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    Week 8 Contenders: King 3-1 vs. J. Dill 3-1 king wins

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    Re: Week 8 Contenders: King 3-1 vs. J. Dill 3-1

    16?
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    Re: Week 8 Contenders: King 3-1 vs. J. Dill 3-1

    That’ll work bro

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    Re: Week 8 Contenders: King 3-1 vs. J. Dill 3-1

    due tn @j. dill @King


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    Re: Week 8 Contenders: King 3-1 vs. J. Dill 3-1

    Ended up going 12 bro

    Ur squad is mad weak, aint speakin dope or w/ hot flows
    Fuck ur Clicking, yall talk is nonsense like Ethiopian convo's
    Me & my bitch popped Ian I was in them Lips, livin the best life
    Shorty resembles Fiona from Shameless, urs jus be lookin like Shreks wife
    Bitch noticed ur weird, thats why she aint been throwing it dude
    She ain't in love, it's like slamming Adore the way her legs be closing to u
    Now ur a broke bum, takin cash from dudes to jack em off
    Cuz the only way u'd ever see a Milking is by doing that to cocks
    My shooters crazy & w/ the chrome it's not smart to doubt em
    Gunna turn u to a Lil Baby - ur dome'll Drip Harder than that album
    Don't flex bro, ur a metro who thinks of men w/ the best throats
    When it comes to gay sex, King be 'Swift to the Bottom' like Meth posts
    Last edited by YG; October 13th, 2018 at 05:51 PM

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    Re: Week 8 Contenders: King 3-1 vs. J. Dill 3-1

    Bitch ass custy, dimes laugh u off when u try to get down
    I get bent, teasepoon n then light it up, u only do that to get high on the brown
    n Ur bitch is a train station. A gang bang whore n its great
    She 'pack entire crews in' like she's heading towards the border with weight
    Smash ur bitch on the reg. I got that shower head when I hit today
    Dill gettin that shower head is my gun being turned sideways for a different spray
    Wack bars n stupid ass NY slang. 'the fuck is he expecting to try me?
    I'm predicting digital display simple text that gets jacked like car decks in 90s
    I inflict fear, this queer King's peer? U cant be sincere
    Why is this kid here, he was mid tier in an era dominated by my eras mid tier.
    n Kill that tough guy talk, fake ass bitch. I don't take that lip
    Just coz these bitches keeps giving u hard no's don't think I wont break that shit
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    Re: Week 8 Contenders: King 3-1 vs. J. Dill 3-1

    Quote Originally Posted by j. dill View Post
    Ended up going 12 bro

    Ur squad is mad weak, aint speakin dope or w/ hot flows
    Fuck ur Clicking, yall talk is nonsense like Ethiopian convo's

    creative but a reach imo w the way u worded it, reads forced to me

    Me & my bitch popped Ian I was in them Lips, livin the best life
    Shorty resembles Fiona from Shameless, urs jus be lookin like Shreks wife

    dig this

    Bitch noticed ur weird, thats why she aint been throwing it dude
    She ain't in love, it's like slamming Adore the way her legs be closing to u

    ok

    Now ur a broke bum, takin cash from dudes to jack em off
    Cuz the only way u'd ever see a Milking is by doing that to cocks

    lol nice

    My shooters crazy & w/ the chrome it's not smart to doubt em
    Gunna turn u to a Lil Baby - ur dome'll Drip Harder than that album

    ur domell drip harder is weird, kind of clunky in that sense, but ok bar still

    Don't flex bro, ur a metro who thinks of men w/ the best throats
    When it comes to gay sex, King be 'Swift to the Bottom' like Meth posts

    nice
    Quote Originally Posted by King View Post
    Bitch ass custy, dimes laugh u off when u try to get down
    I get bent, teasepoon n then light it up, u only do that to get high on the brown

    nice, creative

    n Ur bitch is a train station. A gang bang whore n its great
    She 'pack entire crews in' like she's heading towards the border with weight

    fire

    Smash ur bitch on the reg. I got that shower head when I hit today
    Dill gettin that shower head is my gun being turned sideways for a different spray

    ehhhhh ok

    Wack bars n stupid ass NY slang. 'the fuck is he expecting to try me?
    I'm predicting digital display simple text that gets jacked like car decks in 90s

    ok

    I inflict fear, this queer King's peer? U cant be sincere
    Why is this kid here, he was mid tier in an era dominated by my eras mid tier.

    damn lol facts

    n Kill that tough guy talk, fake ass bitch. I don't take that lip
    Just coz these bitches keeps giving u hard no's don't think I wont break that shit

    nice
    this battle didnt disappoint imo, dill dropped one of the nicer verses i seen from him, but king came w it too, super creative this week which i dug a lot, wording was clean and had to be to pull off some off those plays. nice shit.

    v king


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    Re: Week 8 Contenders: King 3-1 vs. J. Dill 3-1

    Sorry you dudes are so slept on. Lemme give you a bump.


    Yo homies! It's H&D - your favorite voter!

    In order to make sure my votes are fair in the eyes of the great @Cheese cake Assassin, I want to remind you of my voting methodology:

    For each bar, I give you a score. I break the bar down into four categories and total 'em up. That's your score.

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    Quote Originally Posted by j. dill View Post
    Ended up going 12 bro

    Ur squad is mad weak, aint speakin dope or w/ hot flows
    Fuck ur Clicking, yall talk is nonsense like Ethiopian convo's
    1: Scheme - This was clean. Good inners and clean end rhymes.
    1: Concept - It's an OK concept but doesn't make me wanna go "oh shit" just on the concept alone.
    0: Wordplay -
    1: Execution - I didn't love the execution. Setup was cool enough. This was just like a nice little execution for a nice little concept. You're not gonna make this punch sing, but you coulda squeezed more juice out of it, IMO.
    3: Total bar score


    Me & my bitch popped Ian I was in them Lips, livin the best life
    Shorty resembles Fiona from Shameless, urs jus be lookin like Shreks wife
    0: Scheme - Cool but I gotta be stingy with scheme points.
    1: Concept - I can't give this 2 on both concept and execution. So I gotta pick one to one - concept gets a strong 1
    2: Wordplay - Gonna give you a super light two here, since I took a point from concept and the end rhymes were pretty clean
    2: Execution - It's a weak two but the execution was so clever, here you go. Concept was cool, execution was clever and that set up wordplay will be slept on.
    5: Total bar score - Really clever little bar.


    Bitch noticed ur weird, thats why she aint been throwing it dude
    She ain't in love, it's like slamming Adore the way her legs be closing to u
    0: Scheme -
    1: Concept - Not that great. This is your really basic level wordplay concept
    1: Wordplay - Was present. Pretty weak 1
    1: Execution - The rhyming is what keeps this from being a 0 execution. Nothing really special about this bar, and the setup itself wasn't that great.
    3: Total bar score


    Now ur a broke bum, takin cash from dudes to jack em off
    Cuz the only way u'd ever see a Milking is by doing that to cocks
    1: Scheme - Cash and jack was smooth. End rhyme was a little choppy but the flow was good.
    1: Concept - It's your basic broke bar. But the wordplay was OK. I like the twist.
    1: Wordplay - Present. Nothing special.
    2: Execution - This is just textbook clean execution. Good inner, setup is done in 5 words. Wordplay is simple and cleverish. If this was a bigger concept this bar would be fire. But it's not, so it's just an ok little bar.
    5: Total bar score - Feels a little generous but whatever.


    My shooters crazy & w/ the chrome it's not smart to doubt em
    Gunna turn u to a Lil Baby - ur dome'll Drip Harder than that album
    1: Scheme - Strong. The end rhyme kinda sucks, but you don't see the two line inner.
    0: Concept - Gotta take half a point back from that last bar and this was on the edge.
    0: Wordplay -
    1: Execution - Even one. Strong points are the inner multi. Weak points are the end rhyme, the wording.
    2: Total bar score - This is like a 2.5 - 3, but you owed me some points from last bar


    Don't flex bro, ur a metro who thinks of men w/ the best throats
    When it comes to gay sex, King be 'Swift to the Bottom' like Meth posts
    1: Scheme - Clean
    1: Concept - Clever but this is your third gay bar of the battle or second or whatever. You're giving it too much real estate.
    1: Wordplay -
    1: Execution - Just some average execution. Good inners. Set up was OK but nothing special. Even the first half of the punch was just OK
    4: Total bar score
    23

    Quote Originally Posted by King View Post
    Bitch ass custy, dimes laugh u off when u try to get down
    I get bent, teasepoon n then light it up, u only do that to get high on the brown
    0: Scheme - Just some basic shit, nothing flashy or clean. And I try to be stingy with scheme points.
    1: Concept - This is tough. If dude was known to do drugs, this could be pretty sick. But as is, not knowing enough... it kinda feels forced. I would love this way more not as an opener, but as a bar after a sick girlfriend bar? It's so fucked you guys use the same fucking kinds of bars so often that I know the verse is made up of girlfriend bar, gun bar, sports metaphor...
    1: Wordplay - It's a really cool wordplay. But it's not that clean. So this is like a strong one. For two it's gotta be two reads and be clean, those are my standards today.
    1: Execution - Again, I think context hurt this bar.
    3: Total bar score - I feel it's like 3 and a half, so I'll get you a half point somewhere


    n Ur bitch is a train station. A gang bang whore n its great
    She 'pack entire crews in' like she's heading towards the border with weight
    1: Scheme - Here's half that half a point. Inners were interesting, end rhyme is choppy.
    2: Concept - Here is the other half. On one hand, I love train station. Fresh and interesting. Love the first part of the first bar. It sells me on the kind of weak pack entire crews in. But then the border with weight - IMO - is lame.
    0: Wordplay -
    1: Execution - I really think you dropped the bar on a haymaker, if you found a way to word your punch better. It's a really weak metaphor. It feels kinda lazy.
    4: Total bar score


    Smash ur bitch on the reg. I got that shower head when I hit today
    Dill gettin that shower head is my gun being turned sideways for a different spray
    1: Scheme - Feel like this should cover the points I owe you. End rhyme is ok. Inner is small but pretty cool. Flow is fine.
    1: Concept - This is a weak one. I'm fatigued about your "I fucked your girl" bars. So I don't love this. I REALLY had to think about the concept - the clickpoint it too high (how long I gotta think before I "get it.") But... once I did think about it... it's pretty neat?
    0: Wordplay -
    1: Execution - I don't want to give this bar a three. That's why you're getting a two. Fuck man. I can't give you a two for this...
    3: Total bar score


    Wack bars n stupid ass NY slang. 'the fuck is he expecting to try me?
    I'm predicting digital display simple text that gets jacked like car decks in 90s
    0: Scheme -
    0: Concept - Man this shit was weak.
    0: Wordplay -
    1: Execution - The wording on this punch sucked. The set up sucked. This was a super lazy bar.
    1: Total bar score


    I inflict fear, this queer King's peer? U cant be sincere
    Why is this kid here, he was mid tier in an era dominated by my eras mid tier.
    1: Scheme -
    2: Concept - The concept behind this was tight.
    1: Wordplay - Not really but you know why you get this point
    1: Execution - You can't get a two on this. The inners on the first rhyme aren't spaced and so they end up hurting the flow. But the execution of the punch is pretty clean. And the wording is clean. So I gave you a scheme point to compensate.
    5: Total bar score - Accurate reflects how I feel about this bar. Good bar that I respect. No haymaker potential.


    n Kill that tough guy talk, fake ass bitch. I don't take that lip
    Just coz these bitches keeps giving u hard no's don't think I wont break that shit
    1: Scheme -
    2: Concept - Solid. My first emotional reaction to one of your concepts.
    2: Wordplay - This was a good bar man. You're getting some favorable points here.
    2: Execution - Really clean. I mean, I don't fall in love with this bar. But this is blue levels of clean. It all just comes together.
    7: Total bar score - Not sure this is a "pure" seven bar --- maybe context makes it seem harder than it is. But this is a really nice, clean punch that lands relatively well. If someone dropped five of these I would really like reading the verse.

    23


    VOTE J dill. I got a tie in the rankings, so I had to give it to dude who was more consistent. My gut instinct is it's even, so give it to the dude who threw the higher point punch. But the truth is that seven wasn't a haymaker seven. That was just a really nice, technical bar. And King did get favorable "make up" points on some bars. I think dill was more consistent, and there's no way for me to explain this without making someone hate me. So there it is.

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    Re: Week 8 Contenders: King 3-1 vs. J. Dill 3-1 OPEN FOR VOTES

    Ur squad is mad weak, aint speakin dope or w/ hot flows
    Fuck ur Clicking, yall talk is nonsense like Ethiopian convo’s
    Pretty cool concept, but impact was okay.

    Me & my bitch popped Ian I was in them Lips, livin the best life
    Shorty resembles Fiona from Shameless, urs jus be lookin like Shreks wife
    lol. Good.

    Bitch noticed ur weird, thats why she aint been throwing it dude
    She ain't in love, it's like slamming Adore the way her legs be closing to u
    Eh. I get it, but didn’t really feel it.


    Now ur a broke bum, takin cash from dudes to jack em off
    Cuz the only way u'd ever see a Milking is by doing that to cocks
    Lol. dope.

    My shooters crazy & w/ the chrome it's not smart to doubt em
    Gunna turn u to a Lil Baby - ur dome'll Drip Harder than that album
    Ok.

    Don't flex bro, ur a metro who thinks of men w/ the best throats
    When it comes to gay sex, King be 'Swift to the Bottom' like Meth posts
    ok.

    Bitch ass custy, dimes laugh u off when u try to get down
    I get bent, teasepoon n then light it up, u only do that to get high on the brown
    Ok.

    n Ur bitch is a train station. A gang bang whore n its great
    She 'pack entire crews in' like she's heading towards the border with weight
    Good.

    Smash ur bitch on the reg. I got that shower head when I hit today
    Dill gettin that shower head is my gun being turned sideways for a different spray
    Ok.

    Wack bars n stupid ass NY slang. 'the fuck is he expecting to try me?
    I'm predicting digital display simple text that gets jacked like car decks in 90s
    Eh.

    I inflict fear, this queer King's peer? U cant be sincere
    Why is this kid here, he was mid tier in an era dominated by my eras mid tier.
    Dope.

    n Kill that tough guy talk, fake ass bitch. I don't take that lip
    Just coz these bitches keeps giving u hard no's don't think I wont break that shit
    Nice.

    Vote King. Really good battle here… the misses weren’t bad, but King in my thoughts had the more complete drop… including the mid tier bar which to me was PERFECTLY written.

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    Re: Week 8 Contenders: King 3-1 vs. J. Dill 3-1 OPEN FOR VOTES

    Ur squad is mad weak, aint speakin dope or w/ hot flows
    Fuck ur Clicking, yall talk is nonsense like Ethiopian convo's
    Thought this was cool, bit light really but creative
    Me & my bitch popped Ian I was in them Lips, livin the best life
    Shorty resembles Fiona from Shameless, urs jus be lookin like Shreks wife
    Nice
    Bitch noticed ur weird, thats why she aint been throwing it dude
    She ain't in love, it's like slamming Adore the way her legs be closing to u
    Aight, Another chick bar tho??? Jesus christ lmao
    Now ur a broke bum, takin cash from dudes to jack em off
    Cuz the only way u'd ever see a Milking is by doing that to cocks
    lmao this was dope TBH
    My shooters crazy & w/ the chrome it's not smart to doubt em
    Gunna turn u to a Lil Baby - ur dome'll Drip Harder than that album
    I fuk with this
    Don't flex bro, ur a metro who thinks of men w/ the best throats
    When it comes to gay sex, King be 'Swift to the Bottom' like Meth post
    This is nice too ...LMao @ you callin me repetative tho...

    VS


    Bitch ass custy, dimes laugh u off when u try to get down
    I get bent, teasepoon n then light it up, u only do that to get high on the brown
    Seemed wordy to me tbh. dope concept jab at best
    n Ur bitch is a train station. A gang bang whore n its great
    She 'pack entire crews in' like she's heading towards the border with weight
    I fuk with this
    Smash ur bitch on the reg. I got that shower head when I hit today
    Dill gettin that shower head is my gun being turned sideways for a different spray
    Yaaaaaa idk bout this bro...Dope concept needs tweaking
    Wack bars n stupid ass NY slang. 'the fuck is he expecting to try me?
    I'm predicting digital display simple text that gets jacked like car decks in 90s
    Im not feeling this either brosoif
    I inflict fear, this queer King's peer? U cant be sincere
    Why is this kid here, he was mid tier in an era dominated by my eras mid tier
    Thought this was dope tbh..
    n Kill that tough guy talk, fake ass bitch. I don't take that lip
    Just coz these bitches keeps giving u hard no's don't think I wont break that shit
    I fuk with this to.. dope

    Overall this was a cool battle...Enjoyable read both had a few misses and some dope shit. I got J.Dill edging this by a quote tho could go either way.

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    2-2


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    Re: Week 8 Contenders: King 3-1 vs. J. Dill 3-1

    Quote Originally Posted by j. dill View Post
    Ended up going 12 bro

    Ur squad is mad weak, aint speakin dope or w/ hot flows
    Fuck ur Clicking, yall talk is nonsense like Ethiopian convo's
    1/3
    Me & my bitch popped Ian I was in them Lips, livin the best life
    Shorty resembles Fiona from Shameless, urs jus be lookin like Shreks wife
    2/3
    Bitch noticed ur weird, thats why she aint been throwing it dude
    She ain't in love, it's like slamming Adore the way her legs be closing to u
    2/3
    Now ur a broke bum, takin cash from dudes to jack em off
    Cuz the only way u'd ever see a Milking is by doing that to cocks
    1/3
    My shooters crazy & w/ the chrome it's not smart to doubt em
    Gunna turn u to a Lil Baby - ur dome'll Drip Harder than that album
    1/3
    Don't flex bro, ur a metro who thinks of men w/ the best throats
    When it comes to gay sex, King be 'Swift to the Bottom' like Meth posts
    1/3
    8/18

    Quote Originally Posted by King View Post
    Bitch ass custy, dimes laugh u off when u try to get down
    I get bent, teasepoon n then light it up, u only do that to get high on the brown
    2/3
    n Ur bitch is a train station. A gang bang whore n its great
    She 'pack entire crews in' like she's heading towards the border with weight
    2/3
    Smash ur bitch on the reg. I got that shower head when I hit today
    Dill gettin that shower head is my gun being turned sideways for a different spray
    3/3
    Wack bars n stupid ass NY slang. 'the fuck is he expecting to try me?
    I'm predicting digital display simple text that gets jacked like car decks in 90s
    1/3
    I inflict fear, this queer King's peer? U cant be sincere
    Why is this kid here, he was mid tier in an era dominated by my eras mid tier.
    1/3
    n Kill that tough guy talk, fake ass bitch. I don't take that lip
    Just coz these bitches keeps giving u hard no's don't think I wont break that shit
    2/3
    12/18

    v. king...wasnt feeling dills content this week. i've always been eh w/ gay jokes/punches n the opener was alil dated. He'll bounce back next week.

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    Re: Week 8 Contenders: King 3-1 vs. J. Dill 3-1 OPEN FOR VOTES

    Ur squad is mad weak, aint speakin dope or w/ hot flows
    Fuck ur Clicking, yall talk is nonsense like Ethiopian convo's
    SILLY
    Me & my bitch popped Ian I was in them Lips, livin the best life
    Shorty resembles Fiona from Shameless, urs jus be lookin like Shreks wife
    Kewl
    Bitch noticed ur weird, thats why she aint been throwing it dude
    She ain't in love, it's like slamming Adore the way her legs be closing to u
    Kewl
    Now ur a broke bum, takin cash from dudes to jack em off
    Cuz the only way u'd ever see a Milking is by doing that to cocks
    SILLY
    My shooters crazy & w/ the chrome it's not smart to doubt em
    Gunna turn u to a Lil Baby - ur dome'll Drip Harder than that album
    Kewl
    Don't flex bro, ur a metro who thinks of men w/ the best throats
    When it comes to gay sex, King be 'Swift to the Bottom' like Meth posts
    Didn't get


    Bitch ass custy, dimes laugh u off when u try to get down
    I get bent, teasepoon n then light it up, u only do that to get high on the brown
    SILLY
    n Ur bitch is a train station. A gang bang whore n its great
    She 'pack entire crews in' like she's heading towards the border with weight
    SILLY
    Smash ur bitch on the reg. I got that shower head when I hit today
    Dill gettin that shower head is my gun being turned sideways for a different spray
    Kewl
    Wack bars n stupid ass NY slang. 'the fuck is he expecting to try me?
    I'm predicting digital display simple text that gets jacked like car decks in 90s
    Kewl
    I inflict fear, this queer King's peer? U cant be sincere
    Why is this kid here, he was mid tier in an era dominated by my eras mid tier.
    Kewl
    n Kill that tough guy talk, fake ass bitch. I don't take that lip
    Just coz these bitches keeps giving u hard no's don't think I wont break that shit
    Kewl


    Had to re-read this a cpl times. It was a really even battle. Really diggin both styles. The humorous approach by j.dill made his lines hilarious while King was more relentless and harsh with his bars. I think i have to give a slight edge to King, due to the variety of angles he attacked from. jdill is a beast as well but giving it to King. Very good battle bros!

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    Re: Week 8 Contenders: King 3-1 vs. J. Dill 3-1 OPEN FOR VOTES

    Dill

    Opener was cool
    Shrieks wife was dope
    Adore was ok
    Milking was dope
    Lil baby was iight
    Cliser was fire



    King

    Opener was dope
    Packing crews In was dope
    Shower head was cool
    Digital display was ok
    Mid tier was dope
    Closer was dope


    Fire battle.. tbh it's close in hits but I just felt king had a couple more tgst were tougher. lil better variety.. y'all both tore it up tho, I enjoyed this..


    King

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