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    Week 7: Lenox 0-1 vs. Mr W.Rite 2-2 write wins

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    Re: Week 7: Lenox 0-1 vs. Mr W.Rite 2-2

    10.

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    Re: Week 7: Lenox 0-1 vs. Mr W.Rite 2-2

    cool

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    Re: Week 7: Lenox 0-1 vs. Mr W.Rite 2-2

    20

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    Site filled with wack spitters & this faggot is one.
    punches to MR I .. you’ll need more than a computer screen to see the damage done.
    cuz my fists heavy, pussy. Think twice before u fight me.
    @Meth take him out to be safe. I know the league don’t take concussion protocol’s lightly.
    ur not the pro to call, ur just a homo don’t worry...
    if u wanna talk relevance. u haven’t been relevant since that wp was quote worthy.
    history shows u duck vets. Even when u show it’s a painful verse.
    he just don’t got an eiffert, so cinci like to run i'll break his ankle first.
    empty cartridges in this faggot.. hella rounds from the shotty.
    leave feds with the trails mixed.. even if I left crumbs they’d still never find his body.
    always been above u.. so who’s he kiddin?
    act new, pateks in ur mouth.. that shit’ll sound like a lil uzi spittin.
    on the feet im deadly kid, crack skulls like I’m lector.
    I’ll be quick to expose Mr, Glass chin & leave this fagt in a wheelchair forever.
    His bitch disturbing, she be droolin on her lap while I jackoff.
    Gotta keep a distance. wouldn’t even fuck that bitch for a pack of Winston’s & a scratch off.
    knockout power. my fists of steel rock kids.
    U up against the killing fields, & I’ll leave u dead on it like Dylan Thomas.
    ur death evident. Pens deadly, don’t tempt me queer
    when I hit u ya head’ll come write off. & Leave u rusty for the rest of ya career

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    Last edited by Meth; October 2nd, 2018 at 06:27 AM

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    Re: Week 7: Lenox 0-1 vs. Mr W.Rite 2-2

    in this bitch...


    I don’t owe you shit as if this jerk deserves it
    And beat the bitch into submission when the pavement doesn’t serve its purpose
    you dumb fuck.. can barely read, crawl back in the hole we found you in
    check the thread, you went double.. which proves, he cant even count to ten
    now im back on my petty shit, call me out.. like this aint a deathwish
    so the only time I’ll give you props’ll be to hang yourself with
    I’ll take you out with words, if that aint enough then let the gun play follow
    Then I’ll be glad to give you more head shots than a run way model
    Cant stand what these bitches like, dodge the bullets but get the knife
    No guts no glory, and yet we cant stomach half the shit you write
    Got him in my cross hairs, he running, I’ll watch this hoe book fast
    no remorse then turn away before the shot, like a no look pass
    and your stock has fallen, pass your prime…you’re dismissed fool
    Cage raised the bar, and I fuck around and tripped over that shit too
    You better hope my gat don’t squeeze, I stay dumpin..this bastards weak
    and join the “me too” movement, cus you’ve been fucked by half the league
    how are you still in this league faggot, no one knows or truly cares
    either your careers been hanging by a thread or more like Meth’s pubic hair


    -W.Rite

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    Re: Week 7: Lenox 0-1 vs. Mr W.Rite 2-2

    Quote Originally Posted by Caged View Post
    20

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    Site filled with wack spitters & this faggot is one.
    punches to MR I .. you’ll need more than a computer screen to see the damage done.
    WOULD OF BEEN DOPE BUT NOBODY CALLS HIM MR ITS MISTER
    cuz my fists heavy, pussy. Think twice before u fight me.
    @Meth take him out to be safe. I know the league don’t take concussion protocol’s lightly.
    NAH
    ur not the pro to call, ur just a homo don’t worry...
    if u wanna talk relevance. u haven’t been relevant since that wp was quote worthy.
    EH
    history shows u duck vets. Even when u show it’s a painful verse.
    he just don’t got an eiffert, so cinci like to run i'll break his ankle first.
    DONT LIKE THE WORDING HERE
    empty cartridges in this faggot.. hella rounds from the shotty.
    leave feds with the trails mixed.. even if I left crumbs they’d still never find his body.
    NOPE
    always been above u.. so who’s he kiddin?
    act new, pateks in ur mouth.. that shit’ll sound like a lil uzi spittin.
    Ok
    on the feet im deadly kid, crack skulls like I’m lector.
    I’ll be quick to expose Mr, Glass chin & leave this fagt in a wheelchair forever.
    DIDNT NEED THE COMMA BUT THIS WAS NICE
    His bitch disturbing, she be droolin on her lap while I jackoff.
    Gotta keep a distance. wouldn’t even fuck that bitch for a pack of Winston’s & a scratch off.
    WTF
    knockout power. my fists of steel rock kids.
    U up against the killing fields, & I’ll leave u dead on it like Dylan Thomas.
    RHYMES WEIRD, ALIL OBSCURE FOR ME
    ur death evident. Pens deadly, don’t tempt me queer
    when I hit u ya head’ll come write off. & Leave u rusty for the rest of ya career
    NAH

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mr W.Rite View Post
    in this bitch...


    I don’t owe you shit as if this jerk deserves it
    And beat the bitch into submission when the pavement doesn’t serve its purpose
    NAH
    you dumb fuck.. can barely read, crawl back in the hole we found you in
    check the thread, you went double.. which proves, he cant even count to ten
    NOT TOO HARSH
    now im back on my petty shit, call me out.. like this aint a deathwish
    so the only time I’ll give you props’ll be to hang yourself with
    SIMPLE I LIKE IT
    I’ll take you out with words, if that aint enough then let the gun play follow
    Then I’ll be glad to give you more head shots than a run way model
    SIMPLE AGAIN BUT DIDNT LIKE THE HEAD SHOTS FLIP
    Cant stand what these bitches like, dodge the bullets but get the knife
    No guts no glory, and yet we cant stomach half the shit you write
    NAH
    Got him in my cross hairs, he running, I’ll watch this hoe book fast
    no remorse then turn away before the shot, like a no look pass
    OK
    and your stock has fallen, pass your prime…you’re dismissed fool
    Cage raised the bar, and I fuck around and tripped over that shit too
    NOT FEELING THIS FLIP
    You better hope my gat don’t squeeze, I stay dumpin..this bastards weak
    and join the “me too” movement, cus you’ve been fucked by half the league
    LOL OK
    how are you still in this league faggot, no one knows or truly cares
    either your careers been hanging by a thread or more like Meth’s pubic hair
    NAH

    -W.Rite
    v. mr.write...dated in spots but his wording was a tad bit better. 20 lines was a bit unnecessary.

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    Re: Week 7: Lenox 0-1 vs. Mr W.Rite 2-2

    Quote Originally Posted by Mr W.Rite View Post
    in this bitch...


    I don’t owe you shit as if this jerk deserves it
    And beat the bitch into submission when the pavement doesn’t serve its purpose

    ok


    you dumb fuck.. can barely read, crawl back in the hole we found you in
    check the thread, you went double.. which proves, he cant even count to ten

    nah

    now im back on my petty shit, call me out.. like this aint a deathwish
    so the only time I’ll give you props’ll be to hang yourself with

    ok

    I’ll take you out with words, if that aint enough then let the gun play follow
    Then I’ll be glad to give you more head shots than a run way model

    nice

    Cant stand what these bitches like, dodge the bullets but get the knife
    No guts no glory, and yet we cant stomach half the shit you write

    nah


    Got him in my cross hairs, he running, I’ll watch this hoe book fast
    no remorse then turn away before the shot, like a no look pass

    ok cool

    and your stock has fallen, pass your prime…you’re dismissed fool
    Cage raised the bar, and I fuck around and tripped over that shit too

    nah

    You better hope my gat don’t squeeze, I stay dumpin..this bastards weak
    and join the “me too” movement, cus you’ve been fucked by half the league

    dope

    how are you still in this league faggot, no one knows or truly cares
    either your careers been hanging by a thread or more like Meth’s pubic hair

    lmao


    -W.Rite
    Quote Originally Posted by Caged View Post
    20

    -
    -

    Site filled with wack spitters & this faggot is one.
    punches to MR I .. you’ll need more than a computer screen to see the damage done.

    eh wording messed u up here

    cuz my fists heavy, pussy. Think twice before u fight me.
    @Meth take him out to be safe. I know the league don’t take concussion protocol’s lightly.

    nah

    ur not the pro to call, ur just a homo don’t worry...
    if u wanna talk relevance. u haven’t been relevant since that wp was quote worthy.

    ok

    history shows u duck vets. Even when u show it’s a painful verse.
    he just don’t got an eiffert, so cinci like to run i'll break his ankle first.

    wording messed u uo again here but still good on concept and wps

    empty cartridges in this faggot.. hella rounds from the shotty.
    leave feds with the trails mixed.. even if I left crumbs they’d still never find his body.

    real old

    always been above u.. so who’s he kiddin?
    act new, pateks in ur mouth.. that shit’ll sound like a lil uzi spittin.

    cool

    on the feet im deadly kid, crack skulls like I’m lector.
    I’ll be quick to expose Mr, Glass chin & leave this fagt in a wheelchair forever.

    0k

    His bitch disturbing, she be droolin on her lap while I jackoff.
    Gotta keep a distance. wouldn’t even fuck that bitch for a pack of Winston’s & a scratch off.

    eh

    knockout power. my fists of steel rock kids.
    U up against the killing fields, & I’ll leave u dead on it like Dylan Thomas.

    ehh ok

    ur death evident. Pens deadly, don’t tempt me queer
    when I hit u ya head’ll come write off. & Leave u rusty for the rest of ya career

    not bad

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    cool read both were pretty inconsistent due to going 20. by quotes i got it

    4-3 in favor of write. he was a lil more consistent too, lenox wording hurt him. good read.

    v write


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    Re: Week 7: Lenox 0-1 vs. Mr W.Rite 2-2

    Quote Originally Posted by Caged View Post
    20

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    Site filled with wack spitters & this faggot is one.
    punches to MR I .. you’ll need more than a computer screen to see the damage done.
    Don't love this. It just doesn't hit
    cuz my fists heavy, pussy. Think twice before u fight me.
    @Meth take him out to be safe. I know the league don’t take concussion protocol’s lightly.
    Eh
    ur not the pro to call, ur just a homo don’t worry...
    if u wanna talk relevance. u haven’t been relevant since that wp was quote worthy.
    This is something I haven't paid attention to
    history shows u duck vets. Even when u show it’s a painful verse.
    he just don’t got an eiffert, so cinci like to run i'll break his ankle first.
    I like the concepts OK but the punch happens midway through your actual punch line. Then you have extra words
    empty cartridges in this faggot.. hella rounds from the shotty.
    leave feds with the trails mixed.. even if I left crumbs they’d still never find his body.
    Ok
    always been above u.. so who’s he kiddin?
    act new, pateks in ur mouth.. that shit’ll sound like a lil uzi spittin.
    No
    on the feet im deadly kid, crack skulls like I’m lector.
    I’ll be quick to expose Mr, Glass chin & leave this fagt in a wheelchair forever.
    Same as before
    His bitch disturbing, she be droolin on her lap while I jackoff.
    Gotta keep a distance. wouldn’t even fuck that bitch for a pack of Winston’s & a scratch off.
    Nope
    knockout power. my fists of steel rock kids.
    U up against the killing fields, & I’ll leave u dead on it like Dylan Thomas.
    Eh
    ur death evident. Pens deadly, don’t tempt me queer
    when I hit u ya head’ll come write off. & Leave u rusty for the rest of ya career
    Eh

    [
    If you bastards are going to make me read 20 lines they better be fire AF otherwise do 10 like normal people.

    Quote Originally Posted by Mr W.Rite View Post
    in this bitch...


    I don’t owe you shit as if this jerk deserves it
    And beat the bitch into submission when the pavement doesn’t serve its purpose
    No
    you dumb fuck.. can barely read, crawl back in the hole we found you in
    check the thread, you went double.. which proves, he cant even count to ten
    No
    now im back on my petty shit, call me out.. like this aint a deathwish
    so the only time I’ll give you props’ll be to hang yourself with
    Ok
    I’ll take you out with words, if that aint enough then let the gun play follow
    Then I’ll be glad to give you more head shots than a run way model
    I mean really played but it's the first actual punch in this battle
    Cant stand what these bitches like, dodge the bullets but get the knife
    No guts no glory, and yet we cant stomach half the shit you write
    Ehhh lame
    Got him in my cross hairs, he running, I’ll watch this hoe book fast
    no remorse then turn away before the shot, like a no look pass
    No
    and your stock has fallen, pass your prime…you’re dismissed fool
    Cage raised the bar, and I fuck around and tripped over that shit too
    No
    You better hope my gat don’t squeeze, I stay dumpin..this bastards weak
    and join the “me too” movement, cus you’ve been fucked by half the league
    Lol
    how are you still in this league faggot, no one knows or truly cares
    either your careers been hanging by a thread or more like Meth’s pubic hair
    No


    -W.Rite


    VOTE W.Rite. Had one more bar I fucked with. I liked Cage's concepts better - cept for one or two - but the wording didn't land a punch.

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    Re: Week 7: Lenox 0-1 vs. Mr W.Rite 2-2 OPEN FOR VOTES

    This is close, Lenox had better concepts but Write had much smoother wording. As for best hits its basically Lenox opener vs props and me too. Much better verses then I've read from both in previous weeks, props. I would have stayed away from going 20 tho

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