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    Week 6: Cheesecake Assassin 2-2 vs. Mr W.Rite 1-2 write wins

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    Re: Week 6: Cheesecake Assassin 2-2 vs. Mr W.Rite 1-2

    The whole league is no competition, I don't need gun play bars to have deadly responses.
    Shit I let bomb bar'd replace me, because these killing sprees weight heavy on my conscious.
    We ain't talking about who wants that smoke, but I'm terminal cancer to, this light division.
    I'm doing fine... and I thought my life would be fucked, If I'm never making the right decision.
    fuck a battle, I should counsel you, cuz the way you where sleeping, I thought you was stressing.
    study the syllabus! you know you'll get schooled, when my fucking substitute taught you a lesson.
    faggot you should switch the flight, cuz if you aint strong enough, then you shouldn't pick a fight.
    These bitches will never find love, if they end up in the cemetery when they're looking for mr write!
    I don't give a fuck about ya sexual preferences, keep it to your self, don't wanna see your erections.
    If you really a pedophile, I know the location of amen's sons next game, if you need the directions.
    probably never did a drug in your life, so there's no excuse, not to show up before the deadline.
    If meth got you loosing sleep every night, its cuz he got you thinking about t-swizzle before bedtime.
    Bitch I didn't skip last week because I was scared, it was because battling the low tier is foolish to me.
    I wanted bomb bard to do my dirty work, your dumb ass prolly thought he was taking a bullet for me.

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    Re: Week 6: Cheesecake Assassin 2-2 vs. Mr W.Rite 1-2

    I promise no name flips.
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    .
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    .
    Sike I lied
    Im taking his spot, step over this nerd headed straight to the top
    This aint Valentines Day, but sill delivered this Cheesecake in a box
    And bow down to a legend bitch, im bout to leave your rep damaged
    We know last week you ducked W.Rite but I was fightin left handed.
    Death by combat, its hunger games.. I entertain and hate to bore
    And I must not even have a life… the way I insist on taking yours
    You better duck as this trey spit, get chinned check or ya face lift
    Always greener on the other side, as you lie in the grave bitch
    I can see it in his face, wasn’t ready... this guys hopeless
    Either he’s shocked I actually showed, or he died with his eyes open
    I come masked up, robbing ya dignity.. that’s right.. an obscene vet
    And taking the cake from this kid and aint even Halloween yet
    Ill finish you off here, you lost queer…don’t drown.. get baptized
    Ya careers been up and down then fucked with me til it flatlined




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    Re: Week 6: Cheesecake Assassin 2-2 vs. Mr W.Rite 1-2 VOTE NOW

    Cheesecake

    The whole league is no competition, I don't need gun play bars to have deadly responses.
    Shit I let bomb bar'd replace me, because these killing sprees weight heavy on my conscious.

    Nah

    We ain't talking about who wants that smoke, but I'm terminal cancer to, this light division.
    I'm doing fine... and I thought my life would be fucked, If I'm never making the right decision.

    Feel like it could've been worded better, but okay.

    fuck a battle, I should counsel you, cuz the way you where sleeping, I thought you was stressing.
    study the syllabus! you know you'll get schooled, when my fucking substitute taught you a lesson.

    Relevant because of the recent events, but still a super played concept.

    faggot you should switch the flight, cuz if you aint strong enough, then you shouldn't pick a fight.
    These bitches will never find love, if they end up in the cemetery when they're looking for mr write!

    Okay

    I don't give a fuck about ya sexual preferences, keep it to your self, don't wanna see your erections.
    If you really a pedophile, I know the location of amen's sons next game, if you need the directions.

    Nah

    probably never did a drug in your life, so there's no excuse, not to show up before the deadline.
    If meth got you loosing sleep every night, its cuz he got you thinking about t-swizzle before bedtime.

    I guess him never doing drugs is a bad thing? *Losing - I just don't feel like this hits hard.

    Bitch I didn't skip last week because I was scared, it was because battling the low tier is foolish to me.
    I wanted bomb bard to do my dirty work, your dumb ass prolly thought he was taking a bullet for me.

    Nah

    Mr. Write

    Im taking his spot, step over this nerd headed straight to the top
    This aint Valentines Day, but sill delivered this Cheesecake in a box

    Okay, okay

    And bow down to a legend bitch, im bout to leave your rep damaged
    We know last week you ducked W.Rite but I was fightin left handed.

    Alright

    Death by combat, its hunger games.. I entertain and hate to bore
    And I must not even have a life… the way I insist on taking yours

    Well worded, but I've seen it before.

    You better duck as this trey spit, get chinned check or ya face lift
    Always greener on the other side, as you lie in the grave bitch

    Straightforward, but decent.

    I can see it in his face, wasn’t ready... this guys hopeless
    Either he’s shocked I actually showed, or he died with his eyes open

    Didn't feel like that was hard hitting, good imagery though

    I come masked up, robbing ya dignity.. that’s right.. an obscene vet
    And taking the cake from this kid and aint even Halloween yet

    Iono, I don't really associate cake with Halloween. Candy yes, cake no.

    Ill finish you off here, you lost queer…don’t drown.. get baptized
    Ya careers been up and down then fucked with me til it flatlined

    I think it would've hit harder if it was simply "fucked with me and flatlined" but still good nonetheless.

    I've got W.Rite taking the cake on this one.

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    Re: Week 6: Cheesecake Assassin 2-2 vs. Mr W.Rite 1-2

    Quote Originally Posted by Cheesecake Assassin View Post
    The whole league is no competition, I don't need gun play bars to have deadly responses.
    Shit I let bomb bar'd replace me, because these killing sprees weight heavy on my conscious.
    Ok
    We ain't talking about who wants that smoke, but I'm terminal cancer to, this light division.
    I'm doing fine... and I thought my life would be fucked, If I'm never making the right decision.
    Nah
    fuck a battle, I should counsel you, cuz the way you where sleeping, I thought you was stressing.
    study the syllabus! you know you'll get schooled, when my fucking substitute taught you a lesson.
    Eh. Kind of relevant
    faggot you should switch the flight, cuz if you aint strong enough, then you shouldn't pick a fight.
    These bitches will never find love, if they end up in the cemetery when they're looking for mr write!
    Cool concept. Light finish. Ok bar
    I don't give a fuck about ya sexual preferences, keep it to your self, don't wanna see your erections.
    If you really a pedophile, I know the location of amen's sons next game, if you need the directions.
    Gross and weird
    probably never did a drug in your life, so there's no excuse, not to show up before the deadline.
    If meth got you loosing sleep every night, its cuz he got you thinking about t-swizzle before bedtime.
    Nah
    Bitch I didn't skip last week because I was scared, it was because battling the low tier is foolish to me.
    I wanted bomb bard to do my dirty work, your dumb ass prolly thought he was taking a bullet for me

    Nah.
    Quote Originally Posted by Mr W.Rite View Post
    I promise no name flips.
    .
    .
    .
    .
    Sike I lied
    Im taking his spot, step over this nerd headed straight to the top
    This aint Valentines Day, but sill delivered this Cheesecake in a box
    Nah
    And bow down to a legend bitch, im bout to leave your rep damaged
    We know last week you ducked W.Rite but I was fightin left handed.
    Eh ok
    Death by combat, its hunger games.. I entertain and hate to bore
    And I must not even have a life… the way I insist on taking yours
    Ok
    You better duck as this trey spit, get chinned check or ya face lift
    Always greener on the other side, as you lie in the grave bitch
    Ok cool
    I can see it in his face, wasn’t ready... this guys hopeless
    Either he’s shocked I actually showed, or he died with his eyes open
    Lol ok
    I come masked up, robbing ya dignity.. that’s right.. an obscene vet
    And taking the cake from this kid and aint even Halloween yet
    Nah
    Ill finish you off here, you lost queer…don’t drown.. get baptized
    Ya careers been up and down then fucked with me til it flatlined
    Cool


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    Write got it. Dia wasnt good this week


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    Re: Week 6: Cheesecake Assassin 2-2 vs. Mr W.Rite 1-2 VOTE NOW

    Bar 1- TIE
    Bar 2- Neither
    Bar 3- Write
    Bar 4- Dia
    Bar 5- Write
    Bar 6- Neither
    Bar 7- Write

    Overall: pretty decent read here. i think write got more hits. dia started off ok but then he got weird and fizzled out towards the end.

    v.mr.write

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    Re: Week 6: Cheesecake Assassin 2-2 vs. Mr W.Rite 1-2 VOTE NOW

    3-0 needs more votes


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    Re: Week 6: Cheesecake Assassin 2-2 vs. Mr W.Rite 1-2 VOTE NOW

    Killing spree

    Wasn’t feeling much more.. Amens sin bar was weird.



    Vs


    No life
    Greener on the other side was dope
    Eyes open was cool


    Overall dia needs to bring wittier shit. Weird verse I’ve read from you
    Write had some decent hits and misses as well. Write won this tho with a few more hits

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    Re: Week 6: Cheesecake Assassin 2-2 vs. Mr W.Rite 1-2

    fuck a battle, I should counsel you, cuz the way you where sleeping, I thought you was stressing.
    study the syllabus! you know you'll get schooled, when my fucking substitute taught you a lesson.

    honestly wasnt a fan of too much here. i did like this bar but after that nothing really stood out, seemed rushed.



    Death by combat, its hunger games.. I entertain and hate to bore
    And I must not even have a life… the way I insist on taking yours


    wording was pretty good but a lot of meh or played concepts. just gotta get a little more creative



    tbh not as close as the quotes look. write had a much cleaner verse, some bars i didnt quote were good just a little too played.


    vote Write
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    Re: Week 6: Cheesecake Assassin 2-2 vs. Mr W.Rite 1-2 VOTE NOW

    Nothing there for me


    vs


    Im taking his spot, step over this nerd headed straight to the top
    This aint Valentines Day, but sill delivered this Cheesecake in a box
    You better duck as this trey spit, get chinned check or ya face lift
    Always greener on the other side, as you lie in the grave bitch


    Got W.rite taking this one.. he actually had attacking bars.

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