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    WK13: Sinning (0-1) vs R!canTheoryz (2-2) vs Phalanx (0-0) - Phalanx Wins

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    Re: WK13: Sinning (0-1) vs R!canTheoryz (2-2) vs Phalanx (0-0)

    Check 2.0

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    Re: WK13: Sinning (0-1) vs R!canTheoryz (2-2) vs Phalanx (0-0)

    Anyone who thinks I should Dart? Doesn't know my type of Calibre!
    Why would I dodge S/RT? When it proves Imma different kind of Challenger?
    Shotgun point blank, Rican..it'll leave ya Face in Pieces!
    Then his blood will cover Sinning like Faith in Jesus!
    I mean some people believe in aliens. Are convinced that they saw 'em...
    But the only real conspiracy, Theoryz...is how you ever got a win in THAT column.
    I'm in it to maul them! If Sin acting sharp..Ill slice him further!
    So if we mention your poise, Sinning? Its cuz they charge your wife w/ murder!
    One punch n the dentist'll need a CAT scan to look at ya teeth...
    It's ironic its a three way...Cuz Amen gave me two pussies to beat!
    Last edited by Phalanx; November 19th, 2018 at 08:07 PM Reason: Typo.

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    Re: WK13: Sinning (0-1) vs R!canTheoryz (2-2) vs Phalanx (0-0)

    Check

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    Re: WK13: Sinning (0-1) vs R!canTheoryz (2-2) vs Phalanx (0-0)

    A Mexican verses a Puerto rican? Bitch please, this thief will ascend for your novelty
    pretend you are socrates... let's talk about phalanx's philanthropy...let's talk about his life...then I'll end his philosophy
    You both, are sad tragic! Act lavish, and attract sadness! You couldn't 'show the fingers to mime' with sad antics
    Rap tragic...but it lacks rancid...let's talk about RicanTheoryz...but I'm a Ariskima..I'll end you with Black Magic (Sorry to scare you, LOL)
    I'm lavish with true fate! Sadness is blue safe! When I say a prayer with hope, these faggots will lose faith
    Attracting with smooth blades... I'll hit you with a lure (allure)... and knock on Phalidoor (Falador).. then show my blue daggar in Runescape
    Phalanax, here's a poor theory! You're socrates man! Why don't you 'smoke AJ' and ponder the hash!
    I'll move at light speed, and have you gone in a flash! Talking about Phalanax (Phali knacks)...but I'll jester him speak with novelty acts
    I'm Anakin, I have rapping force! Grab a sword with rapid force and stab your corpse!
    You lacking force..you both literally rap..with force.. so let's talk about Ricantheoryz and Phalanax..like a Spanish War
    Last edited by Echelon; November 21st, 2018 at 02:50 AM

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    Re: WK13: Sinning (0-1) vs R!canTheoryz (2-2) vs Phalanx (0-0)

    U gothic fuck let the Hereo Pretend & I’ll repo a Limb,
    For somebody wit the name of sin of darkness I assume you have no life & zero friends.
    You’ll get boo’d on the runway god don’t like ugly or the truth bout gunplay,
    Cuz I’ll expose Sin & Get en Washed Faster Than the confession booth on a Sunday.
    Phalanx? I swear your a fool dude. Sharp intentions wit screws Loose,
    Usertitle: You’ll Get the Point? That’s right after I finish putting ur own knife Thru You .
    I Spark fluent I cook fire & U ain’t seasoned snuff to start stupid,
    Cuz in the kitchen I been nice with blade & Scales like a culinary arts student
    A Fucking 3 Way? who said it’ll be a Tight Fight?
    I signed back in to expose darkness’s Faster Than a night light

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    Re: WK13: Sinning (0-1) vs R!canTheoryz (2-2) vs Phalanx (0-0)

    Quote Originally Posted by Phalanx View Post
    Anyone who thinks I should Dart? Doesn't know my type of Calibre!
    Why would I dodge S/RT? When it proves Imma different kind of Challenger?
    -I like the concept here buttt the way you ended it makes it sound more self hype than anything.
    -It was cool but not much of an attack

    Shotgun point blank, Rican..it'll leave ya Face in Pieces!
    Then his blood will cover Sinning like Faith in Jesus!
    Can’t hate it on it, not bad
    I mean some people believe in aliens. Are convinced that they saw 'em...
    But the only real conspiracy, Theoryz...is how you ever got a win in THAT column.
    Feel like this is played against him but I’ll give u the benefit of the doubt. Decent bar
    I'm in it to maul them! If Sin acting sharp..Ill slice him further!
    So if we mention your poise, Sinning? Its cuz they charge your wife w/ murder!
    Poisoning coulda been dope but again I’m not liking how u ended it here. May just be a personal thing but I just wasn’t feeling the punch. I dig the poise sinning part tho. Just coulda done more with it
    One punch n the dentist'll need a CAT scan to look at ya teeth...
    It's ironic its a three way...Cuz Amen gave me two pussies to beat!
    Ok
    Quote Originally Posted by R!canTheoryz View Post
    U gothic fuck let the Hereo Pretend & I’ll repo a Limb,
    For somebody wit the name of sin of darkness I assume you have no life & zero friends.
    Ok kinda weak
    You’ll get boo’d on the runway god don’t like ugly or the truth bout gunplay,
    Cuz I’ll expose Sin & Get en Washed Faster Than the confession booth on a Sunday.
    Cool
    Phalanx? I swear your a fool dude. Sharp intentions wit screws Loose,
    Usertitle: You’ll Get the Point? That’s right after I finish putting ur own knife Thru You .
    Nahh
    I Spark fluent I cook fire & U ain’t seasoned snuff to start stupid,
    Cuz in the kitchen I been nice with blade & Scales like a culinary arts student
    Nahh
    A Fucking 3 Way? who said it’ll be a Tight Fight?
    I signed back in to expose darkness’s Faster Than a night light
    Ok
    Quote Originally Posted by SIN of Darkness View Post
    A Mexican verses a Puerto rican? Bitch please, this thief will ascend for your novelty
    pretend you are socrates... let's talk about phalanx's philanthropy...let's talk about his life...then I'll end his philosophy
    No
    You both, are sad tragic! Act lavish, and attract sadness! You couldn't 'show the fingers to mime' with sad antics
    Rap tragic...but it lacks rancid...let's talk about RicanTheoryz...but I'm a Ariskima..I'll end you with Black Magic (Sorry to scare you, LOL)
    I'm lavish with true fate! Sadness is blue safe! When I say a prayer with hope, these faggots will lose faith
    Attracting with smooth blades... I'll hit you with a lure (allure)... and knock on Phalidoor (Falador).. then show my blue daggar in Runescape
    Phalanax, here's a poor theory! You're socrates man! Why don't you 'smoke AJ' and ponder the hash!
    I'll move at light speed, and have you gone in a flash! Talking about Phalanax (Phali knacks)...but I'll jester him speak with novelty acts
    I'm Anakin, I have rapping force! Grab a sword with rapid force and stab your corpse!
    You lacking force..you both literally rap..with force.. so let's talk about Ricantheoryz and Phalanax..like a Spanish War
    Wasn’t feeling Sin’s verse in its entirety tbh.

    So it comes down to Rican and Phal

    I dunno both missed a couple times but I think Phal has the more creative of the two verses

    And his misses weren’t terrible. Whereas Rican just came too simple here imo.

    v/ Phal

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    Re: WK13: Sinning (0-1) vs R!canTheoryz (2-2) vs Phalanx (0-0)

    Quote Originally Posted by Phalanx View Post
    Anyone who thinks I should Dart? Doesn't know my type of Calibre!
    Why would I dodge S/RT? When it proves Imma different kind of Challenger?
    Shotgun point blank, Rican..it'll leave ya Face in Pieces!
    Then his blood will cover Sinning like Faith in Jesus!
    I mean some people believe in aliens. Are convinced that they saw 'em...
    But the only real conspiracy, Theoryz...is how you ever got a win in THAT column.
    ---Not super impactful, like the tie ins though. Faith in Jesus was cool. Conspiracy theory could have been doper.
    I'm in it to maul them! If Sin acting sharp..Ill slice him further!
    So if we mention your poise, Sinning? Its cuz they charge your wife w/ murder!
    One punch n the dentist'll need a CAT scan to look at ya teeth...
    It's ironic its a three way...Cuz Amen gave me two pussies to beat!
    ---Poisoning fell flat imo. Closer was eh.
    Quote Originally Posted by SIN of Darkness View Post
    A Mexican verses a Puerto rican? Bitch please, this thief will ascend for your novelty
    pretend you are socrates... let's talk about phalanx's philanthropy...let's talk about his life...then I'll end his philosophy
    You both, are sad tragic! Act lavish, and attract sadness! You couldn't 'show the fingers to mime' with sad antics
    Rap tragic...but it lacks rancid...let's talk about RicanTheoryz...but I'm a Ariskima..I'll end you with Black Magic (Sorry to scare you, LOL)
    I'm lavish with true fate! Sadness is blue safe! When I say a prayer with hope, these faggots will lose faith
    Attracting with smooth blades... I'll hit you with a lure (allure)... and knock on Phalidoor (Falador).. then show my blue daggar in Runescape
    ---Just a bunch of rhyming with no ral direction here.
    Phalanax, here's a poor theory! You're socrates man! Why don't you 'smoke AJ' and ponder the hash!
    I'll move at light speed, and have you gone in a flash! Talking about Phalanax (Phali knacks)...but I'll jester him speak with novelty acts
    I'm Anakin, I have rapping force! Grab a sword with rapid force and stab your corpse!
    You lacking force..you both literally rap..with force.. so let's talk about Ricantheoryz and Phalanax..like a Spanish War
    ---Closer was your best bar. You've got a lot to work on.
    U gothic fuck let the Hereo Pretend & I’ll repo a Limb,
    For somebody wit the name of sin of darkness I assume you have no life & zero friends.
    You’ll get boo’d on the runway god don’t like ugly or the truth bout gunplay,
    Cuz I’ll expose Sin & Get en Washed Faster Than the confession booth on a Sunday.
    Phalanx? I swear your a fool dude. Sharp intentions wit screws Loose,
    Usertitle: You’ll Get the Point? That’s right after I finish putting ur own knife Thru You
    ---Confession booth was good. Wasnt feeling the other two. .
    I Spark fluent I cook fire & U ain’t seasoned snuff to start stupid,
    Cuz in the kitchen I been nice with blade & Scales like a culinary arts student
    A Fucking 3 Way? who said it’ll be a Tight Fight?
    I signed back in to expose darkness’s Faster Than a night light
    ---Night light was cool as well.

    v. RicanTheoryz...this was really between rican & phalanx. Could go either way. Im leaning towards Rican, i thought he was just a bar better in this one.

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    Re: WK13: Sinning (0-1) vs R!canTheoryz (2-2) vs Phalanx (0-0) - VOTE NOW

    Phalanx
    Anyone who thinks I should Dart? Doesn't know my type of Calibre!
    Why would I dodge S/RT? When it proves Imma different kind of Challenger?
    sinning=s is a stretch, creative concept overall but miss
    Shotgun point blank, Rican..it'll leave ya Face in Pieces!
    Then his blood will cover Sinning like Faith in Jesus!
    ok
    I mean some people believe in aliens. Are convinced that they saw 'em...
    But the only real conspiracy, Theoryz...is how you ever got a win in THAT column.
    played np
    I'm in it to maul them! If Sin acting sharp..Ill slice him further!
    So if we mention your poise, Sinning? Its cuz they charge your wife w/ murder!
    coo
    One punch n the dentist'll need a CAT scan to look at ya teeth...
    It's ironic its a three way...Cuz Amen gave me two pussies to beat!
    nah

    1 gd punch
    1 jab
    3 misses


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    Sinning
    A Mexican verses a Puerto rican? Bitch please, this thief will ascend for your novelty
    pretend you are socrates... let's talk about phalanx's philanthropy...let's talk about his life...then I'll end his philosophy
    multis on pt. but streched af & had no real concept
    You both, are sad tragic! Act lavish, and attract sadness! You couldn't 'show the fingers to mime' with sad antics
    Rap tragic...but it lacks rancid...let's talk about RicanTheoryz...but I'm a Ariskima..I'll end you with Black Magic (Sorry to scare you, LOL)
    wtf no
    I'm lavish with true fate! Sadness is blue safe! When I say a prayer with hope, these faggots will lose faith
    Attracting with smooth blades... I'll hit you with a lure (allure)... and knock on Phalidoor (Falador).. then show my blue daggar in Runescape
    half creative, half played, all whack
    Phalanax, here's a poor theory! You're socrates man! Why don't you 'smoke AJ' and ponder the hash!
    I'll move at light speed, and have you gone in a flash! Talking about Phalanax (Phali knacks)...but I'll jester him speak with novelty acts
    np was oook/maybe but execution of it was terrible
    I'm Anakin, I have rapping force! Grab a sword with rapid force and stab your corpse!
    You lacking force..you both literally rap..with force.. so let's talk about Ricantheoryz and Phalanax..like a Spanish War
    nope

    5 misses


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    Rican
    U gothic fuck let the Hereo Pretend & I’ll repo a Limb,
    For somebody wit the name of sin of darkness I assume you have no life & zero friends.
    weak
    You’ll get boo’d on the runway god don’t like ugly or the truth bout gunplay,
    Cuz I’ll expose Sin & Get en Washed Faster Than the confession booth on a Sunday.
    ok but proofread ur bars
    Phalanx? I swear your a fool dude. Sharp intentions wit screws Loose,
    Usertitle: You’ll Get the Point? That’s right after I finish putting ur own knife Thru You .
    avatar personal or no avatar personal, get to the point is mad played
    I Spark fluent I cook fire & U ain’t seasoned snuff to start stupid,
    Cuz in the kitchen I been nice with blade & Scales like a culinary arts student
    no diss
    A Fucking 3 Way? who said it’ll be a Tight Fight?
    I signed back in to expose darkness’s Faster Than a night light
    ok i guess, assuming u didnt mean to put 's after darkness...

    2 jabs (still on the fence w that closer)
    3 misses


    v/phalanx

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    Re: WK13: Sinning (0-1) vs R!canTheoryz (2-2) vs Phalanx (0-0) - VOTE NOW

    Anyone who thinks I should Dart? Doesn't know my type of Calibre!
    Why would I dodge S/RT? When it proves Imma different kind of Challenger?
    Okay.

    Shotgun point blank, Rican..it'll leave ya Face in Pieces!
    Then his blood will cover Sinning like Faith in Jesus!
    ok.

    I mean some people believe in aliens. Are convinced that they saw 'em...
    But the only real conspiracy, Theoryz...is how you ever got a win in THAT column.
    You know what? I actually like this… I’m good with matter fact/comparison type bars. Good.

    I'm in it to maul them! If Sin acting sharp..Ill slice him further!
    So if we mention your poise, Sinning? Its cuz they charge your wife w/ murder!
    Nice.

    One punch n the dentist'll need a CAT scan to look at ya teeth...
    It's ironic its a three way...Cuz Amen gave me two pussies to beat!
    eh.

    A Mexican verses a Puerto rican? Bitch please, this thief will ascend for your novelty
    pretend you are socrates... let's talk about phalanx's philanthropy...let's talk about his life...then I'll end his philosophy
    What happened here? This just kind of got away from you and really isn’t a punch, nor a centralized concept/theme, etc. You did do a ton of internal rhyming.

    You both, are sad tragic! Act lavish, and attract sadness! You couldn't 'show the fingers to mime' with sad antics
    Rap tragic...but it lacks rancid...let's talk about RicanTheoryz...but I'm a Ariskima..I'll end you with Black Magic (Sorry to scare you, LOL)
    eh…

    I'm lavish with true fate! Sadness is blue safe! When I say a prayer with hope, these faggots will lose faith
    Attracting with smooth blades... I'll hit you with a lure (allure)... and knock on Phalidoor (Falador).. then show my blue daggar in Runescape

    No man.

    Phalanax, here's a poor theory! You're socrates man! Why don't you 'smoke AJ' and ponder the hash!
    I'll move at light speed, and have you gone in a flash! Talking about Phalanax (Phali knacks)...but I'll jester him speak with novelty acts
    You can’t say socrates twice in a battle… lol. I guess this was the most concise effort at a punch?

    I'm Anakin, I have rapping force! Grab a sword with rapid force and stab your corpse!
    You lacking force..you both literally rap..with force.. so let's talk about Ricantheoryz and Phalanax..like a Spanish War
    eh.


    U gothic fuck let the Hereo Pretend & I’ll repo a Limb,
    For somebody wit the name of sin of darkness I assume you have no life & zero friends.
    no.

    You’ll get boo’d on the runway god don’t like ugly or the truth bout gunplay,
    Cuz I’ll expose Sin & Get en Washed Faster Than the confession booth on a Sunday.
    eh.

    Phalanx? I swear your a fool dude. Sharp intentions wit screws Loose,
    Usertitle: You’ll Get the Point? That’s right after I finish putting ur own knife Thru You .
    eh.

    I Spark fluent I cook fire & U ain’t seasoned snuff to start stupid,
    Cuz in the kitchen I been nice with blade & Scales like a culinary arts student
    Not feeling.

    A Fucking 3 Way? who said it’ll be a Tight Fight?
    I signed back in to expose darkness’s Faster Than a night light
    I mean… Sure. But you could’ve done more here, or not… in principle I find night light to just be childish and if the punch doesn’t have a child it’s not as “mean”.

    v/phalanx… he landed punches.

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    Re: WK13: Sinning (0-1) vs R!canTheoryz (2-2) vs Phalanx (0-0) - VOTE NOW

    This is 3-1-0 phals way lets get more votes

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    Re: WK13: Sinning (0-1) vs R!canTheoryz (2-2) vs Phalanx (0-0)

    Anyone who thinks I should Dart? Doesn't know my type of Calibre!
    Why would I dodge S/RT? When it proves Imma different kind of Challenger?
    I'm in it to maul them! If Sin acting sharp..Ill slice him further!
    So if we mention your poise, Sinning? Its cuz they charge your wife w/ murder!

    i dug the opener, little self hype ish but and i dont usually like the one letter nameplays that much but i fuck with this. poisoning was ok, could have been better. other bars didnt do it for me.

    vs

    nothing that really hit

    i bet u would kill topicals. i see the style ur going for, kinda old school multi heavy longbar. super hard to pull off in a way thats going to resonate with voters. my advice is to focus less on the rhyme schemes and more on being more creative/harsh with the disses. and lose the parentheses, if u have to explain it then it doesnt work. if its a good wordplay/nameplay the voters will see it. keep going dude


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    You’ll get boo’d on the runway god don’t like ugly or the truth bout gunplay,
    Cuz I’ll expose Sin & Get en Washed Faster Than the confession booth on a Sunday.


    liked that bar, might have been lotb. had a couple played out lines like get the point, if u landed one more strong like confession booth i think u would have ran away with this.



    close between RT and Phal for me. I was close to quoting RTs closer, ultimately felt like it needed a little more.



    vote Phal
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    Re: WK13: Sinning (0-1) vs R!canTheoryz (2-2) vs Phalanx (0-0) - VOTE NOW

    4-1-0 Phal wins

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