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    Fallcano Rnd 1:Sobe Vs MV - Open For Feed

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1:Sobe Vs MV

    check

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1:Sobe Vs MV

    check
    She said I could sleep on the couch
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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1:Sobe Vs MV

    we returning to the grind, same position but thats were the similarities stop
    i got back up, face down writin to top Pleth...ur facedown, backup tryna give pleth top
    bout to put'em on the spot, disrespectful as fuck but this's my way
    if i drop first and disobey, from that point these niggas aint gonna listen to shit you say
    been waiting for a body to put on display, and bomb chose this prick
    asked him for a sacrificial lamb, he said "Have your way" now here we are so be it
    i shoulder shit then reload the clip, in the front seat they'll find you slumped
    be in the newspaper faster than joeboston researching a battle for 1-2 punch
    im leaving him skunked, everyday of the month ya bae's face can get humped
    sucking until her jaws connoisseur...but she cant get enough of the taste of my cum

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1:Sobe Vs MV

    MV wins Open for feed

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1:Sobe Vs MV - Open For Feed

    we returning to the grind, same position but thats were the similarities stop
    i got back up, face down writin to top Pleth...ur facedown, backup tryna give pleth top
    -decent opener here. concept was good: yall on the same level, but not the same. i dig it

    bout to put'em on the spot, disrespectful as fuck but this's my way
    if i drop first and disobey, from that point these niggas aint gonna listen to shit you say
    -this is nice. idk if its pronounced so-bee or so bay. As is, this works

    been waiting for a body to put on display, and bomb chose this prick
    asked him for a sacrificial lamb, he said "Have your way" now here we are so be it
    -not feeling how u executed this idea.

    i shoulder shit then reload the clip, in the front seat they'll find you slumped
    be in the newspaper faster than joeboston researching a battle for 1-2 punch
    -this was wack imo.

    im leaving him skunked, everyday of the month ya bae's face can get humped
    sucking until her jaws connoisseur...but she cant get enough of the taste of my cum
    -good concept. But the wp is forced. This a no for me



    overall. good drop. just tweak those executions a bit
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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1:Sobe Vs MV - Open For Feed

    didnt like the opener, disobey could have been much more dis sobe bay was what i thought u were going for, lamb line was a filler, nothin special about the JB line, completely didnt like the closer.

    Try to be more concise. less is more.

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1:Sobe Vs MV

    Quote Originally Posted by MV View Post
    we returning to the grind, same position but thats were the similarities stop
    i got back up, face down writin to top Pleth...ur facedown, backup tryna give pleth top
    Funny
    bout to put'em on the spot, disrespectful as fuck but this's my way
    if i drop first and disobey, from that point these niggas aint gonna listen to shit you say
    Fire
    been waiting for a body to put on display, and bomb chose this prick
    asked him for a sacrificial lamb, he said "Have your way" now here we are so be it
    EH nah
    i shoulder shit then reload the clip, in the front seat they'll find you slumped
    be in the newspaper faster than joeboston researching a battle for 1-2 punch
    Lolol I dig
    im leaving him skunked, everyday of the month ya bae's face can get humped
    sucking until her jaws connoisseur...but she cant get enough of the taste of my cum
    Don't really get lol

    Disobey and Boston were fire imo

    Good drop homie

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1:Sobe Vs MV

    Quote Originally Posted by MV View Post
    we returning to the grind, same position but thats were the similarities stop
    i got back up, face down writin to top Pleth...ur facedown, backup tryna give pleth top
    This was low key dope. I like this.
    bout to put'em on the spot, disrespectful as fuck but this's my way
    if i drop first and disobey, from that point these niggas aint gonna listen to shit you say
    This was okay. Disobey struck me as a bit forced as I would assume A one is pronounced like so be.
    been waiting for a body to put on display, and bomb chose this prick
    asked him for a sacrificial lamb, he said "Have your way" now here we are so be it
    This was okay. The so be it part feel underplayed, and could have been set up better. Still lands though.
    i shoulder shit then reload the clip, in the front seat they'll find you slumped
    be in the newspaper faster than joeboston researching a battle for 1-2 punch
    This was nice. And true af. Good shit.
    im leaving him skunked, everyday of the month ya bae's face can get humped
    sucking until her jaws connoisseur...but she cant get enough of the taste of my cum
    Wordplay missed. Connoisseur is pronounced con uh sewer. Doesn't really work phonetically with what I believe you were going for, "kind of sore". But I can appreciate the creativity
    ALL in all, a pretty solid verse. Some of the wordplay wasn't as concise as I like, but every bar had elements I liked. The opener and newspaper flip were fuego. Good shit.

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1:Sobe Vs MV - Open For Feed

    In my favor or not I appreciate the feedback fellas. Thanks and good luck in all of your battles

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