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    WK 15 Contenders: Bash (5-4) vs Phalanx (2-0) - OPEN 4 VOTES



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    Re: WK 15 Contenders: Bash (5-4) vs Phalanx (2-0)

    I'm shuttin' down all ya spots, spark it up against ya crew
    Call it a Barcotic, no matter where u go ya post is gettin' moved

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    I've beaten you before, you're a joke. Put that comedic shit to a rest
    Your the Jay Pharoah of text. No punchlines at all just an "Eh" imitator at best

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    Re: WK 15 Contenders: Bash (5-4) vs Phalanx (2-0)

    This is like comparing a Mercedes to a Honda! After seeing Odd's, bet nobody gives him any chance!
    Cuz graded as A+, while everybody consider Odyssey like we're in the market for a mini-van!
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    Re: WK 15 Contenders: Bash (5-4) vs Phalanx (2-0) - OPEN 4 VOTES

    Bash lol the fuck kind of punch was that. Matter of fact now it’s confirmed you were the Alcoholics in that godforsaken gimmick tourney.

    But


    Then I read phalanx bar and boy oh boy let me tell you

    I never want to battle here again, shit almost made me quit forever and give my account to lenox so he can become great. But no.


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    Re: WK 15 Contenders: Bash (5-4) vs Phalanx (2-0) - OPEN 4 VOTES

    Ok.
    Bash- i thought this was kinda flames. Original concept, visuals, relevant board bar. Plus i like how you been tryna shy away from the typical punchline format that everyone uses. I been doing it to. So i fk w that style

    Phalanx- so, odyssey bars have been done to death on him unfortunately. But, ive never seen it done this way. So im not gonna hold it against u. I did like the angle u used also. But another issue i had, i felt like ur set up was too longwinded.

    I gotta go w bash here
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    Re: WK 15 Contenders: Bash (5-4) vs Phalanx (2-0) - OPEN 4 VOTES

    I'm shuttin' down all ya spots, spark it up against ya crew
    Call it a Barcotic, no matter where u go ya post is gettin' moved

    ^7/10, Barcotic/narcotic raid type concept barely worked because it's tough to be relatable in terms of comprehension off bat, but the good set up coupled with this current event punch, and favorable wording saved the bar.

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    This is like comparing a Mercedes to a Honda! After seeing Odd's, bet nobody gives him any chance!
    Cuz graded as A+, while everybody consider Odyssey like we're in the market for a mini-van!

    ^5/10, the concept is actually good, but the delivery failed with double wording of Odd.. and the choppy flow between the setup and punchline. It makes u think a little, but it doesn't roll off the tongue very well at all.

    So yea, this one was fairly one sided tbh.. a quick, relevant hit, versus, a well conceived yet desperately stretched attempt.


    V/Bash
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    Re: WK 15 Contenders: Bash (5-4) vs Phalanx (2-0) - OPEN 4 VOTES

    V/ bash

    It's good to see some fresh blood up in a contenders match. Nice job overall. So my breakdown goes as follows Phal had a more complex bar but wording failed him. I don't know if that np was played or not but it was flipped in a fresh way and with good tie ins....but the wording wasn't tight enough. oddyssey stands out but it doesn't fit fluidly in the sentence as is. That's my only issue with that bar. It had the potential to be a dope np and I am partial to a dope ass np. But as is Bash's bar while not as complex was more complete as a punch. What it locked in a personal touch it made up with pungently sarcastic jab at another textcee. good showing fellas.

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    eating U out, u sexy faggot. aint nobody wasting more than 20 nuts on u
    like i said, 20 nuts is even pushing it
    so you fucking then?

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    Re: WK 15 Contenders: Bash (5-4) vs Phalanx (2-0) - OPEN 4 VOTES

    Decent battle... I didnt think bash's was that hard hittin tho
    Phal's was more creative even though i hate when ppl use a word twice in 1 bar, in this case- "odd"

    But I still edge it to..
    V- phal'

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    Re: WK 15 Contenders: Bash (5-4) vs Phalanx (2-0) - OPEN 4 VOTES

    Odyssey been done to a pulp. Bash’s bar was cool current event nothing to wowing. Vote bash for the fresher attack

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    Re: WK 15 Contenders: Bash (5-4) vs Phalanx (2-0) - OPEN 4 VOTES

    Bash wins 5-1

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    Re: WK 15 Contenders: Bash (5-4) vs Phalanx (2-0) - OPEN 4 VOTES

    This battle sucked.

    Phal's bar was so over worded, I lost track of the concept half way through it.

    Bash's bar was on some NC bullshit.

    V/ Give both an L for this garbage.

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