Week 4: J. Dill 0-0 vs. King 0-0 KING WINS

[Meth]

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@King @j. dill

[King]

check

[YG]

Battling this fraud's a chore, cuz wtf's a King to a God... of War
I was gonna GL u in my checkin but knew it'd give u flashbacks to the Gauntlet 4
Fat fuck a dickrider, this obese clown never been harsh w/ verbs
Stayed waiting on Micky D's sign to change, no wonder always u admired Arch's words
Shorty said u mad annoying, when I'm done w/ that clit her knees locked
I'll finger ur bitch til them lips pleased... She puts a finger to ur lips like 'please stop'
U think you're winning but RB knows this queer's mad wrong
Everyone'll shout King's Dead & that ur lines are worse than Futures in that song
In the mag Meth said you needa warm up but we know dudes whack
Cuz bitch the only way you'd shake rust is dropping nukes on the MW2 map
Grow up faggot, point at em w/ the fire & we'll all know this dudes thru
Cuz when the 'heat see King' it'll be missles not the water guns you're used to

[YG]

Battling this frauds a chore, the fuck is a King to a God... of War
Should've GL'd u in my check in but knew it'd give u flashbacks to the Gauntlet 4
Fat fuck rides dick, this obese clown's harsh w/ verbs?
Stayed looking @ the Micky D’s sign, no wonder u admired Arch's words
Shorty said u a pest, when I'm done w/ the clit her knees lock
I'll finger ur bitch til them lips pleased... She puts a finger to ur lips like 'please stop'
Think ur winning ur mad wrong, ur nothing when ur pack's gone
We all agree King's Dead & that ur lines are worse than Future in that song
Meth said u need to warm up but we all know this dudes whack
Cuz bitch the only way you'd shake rust is dropping nukes on the MW2 map
Ur styles as old as that game, King was noob slayin it was the best time
Ur so fuckin stank & washed up I dunno if I'm smelling ur lines or red tide

[Meth]

@King

[King]

I have no peer in this league, dudes know my flow is perfect
You had no peer in this league, then that bitch sky123 started posting verses
Named after a '30s G yet look like u'd pay 30 a g, Bet u subscribe to yelp
I'd bet Dill weed look like dill weed, except this nerds too fake to even buy himself
Ur girl callin me sir now, ur amatuer moves couldn't keep her focus
Must've been overlookin the bitch coz she took this pro motion like she was owed it
Don't matter where we at, if I see u then I'm gonna let it ring, kid
Clap at em in traffic, have JD switchin lanes faster than that money aint a thing vid
I've mutilated true emcees, records iron clad how can YOU dent me
I'll chase u off the site, u'll be the only cat in the country evacuating TO nc
U the Lonzo of the league, look like a bust n theres no proof u can win
Even if J's in better form this season he'll always be number 2 to the King

[Stranger]

J.Dill
Battling this frauds a chore, the fuck is a King to a God... of War
Should've GL'd u in my check in but knew it'd give u flashbacks to the Gauntlet 4
aight bar here...

Fat fuck rides dick, this obese clown's harsh w/ verbs?
Stayed looking @ the Micky D’s sign, no wonder u admired Arch's words
this was corny right here.

Shorty said u a pest, when I'm done w/ the clit her knees lock
I'll finger ur bitch til them lips pleased... She puts a finger to ur lips like 'please stop'
eh, not feeling this much, doesn't do nothing imo

Think ur winning ur mad wrong, ur nothing when ur pack's gone
We all agree King's Dead & that ur lines are worse than Future in that song
nope, not feeling this man.

Meth said u need to warm up but we all know this dudes whack
Cuz bitch the only way you'd shake rust is dropping nukes on the MW2 map
nah not feeling this either, coo reference I guess.

Ur styles as old as that game, King was noob slayin it was the best time
Ur so fuckin stank & washed up I dunno if I'm smelling ur lines or red tide
this was gay here.. not feeling.

You had one stand out bar in here, not really feeling much from you here.

vs

King
I have no peer in this league, dudes know my flow is perfect
You had no peer in this league, then that bitch sky123 started posting verses
simple, but got a chukle out of it

Named after a '30s G yet look like u'd pay 30 a g, Bet u subscribe to yelp
I'd bet Dill weed look like dill weed, except this nerds too fake to even buy himself
this is okay, not really feeling tho

Ur girl callin me sir now, ur amatuer moves couldn't keep her focus
Must've been overlookin the bitch coz she took this pro motion like she was owed it
not feeling this that much

Don't matter where we at, if I see u then I'm gonna let it ring, kid
Clap at em in traffic, have JD switchin lanes faster than that money aint a thing vid
nope, close but no cigar

I've mutilated true emcees, records iron clad how can YOU dent me
I'll chase u off the site, u'll be the only cat in the country evacuating TO nc
lmao, this is a bar here.. #hurricane bars

U the Lonzo of the league, look like a bust n theres no proof u can win
Even if J's in better form this season he'll always be number 2 to the King
way over the top when it comes to self hype. no real punch.

You had a a few good bars, I think you could of came harder and brung more punches, you had a lot of punches here and there, evacuate to nc is the highlight of the whole battle.

v/king

[King]

@Cheese cake assassin

U didn't say who u voted for

[Meth]

I have no peer in this league, dudes know my flow is perfect
You had no peer in this league, then that bitch sky123 started posting verses
--relevant, ok.
Named after a '30s G yet look like u'd pay 30 a g, Bet u subscribe to yelp
I'd bet Dill weed look like dill weed, except this nerds too fake to even buy himself
--idk. Kind of wordy. Kind of corny, possibly correct tho lol
Ur girl callin me sir now, ur amatuer moves couldn't keep her focus
Must've been overlookin the bitch coz she took this pro motion like she was owed it
--cool idea, good bar.
Don't matter where we at, if I see u then I'm gonna let it ring, kid
Clap at em in traffic, have JD switchin lanes faster than that money aint a thing vid
--ok
I've mutilated true emcees, records iron clad how can YOU dent me
I'll chase u off the site, u'll be the only cat in the country evacuating TO nc
--lmao nice
U the Lonzo of the league, look like a bust n theres no proof u can win
Even if J's in better form this season he'll always be number 2 to the King

Eh ok

Battling this frauds a chore, the fuck is a King to a God... of War
Should've GL'd u in my check in but knew it'd give u flashbacks to the Gauntlet 4
--i dig it even tho its like a decade old personal lol
Fat fuck rides dick, this obese clown's harsh w/ verbs?
Stayed looking @ the Micky D’s sign, no wonder u admired Arch's words
--i get it. Its solid just such an olddddd personal. Not sure who else will even understand this one here.
Shorty said u a pest, when I'm done w/ the clit her knees lock
I'll finger ur bitch til them lips pleased... She puts a finger to ur lips like 'please stop'
--this cool tho
Think ur winning ur mad wrong, ur nothing when ur pack's gone
We all agree King's Dead & that ur lines are worse than Future in that song
--nah
Meth said u need to warm up but we all know this dudes whack
Cuz bitch the only way you'd shake rust is dropping nukes on the MW2 map
--another obscure reference lol. This is ok
Ur styles as old as that game, King was noob slayin it was the best time
Ur so fuckin stank & washed up I dunno if I'm smelling ur lines or red tide
--nah

Both had 2 stand out bars. Evac to nc was funny lol. King just didnt have any bad misses, and his verse was a bit fresher to me. Jds biggest problem for is ive seen a ton of the arch/king and gow and fat personals on king it just loses its freshness. Good battle tho guys.

V/ King

[hello there]

Battling this frauds a chore, the fuck is a King to a God... of War
Should've GL'd u in my check in but knew it'd give u flashbacks to the Gauntlet 4
Eh

Fat fuck rides dick, this obese clown's harsh w/ verbs?
Stayed looking @ the Micky D’s sign, no wonder u admired Arch's words
Eh

Shorty said u a pest, when I'm done w/ the clit her knees lock
I'll finger ur bitch til them lips pleased... She puts a finger to ur lips like 'please stop'
Nice

Think ur winning ur mad wrong, ur nothing when ur pack's gone
We all agree King's Dead & that ur lines are worse than Future in that song
Nope

Meth said u need to warm up but we all know this dudes whack
Cuz bitch the only way you'd shake rust is dropping nukes on the MW2 map
Eh

Ur styles as old as that game, King was noob slayin it was the best time
Ur so fuckin stank & washed up I dunno if I'm smelling ur lines or red tide
No

I have no peer in this league, dudes know my flow is perfect
You had no peer in this league, then that bitch sky123 started posting verses
Eh

Named after a '30s G yet look like u'd pay 30 a g, Bet u subscribe to yelp
I'd bet Dill weed look like dill weed, except this nerds too fake to even buy himself
Eh

Ur girl callin me sir now, ur amatuer moves couldn't keep her focus
Must've been overlookin the bitch coz she took this pro motion like she was owed it
Eh

Don't matter where we at, if I see u then I'm gonna let it ring, kid
Clap at em in traffic, have JD switchin lanes faster than that money aint a thing vid
Eh

I've mutilated true emcees, records iron clad how can YOU dent me
I'll chase u off the site, u'll be the only cat in the country evacuating TO nc
No

U the Lonzo of the league, look like a bust n theres no proof u can win
Even if J's in better form this season he'll always be number 2 to the King
Idk basketball but I know structure and this is eh

VOTE: Dill cuz he had one interesting bar. This was literally a mirror match - it was like you're a newbie, I'm gonna fuck your girl, here's a sports metaphor and a topical bar.

[Mr W.Rite]

Battling this frauds a chore, the fuck is a King to a God... of War
Should've GL'd u in my check in but knew it'd give u flashbacks to the Gauntlet 4
not bad, personals executed well are always a plus


Stayed looking @ the Micky D’s sign, no wonder u admired Arch's words
Fat fuck rides dick, this obese clown's harsh w/ verbs?
didnt really hit hard for me on this one



Shorty said u a pest, when I'm done w/ the clit her knees lock
I'll finger ur bitch til them lips pleased... She puts a finger to ur lips like 'please stop'
concept was meh, wording killed it for me, not feeling too much


Think ur winning ur mad wrong, ur nothing when ur pack's gone
We all agree King's Dead & that ur lines are worse than Future in that song
not bad, but not good, kinda forced but wasnt terrible

Meth said u need to warm up but we all know this dudes whack
Cuz bitch the only way you'd shake rust is dropping nukes on the MW2 map
no not feeling, again it seemed forced

Ur styles as old as that game, King was noob slayin it was the best time
Ur so fuckin stank & washed up I dunno if I'm smelling ur lines or red tide
concept wasnt terrible, just not executed well



I have no peer in this league, dudes know my flow is perfect
You had no peer in this league, then that bitch sky123 started posting verses
eehh, not bad i liked the flow, seems like a personal so i kinda liked

Named after a '30s G yet look like u'd pay 30 a g, Bet u subscribe to yelp
I'd bet Dill weed look like dill weed, except this nerds too fake to even buy himself
kinda stretched too wordy, concept was forced, not feeling it

Ur girl callin me sir now, ur amatuer moves couldn't keep her focus
Must've been overlookin the bitch coz she took this pro motion like she was owed it
this could have been much better, wording hurt you here, but not terrible, kinda liked

Don't matter where we at, if I see u then I'm gonna let it ring, kid
Clap at em in traffic, have JD switchin lanes faster than that money aint a thing vid
im not mad at the punch, just mad at the reference, kinda forced but flowed decent


I've mutilated true emcees, records iron clad how can YOU dent me
I'll chase u off the site, u'll be the only cat in the country evacuating TO nc
once again not a bad concept and wording could have been tweaked a bit, liked a little


U the Lonzo of the league, look like a bust n theres no proof u can win
Even if J's in better form this season he'll always be number 2 to the King
didnt rhyme so that what hurt you here, bad wording and didnt flow



overall my v/KING
both needs better concepts and better execution.
keep writing and keep battling


-W.Rite

[Allen Knight]

Shorty said u a pest, when I'm done w/ the clit her knees lock
I'll finger ur bitch til them lips pleased... She puts a finger to ur lips like 'please stop'
Meth said u need to warm up but we all know this dudes whack
Cuz bitch the only way you'd shake rust is dropping nukes on the MW2 map

Vs

Don't matter where we at, if I see u then I'm gonna let it ring, kid
Clap at em in traffic, have JD switchin lanes faster than that money aint a thing vid
I've mutilated true emcees, records iron clad how can YOU dent me
I'll chase u off the site, u'll be the only cat in the country evacuating TO nc


V/King, close battle have this tied in quotes but i think pulled the dub here w/ the nc line,
that shit was dope, dill had some good stuff to the lips line coulda been fire if worded different still
was good tho. props to both.

[Ryno]

Battling this frauds a chore, the fuck is a King to a God... of War
Should've GL'd u in my check in but knew it'd give u flashbacks to the Gauntlet 4
Fat fuck rides dick, this obese clown's harsh w/ verbs?
Stayed looking @ the Micky D’s sign, no wonder u admired Arch's words
Shorty said u a pest, when I'm done w/ the clit her knees lock
I'll finger ur bitch til them lips pleased... She puts a finger to ur lips like 'please stop'
Think ur winning ur mad wrong, ur nothing when ur pack's gone
We all agree King's Dead & that ur lines are worse than Future in that song

I have no peer in this league, dudes know my flow is perfect
You had no peer in this league, then that bitch sky123 started posting verses
Named after a '30s G yet look like u'd pay 30 a g, Bet u subscribe to yelp
I'd bet Dill weed look like dill weed, except this nerds too fake to even buy himself
Don't matter where we at, if I see u then I'm gonna let it ring, kid
Clap at em in traffic, have JD switchin lanes faster than that money aint a thing vid
I've mutilated true emcees, records iron clad how can YOU dent me
I'll chase u off the site, u'll be the only cat in the country evacuating TO nc
U the Lonzo of the league, look like a bust n theres no proof u can win
Even if J's in better form this season he'll always be number 2 to the King

aye this was maaaaad close. i feel like j dill kinda fell off with those last 2 bars at the end imo. king stayed pretty consistent.

v/King