Week 2: Bomb Bard 0-1 Vs Dia 0-1 - BB Wins

[A. Diction]

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@Bomb Bard @Cheese cake assassin

[Bomb Bard]

Here. 10

[Stranger]

check

[Stranger]

10 done

[Stranger]

Vs bomb bard aka killing spree aka massakre

No he didn’t at all. I recommend you stfu up or we “meat”

Y’all gone be ok if I don’t log in the rest of the night? Gonna “pound” my girl eat lasagna and smoke a blunt.

Claim to be dope that’s a damn lie….you’re just the man no one calls nice.
This dude can’t see me, I put the left hook to KS eye(ksi) like a logan paul fight.
I’ll punch you until you get foggy, so think twice before you decide to scheme.
You’re like matt murdock, your true identity always hidden behind the scene.
This dude’s a faggot bitch with a lot of aliases, and massakre really took the cake.
Fucking pussy, bomb’s won’t do no damage, when the killing spree looks so fake.
If this was a prison sentence, then your death penalty, is about to be expedited.
This aint bring ya bitch to work day, so you can fucking tell ronin he’s not invited.
Purge all his alter ego’s, after he takes the L enough it’ll make his sadness permanent.
You’re not a threat, you only talk about killing spree’s when you get madden tournaments.
You got speared by a rhyno in week 1, and a fucking warthog you never could beat.
Pounded this girl on the first date, a bitch w/ a punchable face is one u never should meat.

[Spree]

Need the ext

[Stranger]

sure

[Bomb Bard]

DiaSick AKA Warthog




Listen fuck boy!....
IM the reason RB gettin play! Watch Bomb smack'em W/fear
Joog, Ronin, N Amen Bitchin like girls GOT'U HYPE! & thats all the action You've gotten in years
Drown U W/Punches so I get Boat loads of votes! Choke bitch!
You'll see me & Hog Tied.. @ the back of my boat right before he's thrown in the ocean
Fukin Hack job, Glock'll shut U down cos u not ment for this game
NO matter how good U are @ UR JOB HERE, theres no code stop'n bullets from going into ur brain
None of this bitches moves WOOO us! 9's far from scared
Figure 4 shots have ur legs twisted & head hit the ground quicker than Charlette Flair!
You've yet to drop anything Art official! Imagin this nerd is quittin
Feedback, Votes = Non existent...
This Dudes Uesless... Its to bad Ronin didnt delete every verse you've written!
Stackin cash a bumpy subject, Women sense U havent loved yet & u aint workin
We'll hear all about Wart Cream, but its jus U talkin how Ur single & the girls U make nervous

[Meth]

Vs bomb bard aka killing spree aka massakre







Claim to be dope that’s a damn lie….you’re just the man no one calls nice.
This dude can’t see me, I put the left hook to KS eye(ksi) like a logan paul fight.

Nice concept. Could have done more but its good.

I’ll punch you until you get foggy, so think twice before you decide to scheme.
You’re like matt murdock, your true identity always hidden behind the scene.

Nah


This dude’s a faggot bitch with a lot of aliases, and massakre really took the cake.
Fucking pussy, bomb’s won’t do no damage, when the killing spree looks so fake.

Not bad

If this was a prison sentence, then your death penalty, is about to be expedited.
This aint bring ya bitch to work day, so you can fucking tell ronin he’s not invited.

Nah

Purge all his alter ego’s, after he takes the L enough it’ll make his sadness permanent.
You’re not a threat, you only talk about killing spree’s when you get madden tournaments.

Seen a lot of madden bars in the last week. Not one of the best ones
Not awful tho

You got speared by a rhyno in week 1, and a fucking warthog you never could beat.
Pounded this girl on the first date, a bitch w/ a punchable face is one u never should meat.

Not feeling brother

DiaSick AKA Warthog




Listen fuck boy!....
IM the reason RB gettin play! Watch Bomb smack'em W/fear
Joog, Ronin, N Amen Bitchin like girls GOT'U HYPE! & thats all the action You've gotten in years

Decent start.

Drown U W/Punches so I get Boat loads of votes! Choke bitch!
You'll see me & Hog Tied.. @ the back of my boat right before he's thrown in the ocean

Shoulda worded it better, but its still good as is.

Fukin Hack job, Glock'll shut U down cos u not ment for this game
NO matter how good U are @ UR JOB HERE, theres no code stop'n bullets from going into ur brain

Solid

None of this bitches moves WOOO us! 9's far from scared
Figure 4 shots have ur legs twisted & head hit the ground quicker than Charlette Flair!

Lol, dated but nice flip

You've yet to drop anything Art official! Imagin this nerd is quittin
Feedback, Votes = Non existent...
This Dudes Uesless... Its to bad Ronin didnt delete every verse you've written!

Too wordy. Should a scrapped this

Stackin cash a bumpy subject, Women sense U havent loved yet & u aint workin
We'll hear all about Wart Cream, but its jus U talkin how Ur single & the girls U make nervous

Lol funny, ok

Not a bad battle. Dia was ok. His ideas are decent but a lpt of stuff is worded in a soft way. Spree was pretty consistent, no bangers but was hittin his jabs. Dia do more stuff like ya opener. That was quality and is the direction u should head in more often, imo. Good read fellas

v bomb bard

[Greedy]

Dia
Opener: ive never seen a concept like this done before. So props on that. Not a huge fan of the reference used, but it def works.

Madden: probably your best line here. Theres been other Madden lines. But its still fresh and this was pretty good

Vs
Hog tied: works. Coulda been a lil smoother/polished off but this hits

Code: nice personal. But over worded to the high heavens. This still hits

Ronin bar: nice concept. But it reads kinda clunky imo. It feels like there's too much going on here
Closer: good.

Vote bomb bard for the overall better verse. Dia wasnt bad. Just not consistent enough

[Clout]

Vs bomb bard aka killing spree aka massakre







Claim to be dope that’s a damn lie….you’re just the man no one calls nice.
This dude can’t see me, I put the left hook to KS eye(ksi) like a logan paul fight.

Cool

I’ll punch you until you get foggy, so think twice before you decide to scheme.
You’re like matt murdock, your true identity always hidden behind the scene.

See this seems like a statement, its not a punch. You have concepts - just need to make them harsh
This dude’s a faggot bitch with a lot of aliases, and massakre really took the cake.
Fucking pussy, bomb’s won’t do no damage, when the killing spree looks so fake.

see u have ideas u just need to word them to execute & humiliate.

If this was a prison sentence, then your death penalty, is about to be expedited.
This aint bring ya bitch to work day, so you can fucking tell ronin he’s not invited.

Eh, light still too soft on impact

Purge all his alter ego’s, after he takes the L enough it’ll make his sadness permanent.
You’re not a threat, you only talk about killing spree’s when you get madden tournaments.

ok could've been harsher
You got speared by a rhyno in week 1, and a fucking warthog you never could beat.
Pounded this girl on the first date, a bitch w/ a punchable face is one u never should meat.

no

DiaSick AKA Warthog




Listen fuck boy!....
IM the reason RB gettin play! Watch Bomb smack'em W/fear
Joog, Ronin, N Amen Bitchin like girls GOT'U HYPE! & thats all the action You've gotten in years

Cool
Drown U W/Punches so I get Boat loads of votes! Choke bitch!
You'll see me & Hog Tied.. @ the back of my boat right before he's thrown in the ocean

Cool
Fukin Hack job, Glock'll shut U down cos u not ment for this game
NO matter how good U are @ UR JOB HERE, theres no code stop'n bullets from going into ur brain

Eh
None of this bitches moves WOOO us! 9's far from scared
Figure 4 shots have ur legs twisted & head hit the ground quicker than Charlette Flair!

Old concept, flipped good
You've yet to drop anything Art official! Imagin this nerd is quittin
Feedback, Votes = Non existent...
This Dudes Uesless... Its to bad Ronin didnt delete every verse you've written!

Wordy, i fall victim to this too.

Stackin cash a bumpy subject, Women sense U havent loved yet & u aint workin
We'll hear all about Wart Cream, but its jus U talkin how Ur single & the girls U make nervous

Eh

I got Kill spree was harsher & more impactful with his shots. Dia if you just work on being harsher & flipping your punches better. I think you'd be beating alot of ppl

v/KS

[Ryno]

Vs bomb bard aka killing spree aka massakre







Claim to be dope that’s a damn lie….you’re just the man no one calls nice.
This dude can’t see me, I put the left hook to KS eye(ksi) like a logan paul fight.
Purge all his alter ego’s, after he takes the L enough it’ll make his sadness permanent.
You’re not a threat, you only talk about killing spree’s when you get madden tournaments.

not a bad drop. used a madden line myself recently. i liked those 2

DiaSick AKA Warthog




Listen fuck boy!....
Drown U W/Punches so I get Boat loads of votes! Choke bitch!
You'll see me & Hog Tied.. @ the back of my boat right before he's thrown in the ocean
Fukin Hack job, Glock'll shut U down cos u not ment for this game
NO matter how good U are @ UR JOB HERE, theres no code stop'n bullets from going into ur brain

i liked these the most. whatever i didnt quote i thought was either h or too wordy.

v/Spree... both had bad misses but as far as his 2 vs dia's 2... i think he had the stronger quotes

[knucklehead.]

hogtied was ok

rest was either bland/eh or complete booty

dia legit worst fucking text battler ever

if you have to put expos in the middle of wordplays than you shouldnt use the wordplay you stupid faggot

had to google wtf you were talking about and apparently you're a 13 y/o girl

v/bomb

[Spree]

Bomb wins