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    Fallcano Rnd 1: Networth Vs Bahriman - Open For Votes

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Networth Vs Bahriman

    Going 10

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Networth Vs Bahriman

    Check

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Networth Vs Bahriman

    @Bahriman
    Verse due tonight

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Networth Vs Bahriman

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Networth Vs Bahriman

    Bet, get that verse up by tonight tho @Bahriman , I been done for Four days, I should rewrite on ya ass, but it's whatever.


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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Networth Vs Bahriman

    Bahr Vs Networth



    Your girl all on my shlong. False move & this kid dead
    Fuck her in see threw lingerie, after dumping your body w/the Fish,Net
    Teach’em a lesson w/murder how I’m wording schemes
    Put the tech to his brain till ppl asking where WentWorth & you don’t go to that University
    Rugers shoot till your Red, Dead, & awfully torn, ripped
    Put the Heat behind this Cowboy than the cover w/Arthur Morgan
    Gotta blade that’ll shave ya throat, tone out this obnoxious dweeb
    Find the fuck boy w/a Cut Neck & not like the Convict Meme
    Broke bullied you off the site, some would say it was not fair
    I’ll take the Dot off your back, soon as you drop dead out of my cross hairs
    B

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Networth Vs Bahriman

    That was a dope ass drop real talk, good luck


    Don't jest or move like you strapped for battle tryna sell a hoax
    Ever tallied votes that said Bahr came wit equipment.... he was tellin jokes!
    Poser do not approach me I'd chop you in half wit this hacksaw
    In other words, w/ fake acts I take the front n end up forcin they back off!
    I'd smack dawg, then wind up in jail for beatin these bitches up
    Everytime Bahr hits an old punch...... he'll get tried for throwin his fisticuffs!
    Listen bruh, if u were on the the rise you're gonna descend here
    So anyone that see's you wail on your way, recognizes u're at the end tier!
    It's been clear, Net posted on site 4 so long I'll prolly get pension
    U outranked by tenure, on the hunt for 'good jobs' but wont get mentioned!




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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Networth Vs Bahriman - Open For Votes

    Bah:
    Opener- pretty solid. Off to a good start.
    Wentworth- fire concept. Solid nameplay. Wording a bit jumbled here but good shit.
    Red dead- meh this was technically good. But i didnt like it
    Convict meme- coulda made this fire tbh. Good angle. But as is, im not crazy about it
    Closer- fire

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    Networth:
    Opener- nah i didnt like this.
    Fake act- this was a good concept. But i this it coulda been a bit more harsh.
    Fisticuffs- nah. This is a miss.
    End tier- decent idea. But if ur gpung for end here/ end tier thst dont really work.
    Closer- again decent idea but u coulda done more w this.


    Good battle guy.
    Vote Bahriman. Just a better overall read imo
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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Networth Vs Bahriman - Open For Votes

    Bar 1 - Bah
    Bar 2 - Neither
    Bar 3 - Bah
    Bar 4 - Bah
    Bar 5 - Bah

    v. Bahriman...Better concepts. Wasnt feeling Nets execution. Plus Bahs closer was lotb

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Networth Vs Bahriman - Open For Votes

    Bahriman
    Your girl all on my shlong. False move & this kid dead
    Fuck her in see threw lingerie, after dumping your body w/the Fish,Net
    5/5 i liked this here
    Teach’em a lesson w/murder how I’m wording schemes
    Put the tech to his brain till ppl asking where WentWorth & you don’t go to that University
    dope 4/5
    Rugers shoot till your Red, Dead, & awfully torn, ripped
    Put the Heat behind this Cowboy than the cover w/Arthur Morgan
    not feeling this one 1/5
    Gotta blade that’ll shave ya throat, tone out this obnoxious dweeb
    Find the fuck boy w/a Cut Neck & not like the Convict Meme
    2/5 wasnt really feeling this one
    Broke bullied you off the site, some would say it was not fair
    I’ll take the Dot off your back, soon as you drop dead out of my cross hairs
    good closer 4/5
    16/25



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    Net
    Don't jest or move like you strapped for battle tryna sell a hoax
    Ever tallied votes that said Bahr came wit equipment.... he was tellin jokes!
    i didnt like this one 1/5
    Poser do not approach me I'd chop you in half wit this hacksaw
    In other words, w/ fake acts I take the front n end up forcin they back off!
    ok this was good. 3/5
    I'd smack dawg, then wind up in jail for beatin these bitches up
    Everytime Bahr hits an old punch...... he'll get tried for throwin his fisticuffs!
    reaching here this is one of the bars you have to actually say out loud to make it work. 3/5
    Listen bruh, if u were on the the rise you're gonna descend here
    So anyone that see's you wail on your way, recognizes u're at the end tier!
    damn i wish the wording was a bit more crisp on this one. 2/5
    It's been clear, Net posted on site 4 so long I'll prolly get pension
    U outranked by tenure, on the hunt for 'good jobs' but wont get mentioned!
    this was an ok diss 2/5.
    11/15

    v/Bahriman
    overall bahriman had a stronger verse Net had some dope concept that seemed to have wording issues.

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Networth Vs Bahriman - Open For Votes

    Quote Originally Posted by Bahriman View Post
    Bahr Vs Networth



    Your girl all on my shlong. False move & this kid dead
    Fuck her in see threw lingerie, after dumping your body w/the Fish,Net
    This was a pretty dope name flip to open. I like the angle.
    Teach’em a lesson w/murder how I’m wording schemes
    Put the tech to his brain till ppl asking where WentWorth & you don’t go to that University
    Ain't gonna lie this one missed for me. The entire second line is overly verbose. Also "people ask where WentWorth" struck me as super weird wording.
    Rugers shoot till your Red, Dead, & awfully torn, ripped
    Put the Heat behind this Cowboy than the cover w/Arthur Morgan
    Pretty Solid jab. The wording paints both pictures nicely.
    Gotta blade that’ll shave ya throat, tone out this obnoxious dweeb
    Find the fuck boy w/a Cut Neck & not like the Convict Meme
    Lol. Figured that guy would stick his neck into battle rap eventually. It was a cool light jab.
    Broke bullied you off the site, some would say it was not fair
    I’ll take the Dot off your back, soon as you drop dead out of my cross hairs
    This was alright. Closing on a personal note.
    B
    Quote Originally Posted by Networth View Post
    That was a dope ass drop real talk, good luck


    Don't jest or move like you strapped for battle tryna sell a hoax
    Ever tallied votes that said Bahr came wit equipment.... he was tellin jokes!
    This was pretty underwhelming. Outside of the looseword association between jest/hoax/jokes, you really did nothing to attack here.
    Poser do not approach me I'd chop you in half wit this hacksaw
    In other words, w/ fake acts I take the front n end up forcin they back off!
    This was pretty cool. Flowed really well and had some solid imagery.
    I'd smack dawg, then wind up in jail for beatin these bitches up
    Everytime Bahr hits an old punch...... he'll get tried for throwin his fisticuffs!
    Yeah...This was wierd. You should probally never use the term fisticuffs in a battle again.
    Listen bruh, if u were on the the rise you're gonna descend here
    So anyone that see's you wail on your way, recognizes u're at the end tier!
    Okay light jab.
    It's been clear, Net posted on site 4 so long I'll prolly get pension
    U outranked by tenure, on the hunt for 'good jobs' but wont get mentioned!
    This was ineffective as a diss. Just self hype.

    Bar 1- Bahr 10/8.
    Bar 2- Net 10/8
    Bar 3- Bahr 10/8
    Bar 4- Bahr 10/9
    Bar 5- Bahr 10/8

    Total - Bahr 48, Net 43.

    This was an okay battle. But Bahriman was a LOT more consistent with only one miss. He did a good job attacking in every bar. Net has some cool concepts, but really needs to be more direct and agressive. You got to try to rip your opponents head off, man.

    Vote Bahr

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    Re: Fallcano Rnd 1: Networth Vs Bahriman - Open For Votes

    Bahr wins

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