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    Run Away

    Runaway


    After pusha T

    “Never been much of a romantic... I could never take you into the sea... cause the look in your eyes is killing me... if one day you just up and leave”

    Big boys come to check in
    And see I ain’t check in
    but I felt it and I ain’t do no checking
    Assuming or slicing
    While they dicing
    To finally feel - is that the first lesson
    And is this a blessin?
    I ain’t the one for second chances
    Guess my whirl wind romances was porn to porn and that’s where we all left standing - I heard her moan (thru me) (so gross insanity)
    They say I should’ve done better on my good girl gone bad
    But that’s what’s so sad
    It’s true, she just mad
    But it’s inherent and inside of you
    Even on the switch you always gonna come back to you
    And I ain’t built to be a mans whore
    Feeling like I’m punished cause I just wanted more
    I used to see them, a rack a day
    that was the day where happiness was lost
    and everytime I don’t play
    My happiness tossed - why?
    And why you let them simple
    God above all
    Just trying to be like Jack, jack be nimble
    Am I gonna be the one sorry I asked
    Cause the good with the bad seem too much for the task
    And I feel- and I hurt and I cry and I shake and almost pass out
    Over the assumption of one man they think they just can pass out
    And that don’t make you mad too
    In all their words the betrayal and what secrets do
    I’m tired of wishing I was “more like you” time over due
    And I’m glad I couldn’t accept the basics
    Cute still stacking bracelets
    But you can’t change what you think is broken
    And you can’t let them hang me like I’m their token
    It’s not and it’s time they all face it
    Loyalty - just wondering if they really can just erase it?

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    I peeped you... where next to? Nah I didn’t love him either

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    Link one: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...Behemoth-Black

    Link two: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...od-is-my-water

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    Re: Run Away

    Content wise you stayed on point, rhyme had a flow to it. Typically I need to see more vocab and deeper content. The this was coo,

    Am I gonna be the one sorry I asked
    Cause the good with the bad seem too much for the task

    All in all simpler effective, keep jotting...

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    Re: Run Away

    Honestly... I went to the bad kids school and totally bypassed English with my scores so only took 2 classes in college so my vocab would basically be at 8th grade BUT I look up every word I read and don't know SO you can see why this site can be frustrating to me and why I don't mind keeping it basic, cause in the genre I kinda bounce in isn't all fluffy and (wait let me look up a good word) rhetorical or beauteous...

    PS rhymezone the shit.
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    Re: Run Away

    This is very creativity work my love
    I'm glad to see you keep writing because you got potential
    Sometimes we all feel like running away
    But run away not solve problems
    great storyteller

    keep writing! <3

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    Re: Run Away

    I hear that... 3 states and thanks
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    Re: Run Away

    Trying to figure out what the fuck is going on and why everyone seems to know but me... got hit with retarded a second but that’s been since that voicemail at IBM that they can do that.

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    Took my phone like 5-10x to even let me post that... you have no clue
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    Re: Run Away

    Runaway... what speech you got?

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    I don’t think that comment is all mine either - I don’t even know beautious means

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    Why someone always going that to me?

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    I see how it looks, how I write harder for a girl... but it’s only cause I come from heavy metal that I loved underground hard shit so much cause if you ask anyone that knows me - I am a total white girl (just come from a town that’s so mixed) In my school - white was the minority pretty much but don’t judge a book by its cover.... I was in my convertible and busted out crying when I heard “sitting sideways” looked down and I was sitting sideways saying “I’m the fakest bitch in the world” ... I just have to find my balance of the 2 sides cause like...
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    Re: Run Away

    Can someone release my “24 hours” I wanna read what I said

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    @Emily are you an administrator?
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