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    I'm back



    Floating through life with buoyancy troubles,
    Annoyances bubble, fester, till avoidances double.
    Muscles constricting going white in the knuckles
    It's a struggle to breathe much less give a rebuttal.
    You just want to be happy; but that's a hell of an act.
    You're running out of excuses...
    you use to have a hell of a knack.
    The serotonin is lacking; a dopamine fix with a flame
    For a moment you're laughing then all the shit is the same.
    All you crave is a change but all you switch is the strain
    Writing verse after verse then reversing your name.
    It's the life of a writer you only need approval and paper,
    But your self worth is torn to pieces
    when your fans turn to haters.
    I.P.

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    Re: I'm back

    Rap battles and all joy is fit for the turns for the engagements. Program of the field and do my homework for me in the service for the goals. The tight control is foreseen for the turns. The shape is fit or the hope of the turns for the guiding element for the chips for the terms.

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    Re: I'm back

    Real shit... great write
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    Re: I'm back

    Floating noiseless and coinless through life with rough buoyancy troubles.
    Annoyances toughen the thought bubble, joylessly fester, till avoidances double.
    Muscles coincide in constricting, a soft touch is going white in the knuckles.
    It's a struggle to breathe right much less give an even decent rebuttal.
    You just want to be happy; but that's a hell of an act. Snappy.
    You're running out of excuses... Recently disheveled. Daffy.
    You use just to have a hell of a knack. Now I couldn't dig you with shovels.
    The serotonin is lacking; cracking dopamine fix with a flame flutter.
    For a moment you're laughing, then, all the shit is back to still lame.
    All you crave is a change, like governments, but all you switch is the strain,
    to more venomous. Writing verse after verse, then reversing your name.
    Strenuous is the life of a fighter whose only need is the approval of paper,
    while your overgenerous self worth is torn to an underwriter's pieces,
    when your fans have returned to haters, street team to beefers.
    Lazarus lasers up to scope out and sacrifice an indigenous Jesus.

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