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Thread: Week 5: High and Drunk 0-2 vs. Authentic. 0-2 Authentic wins

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    Week 5: High and Drunk 0-2 vs. Authentic. 0-2 Authentic wins

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    Re: Week 5: High and Drunk 0-2 vs. Authentic. 0-2

    We both suck. So let's keep it short - 10 lines.

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    Re: Week 5: High and Drunk 0-2 vs. Authentic. 0-2

    lol well damn..

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    Re: Week 5: High and Drunk 0-2 vs. Authentic. 0-2

    IKR?




    You hoes told me to go super short bars. And the only punches you liked so far were gunplay shit.

    So it's your fault I wrote this awful verse:





    Your hoe is a head doc... Now you know why the sex stopped...
    This Detroit wrapper untouched cuz I play with your ex box..!!

    Son, I fuckin' blast... There's precedence I run with the strap...
    So it ain't a secret service I put this gun on ya lap..!!

    Thumbs on my rap... Then the bullet nipple and mount her right in...
    Cuz yall kids love it when I cover guns like Counter Strike skins..!!

    This downer might win?... Apparent that he made out challenging me...
    Until I put this kid in a box like Lebanese takeout..!!

    Splinter this dead weight... Fire on this pussy till his cinders impregnate...
    Bring more arms to this matchup than Tinder in red states..!!



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    downer My Twin? A Parent that he May Doubt, challenging me
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    Also kids are little goats. Poor, helpless, tasty little goats.

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    Also click on "Detroit" its a link.

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    Re: Week 5: High and Drunk 0-2 vs. Authentic. 0-2

    @Authentic. dont u no show !! verse due tn!!


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    Re: Week 5: High and Drunk 0-2 vs. Authentic. 0-2

    Nah... I got this.


    HnD dont get spiteful.. matched up on the card, but im nothin like u
    U know me for body'n vets, i know u from get'n bodied by my rivals..
    shiit.. ya helmet on, i got them rounds that'll sober up this hard head
    so tactful! cuz it suits you to get bodied, im chop'n off his armor legs..
    Properly dead.. after i shoot him point blank.. it hit his cerebral cortex
    a sleepin vortex, how he spin back into a fetal position on the floor mat
    you just a door step.. u dont really do shit here.. the principle for ya ass
    you just got skipped up a few levels to be here, u not really in this class...
    At last.. call me the don on the league.. the bitches i catch n run em down
    ya bitch like me too...
    .... so when i Steeler and score that touch... u best call me Antonio Brown!


    eh.. light. Its enough.

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    Re: Week 5: High and Drunk 0-2 vs. Authentic. 0-2

    Quote Originally Posted by High And Drunk View Post
    IKR?




    You hoes told me to go super short bars. And the only punches you liked so far were gunplay shit.

    So it's your fault I wrote this awful verse:





    Your hoe is a head doc... Now you know why the sex stopped...
    This Detroit wrapper untouched cuz I play with your ex box..!!



    ight so im diggin the bar structure, but im gonna tell u some things and they all are out of love and helping u evolve here homie, with the knowledge im gonna give u, u can compete here.

    ok so i see what ur doing here. a couple things tho. most of the heads who still do shortbar or text in general are people who have been doing this a long time, so things like parsing ur text with a link to explain ur bar is looked down upon heavily, ur bar could be super dope, but people will discount it simply bc of the link thing. to most people, if u have use anything other then ur bar to explain ur punch, u havent done ur job.

    as far as the actual bar goes, the concept is superrrrrrr old, xbox/ex box been done forever. the way u worded it wasnt super harsh or creative or new so this is a big miss here.

    Son, I fuckin' blast... There's precedence I run with the strap...
    So it ain't a secret service I put this gun on ya lap..!!

    ok so u can actually make ur bars a bit longer here, this left a bit to be desired, the precedence/secret service is kind of a reach conceptually to me unless theres a wp im missing {maybe ur going for presidents/precedence as a wordplay but that doesnt work phonetically for me} bc precedence just means first or knowledge of something already happening which works for the way ur saying it in that people know u have a history of holding a weapon, but it doesnt work in connecting it to the secret service except that it kind of sounds like presidents. thats why i think the concept is a reach, the concept isnt a reach if u were going for presidents/precedence however, but the wp is bad if thats the case and makes it a miss anyway

    Thumbs on my rap... Then the bullet nipple and mount her right in...
    Cuz yall kids love it when I cover guns like Counter Strike skins..!!

    not bad here, maybe could have ties in the counterstrike concept more in the set up by referencing shooter games or pcs or terrorism or something, but this is ur best bar so far.

    This downer might win?... Apparent that he made out challenging me...
    Until I put this kid in a box like Lebanese takeout..!!

    "put this ______ in a box" or "put ________ in a box" lines are pretty used at this point, not sayuing u cant make a dope one but they have to be really creative or fresh to work for most people. also this didnt rhyme bro lolol. like at all. not feeling this one brother.

    Splinter this dead weight... Fire on this pussy till his cinders impregnate...
    Bring more arms to this matchup than Tinder in red states..!!

    this isnt bad actually, but im not seeing where the red states part is relevant other then to make it rhyme? arms to the matchup/tinder connection is there, i just dont see where red states connects at all.



    ..
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    presidents
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    downer My Twin? A Parent that he May Doubt, challenging me
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    Also kids are little goats. Poor, helpless, tasty little goats.

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    ^^^^ as stated above we dont really fuck w this kinda shit here. its not against the rules or anything just looked down upon.

    Also click on "Detroit" its a link.
    Quote Originally Posted by Authentic. View Post
    Nah... I got this.


    HnD dont get spiteful.. matched up on the card, but im nothin like u
    U know me for body'n vets, i know u from get'n bodied by my rivals..

    nah not feeling much


    shiit.. ya helmet on, i got them rounds that'll sober up this hard head
    so tactful! cuz it suits you to get bodied, im chop'n off his armor legs..

    this is dope except the end rhyme sucks. still solid tho


    Properly dead.. after i shoot him point blank.. it hit his cerebral cortex
    a sleepin vortex, how he spin back into a fetal position on the floor mat

    not feeling this much


    you just a door step.. u dont really do shit here.. the principle for ya ass
    you just got skipped up a few levels to be here, u not really in this class...

    eh ok, old idea.


    At last.. call me the don on the league.. the bitches i catch n run em down
    ya bitch like me too...
    .... so when i Steeler and score that touch... u best call me Antonio Brown!

    ok, another old idea. seen a lot of antonio brown bar over the years haha


    eh.. light. Its enough.
    Authentic got this. happy hnd is starting to adapt tho. stay up bros good battle

    v/ authentic


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    Re: Week 5: High and Drunk 0-2 vs. Authentic. 0-2 VOTE NOW

    Dope. Thanks for the feed @Meth .

    I might peace out of this site though, because I'm pretty convinced you guys are actually retarded.

    So far like even my most basic concepts are universally missed.

    Like how do you miss the made out / take out rhyme? Detroit become human is a ps4 exclusive. Red states are conservative states... where there are red necks in sleeveless shirts and rednecks with guns in their Tinder profiles.

    ... And my dudes best bar was arm-or-legs. And it was forced to fuck.

    If arm-or-legs is good enough wordplay to beat out my twin a parent he may doubt... you guys might be too evolved for me. I might not be able to keep up with the level of text on this site.

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    I mean cover guns was set up by the fact MY FIRST TWO BARS WERE GUN BARS and that the setup was talking about guns. Why you talking about guns? Well, because when I "cover" guns yall love it, like Counter strike skins.

    I might have to literally just start saying, "I'm going to shoot your face, where it will really hurt."

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    I'm gonna go post this in chat cuz it will probably get deleted here. This probably isn't the right place for it.

    But my points stand.

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    Re: Week 5: High and Drunk 0-2 vs. Authentic. 0-2 VOTE NOW

    High and drunk-
    Counter strike guns
    Tinder
    -those were good. Solid concepts. Executed decent enough. The rest were played af.

    Authentic-
    Armor legs
    Vortex
    - only liked those 2 bars tbh. The vortex joint was worded terribly tho.

    Both had played out, and dated material. I enjoyed both verses about the same.

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    Re: Week 5: High and Drunk 0-2 vs. Authentic. 0-2 VOTE NOW

    V authentic....h&d trash nigga had a exbox line lmaoo.
    Name plays on me are old.
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    Re: Week 5: High and Drunk 0-2 vs. Authentic. 0-2 VOTE NOW

    Ex box exclusive, tyvm

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    Re: Week 5: High and Drunk 0-2 vs. Authentic. 0-2 VOTE NOW

    Quote Originally Posted by Allen Knight View Post
    V authentic....h&d trash nigga had a exbox line lmaoo.
    Lmaoo


    High and Drunk:

    -nothing..

    Vs

    Authentic:

    -Armor legs
    -Antonio Brown

    Vote: Authentic, nice to see you back bro. Lol yea high and drunk needa get sober thinking it’s ok to drop multis and no punches. Battle some more in FL bro. You’ll get it eventually

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    Re: Week 5: High and Drunk 0-2 vs. Authentic. 0-2 VOTE NOW

    H&D--- I like that you're taking advice. This verse transitioned and got to the point a lot quicker. props. Your concept choice is alil eh though. Any time u have to explain ur punch at the end, it makes it come off alil obscure. not only that put the whole kid/taste lil goat thing is a reach. whether its true or not is irrelevant, ur writing bars for the votes. My best advice as far as ur concepts go, be relatable to the voters but be witty AND creative with ur execution. Keep elevating.

    Authentic---Opener, armor legs were tight. The rest were alil blah imo.

    v/Authentic...he did enough to seal the deal.

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