Wk 3: Cheesecake assain(0-2) Vs High N Drunk(0-0) - DIa wins

[Ryno]

I just wrote 15 lines and here they are - - -







My flows so deep, you choke, then go to sleep... Pressure builds up, you not gonna breathe...
Face starts purplin' now... sharks circlin' round...
Cuz bein' first to three L's the only way you top of the league...!!

only one i liked. the rest were long winded asf which softened the impact

You’re a retarded fuck, because those stretched ass bars is a style we have to hate.
They said I never had pie in my face, but this aint the fucking first pussy assassinate.
Your low tier bitch...and this pen poison is about to bring your damn life to a closure.
High and drunk is a good excuse for bitches that won’t fuck ur ass when they’re sober.

i liked these. your concept choice can be poor at times

v/dia...better structure n attempts