User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 2 of 2

Thread: Kool G Rap style verse

  1. #1
    The 0bserver
    Join Date
    Apr 2018
    Posts
    418
    Battle Record
    3-4

    Kool G Rap style verse

    I mutilate,
    chew the face
    off a dude who makes
    a move, erase
    MC's, reduce a plate
    of rappers to human waste
    yous a snake
    if you debate
    who's the great-
    -est, Aether illuminates
    the game, and thinks at computer pace
    felonies accumulate
    cause' I shoot the jakes
    abuse the cake
    till' I hallucinate
    pimp out and use a skank
    to boost my papes
    and all your crews are fake
    you got contused and shanked
    and all your bitches blew my wank

    I slaughter rhymes
    burn up the leaf until my hands are cauterized
    welded to the blunt,
    and you cunts
    don't wanna try
    me, cause I'm on the kind
    of shit that make your momma cry
    give you a marijuana high
    you can't quantify
    my homicides

    I wanna see a phat ass steady shakin'
    ya petty, base and
    ya faggots already makin'
    for the exit, when they bring the heavy weight in
    that luminiferous flow
    makes your ignorance show
    dumpin' bodies in any waste bin
    till' the feds be chasin'
    me, ain't no friendly jakes in
    the city I was raised in

    my loud rap
    knocks the crowd back
    I got the sound maxed
    if you rap about swag I don't want ya on wax
    I shot some rounds at
    the last faggot who talked about that

    my flows makin'
    dough, breakin'
    dome plates and
    I personally know Satan

  2. #2

    Re: Kool G Rap style verse

    OK, first and foremost. Your bar structure is really bad. You want to display your bars as you would spit them. The way you formatted it, it has no flow.

    Stop trying to just rhyme words just because they rhyme. Think about your life, how you feel. What drives you? I hope its not this.

    Just my 2 cents

    - - - Updated - - -

    btw let satan know i was just looking out

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •