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    Italian Pride

    Italian Pride

    I'm proud of my heritage, who i am is a special gift
    i come from a long line of greatness and men who never quit,
    of people who live for the blood they have in their viens
    and who protect family to the point that people think that its insane
    they never desert them, and are more royal then a lion is
    who love with their whole hearts, and rule with an iron fist
    no chance they'll ever submit, or back down from a fight
    they hit like an earthquake shaking the ground with their might
    they hold their heads high when they walk, never lie when they talk
    and would lay down their lives and die for there flock
    Italian pride is a lot greater a thing then the pride of the gay
    because to them the terms ride or die ain't just a phrase
    It's a thing that you breathe and a way that you live
    and if you disrespect the family they'll go crazy as shit
    the mafia gets going roaming streets in the night
    and even though they all sin, they're all believers of Christ
    and to me that makes them great, they all pray to a reverend
    maybe its fate but i know ill be seeing them one day in heaven

    I never dance with the devil, even though he'd like to try
    Jesus Christ's got my fly- I've never actually been to heights this high

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    this is dope son, keep it up. get more creative
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    Re: Italian Pride

    Quote Originally Posted by Bumble B View Post
    Italian Pride

    I'm proud of my heritage, who i am is a special gift
    i come from a long line of greatness and men who never quit,
    of people who live for the blood they have in their viens
    and who protect family to the point that people think that its insane
    they never desert them, and are more royal then a lion is
    who love with their whole hearts, and rule with an iron fist
    no chance they'll ever submit, or back down from a fight
    they hit like an earthquake shaking the ground with their might
    they hold their heads high when they walk, never lie when they talk
    and would lay down their lives and die for there flock
    Italian pride is a lot greater a thing then the pride of the gay
    because to them the terms ride or die ain't just a phrase
    It's a thing that you breathe and a way that you live
    and if you disrespect the family they'll go crazy as shit
    the mafia gets going roaming streets in the night
    and even though they all sin, they're all believers of Christ
    and to me that makes them great, they all pray to a reverend
    maybe its fate but i know ill be seeing them one day in heaven
    I'm part Italian. I seen the title of this and chose to read it hoping I would learn some shit. But I didn't. This was pretty weak. You said, and I quote
    Italian pride is a lot greater a thing then the pride of the gay
    C'monnnnnnn. Really? That's the best you could come up with? This is just text, at least put more thought into it than that. If my phone wasn't dead, I could freestyle live on camera better than that rn. But it's dead. That's why I'm on here. If you take this too harsh, my bad. But for real man. I expected to like this, mainly because I have Italian in my bloodline. But it disappointed me. Keep writing though. You got technical stuff and rhyme scheme down. But the content was lacking.

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    And in the quote, you typed "then" instead of "than". I tried to go edit my post but it wouldn't let me. My bad if I'm just noobing and can't figure how to edit, but damn bruh. It should be "...greater a thing than the.." at least. smh. Keep practicing.

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