This beat is kind of dope.
Your delivery comes in a little weird. Are you drinking spitting this? Just sounds like a bit of slur, not like it sounds bad. Just wondering about that. Flow is on for the most part, seems a bit rushed in some places. I would work on slowing down a little bit and focus on bringing out those words a bit.
The words start to drag on a little bit. Keep practicing honing your craft and words. Energy and overall cadence was okay, just needs some fine tuning.
Keep it up man.
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so far I like what I hear in the beginning … not a big fan of this way of flowing personally but I can say this atleast your clearly saying about 90 % of what your saying and the other 10 % is because your either ran out of breath or you weren't pronouncing the word fully
if this was your intention...by all means keep doing you, I aint knocking anyone who has there own style
but if it wasn't I would say keep at it and get better at your breath control so it doesn't sound like your being strangled while your rhyming...
overall the track was alright I actually listened to it the whole way through but did not find the need to replay it...pz b ez
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