LLL WK 1: Zunto Vs Ilya - Zunton wins

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@Zunto @Ilya

[Zunto]

Check, 10.

[Ilya]

Check 10 is good

[Ilya]

Zunto? Really don't give a fuck from 2 ducks make it buck quick
Out starvin at night my dogs luv diggin, 1 grave for ya fam, that's a Stuffed pit
When you post all I can see and assume is u appear soft
So when I pull the tool out....nah! I'm not bout to pop a Smirnoff
You'll be dead, 3 to the chest then 1 to the head for good measure
Four vehicles full, 2 glocks ea. and red eyes for ur body, that's hood pressure!
He probably a wannabe pretty bitch...ya new name is Kei$ha
I'll win against all odds...Zunto 1% real 99% fake, that's something I'd bet-cha
Fuck I guess I can't count but its all good unlike ur raps
Now go fucken nuts on a killing spree for setting the traps

[Spree]

Zuntos Verse


Look how I groove on the scene. Take his girl cuz I’m rude & im mean
Checkmate, watch how i jump this pawn just so I can make a move on his queen
Ur a square thug. Don’t fuck wit me cause I air mugs
Then these big arms’ll wrap around ur body n squeeze hard like bear hugs
Gat sparker. If he thinks he claps pls tell em I clap harder
cut em up, then I’m draggin a blade too far back on his head like a bad barber
Len’ll get SMACKED! He regrets those marks on his mug like “why’d I do that?”
New ink, get clapped. Or I’m drawing on ur face w/ the metal.. call it a new tat!
U threw away ur life for what? Facebook clout? To prove shit to the haters?
ur broke fam, s’why I stay putting down the free bread on ur table like good waiters

[Spree]

@Ronin you can view the posts I deleted. Leaving this up to you.


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[Stranger]

Ilya
Zunto? Really don't give a fuck from 2 ducks make it buck quick
Out starvin at night my dogs luv diggin, 1 grave for ya fam, that's a Stuffed pit
this was too much here..
When you post all I can see and assume is u appear soft
So when I pull the tool out....nah! I'm not bout to pop a Smirnoff
this isn't too bad, kind of played though.
You'll be dead, 3 to the chest then 1 to the head for good measure
Four vehicles full, 2 glocks ea. and red eyes for ur body, that's hood pressure!
really hate gun play in text battles, but this is coo
He probably a wannabe pretty bitch...ya new name is Kei$ha
I'll win against all odds...Zunto 1% real 99% fake, that's something I'd bet-cha
lol this was corny man.
Fuck I guess I can't count but its all good unlike ur raps
Now go fucken nuts on a killing spree for setting the traps
not feeling this either.

I think you got potential, if you focus more on punches, you can be a threat.


Zunto
Look how I groove on the scene. Take his girl cuz I’m rude & im mean
Checkmate, watch how i jump this pawn just so I can make a move on his queen
I think all chess concepts are done to death, butt his is better this his first bar.
Ur a square thug. Don’t fuck wit me cause I air mugs
Then these big arms’ll wrap around ur body n squeeze hard like bear hugs
aight I like this
Gat sparker. If he thinks he claps pls tell em I clap harder
cut em up, then I’m draggin a blade too far back on his head like a bad barber
it was decent, nothing special
Len’ll get SMACKED! He regrets those marks on his mug like “why’d I do that?”
New ink, get clapped. Or I’m drawing on ur face w/ the metal.. call it a new tat!
your whole verse can't be gunplay, ehhh
U threw away ur life for what? Facebook clout? To prove shit to the haters?
ur broke fam, s’why I stay putting down the free bread on ur table like good waiters
this bar seems weird since you got a bad barber bar.

overall you surprised me here, you had a few good lines, don't like to see too many gun bars in a text battle, some bars was actually slick though.

v/ zunto

I think this win was pretty clear here, zunto's bars seems thought out more and I liked more of zunto's bars than his opponent, it's those bad barber/good waiters bars that fucked with me it seems he should of picked one or the other.

[Greedy]

illya-
stuffed pit- decent concept her. couldve been a bit more cohesive. but good
hood pressure- i liked it

vs

bear hug
barber

vote ilya.
zunto had the better read overall, better connection to his concepts. but ive literally seen ever single concept zunto did. and ive been away for a long time. so while zuntos bars hit harder, i got to give it to originality.

ps zunto, had your concepts been original this would be a land slide victory for you

[A. Diction]

Both verses laid on the gunplay hard which I usually dont like, mix it up. But zelph had the better overall verse, smoother and cleaner with better writing. Zunto concepts been done before but he executed them well while Lennox concepts were blah and not executed well at all imo.


V. Zelph

[Blue Bayou]

Zunto? Really don't give a fuck from 2 ducks make it buck quick
Out starvin at night my dogs luv diggin, 1 grave for ya fam, that's a Stuffed pit
the flip is kinda cool here tbh ... cool
When you post all I can see and assume is u appear soft
So when I pull the tool out....nah! I'm not bout to pop a Smirnoff
Im missing something... im not seeing the tool/Smirnoff connection.. if this is smear-off wp then no
You'll be dead, 3 to the chest then 1 to the head for good measure
Four vehicles full, 2 glocks ea. and red eyes for ur body, that's hood pressure!
cool idea, wording was pretty solid.. nice
He probably a wannabe pretty bitch...ya new name is Kei$ha
I'll win against all odds...Zunto 1% real 99% fake, that's something I'd bet-cha
nah, this is a miss
Fuck I guess I can't count but its all good unlike ur raps
Now go fucken nuts on a killing spree for setting the traps
nah, I think I see the angle but it is under-developed & needed a lot more

vs.

Look how I groove on the scene. Take his girl cuz I’m rude & im mean
Checkmate, watch how i jump this pawn just so I can make a move on his queen
nah, very played... every Queen, Knight, Knight, make an L etc. punch regarding chess has been done
Ur a square thug. Don’t fuck wit me cause I air mugs
Then these big arms’ll wrap around ur body n squeeze hard like bear hugs
like the idea but it's a reach... arms "surround" you maybe nut a K won't wrap around someone lol... cool idea, execution wasn;t there
Gat sparker. If he thinks he claps pls tell em I clap harder
cut em up, then I’m draggin a blade too far back on his head like a bad barber
ehh, old & easy punch here with the barber/blade concept... meh
Len’ll get SMACKED! He regrets those marks on his mug like “why’d I do that?”
New ink, get clapped. Or I’m drawing on ur face w/ the metal.. call it a new tat!
wording was good which helped since this bar is a collection of flips.. draw/metal/ink everything here has been done a lot, but it works cool as an attack line
U threw away ur life for what? Facebook clout? To prove shit to the haters?
ur broke fam, s’why I stay putting down the free bread on ur table like good waiters
okay, for a bread/money flip this was okay



Didn;t know Zunto was Zelph until now tbh, anyways I can tell this was a key as I've seen you come way better... verse was a big collection of flipped ideas... that said ur wording was wayyy better here, and the concepts (although mostly played) were delivered better... I almost have Ilya winning this, but the last 2 bars cost him.. they were bad and that edges this to Zunto for me

Vote - Zunto

[Ryno]

Zunto? Really don't give a fuck from 2 ducks make it buck quick
Out starvin at night my dogs luv diggin, 1 grave for ya fam, that's a Stuffed pit
NOTHIN SPECIAL
When you post all I can see and assume is u appear soft
So when I pull the tool out....nah! I'm not bout to pop a Smirnoff
DIDNT LIKE THE WORDING
You'll be dead, 3 to the chest then 1 to the head for good measure
Four vehicles full, 2 glocks ea. and red eyes for ur body, that's hood pressure!
NAH MAN
He probably a wannabe pretty bitch...ya new name is Kei$ha
I'll win against all odds...Zunto 1% real 99% fake, that's something I'd bet-cha
ITS (KEE SHUH) THE WAY YOU HAVE IT SPELLED, NOT LIKING THE RHYME SCHEME
Fuck I guess I can't count but its all good unlike ur raps
Now go fucken nuts on a killing spree for setting the traps
BAD CLOSER

Zuntos Verse


Look how I groove on the scene. Take his girl cuz I’m rude & im mean
Checkmate, watch how i jump this pawn just so I can make a move on his queen
DATED
Ur a square thug. Don’t fuck wit me cause I air mugs
Then these big arms’ll wrap around ur body n squeeze hard like bear hugs
SAME AS ABOVE
Gat sparker. If he thinks he claps pls tell em I clap harder
cut em up, then I’m draggin a blade too far back on his head like a bad barber
COULD HAVE BEEN WORDED BETTER OKISH AS IS
Len’ll get SMACKED! He regrets those marks on his mug like “why’d I do that?”
New ink, get clapped. Or I’m drawing on ur face w/ the metal.. call it a new tat!
ALIL PREDICTABLE
U threw away ur life for what? Facebook clout? To prove shit to the haters?
ur broke fam, s’why I stay putting down the free bread on ur table like good waiters
LOL ALR

i wasnt feeling a whole lot from this battle. if this is FB from nc then i've seen him drop wayyy better. as is, he had a couple lines i fucked with.

v/Zunto[/B]

^^^^^

[Barcotic]

doesnt deserve a vote but i have to

Ilya
Zunto? Really don't give a fuck from 2 ducks make it buck quick
Out starvin at night my dogs luv diggin, 1 grave for ya fam, that's a Stuffed pit
cool concept, horrible execution
When you post all I can see and assume is u appear soft
So when I pull the tool out....nah! I'm not bout to pop a Smirnoff
miss
You'll be dead, 3 to the chest then 1 to the head for good measure
Four vehicles full, 2 glocks ea. and red eyes for ur body, that's hood pressure!
ok at best
He probably a wannabe pretty bitch...ya new name is Kei$ha
I'll win against all odds...Zunto 1% real 99% fake, that's something I'd bet-cha
terrible
Fuck I guess I can't count but its all good unlike ur raps
Now go fucken nuts on a killing spree for setting the traps
um, no

0 gd punches
1 jab
4 misses

vs

Look how I groove on the scene. Take his girl cuz I’m rude & im mean
Checkmate, watch how i jump this pawn just so I can make a move on his queen
played
Ur a square thug. Don’t fuck wit me cause I air mugs
Then these big arms’ll wrap around ur body n squeeze hard like bear hugs
played again, i swear i just saw this on nc too tbh
Gat sparker. If he thinks he claps pls tell em I clap harder
cut em up, then I’m draggin a blade too far back on his head like a bad barber
wtf, no. are we in 2005? played + ur wording made no sense
Len’ll get SMACKED! He regrets those marks on his mug like “why’d I do that?”
New ink, get clapped. Or I’m drawing on ur face w/ the metal.. call it a new tat!
another concept i just saw on ncees
U threw away ur life for what? Facebook clout? To prove shit to the haters?
ur broke fam, s’why I stay putting down the free bread on ur table like good waiters
whack foa, annnnnnd u guessed it.. played as well

0 gd punches
0 jabs
5 misses

worst battle
v/ilya

[Clout]

Zunto? Really don't give a fuck from 2 ducks make it buck quick
Out starvin at night my dogs luv diggin, 1 grave for ya fam, that's a Stuffed pit

EH,

When you post all I can see and assume is u appear soft
So when I pull the tool out....nah! I'm not bout to pop a Smirnoff

You're corny

You'll be dead, 3 to the chest then 1 to the head for good measure
Four vehicles full, 2 glocks ea. and red eyes for ur body, that's hood pressure!

Dont care for it.

He probably a wannabe pretty bitch...ya new name is Kei$ha
I'll win against all odds...Zunto 1% real 99% fake, that's something I'd bet-cha

Trash

Fuck I guess I can't count but its all good unlike ur raps
Now go fucken nuts on a killing spree for setting the traps

Humor appreciated

Zuntos Verse


Look how I groove on the scene. Take his girl cuz I’m rude & im mean
Checkmate, watch how i jump this pawn just so I can make a move on his queen

Kinda corny man, sounds like something an old head would say about his "in his youth"

Ur a square thug. Don’t fuck wit me cause I air mugs
Then these big arms’ll wrap around ur body n squeeze hard like bear hugs

You a short white guy you aint bear hugging shit pussy =), Nah this is ok

Gat sparker. If he thinks he claps pls tell em I clap harder
cut em up, then I’m draggin a blade too far back on his head like a bad barber

Redundant.

Len’ll get SMACKED! He regrets those marks on his mug like “why’d I do that?”
New ink, get clapped. Or I’m drawing on ur face w/ the metal.. call it a new tat!

No

U threw away ur life for what? Facebook clout? To prove shit to the haters?
ur broke fam, s’why I stay putting down the free bread on ur table like good waiters

Say my name again u short wigger bitch! sike =) you need to learn how to formulate metaphors. Your a tad basic on the punch line writing its a crutch to use similies all the time.



v/ Wyclef-Lip he mightve been redundant on the gun stuff & abusing similies(3 bars that used Like for a punch) Lennox i thought you were better from my memory. This wasn't your best showing.