WK13: JEM. (4-7) vs Jit (5-4) - JEM Wins

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@JEM. @Jit

[YG]

What’s good

[YG]

AKA Boston

"Week 5: JEM. 1-2 vs. J. Dill 0-1 Dill wins "

Killed u last time off the rhymes, Rec was 1-2 at the time
Its funny cuz my bar about that was true & I beat yo ass w/ a line
Kids lame, flyin past u so i'd recommend to switch lanes
If ur on top, I'm movin Bayou faster than u'd drop played shit on his name
U can't handle liq faggot, ur gay ass straight RUN from hoes
Wouldn't give em Brewery's gonna be suckin every dude at one of those
OG name pays homage to the clown who beat u & it's mad shitty
Aint see Boston murder Boston like that since a bomber did it to that city
If u claim u runnin blocks I gotta Moss that'll stop ya trots
I pull up w/ glocks - soft bitch, only thing u pull up on is socks
I was looking forward to Spree, ur shit aint clever or sick son
Original opponent was a biter... now I have u who'll never be bit from

[JEM.]

You got concepts, but too lazy for them to be flashy
If you ask me, Jitneys drive - cuz his is dead like old nickel taxis
What trendy city you live in? We lurk… catch him in the murk
And keep kicking till he stand down like the LIME don’t work
Me and my crips though going crypto, I get my dough clean
Cuz when this Starbucks, Jit dead, I don’t need the receipt
Two gats, X and Ray cuz they expose inside a bodies flesh
Bullets airport through JIT… first the machine then a pocket check
Fidget & your finished you won’t make it to the mountain top kid
Jittered on the side of caution, but I’ll push him off that same cliff
No jokes… I heard God fearing defines the kind of man you are
And after I smoke JIT he’ll be rooming w the angel in his avatar

[Zunto]

Killed u last time off the rhymes, Rec was 1-2 at the time
Its funny cuz my bar about that was true & I beat yo ass w/ a line
nah
Kids lame, flyin past u so i'd recommend to switch lanes
If ur on top, I'm movin Bayou faster than u'd drop played shit on his name
well this is like the pot calling the kettle black type shit talmbout “you drop played blue bayou wordplays” then you proceed to use the oldest bayou wp in the book
U can't handle liq faggot, ur gay ass straight RUN from hoes
Wouldn't give em Brewery's gonna be suckin every dude at one of those
lol ok
OG name pays homage to the clown who beat u & it's mad shitty
Aint see Boston murder Boston like that since a bomber did it to that city
nah
If u claim u runnin blocks I gotta Moss that'll stop ya trots
I pull up w/ glocks - soft bitch, only thing u pull up on is socks
man wtf is this shit
I was looking forward to Spree, ur shit aint clever or sick son
Original opponent was a biter... now I have u who'll never be bit from
not good


Vs


You got concepts, but too lazy for them to be flashy
If you ask me, Jitneys drive - cuz his is dead like old nickel taxis
pretty cool, good use of wp
What trendy city you live in? We lurk… catch him in the murk
And keep kicking till he stand down like the LIME don’t work
umm what?
Me and my crips though going crypto, I get my dough clean
Cuz when this Starbucks, Jit dead, I don’t need the receipt
this might’ve had some potential but wasn’t feelin how you did it
Two gats, X and Ray cuz they expose inside a bodies flesh
Bullets airport through JIT… first the machine then a pocket check
not sure what this means
Fidget & your finished you won’t make it to the mountain top kid
Jittered on the side of caution, but I’ll push him off that same cliff
meh
No jokes… I heard God fearing defines the kind of man you are
And after I smoke JIT he’ll be rooming w the angel in his avatar
no


Idk I wasn’t feeling this battle. John maybe you focused way too much on dropping super early that you just keyed up some nonsense and called it a day. You had 1 ok line but unfortunately everything else missed for me, no hate but I think you’re getting a little out of touch with what’s dope and what’s not, I think it’s due to battling here so much and not Netcees. JEM your verse had 1 good line that was a bit of an obscure reference but it wasn’t bad at all. The rest of your verse wasn’t too good, but you win this by a hair.


Vote JEM

[Greedy]

jit:
opener- i dont remember what u said against him,so withouth a direct quote, this is a miss for me
bayou- ironically this is hella played. lmao dudes name is literally "Blew By You" so any "by you" lines are hella old
bosyon- decent personal attempt, but this is played also
pull up- i liked this idea, but you executed it in the wackest way possible. this coulda been dope with thw whole puul up comparason angle
brewery- this was the best of the verse imo
closer- this was decent. ill give you this one

vs jem:
opener- good attempt here, but the reference u used is way too obscure.
lime bike- this was a nice concept imo. ur wording was a bit bulky here. but this wasnt bad
starbucks- another good idea here. but as is, kinda hard to follow
airport- another good concept lol. this was good, but agai,. work on clarity. its very easy to miss what you were going for
mountain top- same as above. most ppl wont get the jit err wordplay tbh
closer- this is a no for me dog. only because avatar lines dont really have any impact. overall that concept was pretty good


vote jem w the upset.
Jit- u clearly rushed ans well as underestimated ur opponent. i think that cost you this
Jem- decent showing, conceptually. u just gotta dumb ur shit down. as is, all of your bars seem to have real loose or vague tie ins

[Barcotic]

Jit
Killed u last time off the rhymes, Rec was 1-2 at the time
Its funny cuz my bar about that was true & I beat yo ass w/ a line
overdone 1-2 concept, personal didnt help
Kids lame, flyin past u so i'd recommend to switch lanes
If ur on top, I'm movin Bayou faster than u'd drop played shit on his name
contradicting bar, i kno thats the point but its still a played/easy way out concept
U can't handle liq faggot, ur gay ass straight RUN from hoes
Wouldn't give em Brewery's gonna be suckin every dude at one of those
cool, i like it
OG name pays homage to the clown who beat u & it's mad shitty
Aint see Boston murder Boston like that since a bomber did it to that city
nah, played on joe boston nvm jem aka boston
If u claim u runnin blocks I gotta Moss that'll stop ya trots
I pull up w/ glocks - soft bitch, only thing u pull up on is socks
decent, coulda ben fire but execution was lacking
I was looking forward to Spree, ur shit aint clever or sick son
Original opponent was a biter... now I have u who'll never be bit from
too simple, but close

1 gd punch
1 jab
3 misses

vs

Jem
You got concepts, but too lazy for them to be flashy
If you ask me, Jitneys drive - cuz his is dead like old nickel taxis
cool, good slant np yo i see u taking notes
What trendy city you live in? We lurk… catch him in the murk
And keep kicking till he stand down like the LIME don’t work
ok, almost doesnt work but creative fs
Me and my crips though going crypto, I get my dough clean
Cuz when this Starbucks, Jit dead, I don’t need the receipt
played starbucks wp
Two gats, X and Ray cuz they expose inside a bodies flesh
Bullets airport through JIT… first the machine then a pocket check
miss
Fidget & your finished you won’t make it to the mountain top kid
Jittered on the side of caution, but I’ll push him off that same cliff
forced
No jokes… I heard God fearing defines the kind of man you are
And after I smoke JIT he’ll be rooming w the angel in his avatar
whack

1 gd punch
1 jab
3 misses

almost an upset IMO
had to review this 1 a couple x

jem u getting better & almost had him, but ur misses were way off while a cpl of jit's were almost jabs

close but v/jit

[Phalanx]

AKA Boston

"Week 5: JEM. 1-2 vs. J. Dill 0-1 Dill wins "

Killed u last time off the rhymes, Rec was 1-2 at the time
Its funny cuz my bar about that was true & I beat yo ass w/ a line
Okayish play on the fact that you beat him in the one bar league.
Kids lame, flyin past u so i'd recommend to switch lanes
If ur on top, I'm movin Bayou faster than u'd drop played shit on his name
Maybe there is more gravity to this personal than I'm aware of. As it is, it seems kind of redundant to clown him using nameflips....in a bar that hinges on a nameflip.
U can't handle liq faggot, ur gay ass straight RUN from hoes
Wouldn't give em Brewery's gonna be suckin every dude at one of those
Wordplay was pretty cool.
OG name pays homage to the clown who beat u & it's mad shitty
Aint see Boston murder Boston like that since a bomber did it to that city
Again, maybe the personal holds more sting for others. Judging the flip, it's kind of a sloppy execution of a not exactly fresh concept.
If u claim u runnin blocks I gotta Moss that'll stop ya trots
I pull up w/ glocks - soft bitch, only thing u pull up on is socks
This was low key funny.
I was looking forward to Spree, ur shit aint clever or sick son
Original opponent was a biter... now I have u who'll never be bit from
This was an okay jab.

You got concepts, but too lazy for them to be flashy
If you ask me, Jitneys drive - cuz his is dead like old nickel taxis
I like the concept. But the wordplay is a stretch for me.
What trendy city you live in? We lurk… catch him in the murk
And keep kicking till he stand down like the LIME don’t work
Yeah. I can't say I felt this.
Me and my crips though going crypto, I get my dough clean
Cuz when this Starbucks, Jit dead, I don’t need the receipt
[B]I like the idea. Not the execution. [/B
Two gats, X and Ray cuz they expose inside a bodies flesh
Bullets airport through JIT… first the machine then a pocket check
This was pretty good.
Fidget & your finished you won’t make it to the mountain top kid
Jittered on the side of caution, but I’ll push him off that same cliff
I like the jittered nameplay, but the way you decided to flip it left a lot to be desired.
No jokes… I heard God fearing defines the kind of man you are
And after I smoke JIT he’ll be rooming w the angel in his avatar
[B]Not feeling it. For me, an avatar based bar would have to be fire to even consider using.

Bar 1 - Jit
Bar 2 - Jit
Bar 3 - Jit
Bar 4 - Jem
Bar 5 - Jem
Bar 6 - Jit

Probally closer than the bar to bar displays. But I feel like Jit edged this for me.

Vote - Jit

[Ryno]

AKA Boston

"Week 5: JEM. 1-2 vs. J. Dill 0-1 Dill wins "

Killed u last time off the rhymes, Rec was 1-2 at the time
Its funny cuz my bar about that was true & I beat yo ass w/ a line
Kids lame, flyin past u so i'd recommend to switch lanes
If ur on top, I'm movin Bayou faster than u'd drop played shit on his name
U can't handle liq faggot, ur gay ass straight RUN from hoes
Wouldn't give em Brewery's gonna be suckin every dude at one of those
---Those first 2 bars were alil dated bro. Brewery could have been put together cleaner
OG name pays homage to the clown who beat u & it's mad shitty
Aint see Boston murder Boston like that since a bomber did it to that city
If u claim u runnin blocks I gotta Moss that'll stop ya trots
I pull up w/ glocks - soft bitch, only thing u pull up on is socks
I was looking forward to Spree, ur shit aint clever or sick son
Original opponent was a biter... now I have u who'll never be bit from
---Dont like the execution on the bomber bar. Was not feeling the sock bar man, ur more creative than that. Closer was ok though

You got concepts, but too lazy for them to be flashy
If you ask me, Jitneys drive - cuz his is dead like old nickel taxis
What trendy city you live in? We lurk… catch him in the murk
And keep kicking till he stand down like the LIME don’t work
Me and my crips though going crypto, I get my dough clean
Cuz when this Starbucks, Jit dead, I don’t need the receipt
---The execution on the first two were underwhelming. Starbucks is dated
Two gats, X and Ray cuz they expose inside a bodies flesh
Bullets airport through JIT… first the machine then a pocket check
Fidget & your finished you won’t make it to the mountain top kid
Jittered on the side of caution, but I’ll push him off that same cliff
No jokes… I heard God fearing defines the kind of man you are
And after I smoke JIT he’ll be rooming w the angel in his avatar
---Pocket check was dope. Same cliff was worded weird. Avatar punches r dated & this wasnt very creative.

v. JEM ...ii thought he had the best bar of the battle. JIT didnt come w/ effort.

[plethora]

U can't handle liq faggot, ur gay ass straight RUN from hoes
Wouldn't give em Brewery's gonna be suckin every dude at one of those


Vs.


What trendy city you live in? We lurk… catch him in the murk
And keep kicking till he stand down like the LIME don’t work
Two gats, X and Ray cuz they expose inside a bodies flesh
Bullets airport through JIT… first the machine then a pocket check





V/jem

[Echelon]

Jit's verse -

Killed u last time off the rhymes, Rec was 1-2 at the time
Its funny cuz my bar about that was true & I beat yo ass w/ a line

This was a okay, bar. The concept was there; but the wording and your idea portraying the concept could've been better. The wording could use slight adjustment. Other than that, not bad.

Kids lame, flyin past u so i'd recommend to switch lanes
If ur on top, I'm movin Bayou faster than u'd drop played shit on his name

Yeah, the concept wasn't even there for this one. Had it been, this would've been slightly amusing; but it wasn't. This was decent at best.

U can't handle liq faggot, ur gay ass straight RUN from hoes
Wouldn't give em Brewery's gonna be suckin every dude at one of those

What are you blabbering about, here? Lmao..not good at all..if we're being immensely honest.

OG name pays homage to the clown who beat u & it's mad shitty
Aint see Boston murder Boston like that since a bomber did it to that city

Probably, you're best bar; as it portrays something of a concept a bit better. Decent at best.

If u claim u runnin blocks I gotta Moss that'll stop ya trots
I pull up w/ glocks - soft bitch, only thing u pull up on is socks

This was okay..but you're wording is kind of poor..a okay bar.

I was looking forward to Spree, ur shit aint clever or sick son
Original opponent was a biter... now I have u who'll never be bit from

lmao..this was okay..could've been worded better..but alright dude

Jem -

You got concepts, but too lazy for them to be flashy
If you ask me, Jitneys drive - cuz his is dead like old nickel taxis

Not too bad of a bar..but the wording needs adjusting slightly..but this was alright

What trendy city you live in? We lurk… catch him in the murk
And keep kicking till he stand down like the LIME don’t work

This was not good at all..sorry..but no


Me and my crips though going crypto, I get my dough clean
Cuz when this Starbucks, Jit dead, I don’t need the receipt

You're kidding me, right? lmao..just not too good

Two gats, X and Ray cuz they expose inside a bodies flesh
Bullets airport through JIT… first the machine then a pocket check

This was probably your best bar..if we're being honest..i mean it was okay..alright at best

Fidget & your finished you won’t make it to the mountain top kid
Jittered on the side of caution, but I’ll push him off that same cliff

This was okay..but again..make it more hard-hitting

No jokes… I heard God fearing defines the kind of man you are
And after I smoke JIT he’ll be rooming w the angel in his avatar

Probably your best..decent it was a closer..okay

Overall - This was a alright battle..at best..i expected a bit more..i mean what in the world..but it was okay..but had played concepts..that needed more wording..but it was decent..not too bad..but there has to be a winner..and that's JIT..i guess

V/ JIT

[Spree]

Brewery
Boston murder was decent
Bite bar was ok could have been better

Vs

Jitneys was nice
Kicking was cool

Rest missed for me especially your closer

Closer than expected here both had missed and some played stuff with a few nice hits. I got hit with the better misses and one more quotable

[Spree]

4-4
Let’s get more votes

[hello there]

AKA Boston

"Week 5: JEM. 1-2 vs. J. Dill 0-1 Dill wins "

Killed u last time off the rhymes, Rec was 1-2 at the time
Its funny cuz my bar about that was true & I beat yo ass w/ a line
Solid - .5
Kids lame, flyin past u so i'd recommend to switch lanes
If ur on top, I'm movin Bayou faster than u'd drop played shit on his name
The bayou shit was dope. But I don't like execution like this. I just don't. .25
U can't handle liq faggot, ur gay ass straight RUN from hoes
Wouldn't give em Brewery's gonna be suckin every dude at one of those
Don't like this. 1 -- Licking faggots. 2 -- I just don't like this wording. Sorry dude. The wordplay was kinda whack too. .25
OG name pays homage to the clown who beat u & it's mad shitty
Aint see Boston murder Boston like that since a bomber did it to that city
Super played out. 0
If u claim u runnin blocks I gotta Moss that'll stop ya trots
I pull up w/ glocks - soft bitch, only thing u pull up on is socks
I know lots of people havent heard this, but there was a rash of this shit when I was first battling. I saw this coming miles away. .25
I was looking forward to Spree, ur shit aint clever or sick son
Original opponent was a biter... now I have u who'll never be bit from
I didn't think this landed hard. .25

1.5

You got concepts, but too lazy for them to be flashy
If you ask me, Jitneys drive - cuz his is dead like old nickel taxis
Fly .5
What trendy city you live in? We lurk… catch him in the murk
And keep kicking till he stand down like the LIME don’t work
Fuuuuuuuuccccckkk. 1.
Me and my crips though going crypto, I get my dough clean
Cuz when this Starbucks, Jit dead, I don’t need the receipt
Nah I don't like this. .25
Two gats, X and Ray cuz they expose inside a bodies flesh
Bullets airport through JIT… first the machine then a pocket check
Damn dude. I heard about this shit in chat or I woulda reacted harder. .5 but a good one
Fidget & your finished you won’t make it to the mountain top kid
Jittered on the side of caution, but I’ll push him off that same cliff
Don't like this. 0
No jokes… I heard God fearing defines the kind of man you are
And after I smoke JIT he’ll be rooming w the angel in his avatar
Cool. .25

2.5


I have JEM here. You know I like you Jit but JEM had some fucking fire here. Idk how this is tied (I guess it is? It's still open.) The airport bar and the fucking LIME BAR holy shit. That LIME bar was ruthless. @JEM gotta PM me that bar thought process start to finish.

This was good dudes. Solid ass shit.

[Spree]

5-4 JEM leaving this open for two more hrs for a few more votes. than Im moving on....