Week 7: Bomb Bard 2-3 vs. JEM. 2-3 bomb wins

[Meth]

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@Bomb Bard @JEM.

[Bomb Bard]

Pics? Or Gun Bars?

[JEM.]

W/E let me know

[Bomb Bard]

Prob need ext

[JEM.]

cool. Just @ me when you post then.

[Spree]

cool. Just @ me when you post then.

I’ll have my verse last minute tonight. So I’d PM meth. You go 10?

[JEM.]

yup.

[Bomb Bard]

Listen you faggot
U relate to ppl U beat.. lack punch, wack, & scared
Geminal honesty, you could Man up drastically & still never have a pair
1 punch’ll eat ur Mexican style! Criminal? We Believe that not so well
S’like u made up this Con Case So U could hide the fact u work @ Taco Bell!
Big gun that’ll take slugger down N drop this fake
Tanaka faggit out & split fingers cos he tried to block his face!
U an average Joe W/currently wack bars! Give this fag smoke
Ironic U went from Boston to JEM, cos Ur always the stepping stone of a Mass Joke
U’v yet to grow from battling Bomb Hits, Ur nerves in a wreck
JEM should star in my weed vids..
Cos me choking you only Stems out to U being purple & dead

[JEM.]

Ride by ya court cuz ya set was playing ball and grilling
all they heard was gun talk like the murder weapon missing
I got ya girl wet with a hand & a bottle… now she dogs you
Like Why oh' man look silly like the Kanye West costume
I keep the gat tight, but tonight I’m rocking bladed steel
& leave ya CHOPT … while ya bitch pay my favorite meal
Bomb, killing spree? Fake ass Taliban but just in case
I call my gun blue, and navy seal his faith.
Fuck the odds, you gonna lose cash money rooting him on
Cuz after I stunt on wardie ill leave him crying like lil Waynes mom.

[YG]

Listen you faggot
U relate to ppl U beat.. lack punch, wack, & scared
Geminal honesty, you could Man up drastically & still never have a pair
I dig this
1 punch’ll eat ur Mexican style! Criminal? We Believe that not so well
S’like u made up this Con Case So U could hide the fact u work @ Taco Bell!
Lol
Big gun that’ll take slugger down N drop this fake
Tanaka faggit out & split fingers cos he tried to block his face!
I like it
U an average Joe W/currently wack bars! Give this fag smoke
Ironic U went from Boston to JEM, cos Ur always the stepping stone of a Mass Joke
I like this fr
U’v yet to grow from battling Bomb Hits, Ur nerves in a wreck
JEM should star in my weed vids..
Cos me choking you only Stems out to U being purple & dead
Cool

Ride by ya court cuz ya set was playing ball and grilling
all they heard was gun talk like the murder weapon missing
Nahh
I got ya girl wet with a hand & a bottle… now she dogs you
Like Why oh' man look silly like the Kanye West costume
Nahh
I keep the gat tight, but tonight I’m rocking bladed steel
& leave ya CHOPT … while ya bitch pay my favorite meal
I dig it
Bomb, killing spree? Fake ass Taliban but just in case
I call my gun blue, and navy seal his faith.
I dig this man just coulda done more w/ it put more stuff into the punch. I dig this tho
Fuck the odds, you gonna lose cash money rooting him on
Cuz after I stunt on wardie ill leave him crying like lil Waynes mom.
Not feeling this too much

Bard came w/ some fire this week I can't lie. Not too many misses

Jem was weaker but that navy seal line could have been dope imo just need to put more thought into it

Chopt line was cool as well.

Think Bard is taking this w/ a more consistent verse though

[Mr W.Rite]

i got Bomb, his first three bars did it for me
much better than last week, i can see the progression and the talent you have
keep it up
i actually like JEMs verse as well. flowed well punches were decent easy to read
just nothing really jumped out to me. consistent verse just not quite enough to get the win

v.Bomb

[Greedy]

BombSpree:
Opener- this was ok. Np was a lil forced imo. Overall still good enough
Mass joke- fire concept w a personal angle. A bit wordy, but i fk w it.
Closer-see above

Vs

JEM:
Opener- you had a fire concept here imo. Wording made this kinda hard to follow, but i fk w this
Navy seal- literally same as above

Vote BombSpree
This battle gave me a headache. Spree you got fire concepts but you be saying way more than i care to read.
Jem you gotta try to dumb your shit down juuuust a bit. Youve been having good concepts too, just not displaying them very well

[Stranger]

votes

[b]bomb bard[/]b]
U relate to ppl U beat.. lack punch, wack, & scared
Geminal honesty, you could Man up drastically & still never have a pair
eh, this was cool

1 punch’ll eat ur Mexican style! Criminal? We Believe that not so well
S’like u made up this Con Case So U could hide the fact u work @ Taco Bell!
this was corny man lol

Big gun that’ll take slugger down N drop this fake
Tanaka faggit out & split fingers cos he tried to block his face!
not feeling this

U an average Joe W/currently wack bars! Give this fag smoke
Ironic U went from Boston to JEM, cos Ur always the stepping stone of a Mass Joke
damn this was hard, I dig it

U’v yet to grow from battling Bomb Hits, Ur nerves in a wreck
JEM should star in my weed vids..
Cos me choking you only Stems out to U being purple & dead
I'm not really feeling this man.

Seems like you rushed for the most part, the mass joke bar was the best bar in your verse though.

JEM
Ride by ya court cuz ya set was playing ball and grilling
all they heard was gun talk like the murder weapon missing
not feeling

I got ya girl wet with a hand & a bottle… now she dogs you
Like Why oh' man look silly like the Kanye West costume
eh, not eeling this man.

I keep the gat tight, but tonight I’m rocking bladed steel
& leave ya CHOPT … while ya bitch pay my favorite meal
I'm not feeling this either.

Bomb, killing spree? Fake ass Taliban but just in case
I call my gun blue, and navy seal his faith.
this was weak here.

Fuck the odds, you gonna lose cash money rooting him on
Cuz after I stunt on wardie ill leave him crying like lil Waynes mom.
not feeling this bro.

Your punches are not effective, atlest you attempted, but they need to connect harder.

V/ bomb bard, Ill give him this battle for the mass joke bar, this battle wasn't that good.

[hello there]

Listen you faggot
U relate to ppl U beat.. lack punch, wack, & scared
Geminal honesty, you could Man up drastically & still never have a pair
Idk what geminal is. So I don't get this punch
1 punch’ll eat ur Mexican style! Criminal? We Believe that not so well
S’like u made up this Con Case So U could hide the fact u work @ Taco Bell!
Ehhhhhhhh. Mexican style and then con quesO... you're better than this
Big gun that’ll take slugger down N drop this fake
Tanaka faggit out & split fingers cos he tried to block his face!
That's a video game reference. I'm trendy. Not sure I love it.
U an average Joe W/currently wack bars! Give this fag smoke
Ironic U went from Boston to JEM, cos Ur always the stepping stone of a Mass Joke
Nooo
U’v yet to grow from battling Bomb Hits, Ur nerves in a wreck
JEM should star in my weed vids..
Cos me choking you only Stems out to U being purple & dead
I CAN'T ETHICALLY VOTE FOR LONG BAR

Didn't love it.

Ride by ya court cuz ya set was playing ball and grilling
all they heard was gun talk like the murder weapon missing
Nah man. This is a really forced rhyme and I didn't love the punch
I got ya girl wet with a hand & a bottle… now she dogs you
Like Why oh' man look silly like the Kanye West costume
Ehhhhhhhhh
I keep the gat tight, but tonight I’m rocking bladed steel
& leave ya CHOPT … while ya bitch pay my favorite meal
Ehhhhhhhhhhh
Bomb, killing spree? Fake ass Taliban but just in case
I call my gun blue, and navy seal his faith.
This was pretty clever. I think the punch surrounding the wordplay was SUPER FUCKING LAZY. But I wish I thought of the WP myself, so it's good
Fuck the odds, you gonna lose cash money rooting him on
Cuz after I stunt on wardie ill leave him crying like lil Waynes mom.
No

VOTE JEM. Honestly boys I didn't really dig this at all. But I felt so little from #1 and I think Blue / Navy Seal is strong AF. So I have to vote him.

[Ryno]

Listen you faggot
U relate to ppl U beat.. lack punch, wack, & scared
Geminal honesty, you could Man up drastically & still never have a pair
2/3
1 punch’ll eat ur Mexican style! Criminal? We Believe that not so well
S’like u made up this Con Case So U could hide the fact u work @ Taco Bell!
2/3
Big gun that’ll take slugger down N drop this fake
Tanaka faggit out & split fingers cos he tried to block his face!
2/3
U an average Joe W/currently wack bars! Give this fag smoke
Ironic U went from Boston to JEM, cos Ur always the stepping stone of a Mass Joke
2/3
U’v yet to grow from battling Bomb Hits, Ur nerves in a wreck
JEM should star in my weed vids..
Cos me choking you only Stems out to U being purple & dead
1/3

9/15

Ride by ya court cuz ya set was playing ball and grilling
all they heard was gun talk like the murder weapon missing
1/3
I got ya girl wet with a hand & a bottle… now she dogs you
Like Why oh' man look silly like the Kanye West costume
1/3
I keep the gat tight, but tonight I’m rocking bladed steel
& leave ya CHOPT … while ya bitch pay my favorite meal
2/3
Bomb, killing spree? Fake ass Taliban but just in case
I call my gun blue, and navy seal his faith.
1/3
Fuck the odds, you gonna lose cash money rooting him on
Cuz after I stunt on wardie ill leave him crying like lil Waynes mom.
1/3

6/15

v.spree...thought he took this convincingly w/ the harder hits