Week 7 Championship Match: Bayou 6-0 vs. Bash 4-2 Blue wins

[Meth]

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@Bayou @Bash

[Ryno]

jesus lol...14?

[Blue Bayou]

lol.... sure

[Meth]

Bash



U'll never champ rb n nc, bitch please, ill devour this coward
If u 'break through', I hope its ur body flying out a windshield at a 120 mph
Dumb fuck, machete out the shealth'll leave this dude stuck
I'm hacking ' 'blooper limb', the crime scene'll be everything except uncut
I slay chicks, u hate this, trust me u ain't out swaggin' me fam
U'll never see blue w/ a 'paradigms', he's the biggest example of a faggot we have
When I unload the glock, ill fire till the bullets rip through this ock
Killin textcees 'benadryl', ill leave em slumped over like he swallowed the box
Stop it G, ya last verse makes me wanna squeeze n empty 3
Haven't seen a King get robbed of title like that since Rose won the MVP
Bring ya crew but I'm liftin spirits w/ the .45 if u act tough
U'll pay the price for every man u choose quicker than a Draft Kings line up
Kill me w/ the goat talk, I'm pissed off, I'm bout to flame this bitch
Ya ' head blew up w/ time', I'm just here to decapitate it n microwave the shit

[Blue Bayou]

you won with a land mine punch last week?!?! foh


againnnn i gotta leave this wack pussy sore, gory & bombed..
forget history Repeating itself… at this point it’s drunk w/ war stories from Nam
even his girl makes fun of his dick. laughsss & rarely she fucks back..
she see’s his Coccyx Posed.. then describes the sex after as “barely above ass”
so we can bet our bitches. no question i’ll put my tail up any day..
when i Winnebago’s to me .. she’s prolly tired a livin in your Trailer anyways
w/ ur 'Track Record' a loss ain't sumthin that you’ll hand to me G..
Spree, Joe Boston, Score...shit the only Goodwin u got is on ur Fantasy Team
i'ma boss w/ no time for the wack fuckin topics that u write..
Eyeball Out... perfectly describes ur face once i hit your socket w/ this right
steel sharpened in Saudi. blade work - the carnage is godly..
i’ll be yellin Effigy the whole time these knives steady ‘carvin ya body’
even if ur feeling Mighty, Duck. faggot if you try flexin ur ended..
Bash Brothers ain’t just the Goons from that movie… they're also ur sexual prefrence

14.

[Barcotic]

U'll never champ rb n nc, bitch please, ill devour this coward
If u 'break through', I hope its ur body flying out a windshield at a 120 mph

cool concept but not facts, since blue has in fact champed both rb n nc

Dumb fuck, machete out the shealth'll leave this dude stuck
I'm hacking ' 'blooper limb', the crime scene'll be everything except uncut

blooper nameplays been done to death, cant pass this

I slay chicks, u hate this, trust me u ain't out swaggin' me fam
U'll never see blue w/ a 'paradigms', he's the biggest example of a faggot we have

played af, especially since theres a cat named paradigm

When I unload the glock, ill fire till the bullets rip through this ock
Killin textcees 'benadryl', ill leave em slumped over like he swallowed the box

ok i like this

Stop it G, ya last verse makes me wanna squeeze n empty 3
Haven't seen a King get robbed of title like that since Rose won the MVP

decent, already much better than ur last verse

Bring ya crew but I'm liftin spirits w/ the .45 if u act tough
U'll pay the price for every man u choose quicker than a Draft Kings line up

nahh b

Kill me w/ the goat talk, I'm pissed off, I'm bout to flame this bitch
Ya ' head blew up w/ time', I'm just here to decapitate it n microwave the shit

lol cool

2 good punches
2 jabs
3 misses

vs

againnnn i gotta leave this wack pussy sore, gory & bombed..
forget history Repeating itself… at this point it’s drunk w/ war stories from Nam

ok, concept kinda ehhh but ok. hit

even his girl makes fun of his dick. laughsss & rarely she fucks back..
she see’s his Coccyx Posed.. then describes the sex after as “barely above ass”

awkward but decent

so we can bet our bitches. no question i’ll put my tail up any day..
when i Winnebago’s to me .. she’s prolly tired a livin in your Trailer anyways

lol gd

w/ ur 'Track Record' a loss ain't sumthin that you’ll hand to me G..
Spree, Joe Boston, Score...shit the only Goodwin u got is on ur Fantasy Team

goodwin been done w different references, iont like this

i'ma boss w/ no time for the wack fuckin topics that u write..
Eyeball Out... perfectly describes ur face once i hit your socket w/ this right

dope, perfect wording

steel sharpened in Saudi. blade work - the carnage is godly..
i’ll be yellin Effigy the whole time these knives steady ‘carvin ya body’

missss

even if ur feeling Mighty, Duck. faggot if you try flexin ur ended..
Bash Brothers ain’t just the Goons from that movie… they're also ur sexual prefrence

lol ok

2 good punches
3 jabs
2 misses

this was a lot closer than it shuda ben but props to bash for doing his thing n almost dethroning the champ & props to blue for doing JUST enough to stay on top
v/blue bayou

im coming

[YG]

U'll never champ rb n nc, bitch please, ill devour this coward
If u 'break through', I hope its ur body flying out a windshield at a 120 mph
Decent
Dumb fuck, machete out the shealth'll leave this dude stuck
I'm hacking ' 'blooper limb', the crime scene'll be everything except uncut
I dig this
I slay chicks, u hate this, trust me u ain't out swaggin' me fam
U'll never see blue w/ a 'paradigms', he's the biggest example of a faggot we have
Not digging the Paradigm w/p tbh
When I unload the glock, ill fire till the bullets rip through this ock
Killin textcees 'benadryl', ill leave em slumped over like he swallowed the box
I like it
Stop it G, ya last verse makes me wanna squeeze n empty 3
Haven't seen a King get robbed of title like that since Rose won the MVP
Cool
Bring ya crew but I'm liftin spirits w/ the .45 if u act tough
U'll pay the price for every man u choose quicker than a Draft Kings line up
I digg this fr maybe word the punch a lil different but it was dope imo
Kill me w/ the goat talk, I'm pissed off, I'm bout to flame this bitch
Ya ' head blew up w/ time', I'm just here to decapitate it n microwave the shit
Lol tight

you won with a land mine punch last week?!?! foh


againnnn i gotta leave this wack pussy sore, gory & bombed..
forget history Repeating itself… at this point it’s drunk w/ war stories from Nam
Lol
even his girl makes fun of his dick. laughsss & rarely she fucks back..
she see’s his Coccyx Posed.. then describes the sex after as “barely above ass”
Tight
so we can bet our bitches. no question i’ll put my tail up any day..
when i Winnebago’s to me .. she’s prolly tired a livin in your Trailer anyways
Dope
w/ ur 'Track Record' a loss ain't sumthin that you’ll hand to me G..
Spree, Joe Boston, Score...shit the only Goodwin u got is on ur Fantasy Team
Lol tight
i'ma boss w/ no time for the wack fuckin topics that u write..
Eyeball Out... perfectly describes ur face once i hit your socket w/ this right
This was tight
steel sharpened in Saudi. blade work - the carnage is godly..
i’ll be yellin Effigy the whole time these knives steady ‘carvin ya body’
I dont really get the effigy w/p
even if ur feeling Mighty, Duck. faggot if you try flexin ur ended..
Bash Brothers ain’t just the Goons from that movie… they're also ur sexual prefrence
Not bad
14.

Had the quotes @

Bash:
Blooper
Benadryl
Rose
Draft Kings
Head blew up

vs

Bayou:
All but effigy
Closer also wasn't as strong

This was a good battle, I think Bayou took it though with more hard hits & personals

The only ones I wasn't feeling from him were his last 2, other than that he didn't miss much.

Bash had the paradigm and break through that hurt him but the other ones were cool

Blooper was decent, haven't seen Benadryl or draft kings before. King personal was tight


I just think of the punches that landed, Blue had the stronger output but this was a good read.

[Lethargic]

Bash

U'll never champ rb n nc, bitch please, ill devour this coward
If u 'break through', I hope its ur body flying out a windshield at a 120 mph

okay

Dumb fuck, machete out the shealth'll leave this dude stuck
I'm hacking ' 'blooper limb', the crime scene'll be everything except uncut

Decent concept, but I didn't care for the wording

I slay chicks, u hate this, trust me u ain't out swaggin' me fam
U'll never see blue w/ a 'paradigms', he's the biggest example of a faggot we have

I'm not seeing where paradigms works in this punch. I get the homophone/oronym aspect of it, but I think this would've been dope if you reference a paradigm shift in the setup in some way.

When I unload the glock, ill fire till the bullets rip through this ock
Killin textcees 'benadryl', ill leave em slumped over like he swallowed the box

Nice

Stop it G, ya last verse makes me wanna squeeze n empty 3
Haven't seen a King get robbed of title like that since Rose won the MVP

Nice

Bring ya crew but I'm liftin spirits w/ the .45 if u act tough
U'll pay the price for every man u choose quicker than a Draft Kings line up

Not feelin it

Kill me w/ the goat talk, I'm pissed off, I'm bout to flame this bitch
Ya ' head blew up w/ time', I'm just here to decapitate it n microwave the shit

Lol, nice

Blue

againnnn i gotta leave this wack pussy sore, gory & bombed..
forget history Repeating itself… at this point it’s drunk w/ war stories from Nam

I think some people are missing the history/his story wp...I thought this was dope.

even his girl makes fun of his dick. laughsss & rarely she fucks back..
she see’s his Coccyx Posed.. then describes the sex after as “barely above ass”

Sick wordplay and amusing to boot, how do you think this shit up? lol

so we can bet our bitches. no question i’ll put my tail up any day..
when i Winnebago’s to me .. she’s prolly tired a livin in your Trailer anyways

Lol

w/ ur 'Track Record' a loss ain't sumthin that you’ll hand to me G..
Spree, Joe Boston, Score...shit the only Goodwin u got is on ur Fantasy Team

Okay

i'ma boss w/ no time for the wack fuckin topics that u write..
Eyeball Out... perfectly describes ur face once i hit your socket w/ this right

Okay

steel sharpened in Saudi. blade work - the carnage is godly..
i’ll be yellin Effigy the whole time these knives steady ‘carvin ya body’

I like the F-a-g, wordplay, nice.

even if ur feeling Mighty, Duck. faggot if you try flexin ur ended..
Bash Brothers ain’t just the Goons from that movie… they're also ur sexual prefrence

Amusing, but even trying to hear how it could work manipulating the way the words are said with accents, etc. I just couldn't make the rhyming work. That detracted for me a little bit.

Vote - Blue.

Good read from both, but I just feel like his verse was more polished and consistent.

[Greedy]

Bash:
Opener- good, a bit wordy imo, plus this a blatant lie.lol but the bar is good overall
Blooper- idk blue like that so i never seen this. I fk w it.
Benadryl- fk w it
Mvp- decent
Draft kings- fire imo

Vs

Blue Bayou:
Opener- ok. Clean wording makes this hit harder.
Winnebago- awkward wp imo. But you executed it well.
I ball out- fire
Closer- pretty good

Vote bash. Good shit lil bro.

I think blue dropped the ball here. Imo, blue, u had a lot of misses and average bars. But ur wording is so fkn clean the misses still hit.
Bash, u had some misses too. And while Blue, ur hits were stronger, i felt like bash had the better effort overall

[hello there]

Bash



U'll never champ rb n nc, bitch please, ill devour this coward
If u 'break through', I hope its ur body flying out a windshield at a 120 mph
So I get the wordplay, but I don't love the punch because it could be any miles per hour. And this other dude is good, you have to have more detail than this
Dumb fuck, machete out the shealth'll leave this dude stuck
I'm hacking ' 'blooper limb', the crime scene'll be everything except uncut
Idk man. This seems pretty forced.
I slay chicks, u hate this, trust me u ain't out swaggin' me fam
U'll never see blue w/ a 'paradigms', he's the biggest example of a faggot we have
I DO NOT BELIEVE ANY OF YOU VIRGINS HAS EVER FUCKED A GIRL. That said, this also doesn't rhyme. And also, this wordplay is pretty played out.
When I unload the glock, ill fire till the bullets rip through this ock
Killin textcees 'benadryl', ill leave em slumped over like he swallowed the box
When I drill? I like it when you write the explanation and lemme figure out the wordplay word. Cuz this one I don't love cuz when / ben just seems stupid.
Stop it G, ya last verse makes me wanna squeeze n empty 3
Haven't seen a King get robbed of title like that since Rose won the MVP
This is before my time.
Bring ya crew but I'm liftin spirits w/ the .45 if u act tough
U'll pay the price for every man u choose quicker than a Draft Kings line up
Ok this is nice. I "got" it instantly and it still made me react.
Kill me w/ the goat talk, I'm pissed off, I'm bout to flame this bitch
Ya ' head blew up w/ time', I'm just here to decapitate it n microwave the shit
I mean. No.

you won with a land mine punch last week?!?! foh


againnnn i gotta leave this wack pussy sore, gory & bombed..
forget history Repeating itself… at this point it’s drunk w/ war stories from Nam
..... Fuck. You win. Teach me how to write punchlines.
even his girl makes fun of his dick. laughsss & rarely she fucks back..
she see’s his Coccyx Posed.. then describes the sex after as “barely above ass”
Fuck you. Do you have a dictionary for this shit?
so we can bet our bitches. no question i’ll put my tail up any day..
when i Winnebago’s to me .. she’s prolly tired a livin in your Trailer anyways
... Man I didn't love this punch. But my favorite part of reading your verses is going through the wordplay and being like oh, that's what it is. No, that can't be that clean. And then it is.
w/ ur 'Track Record' a loss ain't sumthin that you’ll hand to me G..
Spree, Joe Boston, Score...shit the only Goodwin u got is on ur Fantasy Team
Eh
i'ma boss w/ no time for the wack fuckin topics that u write..
Eyeball Out... perfectly describes ur face once i hit your socket w/ this right
Eh
steel sharpened in Saudi. blade work - the carnage is godly..
i’ll be yellin Effigy the whole time these knives steady ‘carvin ya body’
Ehhhh ok
even if ur feeling Mighty, Duck. faggot if you try flexin ur ended..
Bash Brothers ain’t just the Goons from that movie… they're also ur sexual prefrence
Ehhh

14.

VOTE Blue. His shit started with some ridiculous things. And then it ended kinda lame. But it started with some ridiculous bullshit.

[Jason Voorhees]

U'll never champ rb n nc, bitch please, ill devour this coward
If u 'break through', I hope its ur body flying out a windshield at a 120 mph
Bring ya crew but I'm liftin spirits w/ the .45 if u act tough
U'll pay the price for every man u choose quicker than a Draft Kings line up
Kill me w/ the goat talk, I'm pissed off, I'm bout to flame this bitch
Ya ' head blew up w/ time', I'm just here to decapitate it n microwave the shit


vs

w/ ur 'Track Record' a loss ain't sumthin that you’ll hand to me G..
Spree, Joe Boston, Score...shit the only Goodwin u got is on ur Fantasy Team
i'ma boss w/ no time for the wack fuckin topics that u write..
Eyeball Out... perfectly describes ur face once i hit your socket w/ this right
steel sharpened in Saudi. blade work - the carnage is godly..
i’ll be yellin Effigy the whole time these knives steady ‘carvin ya body’
even if ur feeling Mighty, Duck. faggot if you try flexin ur ended..
Bash Brothers ain’t just the Goons from that movie… they're also ur sexual prefrence

Lil close here.. but Blue edged wit with a couple more bars that landed a bit better. Pretty decent battle.

[Lenox]

Bash:

-draft kings

vs

-nam
-Winnebago
-Goodwin
-effigy

Overall: thought blue had some really nice wp here with real slick wording, clear body for me. Thought a lot of bash lines were either dated or too simple.

Vote/ b