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Thread: Week 4: Mr W.rite 0-1 vs. Authentic 0-1 MR Write wins

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    Week 4: Mr W.rite 0-1 vs. Authentic 0-1 MR Write wins

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    Re: Week 4: Mr W.rite 0-1 vs. Authentic 0-1

    fasho.. just match first drop.

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    Re: Week 4: Mr W.rite 0-1 vs. Authentic 0-1

    cool..

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    Re: Week 4: Mr W.rite 0-1 vs. Authentic 0-1

    Not much time, so here a quick key...


    No Rite or Wrong wit punches, long as u put the W.rite?
    double u's to ya chin turn him into a paper plane as ^ take flight
    W.rite wanna spark some inspiration? Put the burner to ya noggin
    the blade give u two checks to ya body like Nike a hoody n joggin
    u even suspect to me.. from Mr. Write to Mr W.rite?.. yea s'a gay act..
    highest AIDS rate is in ATL, W.rite? most of you citizens is fags.. FACT!
    n u just fall in line like bullets blowin from the drum.. bitch be burnin hot!
    ya mom snort line n blow the block! lil pussy wont cool from burnin cocks!
    And i'm so original.. ima acknowledge you having to say that you are
    if you were.. then who knew? cuz us real dudes dont brag from the start...
    see im puttin the gloves on, but we aint hoppin in the ring for spar shit
    the mask go wit the ^ to see if this W.riter wanna turn page n act retarded
    You seem choose ya battles wisely, now ya fate in the hands of another
    ironic you and Meth are like Able n Kane < this time im killin his brother!

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    Re: Week 4: Mr W.rite 0-1 vs. Authentic 0-1

    here.


    Not impressed with this loser… be yourself bitch quit actin tough
    N’shoulda matched me… instead you came old, played and wack as fuck
    beating you, got me mad inspiring, but still a sad assignment
    don’t try me, cus I cant wait for shit to go left …like bad alignments
    Last week he was awful yet predicted to win…he really played you, dudes
    We thought we’d CNN to your wackness, turns out that was fake news too
    If you did your job, your girl wouldn’t call me to pound her to sleep bro…
    She takes more balls with a stick in her hand like the count was 3-0…
    I school n teach pricks, wreck this fool regardless, im on some G shit
    Fuck mumble rappers, my punches’ll have you mumbling just to speak bitch
    Know your role, im only sparring, this shit and real…you’re hopeless guy
    The crash test dummy week to week, and still aint learned he s’pose to die




    -W.Rite
    Last edited by Mr W.Rite; September 14th, 2018 at 10:32 PM

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    Re: Week 4: Mr W.rite 0-1 vs. Authentic 0-1

    Quote Originally Posted by Authentic. View Post
    Not much time, so here a quick key...


    No Rite or Wrong wit punches, long as u put the W.rite?
    double u's to ya chin turn him into a paper plane as ^ take flight
    eh, not really feeling the W play
    W.rite wanna spark some inspiration? Put the burner to ya noggin
    the blade give u two checks to ya body like Nike a hoody n joggin
    nah
    u even suspect to me.. from Mr. Write to Mr W.rite?.. yea s'a gay act..
    highest AIDS rate is in ATL, W.rite? most of you citizens is fags.. FACT!
    eh, could have done more with this.
    n u just fall in line like bullets blowin from the drum.. bitch be burnin hot!
    ya mom snort line n blow the block! lil pussy wont cool from burnin cocks!
    this is ok, best bar so far imo
    And i'm so original.. ima acknowledge you having to say that you are
    if you were.. then who knew? cuz us real dudes dont brag from the start...
    don't think i get what your going for
    see im puttin the gloves on, but we aint hoppin in the ring for spar shit
    the mask go wit the ^ to see if this W.riter wanna turn page n act retarded
    nah
    You seem choose ya battles wisely, now ya fate in the hands of another
    ironic you and Meth are like Able n Kane < this time im killin his brother!
    not really feeling


    Quote Originally Posted by Mr W.Rite View Post
    here.


    Not impressed with this loser… be yourself bitch quit actin tough
    N’shoulda matched me… instead you came old, played and wack as fuck
    eh ok-ish
    beating you, got me mad inspiring, but still a sad assignment
    don’t try me, cus I cant wait for shit to go left …like bad alignments
    cool idea, ok execution
    Last week he was awful yet predicted to win…he really played you, dudes
    We thought we’d CNN to your wackness, turns out that was fake news too
    kind of a reach for text wordplay but i like it
    If you did your job, your girl wouldn’t call me to pound her to sleep bro…
    She takes more balls with a stick in her hand like the count was 3-0…
    very played concept
    I school n teach pricks, wreck this fool regardless, im on some G shit
    Fuck mumble rappers, my punches’ll have you mumbling just to speak bitch
    ok
    Know your role, im only sparring, this shit and real…you’re hopeless guy
    The crash test dummy week to week, and still aint learned he s’pose to die
    eh



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    Re: Week 4: Mr W.rite 0-1 vs. Authentic 0-1

    Quote Originally Posted by Authentic. View Post
    Not much time, so here a quick key...


    No Rite or Wrong wit punches, long as u put the W.rite?
    double u's to ya chin turn him into a paper plane as ^ take flight
    Nah
    W.rite wanna spark some inspiration? Put the burner to ya noggin
    the blade give u two checks to ya body like Nike a hoody n joggin
    Ok
    u even suspect to me.. from Mr. Write to Mr W.rite?.. yea s'a gay act..
    highest AIDS rate is in ATL, W.rite? most of you citizens is fags.. FACT!
    Nahh
    n u just fall in line like bullets blowin from the drum.. bitch be burnin hot!
    ya mom snort line n blow the block! lil pussy wont cool from burnin cocks!
    Nah
    And i'm so original.. ima acknowledge you having to say that you are
    if you were.. then who knew? cuz us real dudes dont brag from the start...
    Noth in g witty here bro
    see im puttin the gloves on, but we aint hoppin in the ring for spar shit
    the mask go wit the ^ to see if this W.riter wanna turn page n act retarded
    Nah
    You seem choose ya battles wisely, now ya fate in the hands of another
    ironic you and Meth are like Able n Kane < this time im killin his brother!
    Nah man

    Quote Originally Posted by Mr W.Rite View Post
    here.


    Not impressed with this loser… be yourself bitch quit actin tough
    N’shoulda matched me… instead you came old, played and wack as fuck
    Ehhhh ok
    beating you, got me mad inspiring, but still a sad assignment
    don’t try me, cus I cant wait for shit to go left …like bad alignments
    Ok
    Last week he was awful yet predicted to win…he really played you, dudes
    We thought we’d CNN to your wackness, turns out that was fake news too
    Ok i dont mind this one
    If you did your job, your girl wouldn’t call me to pound her to sleep bro…
    She takes more balls with a stick in her hand like the count was 3-0…
    Lol
    I school n teach pricks, wreck this fool regardless, im on some G shit
    Fuck mumble rappers, my punches’ll have you mumbling just to speak bitch
    --nah i like where u goin tho. Much better then last week
    Know your role, im only sparring, this shit and real…you’re hopeless guy
    The crash test dummy week to week, and still aint learned he s’pose to die

    Nah




    -W.Rite
    Authentic was offff maybe cuz he keyd. Not a lot of creativity or wit in his verse.

    Write was much better this week then last and he got it here

    V/ write


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    Re: Week 4: Mr W.rite 0-1 vs. Authentic 0-1

    Quote Originally Posted by Mr W.Rite View Post
    here.


    Last week he was awful yet predicted to win…he really played you, dudes
    We thought we’d CNN to your wackness, turns out that was fake news too
    I school n teach pricks, wreck this fool regardless, im on some G shit
    Fuck mumble rappers, my punches’ll have you mumbling just to speak bitch

    -W.Rite
    Wasnt feeling any of Auths verse didnt like the concepts or the execution. idk man u should take ur time on ur next verse. write had a better verse this week. i like the mumble rap line the most. good stuff hoe.

    v/mr.write

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    Re: Week 4: Mr W.rite 0-1 vs. Authentic 0-1

    Quote Originally Posted by Authentic. View Post
    Not much time, so here a quick key...


    No Rite or Wrong wit punches, long as u put the W.rite?
    double u's to ya chin turn him into a paper plane as ^ take flight
    Doesn't read well, to me

    W.rite wanna spark some inspiration? Put the burner to ya noggin
    the blade give u two checks to ya body like Nike a hoody n joggin
    I like the idea but I feel like it didn't land

    u even suspect to me.. from Mr. Write to Mr W.rite?.. yea s'a gay act..
    highest AIDS rate is in ATL, W.rite? most of you citizens is fags.. FACT!
    Not really feeling it. Forced.

    n u just fall in line like bullets blowin from the drum.. bitch be burnin hot!
    ya mom snort line n blow the block! lil pussy wont cool from burnin cocks!
    This is the same as the last bar, except without the punch

    And i'm so original.. ima acknowledge you having to say that you are
    if you were.. then who knew? cuz us real dudes dont brag from the start...
    You need bigger concepts man. Swing harder

    see im puttin the gloves on, but we aint hoppin in the ring for spar shit
    the mask go wit the ^ to see if this W.riter wanna turn page n act retarded
    I wish the punch had to do with turn the page, cuz this was kinda clever

    You seem choose ya battles wisely, now ya fate in the hands of another
    ironic you and Meth are like Able n Kane < this time im killin his brother!
    I don't get the tie in
    Quote Originally Posted by Mr W.Rite View Post
    here.


    Not impressed with this loser… be yourself bitch quit actin tough
    N’shoulda matched me… instead you came old, played and wack as fuck
    Dont think I get it
    beating you, got me mad inspiring, but still a sad assignment
    don’t try me, cus I cant wait for shit to go left …like bad alignments
    This is solid
    Last week he was awful yet predicted to win…he really played you, dudes
    We thought we’d CNN to your wackness, turns out that was fake news too
    Very solid

    If you did your job, your girl wouldn’t call me to pound her to sleep bro…
    She takes more balls with a stick in her hand like the count was 3-0…
    Nah

    I school n teach pricks, wreck this fool regardless, im on some G shit
    Fuck mumble rappers, my punches’ll have you mumbling just to speak bitch
    Eh

    Know your role, im only sparring, this shit and real…you’re hopeless guy
    The crash test dummy week to week, and still aint learned he s’pose to die
    No



    -W.Rite
    VOTE Write. I thought he had a couple solid punches, and most of the other guys' stuff just needed to be simplified.

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