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    AJ The Menace Echelon's Avatar
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    death ghost

    shrine messiah, worship myself in cleanliness and solitude, solemn mood
    solemn food, fast for a fortnight, fast for forty days and forty nights
    fast for forty days and forty nights, storm the night
    storm a tide, forming tides with synchronicity breast strokes
    I chime the best notes, zest code, vexed mode
    jest cold, best boast, breath soul, death ghost
    death ghost of dohm, wrote shine on psalms
    read disciples palms, they're needed for greatness
    seeds of girth, seeds of earth, bow down to the shore
    bow to the shore, where you watch the beach and high tides
    I ride the high tides with whatever fate I have
    for I have hope in faith, and faith in hope
    breathless soul, zest of soul, sin of ghost
    seer and ghost, kin of souls
    heartless in control, starless with a soul
    solstice will be rose, as I see the darkness in my sol

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    Re: death ghost

    I like it because for the new age style the rhyme scheme actually makes sense and not just a bunch of words that rhyme... I like the off beats - Also just a heads up but every time you post you are supposed to provide 2 feedbacks on the board and post those links. I get in trouble for that a lot.
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