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    Fallcano Rnd 1: Sinning Vs Jit - VOTE NOW

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Sinning Vs Jit

    Revolution, influenced battle verse....

    Alex the cat, Jit ee; my emotions will have you move in a flash; my hell's flame is naughtying your flesh
    My loyalty to the devil, will rock you to death; this is easy for a psychic eye; I'll have 'Jit lee beat in a flash'; when I chop you to death!
    I'm a raptor *RAWR*, pretend to to be faggot! We couldn't be a match made in Heaven; if you ascended from pastures!
    My christ palm is ending the rapture! You're green with environs, 'Bruce Banner, you'll never be Legit', if you entered the dragon!
    I aescended naturally! Remember casualty; defend your amnesty; as I pretend to asthma breathe!
    Ascend from lavishly, for heaven's sake; I'll bring you hell, 'the devil will jit,sin, like a angel denying the Jetson family'!
    My flow is narrow, my points make holes in sparrows; i'm a devil that fold the pharaoh
    Sold to air flows, controlling peril; You're a beach bum; I'll bury you beneath the sands of time, your 'flow couldn't be on point for shore'; shooting a bow and arrow!
    Your feral will collapse, my peril is a rap; my bow and arrow is exact; this fairy is with rap!
    You fairly are no match, I'll 'milk you like dairy in a glass', this 'beautiful siren's song will bring you death'; you can't hear a Aerial attack!

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    We couldn't compare bars, this bitch quick to drop slick shit?
    Nah bruh, ya shit is more stretched out than shawty legs in Kid Sick's pics
    Ur lines hitting like bullets from sum Black Ops? Nah ur just a fag, stop
    Shit... As soon as I 'Met a Sin' I needed all types of benzos to forget ya whack drops
    Pick ya choice, Baretta or the Wesson I put heat to this gay bitch
    I'm puttin more straps to this pussy than lesbians using fake dicks
    And talking bout chicks? Never fam, ur lonely & duckin bad hoes
    U don't come home to a miss-sin, talk shit one more time and youll be that though
    Im off cognac non-stop, I'll eat ur punches - Im like a cannibal w/ the arms
    I'm known to sip 'mad hen', closest you been to that is chasing animals at the farm

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Sinning Vs Jit

    Quote Originally Posted by Jit View Post
    We couldn't compare bars, this bitch quick to drop slick shit?
    Nah bruh, ya shit is more stretched out than shawty legs in Kid Sick's pics
    The most timely bar I've ever read. This is some two hour shit.
    Ur lines hitting like bullets from sum Black Ops? Nah ur just a fag, stop
    Shit... As soon as I 'Met a Sin' I needed all types of benzos to forget ya whack drops
    Barcotic will hate it but it's fun. I dig it
    Pick ya choice, Baretta or the Wesson I put heat to this gay bitch
    I'm puttin more straps to this pussy than lesbians using fake dicks
    I didn't love this. Wasn't personal or really clever.
    And talking bout chicks? Never fam, ur lonely & duckin bad hoes
    U don't come home to a miss-sin, talk shit one more time and youll be that though
    Ehhhhhhh FWIW i think duckin a hoe is a sick multi so i'm swiping that. I liked the WP but didn't like the wording of execution
    Im off cognac non-stop, I'll eat ur punches - Im like a cannibal w/ the arms
    I'm known to sip 'mad hen', closest you been to that is chasing animals at the farm
    So I liked the idea, but I thought the execution is weak. Could have been worded better
    So obviously this is a Jit vote. My other guy was ranting about milking Jit.

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Sinning Vs Jit - VOTE NOW

    @High And Drunk
    Can you explain your vote a bit more please?

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Sinning Vs Jit - VOTE NOW

    Sinning: Man this shit is not a topical or poetry fam. Its a text battle. Being really long winded and descriptive will get you no where here. Attack, insult or diss your opponent. None of your bars do that. Shorten your bars up and get to point. You need to read around and make some adjustments bro.

    Jit: Opener was ok. Relevant. Medicine could have been better, as is it was ok. Lesbian/Strap angle alil dated bro. Missin could have been executed alil better. Not feeling the closer.

    Not a bad drop Jit. Try different ways of executing ur ideas on paper and pick the one that hurts the most. You did enough to take this.

    v. Jit

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Sinning Vs Jit - VOTE NOW

    Quote Originally Posted by Kill Spree View Post
    @High And Drunk
    Can you explain your vote a bit more please?
    Alex the cat, Jit ee; my emotions will have you move in a flash; my hell's flame is naughtying your flesh
    My loyalty to the devil, will rock you to death; this is easy for a psychic eye; I'll have 'Jit lee beat in a flash'; when I chop you to death!
    You seem, I'm not sure who Alex the cat is. Also, I don't think Jit has an E on the end of his name. Also, naughtifying the flesh does not rhyme with chop you to death. Also, I'm not sure what your loyalty to the devil has to do, here. Also I don't care about your psychic eye. Also..
    I'm a raptor *RAWR*, pretend to to be faggot! We couldn't be a match made in Heaven; if you ascended from pastures!
    My christ palm is ending the rapture! You're green with environs, 'Bruce Banner, you'll never be Legit', if you entered the dragon!
    He is a goddamn raptor, boys. You better watch out.
    I aescended naturally! Remember casualty; defend your amnesty; as I pretend to asthma breathe!
    Ascend from lavishly, for heaven's sake; I'll bring you hell, 'the devil will jit,sin, like a angel denying the Jetson family'!
    So... dead man, defend your official pardon, as I pretend to wheeze. Rise up from the state of being overindulgent/// I'm lost
    My flow is narrow, my points make holes in sparrows; i'm a devil that fold the pharaoh
    Sold to air flows, controlling peril; You're a beach bum; I'll bury you beneath the sands of time, your 'flow couldn't be on point for shore'; shooting a bow and arrow!
    This is literally open mic rn
    Your feral will collapse, my peril is a rap; my bow and arrow is exact; this fairy is with rap!
    You fairly are no match, I'll 'milk you like dairy in a glass', this 'beautiful siren's song will bring you death'; you can't hear a Aerial attack!
    I do agree with one thing, this fairy is definitely with rap

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Sinning Vs Jit - VOTE NOW

    Revolution, influenced battle verse....

    Alex the cat, Jit ee; my emotions will have you move in a flash; my hell's flame is naughtying your flesh
    My loyalty to the devil, will rock you to death; this is easy for a psychic eye; I'll have 'Jit lee beat in a flash'; when I chop you to death!
    i dont see a punch here. you rhymed death and flash several times in this bar(?). i think this is more of a freestyle than and actual battle bar.

    I'm a raptor *RAWR*, pretend to to be faggot! We couldn't be a match made in Heaven; if you ascended from pastures!
    My christ palm is ending the rapture! You're green with environs, 'Bruce Banner, you'll never be Legit', if you entered the dragon!
    bruce banner aka the hulk was never in the movie "enter the dragon" unless you meant bruce's banner? there are a lot of topics in this bar

    I aescended naturally! Remember casualty; defend your amnesty; as I pretend to asthma breathe!
    Ascend from lavishly, for heaven's sake; I'll bring you hell, 'the devil will jit,sin, like a angel denying the Jetson family'!
    no
    My flow is narrow, my points make holes in sparrows; i'm a devil that fold the pharaoh
    Sold to air flows, controlling peril; You're a beach bum; I'll bury you beneath the sands of time, your 'flow couldn't be on point for shore'; shooting a bow and arrow!
    this was the closest to a punch i found so far
    Your feral will collapse, my peril is a rap; my bow and arrow is exact; this fairy is with rap!
    You fairly are no match, I'll 'milk you like dairy in a glass', this 'beautiful siren's song will bring you death'; you can't hear a Aerial attack!

    ok your multi syllable rhyming is good. i cant complain there. you must write some pretty dope OM's. with that said i cant let it skate that you lacked punches on most of your bars. im not against long bars at all but they need to come to a punch and be coherent. i didnt see either from you in this verse. work on your structure and staying on topic/bringing your topics together.



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    We couldn't compare bars, this bitch quick to drop slick shit?
    Nah bruh, ya shit is more stretched out than shawty legs in Kid Sick's pics
    i cant see his pic... i still liked this bar tho.
    Ur lines hitting like bullets from sum Black Ops? Nah ur just a fag, stop
    Shit... As soon as I 'Met a Sin' I needed all types of benzos to forget ya whack drops
    this is a decent lil reach here.
    Pick ya choice, Baretta or the Wesson I put heat to this gay bitch
    I'm puttin more straps to this pussy than lesbians using fake dicks
    nah bruh. this is a played topic you need a fresh angle to use it
    And talking bout chicks? Never fam, ur lonely & duckin bad hoes
    U don't come home to a miss-sin, talk shit one more time and youll be that though
    this was ok
    Im off cognac non-stop, I'll eat ur punches - Im like a cannibal w/ the arms
    I'm known to sip 'mad hen', closest you been to that is chasing animals at the farm
    not feeling this closer

    ok verse all in all here. imo this isnt jit going all in i definitely feel like you took it light.

    v/Jit
    Jit had a more complete verse in this battle i didnt even have to go into scoring as i would normally do. mostly because i dont want to be an ass to Sinning.

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Sinning Vs Jit - VOTE NOW

    Jit got this because he actually executed a battle verse, and a few of those punches hit. I like the first third and last bar.. those are pretty decent. Sin.. Idk what that was about, so im not going to say much other than it wasn't for this battle. The flow in there at times is pretty cool, and rhyme scheme not bad either. Vote Jit for executing.

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Sinning Vs Jit - VOTE NOW

    Alex the cat, Jit ee; my emotions will have you move in a flash; my hell's flame is naughtying your flesh
    My loyalty to the devil, will rock you to death; this is easy for a psychic eye; I'll have 'Jit lee beat in a flash'; when I chop you to death!
    man this ain’t no fuckin topical battle
    I'm a raptor *RAWR*, pretend to to be faggot! We couldn't be a match made in Heaven; if you ascended from pastures!
    My christ palm is ending the rapture! You're green with environs, 'Bruce Banner, you'll never be Legit', if you entered the dragon!
    is this dagel trolling?
    I aescended naturally! Remember casualty; defend your amnesty; as I pretend to asthma breathe!
    Ascend from lavishly, for heaven's sake; I'll bring you hell, 'the devil will jit,sin, like a angel denying the Jetson family'!
    cool mults. Not a topical battle.
    My flow is narrow, my points make holes in sparrows; i'm a devil that fold the pharaoh
    Sold to air flows, controlling peril; You're a beach bum; I'll bury you beneath the sands of time, your 'flow couldn't be on point for shore'; shooting a bow and arrow!
    Your feral will collapse, my peril is a rap; my bow and arrow is exact; this fairy is with rap!
    You fairly are no match, I'll 'milk you like dairy in a glass', this 'beautiful siren's song will bring you death'; you can't hear a Aerial attack!
    all no


    Idk why you wasted my time with this shit


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    We couldn't compare bars, this bitch quick to drop slick shit?
    Nah bruh, ya shit is more stretched out than shawty legs in Kid Sick's pics
    ok
    Ur lines hitting like bullets from sum Black Ops? Nah ur just a fag, stop
    Shit... As soon as I 'Met a Sin' I needed all types of benzos to forget ya whack drops
    nah played
    Pick ya choice, Baretta or the Wesson I put heat to this gay bitch
    I'm puttin more straps to this pussy than lesbians using fake dicks
    cool
    And talking bout chicks? Never fam, ur lonely & duckin bad hoes
    U don't come home to a miss-sin, talk shit one more time and youll be that though
    had potential but ended bad
    Im off cognac non-stop, I'll eat ur punches - Im like a cannibal w/ the arms
    I'm known to sip 'mad hen', closest you been to that is chasing animals at the farm
    lol foh w this


    Completely one sided. Vote Jit


    Btw @Jit please change your name back to John Dillinger or something else because Jit is terrible

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Sinning Vs Jit - VOTE NOW

    Alex the cat, Jit ee; my emotions will have you move in a flash; my hell's flame is naughtying your flesh
    My loyalty to the devil, will rock you to death; this is easy for a psychic eye; I'll have 'Jit lee beat in a flash'; when I chop you to death!
    ^Poorly set up as well as delivered
    I'm a raptor *RAWR*, pretend to to be faggot! We couldn't be a match made in Heaven; if you ascended from pastures!
    My christ palm is ending the rapture! You're green with environs, 'Bruce Banner, you'll never be Legit', if you entered the dragon!
    I aescended naturally! Remember casualty; defend your amnesty; as I pretend to asthma breathe!
    ^the rawr distracts from the set up, and the punch didn't gather a sting or even pertain to the setup
    Ascend from lavishly, for heaven's sake; I'll bring you hell, 'the devil will jit,sin, like a angel denying the Jetson family'!
    My flow is narrow, my points make holes in sparrows; i'm a devil that fold the pharaoh
    Sold to air flows, controlling peril; You're a beach bum; I'll bury you beneath the sands of time, your 'flow couldn't be on point for shore'; shooting a bow and arrow!
    ^I like the finish here, but the setup and structure is lacking throughout the verse.
    Your feral will collapse, my peril is a rap; my bow and arrow is exact; this fairy is with rap!
    You fairly are no match, I'll 'milk you like dairy in a glass', this 'beautiful siren's song will bring you death'; you can't hear a Aerial attack!
    ^This was a decent attempt at a formulated setup and punch but the wording is waayyy stretched and destroys the sting.

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    We couldn't compare bars, this bitch quick to drop slick shit?
    Nah bruh, ya shit is more stretched out than shawty legs in Kid Sick's pics
    ^Nah poor setup, lead to a sub-par punch(he removed it too I think)
    Ur lines hitting like bullets from sum Black Ops? Nah ur just a fag, stop
    Shit... As soon as I 'Met a Sin' I needed all types of benzos to forget ya whack drops
    ^Good concept, wording is forced but good bar minus the setup which flowed well but didn't pertain.
    Pick ya choice, Baretta or the Wesson I put heat to this gay bitch
    I'm puttin more straps to this pussy than lesbians using fake dicks
    ^Pretty good one here, setup was nicely implemented yo heighten the punch's impact,
    And talking bout chicks? Never fam, ur lonely & duckin bad hoes
    U don't come home to a miss-sin, talk shit one more time and youll be that though
    ^this was alright
    Im off cognac non-stop, I'll eat ur punches - Im like a cannibal w/ the arms
    I'm known to sip 'mad hen', closest you been to that is chasing animals at the farm
    ^Nah, poor closer.

    So yea this was a very one sided battle in terms of style, delivery and sting. Sinning did't deliver a well formulated verse and the hits he nearly had were deterred by poor structure and wording, Jit delivered good concepts throughout and mainly missed with mstakes in setups that took from the punch or didn't add the heat. Still, plenty to take it here, 3 bars to maybe 1.


    V/Jit


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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Sinning Vs Jit - VOTE NOW

    Jit:
    Opener- decent attempt at a relevant RB concept here
    Met a sin- this is played because there was a guy w this exact same name. But still not a bad bar overall
    Straps- played. Plus u didnt really add anything original to it
    Miss- this was a good idea but you had a weak/lazy execution on it.
    Closer- trash

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Sinning Vs Jit - VOTE NOW

    Quote Originally Posted by Sinning View Post
    Revolution, influenced battle verse....

    Alex the cat, Jit ee; my emotions will have you move in a flash; my hell's flame is naughtying your flesh
    My loyalty to the devil, will rock you to death; this is easy for a psychic eye; I'll have 'Jit lee beat in a flash'; when I chop you to death!
    Alex the cat? Your loyalty to the the devil? Jit LEE? This was basura, Andrew.
    I'm a raptor *RAWR*, pretend to to be faggot! We couldn't be a match made in Heaven; if you ascended from pastures!
    My christ palm is ending the rapture! You're green with environs, 'Bruce Banner, you'll never be Legit', if you entered the dragon!
    I swear you are a trip. Rawr? Ascended from pastures? Your Christ palm, eh? Bruce banner...enter the dragon. What's your dealers number?
    I aescended naturally! Remember casualty; defend your amnesty; as I pretend to asthma breathe!
    Ascend from lavishly, for heaven's sake; I'll bring you hell, 'the devil will jit,sin, like a angel denying the Jetson family'!
    As you pretend to asthma breath? You going to hyperventilate? The fuck? Jetson was horribly forced.
    My flow is narrow, my points make holes in sparrows; i'm a devil that fold the pharaoh
    Sold to air flows, controlling peril; You're a beach bum; I'll bury you beneath the sands of time, your 'flow couldn't be on point for shore'; shooting a bow and arrow!
    Yeah...this was just more whimsical fantasy themed multies with no real punch.
    Your feral will collapse, my peril is a rap; my bow and arrow is exact; this fairy is with rap!
    You fairly are no match, I'll 'milk you like dairy in a glass', this 'beautiful siren's song will bring you death'; you can't hear a Aerial attack!
    Yeah...no. This makes me sad. You used to be a talented writer. I hope you overcome your mental illness.
    Quote Originally Posted by Jit View Post
    We couldn't compare bars, this bitch quick to drop slick shit?
    Nah bruh, ya shit is more stretched out than shawty legs in Kid Sick's pics
    Decent jab at his bars.
    Ur lines hitting like bullets from sum Black Ops? Nah ur just a fag, stop
    Shit... As soon as I 'Met a Sin' I needed all types of benzos to forget ya whack drops
    Seen meta sin concepts before, but this was kind of funny.
    Pick ya choice, Baretta or the Wesson I put heat to this gay bitch
    I'm puttin more straps to this pussy than lesbians using fake dicks
    Pretty played angle, but executed clean enough to land as a jab.
    And talking bout chicks? Never fam, ur lonely & duckin bad hoes
    U don't come home to a miss-sin, talk shit one more time and youll be that though
    This was a cool little nameflip. Another quick jab.
    Im off cognac non-stop, I'll eat ur punches - Im like a cannibal w/ the arms
    I'm known to sip 'mad hen', closest you been to that is chasing animals at the farm
    [B]This was okay. More absurd than effective, but it's funny for that reason.
    Going to skip the head to head bar comparison. Jit mopped the floor with Andrew from start to finish. Jit consistently attacked, and had jabs throughout his verse. Andrew pretty much just had fantasy-realm-themed multies and some horrid attempts at nameflips. #jitlee . But yeah, Jit takes this easy with a solid verse.

    Vote - Jit

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