Week 10: JEM. 3-5 vs. Plethora 1-2 Pleth wins

[Meth]

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@JEM. @plethora

[JEM.]

10.

[plethora]

JEM aka Boston..



all bluff. u talk tuff til someone sits u down via fist to mouth
once u see the Palmolive a sudden its a different story when i dish it out
R!can beat u last week, but this time ima open hand u with grace
couldn't handle Theoryz..  so what about when reality smacks u in the face
ur girl a hoe. money talks & all she knows is profit
open wallet & for the right Price Pfister til she's leaking like a faucet
whether defibrillator or oxygen tank tubes used to breathe thru nose
i'll make the beating of Boston Public, til he's taken off the air like that tv show
this nigga act real tuff til the laser beam tests his grit
cuz when i put you under the scope, we'll see how fake gem is

[JEM.]

I ain’t got to fight to break you down to the physics guy
Cuz if you ain’t lacking multiplets… you just dishing lies
Yo, you couldn’t walk in my timbs’ that’s a death sentence
Cuz when Me & Thoracic it’s just me stomping his chest in
No viagra prescription can fix this kid's limp impotent dick
While he was w/Plazma, I was running a clinic on his chick
My torpedoes been too deep though, could cap this kid
with one shot but four move ahead like battleships
Kill ya fam and let you know, make a verse and flow it
And drop plet w grown men line like he had to id the culprit

[Greedy]

Plethora:
Opener- nice. Harsh execution too.
Theoryz- solid
Pfister- i liked the wp, but not feeling this one too tough

Vs

Jem:
Battlships- this was pretty good. I fk w this
Closer- decent. Wording def coulda helped this one out

Plethora, i only quoted a few of urs, but u didnt have any misses, they all worked, i just quoted the ones i really liked.
Boston, i was a lot more generous w ur quotes, but i liked that battleship joint

Vote plethora

[Smog]

Pleth

Opener was forced to me..
Theoryz was nice
Pfister was cool
Boston public was ok
Cliser was nice

Vs.


Jem

Opener was ok
Battleships was good
Closer was good too



Got it 4-3 pleth, thought he landed with more impact also..Jem was better here then he's been imo but pleth was a little more consistent. Good stuff y'all


Plethora

[XRey]

Plethora had a strong diss, solid punches, I liked the Theoryz line the most.
I don't think Jem had any hard hits, solid stuff but not nearly enough to come off with a win here.
V/Plet

[King]

R!can beat u last week, but this time ima open hand u with grace
couldn't handle Theoryz..  so what about when reality smacks u in the face
ur girl a hoe. money talks & all she knows is profit
open wallet & for the right Price Pfister til she's leaking like a faucet

cool verse, thought these hit the best

vs


My torpedoes been too deep though, could cap this kid
with one shot but four move ahead like battleships

this was cool, liked the wording. other than that you had some good ideas just wasnt feeling the execution. the wp in the first two bars was too obscure for me, maybe if worded differently it could have landed but idk

vote Pleth

[Ryno]

Battleships was pretty tight, the rest word worded ok but the execution werent that nasty. Theoryz, boston public, under a scope were tight from pleth. I think he took this pretty convincingly tbh.

v.plethora

[hello there]

Sorry for the shit vote. I was driving all day. That's what I call doggystyle with @Barcotic 's mom.

JEM aka Boston..



all bluff. u talk tuff til someone sits u down via fist to mouth
once u see the Palmolive a sudden its a different story when i dish it out
I feel like I've seen this before. But maybe I read this verse before JEM dropped?

R!can beat u last week, but this time ima open hand u with grace
couldn't handle Theoryz..  so what about when reality smacks u in the face
Eh. I don't have any faults. BUt I don't love it.

ur girl a hoe. money talks & all she knows is profit
open wallet & for the right Price Pfister til she's leaking like a faucet
I don't like this really.

whether defibrillator or oxygen tank tubes used to breathe thru nose
i'll make the beating of Boston Public, til he's taken off the air like that tv show
The punchline on this sucked. The concept was tight. I don't get why people word things this way. It's like build build build COOL CONCEPT... then words that just kinda trail off.

this nigga act real tuff til the laser beam tests his grit
cuz when i put you under the scope, we'll see how fake gem is
I hate the rhyme, here. The concept is OK.

I ain’t got to fight to break you down to the physics guy
Cuz if you ain’t lacking multiplets… you just dishing lies
Someone has to explain this to me. @JEM if you want to PM me this one. I did a quick Google and I don't have time to spend forever on this line.

Yo, you couldn’t walk in my timbs’ that’s a death sentence
Cuz when Me & Thoracic it’s just me stomping his chest in
... Did you just do two wordplays in a row that I just don't get? What the fucking fuck does Thoracic end up turning into? For the first time on this site, I actually don't get these bars.

No viagra prescription can fix this kid's limp impotent dick
While he was w/Plazma, I was running a clinic on his chick
That's kinda lame. It's a real force. It's like there is this guy named Plaz who isn't in this battle... so let's like, use his name.

My torpedoes been too deep though, could cap this kid
with one shot but four move ahead like battleships
This is a cute bar. But when you think about it it doesn't really make sense. You have to take four move ahead in isolation. And it's really that battleships TAKE UP four spaces. But whatever it's cute.

Kill ya fam and let you know, make a verse and flow it
And drop plet w grown men line like he had to id the culprit
Man you accidentally fucked up the best wordplay of your verse. If Growmenline is a CSI drug this is an A+ bar. But I googled it and I don't have time to do a thesis on your fucking verse.

VOTE In good conscious I can't vote on this one. JEM just pulled too much retarded shit. I can't tell if he's a genius or retarded, so I can't weigh in.

[YG]

all bluff. u talk tuff til someone sits u down via fist to mouth
once u see the Palmolive a sudden its a different story when i dish it out
Tight
R!can beat u last week, but this time ima open hand u with grace
couldn't handle Theoryz..  so what about when reality smacks u in the face
Eh ok
ur girl a hoe. money talks & all she knows is profit
open wallet & for the right Price Pfister til she's leaking like a faucet
Decent
whether defibrillator or oxygen tank tubes used to breathe thru nose
i'll make the beating of Boston Public, til he's taken off the air like that tv show
Cool
this nigga act real tuff til the laser beam tests his grit
cuz when i put you under the scope, we'll see how fake gem is
Nahh

I ain’t got to fight to break you down to the physics guy
Cuz if you ain’t lacking multiplets… you just dishing lies
Nahh
Yo, you couldn’t walk in my timbs’ that’s a death sentence
Cuz when Me & Thoracic it’s just me stomping his chest in
Nahh man I dig but doesn't work imo
No viagra prescription can fix this kid's limp impotent dick
While he was w/Plazma, I was running a clinic on his chick
Lol cool
My torpedoes been too deep though, could cap this kid
with one shot but four move ahead like battleships
Aight kinda simple with the wording
Kill ya fam and let you know, make a verse and flow it
And drop plet w grown men line like he had to id the culprit
Don't even get this

Pleth was a lil better

[R!canTheoryz]

R!can beat u last week, but this time ima open hand u with grace
couldn't handle Theoryz.. so what about when reality smacks u in the face

Va
Clinic on the chick bar


Overall vote - Plethora had a harsher verse heee overall good battle guys