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Thread: Clout vs Authentic - OPEN FOR VOTES

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    Clout vs Authentic - OPEN FOR VOTES

    12 lines due by Tuesday night at 11:59 pm? or u want it earlier idc

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    @Authentic. this is my check in

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    Re: Clout vs Authentic

    @Kill Spree I got 12 for authentic. But he hasn't checked in.

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    Re: Clout vs Authentic

    My fault, c.. I'm here. Post when you ready.. I'm bout to put sumn together.

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    Re: Clout vs Authentic

    See we text battle stars, still he dont wanna war wit a star, cuz.. I peepd ya man's dolo..
    fuck the pistols and bros hoe, when it comes to Star Wars.. you can get these Hans Solo!
    In the hood on game shit.. go hard in the paint, n fuck wit them K.A.Ts that shoot the ops
    idgaf what yo archtype is on 2k.. you the weakest center eva! You not good on the block..
    Clout.. yea he got it with the all the hoes the real niggas wouldnt fuck, so he do us a favor..
    they fuck erbody, n this tough guy brag about lickin that dangerous twat... boi was gladiator!
    N i dont travel far, the only time i go overseas.. is to put the gun under his chin, to his dome..
    squeeze off.. and watch an American tool turn clout's colossal head into a Colosseum from Rome
    Still no personal dropped, but the personal bitch i got, loyal, and i hold her down on my own..
    This pistol pretty, polished, and plated.. wit all kinda C on it... and i aint talkin bout Chrome!
    Drummer boi, fully loaded! i'll hit you Lo Mein... startin from the bottom.. fuckin up ya crew cut
    choppa rippin ya pack apart.. tryn be like Drake.. u just Top Ramen, another noodle soup'd up

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    Re: Clout vs Authentic

    Hey nice selfie as an Avy pic..NOT

    His alias? means bonafide yet u hide & no show it can't be helped.
    Funny Ur called authentic? & he's a 'genuine' fagget who ain't 'real' w/ himself.
    This dudes a Mess who'll dodge real writers as u peruse the vets,
    Authentic's so fucking trash he even made the PBX appear to be a huge success.
    No bitch'll care for ur caress. U rather semen over some thick hips.
    & them verses show 'no sign of life' the shits more 'barren' than ur ratchet bitch is
    Ya avy's 'smokey/obscure', comes across 'CLEARLY' as a shook type.
    Giving us all an idea on what a broke ass disappointing welfare recipient looks like.
    He's fake + disloyal so him being a true G? this Dudes dreaming
    when u ghosted as RB's struggling? its give being a lowlife scumbag a new meaning
    U dont vote daily or even show up to ur battles, u barely preform.
    it makes u more of a piece of shit than the people who actually allowed u to be born


    Go actually vote & participate u lame ass has been!

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    Re: Clout vs Authentic

    Quote Originally Posted by Authentic. View Post
    See we text battle stars, still he dont wanna war wit a star, cuz.. I peepd ya man's dolo..
    fuck the pistols and bros hoe, when it comes to Star Wars.. you can get these Hans Solo!
    ...I took off the font and size to show u how unwieldy and overworked ur lines are.. this punch is aight if not super played
    In the hood on game shit.. go hard in the paint, n fuck wit them K.A.Ts that shoot the ops
    idgaf what yo archtype is on 2k.. you the weakest center eva! You not good on the block..
    ....a lot of words for a reaaallly simple line. Itís not bad itís just not especially creative
    Clout.. yea he got it with the all the hoes the real niggas wouldnt fuck, so he do us a favor..
    they fuck erbody, n this tough guy brag about lickin that dangerous twat... boi was gladiator!
    ...u canít just bite camron bro... u gotta know the song this is from.. like fr
    N i dont travel far, the only time i go overseas.. is to put the gun under his chin, to his dome..
    squeeze off.. and watch an American tool turn clout's colossal head into a Colosseum from Rome
    ....dose vs math hoffa... I mean 2 back to backs here.. Iunno coincidence right ?
    Still no personal dropped, but the personal bitch i got, loyal, and i hold her down on my own..
    This pistol pretty, polished, and plated.. wit all kinda C on it... and i aint talkin bout Chrome!
    ...huh? All kinda C.. whatís that mean tho???
    Drummer boi, fully loaded! i'll hit you Lo Mein... startin from the bottom.. fuckin up ya crew cut
    choppa rippin ya pack apart.. tryn be like Drake.. u just Top Ramen, another noodle soup'd up
    ....nah
    Quote Originally Posted by Clout View Post
    Hey nice selfie as an Avy pic..NOT

    His alias? means bonafide yet u hide & no show it can't be helped.
    Funny Ur called authentic? & he's a 'genuine' fagget who ain't 'real' w/ himself.
    ...ok. The idea is cool. U tried to do a lot here and it didnít work so great.. didnít really not work either . Itís aight
    This dudes a Mess who'll dodge real writers as u peruse the vets,
    Authentic's so fucking trash he even made the PBX appear to be a huge success.
    ..:donít get it
    No bitch'll care for ur caress. U rather semen over some thick hips.
    & them verses show 'no sign of life' the shits more 'barren' than ur ratchet bitch is
    ....u got an idea of concepts and how to set em up.. but execution is a bit muddled
    Ya avy's 'smokey/obscure', comes across 'CLEARLY' as a shook type.
    Giving us all an idea on what a broke ass disappointing welfare recipient looks like.
    ....hell no
    He's fake + disloyal so him being a true G? this Dudes dreaming
    when u ghosted as RB's struggling? its give being a lowlife scumbag a new meaning
    ...this isnít really creative
    U dont vote daily or even show up to ur battles, u barely preform.
    it makes u more of a piece of shit than the people who actually allowed u to be born
    ....nope


    Go actually vote & participate u lame ass has been!

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    This is hard

    Authentic had concepts I had seen done slot
    But he did them decently


    Clout had some creative tries but kinda fumbled them


    Both had some lines that were basically statements



    I just canít vote for that gladiator line. Itís just a really iconic hip hop line so I donít see how u used it here


    That and the dome to a stadium line got me leaning to clout for being more original
    Not Impressed

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    Re: Clout vs Authentic - OPEN FOR VOTES

    1-0 me upping

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    Re: Clout vs Authentic - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Can anyone ever just get a vote for what they said in the verse and the impact it may or may not have had? lolsmh No hate @Clout by any means. Uppin 1 time. Lets get them votes.. Vote and i'll vote. Yall know i do.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Authentic. View Post
    Can anyone ever just get a vote for what they said in the verse and the impact it may or may not have had? lolsmh No hate @Clout by any means. Uppin 1 time. Lets get them votes.. Vote and i'll vote. Yall know i do.
    No worries my guy.

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    Re: Clout vs Authentic - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Authentic
    See we text battle stars, still he dont wanna war wit a star, cuz.. I peepd ya man's dolo..
    fuck the pistols and bros hoe, when it comes to Star Wars.. you can get these Hans Solo!
    wording was meh 1/5
    In the hood on game shit.. go hard in the paint, n fuck wit them K.A.Ts that shoot the ops
    idgaf what yo archtype is on 2k.. you the weakest center eva! You not good on the block..
    2/5
    Clout.. yea he got it with the all the hoes the real niggas wouldnt fuck, so he do us a favor..
    they fuck erbody, n this tough guy brag about lickin that dangerous twat... boi was gladiator!
    2/5 punch just didnt have impact
    N i dont travel far, the only time i go overseas.. is to put the gun under his chin, to his dome..
    squeeze off.. and watch an American tool turn clout's colossal head into a Colosseum from Rome
    3.5/5 i liked the visual on this. set up felt a bit shaky
    Still no personal dropped, but the personal bitch i got, loyal, and i hold her down on my own..
    This pistol pretty, polished, and plated.. wit all kinda C on it... and i aint talkin bout Chrome!
    1/5 i just didnt like this bar. i didnt get it. its not clear to me whats going on about it and to op it off its not really a diss on your opponent.
    Drummer boi, fully loaded! i'll hit you Lo Mein... startin from the bottom.. fuckin up ya crew cut
    choppa rippin ya pack apart.. tryn be like Drake.. u just Top Ramen, another noodle soup'd up
    1/5 this bar felt all over the place

    10.5/30
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    Clout
    His alias? means bonafide yet u hide & no show it can't be helped.
    Funny Ur called authentic? & he's a 'genuine' fagget who ain't 'real' w/ himself.
    [B]2/5 this was ok. didnt see anything special tho[/B]
    This dudes a Mess who'll dodge real writers as u peruse the vets,
    Authentic's so fucking trash he even made the PBX appear to be a huge success.
    1/5 no feeling this one
    No bitch'll care for ur caress. U rather semen over some thick hips.
    & them verses show 'no sign of life' the shits more 'barren' than ur ratchet bitch is
    2/5 ok. needs some work tho
    Ya avy's 'smokey/obscure', comes across 'CLEARLY' as a shook type.
    Giving us all an idea on what a broke ass disappointing welfare recipient looks like.
    2/5 wording was bad. i didnt see the connection between the set up and the punch. but i did laugh lol
    He's fake + disloyal so him being a true G? this Dudes dreaming
    when u ghosted as RB's struggling? its give being a lowlife scumbag a new meaning
    1/5 i see what you are saying but i didnt see a punch here
    U dont vote daily or even show up to ur battles, u barely preform.
    it makes u more of a piece of shit than the people who actually allowed u to be born
    2/5 i like the hostility but yea it no real punch here.

    10/30

    V/ Authentic-this battle was close imo. i feel as if both textcees lacked originality or effort in a lot of these bars.

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    Re: Clout vs Authentic - OPEN FOR VOTES

    @Meth @Greedy @Kill Spree @Bayou @Barcotic

    Can we got some votes for me and @Authentic. So we get can this one closed up
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    Re: Clout vs Authentic

    Quote Originally Posted by Authentic. View Post
    See we text battle stars, still he dont wanna war wit a star, cuz.. I peepd ya man's dolo..
    fuck the pistols and bros hoe, when it comes to Star Wars.. you can get these Hans Solo!
    --just a super old concept brother.
    In the hood on game shit.. go hard in the paint, n fuck wit them K.A.Ts that shoot the ops
    idgaf what yo archtype is on 2k.. you the weakest center eva! You not good on the block..
    --nah too wordy
    Clout.. yea he got it with the all the hoes the real niggas wouldnt fuck, so he do us a favor..
    they fuck erbody, n this tough guy brag about lickin that dangerous twat... boi was gladiator!
    --ok cool
    N i dont travel far, the only time i go overseas.. is to put the gun under his chin, to his dome..
    squeeze off.. and watch an American tool turn clout's colossal head into a Colosseum from Rome
    --not feeling
    Still no personal dropped, but the personal bitch i got, loyal, and i hold her down on my own..
    This pistol pretty, polished, and plated.. wit all kinda C on it... and i aint talkin bout Chrome!
    --this pretty good
    Drummer boi, fully loaded! i'll hit you Lo Mein... startin from the bottom.. fuckin up ya crew cut
    choppa rippin ya pack apart.. tryn be like Drake.. u just Top Ramen, another noodle soup'd up
    --too much going on here for me
    Quote Originally Posted by Clout View Post
    Hey nice selfie as an Avy pic..NOT

    His alias? means bonafide yet u hide & no show it can't be helped.
    Funny Ur called authentic? & he's a 'genuine' fagget who ain't 'real' w/ himself.
    -- ok i guess
    This dudes a Mess who'll dodge real writers as u peruse the vets,
    Authentic's so fucking trash he even made the PBX appear to be a huge success.
    --idk what the pbx is. Even googled it.
    No bitch'll care for ur caress. U rather semen over some thick hips.
    & them verses show 'no sign of life' the shits more 'barren' than ur ratchet bitch is
    --eh not feeling.
    Ya avy's 'smokey/obscure', comes across 'CLEARLY' as a shook type.
    Giving us all an idea on what a broke ass disappointing welfare recipient looks like.
    --nah man. Need something more then a smokey/clearly contrast tie in.
    He's fake + disloyal so him being a true G? this Dudes dreaming
    when u ghosted as RB's struggling? its give being a lowlife scumbag a new meaning
    --weak
    U dont vote daily or even show up to ur battles, u barely preform.
    it makes u more of a piece of shit than the people who actually allowed u to be born
    --nah bro lol


    Go actually vote & participate u lame ass has been!

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    Idk man ive read a few clout verses and thought hw was pretty solid but maybe this was a quick key or what idk just a lottttt of statementy bars with little or no tie ins at all. That style can work but ur wording has to be almost perfect or its gonna miss.

    Authentic wasnt great. But he was wayyy more creative imo. Wording killed him bc he comes off corny sometimes, but i got him here for having better hits imo.

    Good battle brethen

    V authentic


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