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Thread: Wk 12:Jem(3-7) Vs Revelation 18:3(0-1) - Jem wins

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    Wk 12:Jem(3-7) Vs Revelation 18:3(0-1) - Jem wins



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    @JEM. @Revelation 18:3
    Last edited by Barcotic; November 19th, 2018 at 07:06 PM

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    Re: Wk 12:Jem(3-7) Vs Revelation 18:3(0-1)

    Czech
    The end of a Revelation.... But a Clever Word always illustrated.

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    Re: Wk 12:Jem(3-7) Vs Revelation 18:3(0-1)

    two.

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    Re: Wk 12:Jem(3-7) Vs Revelation 18:3(0-1)

    The gunplay is da Bid, ima auction off this kid,
    Every shot I pop, his Top smoking like manhole Lids..

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    The end of a Revelation.... But a Clever Word always illustrated.

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    Re: Wk 12:Jem(3-7) Vs Revelation 18:3(0-1)

    You’re such a punk that even drunk you wouldn’t bother hit me
    Taking shots, not from Rev… his barrels are empty like Connors Whiskey

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    Re: Wk 12:Jem(3-7) Vs Revelation 18:3(0-1)

    The gunplay is da Bid, ima auction off this kid,
    Every shot I pop, his Top smoking like manhole Lids..
    ( your set up and punch have nothing to do with another... the punch is overdone, not creative and relates to him in no way shape or form)
    cant win with laziness bro...


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    You’re such a punk that even drunk you wouldn’t bother hit me
    Taking shots, not from Rev… his barrels are empty like Connors Whiskey
    *sighs*



    well, Jem wins just because Rev used an overused, uncreative approach...


    V- Jem

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    Re: Wk 12:Jem(3-7) Vs Revelation 18:3(0-1) - VOTE NOW

    I liked Jems concept more. Alil more fresh. Revs was worded well but I wasn't feeling his bar.

    V. Jem

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    Re: Wk 12:Jem(3-7) Vs Revelation 18:3(0-1) - VOTE NOW

    Vote jem.

    Rev- this whole concept is played overall.
    "Give this Manholes in his head" etc.

    Jem- also played conceptually. But its a relevant reference tho. I also wish u'd've started ur punchline wit "if im taking shots" just for the sake of wording
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    Re: Wk 12:Jem(3-7) Vs Revelation 18:3(0-1) - VOTE NOW

    Vote - Jem

    Revelation had a pretty basic concept...with nothing special about the execution or flow of it. Just kind of underwhelmining. Jem's was atleast a decent jab, founded on a less cliche concept. More sting. Fresher flip.

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    Re: Wk 12:Jem(3-7) Vs Revelation 18:3(0-1) - VOTE NOW

    rev i think you kept this punch too basic. you could have done a lot more with it. iwasnt a fan of Jims writing but all inall his punch had a better connection and concept as well as more complexity.

    v/jim

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    Re: Wk 12:Jem(3-7) Vs Revelation 18:3(0-1) - VOTE NOW

    @JEM. wins 5-0

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