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    LLL WK 1:Bomb Bard Vs Ryno - Ryno wins

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    Re: LLL WK 1:Bomb Bard Vs Ryno

    im here 10-12

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    Re: LLL WK 1:Bomb Bard Vs Ryno

    Yup

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    Re: LLL WK 1:Bomb Bard Vs Ryno

    @Bomb Bard @Ryno verses due tonight

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    Re: LLL WK 1:Bomb Bard Vs Ryno

    Quote Originally Posted by Ryno Vs ronin
    plus this dudes always acting, totin’ guns aint up ur ally
    only time ur in the streets with the stick raised, is holding signs in a rally

    Vs Ronin ur had wack Opinions, I elect U my weakest win
    I'll Raise sticks & Rally a clique to march;..To shoot so u never breathe again
    'Feed Me More' punches & a shotty'll have U feelin limp
    Got Buckshot RNDs to 'Enter RyBack' so he'll never enter this Ring again
    RB gotta Pulse!.. I'll punch ur chest till dude gaspin
    Way I walk over U have ur heart race & the site live longer than U, Faggot
    Yea U got the right to fight, I'll have U down N gone quick
    1 swing @ Riot'll Have U pushed to the point U breaks out In loses
    Blaze ur kid, one shot & ur family wont be born
    S'like u pen ur bars on a wet sheet that cleaned up Lenox tears off a keyboard

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    Re: LLL WK 1:Bomb Bard Vs Ryno

    Kill Spree aka Bomb Bard

    Im known to kill wack rappers, homie those bars just arent good
    I mean if i take bard out, its a standing ovation cause we know he never could
    Im gonna leave this liar hit, if he totes trust me this dude wont fire it
    the only time u’ve leveled up to drill some shit, was changing a tire bitch
    Ur mad cuz dia runs the site better, listen faggot quit the hatin’
    Watch this haymaker bomb spree, without blowing up multiple locations
    This league just wasnt ready, truth is im the toughest out right now
    If u see things differently, its cause im gouging ur fucking eyeballs out
    This dude might run n tattle, These punches r gonna leave em rattled
    Its ironic ur name is bomb bard, cuz u’ve NEVER dropped fire in a battle
    N we know that he’s dead broke, bitches hate when u hit bro
    Last time a bitch had bomb sex, she wished a stick of dynamite flew in his window

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    Re: LLL WK 1:Bomb Bard Vs Ryno - VOTE NOW

    Vs Ronin ur had wack Opinions, I elect U my weakest win
    I'll Raise sticks & Rally a clique to march;..To shoot so u never breathe again
    not the best stick line but but not the worst
    'Feed Me More' punches & a shotty'll have U feelin limp
    Got Buckshot RNDs to 'Enter RyBack' so he'll never enter this Ring again
    alright
    RB gotta Pulse!.. I'll punch ur chest till dude gaspin
    Way I walk over U have ur heart race & the site live longer than U, Faggot
    could have been decent with better wording
    Yea U got the right to fight, I'll have U down N gone quick
    1 swing @ Riot'll Have U pushed to the point U breaks out In loses
    again, had potential but was done bad
    Blaze ur kid, one shot & ur family wont be born
    S'like u pen ur bars on a wet sheet that cleaned up Lenox tears off a keyboard
    nah

    1 ok
    4 misses

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    Im known to kill wack rappers, homie those bars just arent good
    I mean if i take bard out, its a standing ovation cause we know he never could
    mmmm decent at best
    Im gonna leave this liar hit, if he totes trust me this dude wont fire it
    the only time u’ve leveled up to drill some shit, was changing a tire bitch
    nah you know this wasn’t good lol
    Ur mad cuz dia runs the site better, listen faggot quit the hatin’
    Watch this haymaker bomb spree, without blowing up multiple locations
    Decent
    This league just wasnt ready, truth is im the toughest out right now
    If u see things differently, its cause im gouging ur fucking eyeballs out
    alright better
    This dude might run n tattle, These punches r gonna leave em rattled
    Its ironic ur name is bomb bard, cuz u’ve NEVER dropped fire in a battle
    cool
    N we know that he’s dead broke, bitches hate when u hit bro
    Last time a bitch had bomb sex, she wished a stick of dynamite flew in his window
    lol nah


    1 good
    1 ok
    2 Decent
    2 misses


    I’ve seen bomb bard drop a lot better, or maybe that’s Bash. Idk I thought they were the same person lol anyways yeah not the best I’ve seen from you. Maybe shake off the rust and touch up on the wording in your bars. You have cool ideas but wording is what seems to be your issue right now. Ryno you been dropping pretty good on NCs and although I feel like this was a step down in verse quality, it still easily did the job.


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    Re: LLL WK 1:Bomb Bard Vs Ryno - VOTE NOW

    Vs Ronin ur had wack Opinions, I elect U my weakest win
    I'll Raise sticks & Rally a clique to march;..To shoot so u never breathe again
    hmmm, this was okay
    'Feed Me More' punches & a shotty'll have U feelin limp
    Got Buckshot RNDs to 'Enter RyBack' so he'll never enter this Ring again
    feelin limp / ring again is really off to me, that aside the double use of Enter makes the wording redundant.. ryback wp was cool but this could've been a lot better
    RB gotta Pulse!.. I'll punch ur chest till dude gaspin
    Way I walk over U have ur heart race & the site live longer than U, Faggot
    not feelin
    Yea U got the right to fight, I'll have U down N gone quick
    1 swing @ Riot'll Have U pushed to the point U breaks out In loses
    breaks out In loses? nahhh... wp was solid again too but this was delivered all wrong & really choppy
    Blaze ur kid, one shot & ur family wont be born
    S'like u pen ur bars on a wet sheet that cleaned up Lenox tears off a keyboard
    ehhh, not feelin


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    Im known to kill wack rappers, homie those bars just arent good
    I mean if i take bard out, its a standing ovation cause we know he never could
    okay, dece np
    Im gonna leave this liar hit, if he totes trust me this dude wont fire it
    the only time u’ve leveled up to drill some shit, was changing a tire bitch
    this was okay, wording was cool - concept good/not great
    Ur mad cuz dia runs the site better, listen faggot quit the hatin’
    Watch this haymaker bomb spree, without blowing up multiple locations
    dece
    This league just wasnt ready, truth is im the toughest out right now
    If u see things differently, its cause im gouging ur fucking eyeballs out
    cool, don't think ive seen a play on the see things diff phrase.. this was nice, reminds me of my look into you line lol
    This dude might run n tattle, These punches r gonna leave em rattled
    Its ironic ur name is bomb bard, cuz u’ve NEVER dropped fire in a battle
    solid, seems pretty straightforward but wording was good and it worked well for a closer
    N we know that he’s dead broke, bitches hate when u hit bro
    Last time a bitch had bomb sex, she wished a stick of dynamite flew in his window
    mannn I feel like this could've been dope, but I feel like u got lazy with it lol.. okay how it was done

    Cool battle.. I feel like Bomb Bard has some solid potential conceptually but I really disliked his wording & the way he formulated his punches.... Ryno no real bangers imo but some solid nameplays and u were pretty consistent throughout... I have Ryno here

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    bomb bard
    Vs Ronin ur had wack Opinions, I elect U my weakest win
    I'll Raise sticks & Rally a clique to march;..To shoot so u never breathe again
    this was decent, it could of been better.

    'Feed Me More' punches & a shotty'll have U feelin limp
    Got Buckshot RNDs to 'Enter RyBack' so he'll never enter this Ring again
    you already had an again rhyme, but this was a coo wrestling bar

    RB gotta Pulse!.. I'll punch ur chest till dude gaspin
    Way I walk over U have ur heart race & the site live longer than U, Faggot
    I am not feeling this one.

    Yea U got the right to fight, I'll have U down N gone quick
    1 swing @ Riot'll Have U pushed to the point U breaks out In loses
    I'm not feeling this one either.

    Blaze ur kid, one shot & ur family wont be born
    S'like u pen ur bars on a wet sheet that cleaned up Lenox tears off a keyboard
    grrrr gunplay.

    You had a decent verse here with some hard hits here and there, but I know you can do better than this

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    Rhyno
    Im known to kill wack rappers, homie those bars just arent good
    I mean if i take bard out, its a standing ovation cause we know he never could
    eh, I'm not digging this.

    Im gonna leave this liar hit, if he totes trust me this dude wont fire it
    the only time u’ve leveled up to drill some shit, was changing a tire bitch
    coo, but err gunplay.

    Ur mad cuz dia runs the site better, listen faggot quit the hatin’
    Watch this haymaker bomb spree, without blowing up multiple locations
    this bar sucks here.

    This league just wasnt ready, truth is im the toughest out right now
    If u see things differently, its cause im gouging ur fucking eyeballs out
    this is more horrorcore, no punch.

    This dude might run n tattle, These punches r gonna leave em rattled
    Its ironic ur name is bomb bard, cuz u’ve NEVER dropped fire in a battle
    I liked this one for some reason, good job.

    N we know that he’s dead broke, bitches hate when u hit bro
    Last time a bitch had bomb sex, she wished a stick of dynamite flew in his window
    this one was cringe worthy, not really feeling

    You had a nice hit with the fire in a battle bar, I think you could of went harder with pucnhes, this wasn't a hard battle to take if you woulda did those things.

    I think bomb did enough to win this, rhyno needs to have more punches and limit his use of self hype bars.

    v/BOMB

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    Re: LLL WK 1:Bomb Bard Vs Ryno

    Quote Originally Posted by Bomb Bard
    Vs Ronin ur had wack Opinions, I elect U my weakest win
    I'll Raise sticks & Rally a clique to march;..To shoot so u never breathe again
    miss
    'Feed Me More' punches & a shotty'll have U feelin limp
    Got Buckshot RNDs to 'Enter RyBack' so he'll never enter this Ring again
    dope concept but having enter twice in 1 line ruined it.. not completely tho so this is a jab
    RB gotta Pulse!.. I'll punch ur chest till dude gaspin
    Way I walk over U have ur heart race & the site live longer than U, Faggot
    hell no
    Yea U got the right to fight, I'll have U down N gone quick
    1 swing @ Riot'll Have U pushed to the point U breaks out In loses
    shouldve done something different w/ it, but ok np
    Blaze ur kid, one shot & ur family wont be born
    S'like u pen ur bars on a wet sheet that cleaned up Lenox tears off a keyboard
    terrible

    0 gd punches
    2 jabs
    3 misses
    vs

    Ryno

    Im known to kill wack rappers, homie those bars just arent good
    I mean if i take bard out, its a standing ovation cause we know he never could
    ok
    Im gonna leave this liar hit, if he totes trust me this dude wont fire it
    the only time u’ve leveled up to drill some shit, was changing a tire bitch
    ehh, reach
    Ur mad cuz dia runs the site better, listen faggot quit the hatin’
    Watch this haymaker bomb spree, without blowing up multiple locations
    nah, too simple
    This league just wasnt ready, truth is im the toughest out right now
    If u see things differently, its cause im gouging ur fucking eyeballs out
    dece
    This dude might run n tattle, These punches r gonna leave em rattled
    Its ironic ur name is bomb bard, cuz u’ve NEVER dropped fire in a battle
    under par but ur misses arent as bad tbh
    N we know that he’s dead broke, bitches hate when u hit bro
    Last time a bitch had bomb sex, she wished a stick of dynamite flew in his window
    nvm, this was bad

    0 gd punches
    2 jabs
    3 misses

    ill have to come back to this one


    - - - Updated - - -

    v/ryno
    tied on the scorecard for me but tbr ry's wording & execution was just overall better than his opponent's, even tho his opponent had better concepts
    close af

    after reading all open battles, i wouldnt do a botw in the next mag.. no batt deserves the title @Ronin

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    Re: LLL WK 1:Bomb Bard Vs Ryno

    Vs Ronin ur had wack Opinions, I elect U my weakest win
    I'll Raise sticks & Rally a clique to march;..To shoot so u never breathe again

    Nah
    'Feed Me More' punches & a shotty'll have U feelin limp
    Got Buckshot RNDs to 'Enter RyBack' so he'll never enter this Ring again

    Light, not harsh at all

    RB gotta Pulse!.. I'll punch ur chest till dude gaspin
    Way I walk over U have ur heart race & the site live longer than U, Faggot

    your wording is bad here.

    Yea U got the right to fight, I'll have U down N gone quick
    1 swing @ Riot'll Have U pushed to the point U breaks out In loses

    No

    Blaze ur kid, one shot & ur family wont be born
    S'like u pen ur bars on a wet sheet that cleaned up Lenox tears off a keyboard

    No, appreciate the humorous approach


    vs


    Im known to kill wack rappers, homie those bars just arent good
    I mean if i take bard out, its a standing ovation cause we know he never could

    EH
    Im gonna leave this liar hit, if he totes trust me this dude wont fire it
    the only time u’ve leveled up to drill some shit, was changing a tire bitch

    Eh, wording was weak here.

    Ur mad cuz dia runs the site better, listen faggot quit the hatin’
    Watch this haymaker bomb spree, without blowing up multiple locations

    Light, the punch wasn't bad. You just lack harshness.

    This league just wasnt ready, truth is im the toughest out right now
    If u see things differently, its cause im gouging ur fucking eyeballs out

    Light.

    This dude might run n tattle, These punches r gonna leave em rattled
    Its ironic ur name is bomb bard, cuz u’ve NEVER dropped fire in a battle

    eh

    N we know that he’s dead broke, bitches hate when u hit bro
    Last time a bitch had bomb sex, she wished a stick of dynamite flew in his window

    lol ok cool


    v/ RYno better wording and cleaner lands. Spree you really have an awkward way of writing lines.

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    Re: LLL WK 1:Bomb Bard Vs Ryno - VOTE NOW

    Vs Ronin ur had wack Opinions, I elect U my weakest win
    I'll Raise sticks & Rally a clique to march;..To shoot so u never breathe again
    --- decent personal not much wit tho...
    'Feed Me More' punches & a shotty'll have U feelin limp
    Got Buckshot RNDs to 'Enter RyBack' so he'll never enter this Ring again
    --- ok np.....
    RB gotta Pulse!.. I'll punch ur chest till dude gaspin
    Way I walk over U have ur heart race & the site live longer than U, Faggot
    --- nice....
    Yea U got the right to fight, I'll have U down N gone quick
    1 swing @ Riot'll Have U pushed to the point U breaks out In loses
    --- all over the place but I like the np. Flip was good but coulda been better...
    Blaze ur kid, one shot & ur family wont be born
    S'like u pen ur bars on a wet sheet that cleaned up Lenox tears off a keyboard
    --- throwaway. How's one shot gonna make his family not be born if he has a family. See what u was tryna say but this was just nothing. Set up had nothing to do with the punch, and that coulda been a good concept....

    Vs

    Im known to kill wack rappers, homie those bars just arent good
    I mean if i take bard out, its a standing ovation cause we know he never could
    --- bard out is nice, the flip was bad. Coulda worded this to hit harder....
    Im gonna leave this liar hit, if he totes trust me this dude wont fire it
    the only time u’ve leveled up to drill some shit, was changing a tire bitch
    --- nah bruh....
    Ur mad cuz dia runs the site better, listen faggot quit the hatin’
    Watch this haymaker bomb spree, without blowing up multiple locations
    --- not a fan....
    This league just wasnt ready, truth is im the toughest out right now
    If u see things differently, its cause im gouging ur fucking eyeballs out
    --- played but k....
    This dude might run n tattle, These punches r gonna leave em rattled
    Its ironic ur name is bomb bard, cuz u’ve NEVER dropped fire in a battle
    --- nope.....
    N we know that he’s dead broke, bitches hate when u hit bro
    Last time a bitch had bomb sex, she wished a stick of dynamite flew in his window
    --- bomb sex coulda been good, but the flip killed it dead.




    Gotta go with bomb bard. He had the better executed concepts and landed more.


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