WK13 CONT. MATCH: GrimmReaperZ (2-1) vs Plaz (3-2) - Plaz Wins

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@GrimmReaperZ @Plaz

[GrimmReaperZ]

Check

[Plaz]

hey Grimm!
check.

[Plaz]

welp, this is all i could muster this week :3
gl Grimm!

u asked for this, now retire or die...matter fact if you could do BOTH.. the better
..by ya own hands ya heads in a box, NOW your preMadonna ass can vogue forever

respectfully,
that cringe wordplay makes me think you on some type a narcotic, sir
cant tell if that's the most poor or perfect impression of a barcotic verse (POW!)
put the heat on this imitator like a grills cooking him..
but even if he decides not to be himself - his future is still looking Grimm
you looking outta place, yet noone cares, in fact..
call this the bonus stage, cuz there's levels to this and you don't know where ur at
it takes balls to be a champ so you'll never have the throne
send shots to remove his gull bladder since he already lacks the stones
we dont care about what you've done, so stop it G
we could 'trade war' stories - but all you'd do is bitch about Trumps economy

[GrimmReaperZ]

Plaz vs High & Drunk.... H&D wins 6-2....


lets rock...


Ever since H&D penned ya death, ya nostalgia left & aint never swing back through
I mean..that drunk text killed ya whole F'n buzz like "who'd I just send that to?????


I don't prepare for bums, just hit the blunt & write , and slay 'em bitch-style
Grimm's BEEN getting stoned & blazed for this craft way before them Salem witch trials



I've BEEN stressing, lames chase belts for net fame & views... and THATS YOU prob'lly
and im bench pressin, got my weight up with no help, ya'll aint have to SPOT me


i wouldn't forecast me losing to you, 'less its another case 'o me gettin robbed greatly
i mean, that'd be a foggy issue, and 'round here... we aint been seein SMOG lately...


thats a Dead shot and put a bullseye on the face of this flyweight "gangstaz"
and these Guns ready, lined em up in front of a target... they black Friday anxious!

[Phalanx]

welp, this is all i could muster this week :3
gl Grimm!



respectfully,
that cringe wordplay makes me think you on some type a narcotic, sir
cant tell if that's the most poor or perfect impression of a barcotic verse (POW!)
This was a cool jab.
put the heat on this imitator like a grills cooking him..
but even if he decides not to be himself - his future is still looking Grimm
Another decent jab with this nameplay.
you looking outta place, yet noone cares, in fact..
call this the bonus stage, cuz there's levels to this and you don't know where ur at
This was a okay jab. A light one, for sure.
it takes balls to be a champ so you'll never have the throne
send shots to remove his gull bladder since he already lacks the stones
This didn't do much for me. Seen sever gull bladder/kidney/lack the stones concepts.
we dont care about what you've done, so stop it G
we could 'trade war' stories - but all you'd do is bitch about Trumps economy
This was a pretty mild way to close this verse. This didn't do it for me.

Plaz vs High & Drunk.... H&D wins 6-2....


lets rock...


Ever since H&D penned ya death, ya nostalgia left & aint never swing back through
I mean..that drunk text killed ya whole F'n buzz like "who'd I just send that to?????
This was a solid personal jab. Comical approach.


I don't prepare for bums, just hit the blunt & write , and slay 'em bitch-style
Grimm's BEEN getting stoned & blazed for this craft way before them Salem witch trials
This was a pretty dope flip, but more self hype then an effective punch.



I've BEEN stressing, lames chase belts for net fame & views... and THATS YOU prob'lly
and im bench pressin, got my weight up with no help, ya'll aint have to SPOT me

Yeah. This was pretty much was wasted bar. No punch, and not really a good self hype flip. No bueno, amigo.

i wouldn't forecast me losing to you, 'less its another case 'o me gettin robbed greatly
i mean, that'd be a foggy issue, and 'round here... we aint been seein SMOG lately...
I like this. Certainly a timely punch. Good execution.


thats a Dead shot and put a bullseye on the face of this flyweight "gangstaz"
and these Guns ready, lined em up in front of a target... they black Friday anxious!
This was decent. Not the freshest idea. But concise wording keys it land as a jab.

Bar 1 - Grim. His personal stung a bit more.
Bar 2 - Plaz. I like Grins concept, but Plaz was a more effective attack.
Bar 3 - Plaz. Grim missed here, and Plaz's light jab edges it.
Bar 4- Grim. Smog concept was way more creative, and resonated better as a result.
Bar 5- Grim. Neither were great punches. But Grim's angle was the more effective punch.

This was pretty close. Plaz had some good shit early, but then ran out of gas in his last four lines. Grim almost cost himself with his second and third bars, but was able to edge him out 3-2.

Vote - Grim

[Ryno]

welp, this is all i could muster this week :3
gl Grimm!



respectfully,
that cringe wordplay makes me think you on some type a narcotic, sir
cant tell if that's the most poor or perfect impression of a barcotic verse (POW!)
kinda funny
put the heat on this imitator like a grills cooking him..
but even if he decides not to be himself - his future is still looking Grimm
coulda been worded better
you looking outta place, yet noone cares, in fact..
call this the bonus stage, cuz there's levels to this and you don't know where ur at
same as above
it takes balls to be a champ so you'll never have the throne
send shots to remove his gull bladder since he already lacks the stones
nah
we dont care about what you've done, so stop it G
we could 'trade war' stories - but all you'd do is bitch about Trumps economy
nah

Plaz vs High & Drunk.... H&D wins 6-2....


lets rock...


Ever since H&D penned ya death, ya nostalgia left & aint never swing back through
I mean..that drunk text killed ya whole F'n buzz like "who'd I just send that to?????
lol

I don't prepare for bums, just hit the blunt & write , and slay 'em bitch-style
Grimm's BEEN getting stoned & blazed for this craft way before them Salem witch trials
nah


I've BEEN stressing, lames chase belts for net fame & views... and THATS YOU prob'lly
and im bench pressin, got my weight up with no help, ya'll aint have to SPOT me

nah
i wouldn't forecast me losing to you, 'less its another case 'o me gettin robbed greatly
i mean, that'd be a foggy issue, and 'round here... we aint been seein SMOG lately...
eh

thats a Dead shot and put a bullseye on the face of this flyweight "gangstaz"
and these Guns ready, lined em up in front of a target... they black Friday anxious!
cool

v.Grimm...He delivered his ideas better in this one. If Plaz cleans up his wording he'd be pretty good.

[King]

that cringe wordplay makes me think you on some type a narcotic, sir
cant tell if that's the most poor or perfect impression of a barcotic verse (POW!)
not feeling
put the heat on this imitator like a grills cooking him..
but even if he decides not to be himself - his future is still looking Grimm
cool.
you looking outta place, yet noone cares, in fact..
call this the bonus stage, cuz there's levels to this and you don't know where ur at
too simple of a flip, not very harsh
it takes balls to be a champ so you'll never have the throne
send shots to remove his gull bladder since he already lacks the stones
decent
we dont care about what you've done, so stop it G
we could 'trade war' stories - but all you'd do is bitch about Trumps economy
cool idea, execution missed






Plaz vs High & Drunk.... H&D wins 6-2....



Ever since H&D penned ya death, ya nostalgia left & aint never swing back through
I mean..that drunk text killed ya whole F'n buzz like "who'd I just send that to?????
i like it

I don't prepare for bums, just hit the blunt & write , and slay 'em bitch-style
Grimm's BEEN getting stoned & blazed for this craft way before them Salem witch trials
cool idea, not feeling the execution


I've BEEN stressing, lames chase belts for net fame & views... and THATS YOU prob'lly
and im bench pressin, got my weight up with no help, ya'll aint have to SPOT me
nah. theres no diss here.

i wouldn't forecast me losing to you, 'less its another case 'o me gettin robbed greatly
i mean, that'd be a foggy issue, and 'round here... we aint been seein SMOG lately...
again no diss.

thats a Dead shot and put a bullseye on the face of this flyweight "gangstaz"
and these Guns ready, lined em up in front of a target... they black Friday anxious!
nah.


i liked grimms opener as the lotb, but plaz was much more direct. grimm stopped dissing towards the end which basically makes the lines filler. maybe he had writers block

vote Plazma

[Spree]

Lookin Grimm
Trade wars

Barcotic verse could have been much harsher imo


Vs


Opener and maybe foggy issue?


Got Plaz edging this since Grimm had two/three bars not even dissing.

V/plaz

[plethora]

respectfully,
that cringe wordplay makes me think you on some type a narcotic, sir
cant tell if that's the most poor or perfect impression of a barcotic verse (POW!)
^funny but super light. Close to a miss
put the heat on this imitator like a grills cooking him..
but even if he decides not to be himself - his future is still looking Grimm
^ok
you looking outta place, yet noone cares, in fact..
call this the bonus stage, cuz there's levels to this and you don't know where ur at
^nice metaphors but ima say it's a miss
it takes balls to be a champ so you'll never have the throne
send shots to remove his gull bladder since he already lacks the stones
^lol light tho
we dont care about what you've done, so stop it G
we could 'trade war' stories - but all you'd do is bitch about Trumps economy
^nah

Vs.

Ever since H&D penned ya death, ya nostalgia left & aint never swing back through
I mean..that drunk text killed ya whole F'n buzz like "who'd I just send that to?????
^seen a drunk text np/wp recently so that takes the sting away
I don't prepare for bums, just hit the blunt & write , and slay 'em bitch-style
Grimm's BEEN getting stoned & blazed for this craft way before them Salem witch trials
^self hype bar
I've BEEN stressing, lames chase belts for net fame & views... and THATS YOU prob'lly
and im bench pressin, got my weight up with no help, ya'll aint have to SPOT me
^another self hype bar
i wouldn't forecast me losing to you, 'less its another case 'o me gettin robbed greatly
i mean, that'd be a foggy issue, and 'round here... we aint been seein SMOG lately...
^nice metaphors but a miss. Similar way I judged one of plaz bars
thats a Dead shot and put a bullseye on the face of this flyweight "gangstaz"
and these Guns ready, lined em up in front of a target... they black Friday anxious!
^dope



V/Plaz

[King]

NEEDS VOTES

[JEM.]

that cringe wordplay makes me think you on some type a narcotic, sir
cant tell if that's the most poor or perfect impression of a barcotic verse (POW!)
Okay.

put the heat on this imitator like a grills cooking him..
but even if he decides not to be himself - his future is still looking Grimm
Not feeling, and feel like it would be an overdone concept?


you looking outta place, yet noone cares, in fact..
call this the bonus stage, cuz there's levels to this and you don't know where ur at
MMM… okay I guess? Not bad, but not a haymaker.

it takes balls to be a champ so you'll never have the throne
send shots to remove his gull bladder since he already lacks the stones
Okay.

we dont care about what you've done, so stop it G
we could 'trade war' stories - but all you'd do is bitch about Trumps economy
No.


Ever since H&D penned ya death, ya nostalgia left & aint never swing back through
I mean..that drunk text killed ya whole F'n buzz like "who'd I just send that to?????
lol. Nice.

I don't prepare for bums, just hit the blunt & write , and slay 'em bitch-style
Grimm's BEEN getting stoned & blazed for this craft way before them Salem witch trials
Okay.


I've BEEN stressing, lames chase belts for net fame & views... and THATS YOU prob'lly
and im bench pressin, got my weight up with no help, ya'll aint have to SPOT me
Eh.


i wouldn't forecast me losing to you, 'less its another case 'o me gettin robbed greatly
i mean, that'd be a foggy issue, and 'round here... we aint been seein SMOG lately...
lol. okay.

thats a Dead shot and put a bullseye on the face of this flyweight "gangstaz"
and these Guns ready, lined em up in front of a target... they black Friday anxious!
Okay.


I got Grimm quite easily here.

v/Grimm

[Spree]

3-3

[YG]

respectfully,
that cringe wordplay makes me think you on some type a narcotic, sir
cant tell if that's the most poor or perfect impression of a barcotic verse (POW!)
No. Barcotic w/ narcotic too? I cant give this one to u
put the heat on this imitator like a grills cooking him..
but even if he decides not to be himself - his future is still looking Grimm
Cool
you looking outta place, yet noone cares, in fact..
call this the bonus stage, cuz there's levels to this and you don't know where ur at
Cool
it takes balls to be a champ so you'll never have the throne
send shots to remove his gull bladder since he already lacks the stones
Not bad but not as good as your other bars imo
we dont care about what you've done, so stop it G
we could 'trade war' stories - but all you'd do is bitch about Trumps economy
Aight not too crazy about it but its ok

Plaz vs High & Drunk.... H&D wins 6-2....


lets rock...


Ever since H&D penned ya death, ya nostalgia left & aint never swing back through
I mean..that drunk text killed ya whole F'n buzz like "who'd I just send that to?????

I dig this

I don't prepare for bums, just hit the blunt & write , and slay 'em bitch-style
Grimm's BEEN getting stoned & blazed for this craft way before them Salem witch trials

This is dope but theres no punch that Im seeing. I like the bar though shits tough. Just not for a battle verse imo

I've BEEN stressing, lames chase belts for net fame & views... and THATS YOU prob'lly
and im bench pressin, got my weight up with no help, ya'll aint have to SPOT me


My dawg flexin but not really punching here

i wouldn't forecast me losing to you, 'less its another case 'o me gettin robbed greatly
i mean, that'd be a foggy issue, and 'round here... we aint been seein SMOG lately...

Not really dissing him much Imo coulda done more with the concept. I think you punched him more in your setup and I think you coulda flipped some words around here to make this a better bar but just kinda weak as is

thats a Dead shot and put a bullseye on the face of this flyweight "gangstaz"
and these Guns ready, lined em up in front of a target... they black Friday anxious!
This was cool

I got Plaz for a more consistent battle verse, Grimm was just flexin too much in his and those bars hurt him here

[hello there]

welp, this is all i could muster this week :3
gl Grimm!



respectfully,
that cringe wordplay makes me think you on some type a narcotic, sir
cant tell if that's the most poor or perfect impression of a barcotic verse (POW!)
Lol. You are my battler spirit animal. 0.25
put the heat on this imitator like a grills cooking him..
but even if he decides not to be himself - his future is still looking Grimm
Ehhh good concept. Did not love the wording. .25
you looking outta place, yet noone cares, in fact..
call this the bonus stage, cuz there's levels to this and you don't know where ur at
I liked this concept a lot actually. Has a ton of potential. .25
it takes balls to be a champ so you'll never have the throne
send shots to remove his gull bladder since he already lacks the stones
Gall* I like the idea but I just don't like the punch. Has no snap. .25
we dont care about what you've done, so stop it G
we could 'trade war' stories - but all you'd do is bitch about Trumps economy
Eh. 0

1 - Great concepts. No punches.

Plaz vs High & Drunk.... H&D wins 6-2....


lets rock...


Ever since H&D penned ya death, ya nostalgia left & aint never swing back through
I mean..that drunk text killed ya whole F'n buzz like "who'd I just send that to?????
So I like the concept. But he went on to fuck up a whole tourney and beat me in a rematch. So I just don't buy the premise of this bar. That said, this is one of the better of the many, many, many punches people have made about people I have battled. There is literally one or two a week. You guys are fucking boring sometimes. .25

I don't prepare for bums, just hit the blunt & write , and slay 'em bitch-style
Grimm's BEEN getting stoned & blazed for this craft way before them Salem witch trials
I don't fuck with hype bars. 0


I've BEEN stressing, lames chase belts for net fame & views... and THATS YOU prob'lly
and im bench pressin, got my weight up with no help, ya'll aint have to SPOT me

See above 0

i wouldn't forecast me losing to you, 'less its another case 'o me gettin robbed greatly
i mean, that'd be a foggy issue, and 'round here... we aint been seein SMOG lately...
Round here, we haven't SEEN THIS PERSON. That's not a good punch IMO. 0

thats a Dead shot and put a bullseye on the face of this flyweight "gangstaz"
and these Guns ready, lined em up in front of a target... they black Friday anxious!
This is super super generic but I kinda like the wording. .25

.5



I have Plaz here. Mostly because literally Grimmz did 60% self hype bars. I didn't love Plaz' verse this week. But I thought Grimmz didn't even really try. That's IMO.