rhymes are too simple, I'm not feeling it. Plus a lot of the lines don't even rhyme. Have you ever heard of lyricism? You should try it some time.

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    MAD! A Disciple's Avatar
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    Re: This shit is too easy

    Well... I guess I can relate to the topic and I suggest joining a league if you want to up your skills. The higher you jump the higher the bar is and competing against the best will bring the best out of you as well as the feedback and such.
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  4. #4

    Re: This shit is too easy

    Thanks. Good looks yeah.... yeah i alright...

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    Coulda been better with the rhymes i guess...

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