WK 3: Authentic (0-0) Vs RYno(1-1) - RYNO WINS

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@Authentic @Ryno

[Ryno]

im here...10-12

[Authentic.]

fasho.. match first drop.

[Ryno]

Lets Talk…

Fuckin Joy Rd scum…

Catch a fade or a .45? No matter what im destroyin’ this fag...
I could either slump author write a book on how im whippin’ his ass.
Me n my dawgs rupture ya cunts snatch. She’ll do whatever i say…
Im squeezing tittis in front of the crowd like she was Arianna Grande.
Been here for a decade n u BARELY get recognition, dweeb…
Yeah u drop but u go unnoticed every year like NBA Live 19.
Most hustlers flash cash n coke just to get the bitches wet…
U get side stepped even with the rock quicker than a harden euro step.
That verse in FL. major fail. U should probably take the loss son…
The quality in that verse would take a decade just to get an iso 9001.

[Authentic.]

lol you still suck, chump lolsmh..

Keyed.


I got him on the run.. but my pen game got it locked doe
you couldn't escape these bars breakin out with El Chapo
n u might stand for somethin, but no Nike here, so face it
u sacrificin everythin gamblin with me, but ur no Kaepernick
its per$sonally inaccurate for a grown man to misspell Rhyno
he never graduated from adult ed, so he dont know its a typo
the pistol pop like soda.. lea' ya blood leakin over the top n side
the scene'll look like that pop everywhere.. how i'm Rock n RYe
n you gone SWIMMING ya blood, wit shots to face over ya nose
they gone find u stretched like Mac, but not from no overdose!

[Meth]

Lets Talk…

Fuckin Joy Rd scum…

Catch a fade or a .45? No matter what im destroyin’ this fag...
I could either slump author write a book on how im whippin’ his ass.
--author been around 12 some odd years. i cant see a way author hasnt been used 30 plus times haha. not a bad flip tho. just too simple on such a dated play.
Me n my dawgs rupture ya cunts snatch. She’ll do whatever i say…
Im squeezing tittis in front of the crowd like she was Arianna Grande.
--ok
Been here for a decade n u BARELY get recognition, dweeb…
Yeah u drop but u go unnoticed every year like NBA Live 19.
--nah man
Most hustlers flash cash n coke just to get the bitches wet…
U get side stepped even with the rock quicker than a harden euro step.
--i like the idea alot but the wording was clunky
That verse in FL. major fail. U should probably take the loss son…
The quality in that verse would take a decade just to get an iso 9001.
--okkkkk

lol you still suck, chump lolsmh..

Keyed.


I got him on the run.. but my pen game got it locked doe
you couldn't escape these bars breakin out with El Chapo
--bars/bars a bit too simple wo much else here brother.
n u might stand for somethin, but no Nike here, so face it
u sacrificin everythin gamblin with me, but ur no Kaepernick
--not lovin
its per$sonally inaccurate for a grown man to misspell Rhyno
he never graduated from adult ed, so he dont know its a typo
--nah man ur better then this?
the pistol pop like soda.. lea' ya blood leakin over the top n side
the scene'll look like that pop everywhere.. how i'm Rock n RYe
--ok not bad.
n you gone SWIMMING ya blood, wit shots to face over ya nose
they gone find u stretched like Mac, but not from no overdose!
--ok

guyyyyyys. this may be the worst ive seen either of u drop. no stand outs from either of u. Authentic i like reading ur shit bc its different but this wasnt great man. ur concepts were baddddd here and u usually have good ones. a lot of statements from u brother. Ryno ive seen better from u too. ur verse against bar was way better. and ur verse in the nbl against score was pretty good too but i didnt like this at all.

so 2 ok bars and 3 misses from both of u. not gonna lie this was a letdown. i got ryno here but barely. thought he had better attempts. good battle bros.

v ryno

[YG]

Lets Talk…

Fuckin Joy Rd scum…

Catch a fade or a .45? No matter what im destroyin’ this fag...
I could either slump author write a book on how im whippin’ his ass.
Tight
Me n my dawgs rupture ya cunts snatch. She’ll do whatever i say…
Im squeezing tittis in front of the crowd like she was Arianna Grande.
Not feeling it
Been here for a decade n u BARELY get recognition, dweeb…
Yeah u drop but u go unnoticed every year like NBA Live 19.
Lolol funny but didn't hit too hard for a txt battle. I like it tho
Most hustlers flash cash n coke just to get the bitches wet…
U get side stepped even with the rock quicker than a harden euro step.
Tight
That verse in FL. major fail. U should probably take the loss son…
The quality in that verse would take a decade just to get an iso 9001.
Not really getting this fam

lol you still suck, chump lolsmh..

Keyed.


I got him on the run.. but my pen game got it locked doe
you couldn't escape these bars breakin out with El Chapo
Nah
n u might stand for somethin, but no Nike here, so face it
u sacrificin everythin gamblin with me, but ur no Kaepernick
Nah played already & not a good flip[
its per$sonally inaccurate for a grown man to misspell Rhyno
he never graduated from adult ed, so he dont know its a typo
Weak
the pistol pop like soda.. lea' ya blood leakin over the top n side
the scene'll look like that pop everywhere.. how i'm Rock n RYe
Nah
n you gone SWIMMING ya blood, wit shots to face over ya nose
they gone find u stretched like Mac, but not from no overdose!
Nahh

Yea Ryno came harder here even tho both missed a lot.

[Stranger]

ryno
Catch a fade or a .45? No matter what im destroyin’ this fag...
I could either slump author write a book on how im whippin’ his ass.
I'm not feeling this, more self hype than a real punch.

Me n my dawgs rupture ya cunts snatch. She’ll do whatever i say…
Im squeezing tittis in front of the crowd like she was Arianna Grande.
not really feeling this one either.

Been here for a decade n u BARELY get recognition, dweeb…
Yeah u drop but u go unnoticed every year like NBA Live 19.
this was soft here, not feeling.

Most hustlers flash cash n coke just to get the bitches wet…
U get side stepped even with the rock quicker than a harden euro step.
this was better, flow was cool to

That verse in FL. major fail. U should probably take the loss son…
The quality in that verse would take a decade just to get an iso 9001.
not feeling this one

I seen you do better, you should be coming with more punches but you dropped mostly self hype and bragging type bars.

authentic
I got him on the run.. but my pen game got it locked doe
you couldn't escape these bars breakin out with El Chapo
not feeling this, seen a lot of el chapo bars

n u might stand for somethin, but no Nike here, so face it
u sacrificin everythin gamblin with me, but ur no Kaepernick
this sounded weird, plus all kaepernick bars are played.

its per$sonally inaccurate for a grown man to misspell Rhyno
he never graduated from adult ed, so he dont know its a typo
this was corny to me.

the pistol pop like soda.. lea' ya blood leakin over the top n side
the scene'll look like that pop everywhere.. how i'm Rock n RYe
this isn't very good

n you gone SWIMMING ya blood, wit shots to face over ya nose
they gone find u stretched like Mac, but not from no overdose!
this is cool here.

I don't know dude, you should of came better to, shit isn't harsh enough, I think you attacked rhyno more than he did you though.

V/Authentic, for going at his oponent more, ryno had a lot of self hype bars with no real punch which really hurt him.

[hello there]

Rhino

Catch a fade or a .45? No matter what im destroyin’ this fag...
I could either slump author write a book on how im whippin’ his ass.
... No. JUST BECAUSE YOU SAID AUTH OR DOES NOT MAKE WHIPPIN' HIS ASS A WORDPLAY RELATED PUNCH!

Me n my dawgs rupture ya cunts snatch. She’ll do whatever i say…
Im squeezing tittis in front of the crowd like she was Arianna Grande.
EHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I mean I like the concept but god damn dude, this is so forced

Been here for a decade n u BARELY get recognition, dweeb…
Yeah u drop but u go unnoticed every year like NBA Live 19.
Eh

Most hustlers flash cash n coke just to get the bitches wet…
U get side stepped even with the rock quicker than a harden euro step.
I have to ignore this bar because what dude that really gets pussy does it because he gives girls money and drugs? You guys on some B-level game shit

That verse in FL. major fail. U should probably take the loss son…
The quality in that verse would take a decade just to get an iso 9001.
doesn't even rhyme


Authentic

I got him on the run.. but my pen game got it locked doe
you couldn't escape these bars breakin out with El Chapo
No

n u might stand for somethin, but no Nike here, so face it
u sacrificin everythin gamblin with me, but ur no Kaepernick
Yes... this IS in fact the world's worst Keapernick bar

its per$sonally inaccurate for a grown man to misspell Rhyno
he never graduated from adult ed, so he dont know its a typo
This is a bad rhyme

the pistol pop like soda.. lea' ya blood leakin over the top n side
the scene'll look like that pop everywhere.. how i'm Rock n RYe
Groan

n you gone SWIMMING ya blood, wit shots to face over ya nose
they gone find u stretched like Mac, but not from no overdose!
Weakest Mac miller bar out of the two weak Mac miller bars I've read this week


Y'all both sucked. VOTE: Me. ... Or Rhyno.

[Spree]

Catch a fade or a .45? No matter what im destroyin’ this fag...
I could either slump author write a book on how im whippin’ his ass.
Thought this was cool but could have been harsher. Hit anyways
Me n my dawgs rupture ya cunts snatch. She’ll do whatever i say…
Im squeezing tittis in front of the crowd like she was Arianna Grande.
Not feelin this
Been here for a decade n u BARELY get recognition, dweeb…
Yeah u drop but u go unnoticed every year like NBA Live 19.
this was light/Basic
Most hustlers flash cash n coke just to get the bitches wet…
U get side stepped even with the rock quicker than a harden euro step.
Dope
That verse in FL. major fail. U should probably take the loss son…
The quality in that verse would take a decade just to get an iso 9001.
nah

vs

I got him on the run.. but my pen game got it locked doe
you couldn't escape these bars breakin out with El Chapo
Basic/Lazy/Played concept bro
n u might stand for somethin, but no Nike here, so face it
u sacrificin everythin gamblin with me, but ur no Kaepernick
This had mad potential...wish you took time with this. just lazy
its per$sonally inaccurate for a grown man to misspell Rhyno
he never graduated from adult ed, so he dont know its a typo
Nah man
the pistol pop like soda.. lea' ya blood leakin over the top n side
the scene'll look like that pop everywhere.. how i'm Rock n RYe
Pop here pop there...The nameplay is dope you just didnt execute this punch well at all
n you gone SWIMMING ya blood, wit shots to face over ya nose
they gone find u stretched like Mac, but not from no overdose!
Again another nice concept wasted man... this was all over the place



OVerall not a good read. I've seen way better from both tbh. Esp Authentic i understand he rushed/Keyed had he taken some time on this verse he could have easily beat that Ryno verse. Ryno had only a few ok bars that had some impact but thats it. Still edged this.


V/Ryno
Lets go yall!

[JEM.]

v/Ryno

I pretty much thought it was the author book punch + the Harden (even though that kind of concept was done to death with wade before... and now Harden) vs the Mac miller bar...

2 against 1 - the rest was almost a wash to me.