Week 7: J. Dill 2-1 vs. Lethargic 1-0 dill wins

[Meth]

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@Lethargic @j. dill

[YG]

Lets drop tn

[Lethargic]

Hey man, I would've been happy to do so. The wife and I were celebrating our 14th anniversary tonight though.

[YG]

Can u clean this up @ Meth



Punches'll leave em Frozen, back w/ 6 kids & tryna come w/ lines?
Ur gonna see Elsa lot here, & have prolly watched her in that movie 100 times
Shooters a 'Friend of Mine' - he's after ur dome like head lice
Ain't trading a 'Greatest of Kelly' album when I get u merked for the 'Best Price'
Before u move I'll aim & blast G, every1 w/ a strap see ur wack B
Cuz u got 6 kids bro, we've been known your pullout game mad weak
Pulled over for some papers, ur wife wit me & her throat is sore
I'm rollin Jay's while she gives me a 'Silent Bob' right in front the Cornerstore
When I'm done w/ her ya both dead, no more playtime & Blues Clues
I'll put u & that bitch in a Pair of Vans like I donated some new shoes

[Meth]

Leth's verse

In the prime of RB, nobody was stressin or aware of ya
Dillinger, you only earned a rep in the Depression-era bruh
I'm just the messenger but we all know you love the mail in your slot
The right angle delivers Letters that'll put you in a perpendicular spot
He loves the cock, if a guy's hung like a horseshoe down on you're luck
Taking the term assed out in a whole nude erection of suck
Peel back your dome and ghost you. Cats be like, "Leth, where's Dillinger?"
Take away all your skin in the game till cats be like, "Leth wears Dillinger."
Killin nerds. I'll obliterate your mind and put you back in diapers again
Eviscerate your body and throw it in the ocean black....all Depends

[Greedy]

Dillinger:
Opener coulda been good but u executed it weak u coulda took a better angle for the word play.
Kelly Price- good concept, kiiiiinda outdated reference. Its not played, but who gaf about Kelly Price? Lmao
Pull out game- lmao this was funny i fk w this. Ur multies were trash tho
Clerks- i fk w this. I never seen it done this way. But, its a outdated reference tho, so other voters will hate prolly and call the whole bar wack.
Closer- this shit trash.
Vs

Lethargic:
Not really fucking w nothing in ur verse this week, big dog. But that Leth wears Dillinger bar was FIIIIIIIIIIRE.

Vote Dillinger. Even tho imo, Lethargic had the line of the battle

[Jason Voorhees]

Punches'll leave em Frozen, back w/ 6 kids & tryna come w/ lines?
Ur gonna see Elsa lot here, & have prolly watched her in that movie 100 times
Pulled over for some papers, ur wife wit me & her throat is sore
I'm rollin Jay's while she gives me a 'Silent Bob' right in front the Cornerstore
When I'm done w/ her ya both dead, no more playtime & Blues Clues
I'll put u & that bitch in a Pair of Vans like I donated some new shoes

vs


I'm just the messenger but we all know you love the mail in your slot
The right angle delivers Letters that'll put you in a perpendicular spot
Peel back your dome and ghost you. Cats be like, "Leth, where's Dillinger?"
Take away all your skin in the game till cats be like, "Leth wears Dillinger."
dope if worded better
Killin nerds. I'll obliterate your mind and put you back in diapers again
Eviscerate your body and throw it in the ocean black....all Depends

Kinda even in this battle, Leth got this one.. Felt his bars a lot more than Dills. Nobody really came hard here with haymakers or anything, but enough for the opponent. Not bad from either.

[Barcotic]

Punches'll leave em Frozen, back w/ 6 kids & tryna come w/ lines?
Ur gonna see Elsa lot here, & have prolly watched her in that movie 100 times

kinda forced, kinda not. it hit

Shooters a 'Friend of Mine' - he's after ur dome like head lice
Ain't trading a 'Greatest of Kelly' album when I get u merked for the 'Best Price'

miss

Before u move I'll aim & blast G, every1 w/ a strap see ur wack B
Cuz u got 6 kids bro, we've been known your pullout game mad weak

lol cool

Pulled over for some papers, ur wife wit me & her throat is sore
I'm rollin Jay's while she gives me a 'Silent Bob' right in front the Cornerstore

ok

When I'm done w/ her ya both dead, no more playtime & Blues Clues
I'll put u & that bitch in a Pair of Vans like I donated some new shoes

played

1 good punch
2 jabs
2 misses

vs

In the prime of RB, nobody was stressin or aware of ya
Dillinger, you only earned a rep in the Depression-era bruh

nahh, way too simple bro n the execution was corny

I'm just the messenger but we all know you love the mail in your slot
The right angle delivers Letters that'll put you in a perpendicular spot

not feeling it

He loves the cock, if a guy's hung like a horseshoe down on you're luck
Taking the term assed out in a whole nude erection of suck

i get the horseshoe/horse u, new direction/nude erection, etc.. but the wordplays were used poorly, forced into a concept tryna make everything work. creative pts for sure but it reads awkward af

Peel back your dome and ghost you. Cats be like, "Leth, where's Dillinger?"
Take away all your skin in the game till cats be like, "Leth wears Dillinger."

this is pretty cool, i like it. different

Killin nerds. I'll obliterate your mind and put you back in diapers again
Eviscerate your body and throw it in the ocean black....all Depends

hate it

1 good punch
no jabs
4 misses

no stretched lines, gd shit. kick the rust n ull be a problem

v/jd

[hello there]

Can u clean this up @ Meth



Punches'll leave em Frozen, back w/ 6 kids & tryna come w/ lines?
Ur gonna see Elsa lot here, & have prolly watched her in that movie 100 times
This is cool. I liked the wordplay. But I feel like it doesn't land on the punch - Elsa being the big swing.
Shooters a 'Friend of Mine' - he's after ur dome like head lice
Ain't trading a 'Greatest of Kelly' album when I get u merked for the 'Best Price'
So this is probably an R Kelly bar. That's cool. I'm a bad person to vote on reference punches.
Before u move I'll aim & blast G, every1 w/ a strap see ur wack B
Cuz u got 6 kids bro, we've been known your pullout game mad weak
I liked the idea, I did not like the punch.
Pulled over for some papers, ur wife wit me & her throat is sore
I'm rollin Jay's while she gives me a 'Silent Bob' right in front the Cornerstore
Eh it's cute
When I'm done w/ her ya both dead, no more playtime & Blues Clues
I'll put u & that bitch in a Pair of Vans like I donated some new shoes
I liked this one.

Leth's verse

In the prime of RB, nobody was stressin or aware of ya
Dillinger, you only earned a rep in the Depression-era bruh
Nope
I'm just the messenger but we all know you love the mail in your slot
The right angle delivers Letters that'll put you in a perpendicular spot
No ty
He loves the cock, if a guy's hung like a horseshoe down on you're luck
Taking the term assed out in a whole nude erection of suck
Nope
Peel back your dome and ghost you. Cats be like, "Leth, where's Dillinger?"
Take away all your skin in the game till cats be like, "Leth wears Dillinger."
This is kind of cool
Killin nerds. I'll obliterate your mind and put you back in diapers again
Eviscerate your body and throw it in the ocean black....all Depends
Not sure I get the worldplay. All deep ends. All deepens. Aldi Pens. Oh fuck. I'm using Aldi Pens. Nobody use Aldi Pens.

VOTE Jdill. From what I gather the new dude is back from before, some of his things weren't punches. I'm sure he'll be fine in a couple of weeks and everyone will vote for him when he battles me BECAUSE NOBODY FUCKING VOTES FOR ME I SWEAR TO GOD

[Mr W.Rite]

im leaning Leth in this one
a lot cleaner verse, nothing really stood out except for the wearing Dillenger lines
J.Dill i really wasnt feeling too many of your punches, they just didnt hit hard for me

v/Leth

[Ryno]

Can u clean this up @ Meth



Punches'll leave em Frozen, back w/ 6 kids & tryna come w/ lines?
Ur gonna see Elsa lot here, & have prolly watched her in that movie 100 times
TIE INS MADE THIS OK
Shooters a 'Friend of Mine' - he's after ur dome like head lice
Ain't trading a 'Greatest of Kelly' album when I get u merked for the 'Best Price'
NOT FEELING THIS
Before u move I'll aim & blast G, every1 w/ a strap see ur wack B
Cuz u got 6 kids bro, we've been known your pullout game mad weak
NAH MAN
Pulled over for some papers, ur wife wit me & her throat is sore
I'm rollin Jay's while she gives me a 'Silent Bob' right in front the Cornerstore
HAHA OK
When I'm done w/ her ya both dead, no more playtime & Blues Clues
I'll put u & that bitch in a Pair of Vans like I donated some new shoes
THIS WAS NICE

Leth's verse

In the prime of RB, nobody was stressin or aware of ya
Dillinger, you only earned a rep in the Depression-era bruh
NAH
I'm just the messenger but we all know you love the mail in your slot
The right angle delivers Letters that'll put you in a perpendicular spot
KINDA FUNNY
He loves the cock, if a guy's hung like a horseshoe down on you're luck
Taking the term assed out in a whole nude erection of suck
HAVENT SEEN THIS BEFORE. Ok. NOT A FAN OF GAY BARS BUT THIS WAS COOL
Peel back your dome and ghost you. Cats be like, "Leth, where's Dillinger?"
Take away all your skin in the game till cats be like, "Leth wears Dillinger."
I LIKE THIS
Killin nerds. I'll obliterate your mind and put you back in diapers again
Eviscerate your body and throw it in the ocean black....all Depends
NAH

v. JD...Almost had Leth but just off of preference im goin with Dill. Gay jokes imo hold less weight even though some of those bars were ight. that "wears dillinger" bar was fire though, cant lie.

[Meth]

4-2 jd

[Spree]

Punches'll leave em Frozen, back w/ 6 kids & tryna come w/ lines?
Ur gonna see Elsa lot here, & have prolly watched her in that movie 100 times
This was dope
Shooters a 'Friend of Mine' - he's after ur dome like head lice
Ain't trading a 'Greatest of Kelly' album when I get u merked for the 'Best Price'
I fuck with this
Before u move I'll aim & blast G, every1 w/ a strap see ur wack B
Cuz u got 6 kids bro, we've been known your pullout game mad weak
Could have been more clever with this i thought. still connected
Pulled over for some papers, ur wife wit me & her throat is sore
I'm rollin Jay's while she gives me a 'Silent Bob' right in front the Cornerstore
LMAO this was ok man. light
When I'm done w/ her ya both dead, no more playtime & Blues Clues
I'll put u & that bitch in a Pair of Vans like I donated some new shoes
This was cool


vs


In the prime of RB, nobody was stressin or aware of ya
Dillinger, you only earned a rep in the Depression-era bruh
Nah man
I'm just the messenger but we all know you love the mail in your slot
The right angle delivers Letters that'll put you in a perpendicular spot
Yeah im not a fan of this either bro
He loves the cock, if a guy's hung like a horseshoe down on you're luck
Taking the term assed out in a whole nude erection of suck
Nah man.. this was miss. I see the wordplays but nothing harsh or clever really in ur execution
Peel back your dome and ghost you. Cats be like, "Leth, where's Dillinger?"
Take away all your skin in the game till cats be like, "Leth wears Dillinger."
This could have been dope man Im just not a fan of that thos wheres/wears dillinger. too much of it if you came with a stronger/harsher set up this would have been dope imo
Killin nerds. I'll obliterate your mind and put you back in diapers again
Eviscerate your body and throw it in the ocean black....all Depends
nah i cant with this


I got Dill. Overall more consistent, better connections.

[King]

Before u move I'll aim & blast G, every1 w/ a strap see ur wack B
Cuz u got 6 kids bro, we've been known your pullout game mad weak
Pulled over for some papers, ur wife wit me & her throat is sore
I'm rollin Jay's while she gives me a 'Silent Bob' right in front the Cornerstore

vs

Peel back your dome and ghost you. Cats be like, "Leth, where's Dillinger?"
Take away all your skin in the game till cats be like, "Leth wears Dillinger."


Dills opener was ok too, close to quoting that also. verse was decent as a whole, pullout and silent bob were cool flips. Leth the opener was a dope angle but i didn't like the execution. right angle is a pretty played concept, didnt feel like that was a fresh enough flip. new direction was another dope idea that just didnt come together right imo.

vote Dill