Week 6: Lethargic 0-0 vs. Lenox 0-0 leth wins

[Meth]

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@Lethargic
@Lenny

[Lethargic]

Do we still do check ins? Haha, been so long. Anyway, if we do...check.

[Lenox]

14?

[Lethargic]

Sent 14 to Meth

[Meth]

Confirmed i have 14 @Lenox

[Lenox]

“Forget it. It's my birthday and I just dont' feel like doing this tonight. So, I'll take the negative votes. Sorry Phly, but I'm more concerned about spending time with my wife tonight then I am this battle. G'luck if you manage to show”
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ight=Lethargic

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Forget ur birthday fag. ya girl stayed out late stripping n’ gettin infected.
while u lost to phly.. ur wifey was unzipping them till her fingers were shredded.
So stfu, I keep the piece near.. talk & get shot.
Capsule leave u lying flat & dead quicker than the drug trend in hip hop.
u got the lines blurred between being witty & fuckwitted.
career been dead so long, if ur casket fell over there wouldn’t even be dust in it.
end ur life as quick as it came. You’ll be dead from a slice.
I’ll let my knife Gordon ur stomach.. i promise u won’t be shitting Browns for the rest of ya life
u haven’t been relevant for years, even then u were known for dumb rhymes.
“It’s been so long”. Yea I guess the same goes for writing a quotable punchline
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ight=Lethargic
Lmfaooo. ur the wackest yet. Getting slained from faggots.
but I’ll give credit where credits do.. At least you got bodied before he had brain damage.
extinct concepts.. ur styles dated & this dudes a tumor.
Cuz even if you had an upgrade, Ur lines still wouldn’t be in the future

@Meth

[Meth]

leths verse

The LLL's hit a recession, back in the day, half you cats wouldn't have been able to step in
I'm here to make RB great again, swinging with my Left then, my Right'll be Trump'n you every election
Spittin aggression and rage, my rep's easily searched on the page, but I don't know nothing about you
More comebacks than years you've been rappin, don't want the last one, swallow that shit in your mouth fool
Claim your dope, but I doubt you...I'm sick with spits, my punches are clever and I got the better flow
This virgin's still learnin, wack with his wordin, he's an herb and a good pen-e-trate he'll never know
I'm best in show, my G Cod-y ain't ready fo, these scripts'll buck when they turn into a real gun
Fever pitched, leave you in a ditch, when I fuck this underage bitch and you best believe I Wil-son
Known to snitch..that's a habit I won't endorse and I'll come full force with my machete of course
Crash through your Windows, then split your skull mid nose and leave Lenox an open-source
My prose is doper than yours, saw the battle set and changed his name, that's bad form on the forum
But I understand that poor decorum, he already knew he was behind the bars I had formin up for'em
Leave him deformed when I whore him, my first battle back I'll have this hack leavin the board
Dismayed and ashamed of the rape he endured, the latest example of #WhyIdidntreport

[Authentic.]

Forget ur birthday fag. ya girl stayed out late stripping n’ gettin infected.
while u lost to phly.. ur wifey was unzipping them till her fingers were shredded.
u haven’t been relevant for years, even then u were known for dumb rhymes.
“It’s been so long”. Yea I guess the same goes for writing a quotable punchline
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ight=Lethargic
Lmfaooo. ur the wackest yet. Getting slained from faggots.
but I’ll give credit where credits do.. At least you got bodied before he had brain damage.
Best lines


vs


Spittin aggression and rage, my rep's easily searched on the page, but I don't know nothing about you
More comebacks than years you've been rappin, don't want the last one, swallow that shit in your mouth fool
Claim your dope, but I doubt you...I'm sick with spits, my punches are clever and I got the better flow
This virgin's still learnin, wack with his wordin, he's an herb and a good pen-e-trate he'll never know
Known to snitch..that's a habit I won't endorse and I'll come full force with my machete of course
Crash through your Windows, then split your skull mid nose and leave Lenox an open-source
My prose is doper than yours, saw the battle set and changed his name, that's bad form on the forum
shouldve used the set up as a the punch
But I understand that poor decorum, he already knew he was behind the bars I had formin up for'em
Leave him deformed when I whore him, my first battle back I'll have this hack leavin the board
Dismayed and ashamed of the rape he endured, the latest example of #WhyIdidntreport



V. Let a g.

[YG]

“Forget it. It's my birthday and I just dont' feel like doing this tonight. So, I'll take the negative votes. Sorry Phly, but I'm more concerned about spending time with my wife tonight then I am this battle. G'luck if you manage to show”
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ight=Lethargic

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Forget ur birthday fag. ya girl stayed out late stripping n’ gettin infected.
while u lost to phly.. ur wifey was unzipping them till her fingers were shredded.
Tight
So stfu, I keep the piece near.. talk & get shot.
Capsule leave u lying flat & dead quicker than the drug trend in hip hop.
Tight
u got the lines blurred between being witty & fuckwitted.
career been dead so long, if ur casket fell over there wouldn’t even be dust in it.
I dig this
end ur life as quick as it came. You’ll be dead from a slice.
I’ll let my knife Gordon ur stomach.. i promise u won’t be shitting Browns for the rest of ya life
Nahhh
u haven’t been relevant for years, even then u were known for dumb rhymes.
“It’s been so long”. Yea I guess the same goes for writing a quotable punchline
Nah kinda weak
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ight=Lethargic
Lmfaooo. ur the wackest yet. Getting slained from faggots.
but I’ll give credit where credits do.. At least you got bodied before he had brain damage.
Nahh & doesnt rhyme to me
extinct concepts.. ur styles dated & this dudes a tumor.
Cuz even if you had an upgrade, Ur lines still wouldn’t be in the future
Nah man

@Meth

leths verse

The LLL's hit a recession, back in the day, half you cats wouldn't have been able to step in
I'm here to make RB great again, swinging with my Left then, my Right'll be Trump'n you every election
Cool
Spittin aggression and rage, my rep's easily searched on the page, but I don't know nothing about you
More comebacks than years you've been rappin, don't want the last one, swallow that shit in your mouth fool
Nah ain't tryna see a come/cum line
Claim your dope, but I doubt you...I'm sick with spits, my punches are clever and I got the better flow
This virgin's still learnin, wack with his wordin, he's an herb and a good pen-e-trate he'll never know
Damn I like the w/p but coulda incorporated penetrate better IMO.
I dug it but maybe tie in penetrate to the bar & it will hit harder, thats just me
I'm best in show, my G Cod-y ain't ready fo, these scripts'll buck when they turn into a real gun
Fever pitched, leave you in a ditch, when I fuck this underage bitch and you best believe I Wil-son
Hmm nah seemed kinda stretched all around to me
Known to snitch..that's a habit I won't endorse and I'll come full force with my machete of course
Crash through your Windows, then split your skull mid nose and leave Lenox an open-source
Tight bro
My prose is doper than yours, saw the battle set and changed his name, that's bad form on the forum
But I understand that poor decorum, he already knew he was behind the bars I had formin up for'em
Didn't hit too hard
Leave him deformed when I whore him, my first battle back I'll have this hack leavin the board
Dismayed and ashamed of the rape he endured, the latest example of #WhyIdidntreport
Cool

Had the more quotable punches @

Leth:
Trump
Windows
Hashtag bar

vs.

Lenox:
Phly
Capsule
Casket

Shits close cuz Leth had some longer bars but was more consistent w/ the punches that he landed

Lenox started off hot but his last few bars just seemed really basic like he kinda rushed or gave up

I'ma go w/ Lethargic for the more creative verse

Even tho some lines were a lil stretched I think he came more creative and more consistent w/ it.

Seems like Lenox half assed halfway thru cuz he started out dope but I got Lethargic.

Good read yall just keep up the consitency

[Meth]

“Forget it. It's my birthday and I just dont' feel like doing this tonight. So, I'll take the negative votes. Sorry Phly, but I'm more concerned about spending time with my wife tonight then I am this battle. G'luck if you manage to show”
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ight=Lethargic

-
Forget ur birthday fag. ya girl stayed out late stripping n’ gettin infected.
while u lost to phly.. ur wifey was unzipping them till her fingers were shredded.
--dated concept and dated personal u snoopy mfer lol, its ok tho
So stfu, I keep the piece near.. talk & get shot.
Capsule leave u lying flat & dead quicker than the drug trend in hip hop.
--wording was iffy but i fuck w it
u got the lines blurred between being witty & fuckwitted.
career been dead so long, if ur casket fell over there wouldn’t even be dust in it.
--ok
end ur life as quick as it came. You’ll be dead from a slice.
I’ll let my knife Gordon ur stomach.. i promise u won’t be shitting Browns for the rest of ya life
--weird execution imo. ok
u haven’t been relevant for years, even then u were known for dumb rhymes.
“It’s been so long”. Yea I guess the same goes for writing a quotable punchline
--cool
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ight=Lethargic
Lmfaooo. ur the wackest yet. Getting slained from faggots.
but I’ll give credit where credits do.. At least you got bodied before he had brain damage.
--u hitting me w hyperlinks rn smh. this ok. dont really rhyme for me tho
extinct concepts.. ur styles dated & this dudes a tumor.
Cuz even if you had an upgrade, Ur lines still wouldn’t be in the future
--nah

@Meth

the other verse i just read from u was better then this, u were consistent but wording held ya back a bit.

leths verse

The LLL's hit a recession, back in the day, half you cats wouldn't have been able to step in
I'm here to make RB great again, swinging with my Left then, my Right'll be Trump'n you every election
--ok
Spittin aggression and rage, my rep's easily searched on the page, but I don't know nothing about you
More comebacks than years you've been rappin, don't want the last one, swallow that shit in your mouth fool
--nah
Claim your dope, but I doubt you...I'm sick with spits, my punches are clever and I got the better flow
This virgin's still learnin, wack with his wordin, he's an herb and a good pen-e-trate he'll never know
--decent wp, needed something else in the bar tho, nothing points to it and kind of forced the concept, imo
I'm best in show, my G Cod-y ain't ready fo, these scripts'll buck when they turn into a real gun
Fever pitched, leave you in a ditch, when I fuck this underage bitch and you best believe I Wil-son
--cool
Known to snitch..that's a habit I won't endorse and I'll come full force with my machete of course
Crash through your Windows, then split your skull mid nose and leave Lenox an open-source
--concept wayyyy too old for me
My prose is doper than yours, saw the battle set and changed his name, that's bad form on the forum
But I understand that poor decorum, he already knew he was behind the bars I had formin up for'em
--nah forum/for him not good enough here
Leave him deformed when I whore him, my first battle back I'll have this hack leavin the board
Dismayed and ashamed of the rape he endured, the latest example of #WhyIdidntreport
--eh ok

its tough to come back after so long, leth was lacking. Had one good bar and some old concepts.
Lenox was consistent with jabs.

v. lenox

[Barcotic]

Forget ur birthday fag. ya girl stayed out late stripping n’ gettin infected.
while u lost to phly.. ur wifey was unzipping them till her fingers were shredded.

this was ok/mediocre

So stfu, I keep the piece near.. talk & get shot.
Capsule leave u lying flat & dead quicker than the drug trend in hip hop.

played wp

u got the lines blurred between being witty & fuckwitted.
career been dead so long, if ur casket fell over there wouldn’t even be dust in it.

nahhh

end ur life as quick as it came. You’ll be dead from a slice.
I’ll let my knife Gordon ur stomach.. i promise u won’t be shitting Browns for the rest of ya life

let my knife gored in ur stomach? nah doesnt make sense to me

u haven’t been relevant for years, even then u were known for dumb rhymes.
“It’s been so long”. Yea I guess the same goes for writing a quotable punchline.

dece

Lmfaooo. ur the wackest yet. Getting slained from faggots.
but I’ll give credit where credits do.. At least you got bodied before he had brain damage.

weak

extinct concepts.. ur styles dated & this dudes a tumor.
Cuz even if you had an upgrade, Ur lines still wouldn’t be in the future

no

no good punches
2 jabs
5 misses

vs

The LLL's hit a recession, back in the day, half you cats wouldn't have been able to step in
I'm here to make RB great again, swinging with my Left then, my Right'll be Trump'n you every election

ehhh, nah

Spittin aggression and rage, my rep's easily searched on the page, but I don't know nothing about you
More comebacks than years you've been rappin, don't want the last one, swallow that shit in your mouth fool

played & corny af

Claim your dope, but I doubt you...I'm sick with spits, my punches are clever and I got the better flow
This virgin's still learnin, wack with his wordin, he's an herb and a good pen-e-trate he'll never know

ok, decent

I'm best in show, my G Cod-y ain't ready fo, these scripts'll buck when they turn into a real gun
Fever pitched, leave you in a ditch, when I fuck this underage bitch and you best believe I Wil-son

nah whack

Known to snitch..that's a habit I won't endorse and I'll come full force with my machete of course
Crash through your Windows, then split your skull mid nose and leave Lenox an open-source

cool

My prose is doper than yours, saw the battle set and changed his name, that's bad form on the forum
But I understand that poor decorum, he already knew he was behind the bars I had formin up for'em

hell no

Leave him deformed when I whore him, my first battle back I'll have this hack leavin the board
Dismayed and ashamed of the rape he endured, the latest example of #WhyIdidntreport

no

1 good punch
1 jab
5 misses
7 stretched bars

v/lethargic barely

[Ryno]

Bar 1- Lenox
Bar 2- Neither
Bar 3- Lenox
Bar 4- Neither
Bar 5- Lethargic
Bar 6- Neither
Bar 7- Neither

Overall: I think lenox had the better verse. not by a lot though. lethargic is rusty but i think after a few more weeks he'll get back into the swing of things. didnt particularly like his concept choice.

v.lenox

[Mr W.Rite]

i got Leth winning... better concepts and punches for me
i really wasnt feeling much from Lenox this week. Punches werent hard hitting and the wording really hurt some of your angles
I would advise Leth to shorten his lines a bit, wording is everything and thats the one thing that i think could have helped your verse more.
either way i enjoys Leth verse more

v/Lethargic

good job to both

[JEM.]

v/Lennox.

This to me was a stylistic vote. I thought Lets had one good bar with the open source, the rest felt very -rusty? Long form bars, packing in a lot internal rhyming but the punches weren't incredibly impactful. I am certain he will pick up but just not this week. Len wasn't monstrous either, but certainly enough this week I felt to get the win, particularly with the unzip + quotable punchline.

v/Len

[Meth]

4-3 needs more votes