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    WK16: Unfukwitable (0-1) vs SiQ (2-0) Unfukwitable Wins

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    Re: WK16: Unfukwitable (0-1) vs SiQ (2-0)

    Check

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    Almost forgot..... fuck the pats

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    Re: WK16: Unfukwitable (0-1) vs SiQ (2-0)

    .....check
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    Re: WK16: Unfukwitable (0-1) vs SiQ (2-0)

    (I read ur past battles & Holy FUK u like to recycle bro....)


    Ur girl cant stand when u Recycle... Her nerves get to soarin
    But has no problem lettin me crush that box & bein put by the curb in the mornin

    Talkin shit'll get u Awarded 6 times from deadly squeezes
    So even if u Duck Twice, u'll still get hit wit 4 metal pieces

    (^check his awards)


    No matter how tough he acts, just know he's fuckin still soft
    Get U-hauled once I tie him to 1 of their trucks & peel off

    I'll push ur Scalpin if someone offers a great price
    So take a SeatGeek or ur fam'll score tickets to ur gravesite

    Blowtorch ur kids.. they shouldnt play wit fire, its not a fuckin game
    What a shame, now ur avatar ain't the only thing up in flames

    (Watch ur mouth when u talk to me, youngin... )

    He tried disrespectin his elders, so my 5 9's got lifted & blew
    But when his limbs Tory ended up singin a whole different tune

    This is where I put an N to UN, so I dare him to tempt me wit heat
    Not havin structure's a SIN & each bar gotta holy should of battled MV this week

    Wit watered down verses.. U gettin signed is a day-dream
    Claim to be independent until I drown u in a mainstream

    I'll let the Sig hit u, so ur really tagged wit Do0o0M today
    Got 1-2 many wk16's, so when u faced Bayou.. ur the 1 who got Blue away

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    Re: WK16: Unfukwitable (0-1) vs SiQ (2-0)

    aka Klass


    Once u in my Visuals I'm turnin u Invisible, I'm Cynical;
    mistake me for the 'type to talk it out' I'll make a Stephen Hawking twin of you.
    Fuck the Pats?, I hit his hut w/ a Tom & gauge;
    turn his Living-room to Gillette Stadium I left his head center stage
    Let ya loved ones watch helplessly as I use the tech;
    hear his family calling 'n SiQ won't be excused from death.
    Brains arranged got'em out laying slain;
    Twitch'n in a Stream hoping for heart donations, it aint a game.
    Those terrible N/S verses should stir up lots of self doubt;
    Tf you got..Caged,For Battling and Knocked yourself out.
    ^^based on my N/S Medals my lips should be zipped as fuck;
    I'm tryna remove those w/ this battle now my 3rd one's a Sittin Duck.
    Let Buck 50s pile on his jaw slashed w/ the arch;
    Smiles on top of Smiles he'll be a Klass sticker chart.

    It's a Big Gap between each line.. So go and babble on the scene
    Cos ya Structure explains this battle to the T.
    the RB's M.C Search & that 90s theme fit ya pen schemes perf.
    Ya Bar Break up gon have ya Heart Moniter the opposite of MV's verse.
    D O 0 O 0 M

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    Re: WK16: Unfukwitable (0-1) vs SiQ (2-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    He tried disrespectin his elders, so my 5 9's got lifted & blew
    But when his limbs Tory ended up singin a whole different tune

    --- Wasnt a fan of ur verse, u got the shot down but need more creativity and personals. I liked this one bar but it was simple wp with a decent flip....


    Once u in my Visuals I'm turnin u Invisible, I'm Cynical;
    mistake me for the 'type to talk it out' I'll make a Stephen Hawking twin of you.
    --- first line=battle over. Fuuuuck.
    Brains arranged got'em out laying slain;
    Twitch'n in a Stream hoping for heart donations, it aint a game
    --- good...
    Those terrible N/S verses should stir up lots of self doubt;
    Tf you got..Caged,For Battling and Knocked yourself out.
    --- I assume this is a personal. Good....
    ^^based on my N/S Medals my lips should be zipped as fuck;
    I'm tryna remove those w/ this battle now my 3rd one's a Sittin Duck.
    --- good flip on the ns medals....
    Let Buck 50s pile on his jaw slashed w/ the arch;
    Smiles on top of Smiles he'll be a Klass sticker chart.
    --- easy killer. Fuck

    It's a Big Gap between each line.. So go and babble on the scene
    Cos ya Structure explains this battle to the T.
    --- simple but good....



    V. Fukwit
    Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.

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    Re: WK16: Unfukwitable (0-1) vs SiQ (2-0)

    Quote Originally Posted by .SiQ. View Post
    (I read ur past battles & Holy FUK u like to recycle bro....)


    Ur girl cant stand when u Recycle... Her nerves get to soarin
    But has no problem lettin me crush that box & bein put by the curb in the mornin
    ...nah
    Talkin shit'll get u Awarded 6 times from deadly squeezes
    So even if u Duck Twice, u'll still get hit wit 4 metal pieces
    ...This is ok, expo wasnt needed at al
    (^check his awards)


    No matter how tough he acts, just know he's fuckin still soft
    Get U-hauled once I tie him to 1 of their trucks & peel off
    ...played
    I'll push ur Scalpin if someone offers a great price
    So take a SeatGeek or ur fam'll score tickets to ur gravesite
    ...cool
    Blowtorch ur kids.. they shouldnt play wit fire, its not a fuckin game
    What a shame, now ur avatar ain't the only thing up in flames
    ...nah
    (Watch ur mouth when u talk to me, youngin... )

    He tried disrespectin his elders, so my 5 9's got lifted & blew
    But when his limbs Tory ended up singin a whole different tune
    ...lol ok
    This is where I put an N to UN, so I dare him to tempt me wit heat
    Not havin structure's a SIN & each bar gotta holy should of battled MV this week
    ...ok
    Wit watered down verses.. U gettin signed is a day-dream
    Claim to be independent until I drown u in a mainstream
    ....no sir
    I'll let the Sig hit u, so ur really tagged wit Do0o0M today
    Got 1-2 many wk16's, so when u faced Bayou.. ur the 1 who got Blue away
    ...nah
    Quote Originally Posted by Unfukwitable View Post
    aka Klass


    Once u in my Visuals I'm turnin u Invisible, I'm Cynical;
    mistake me for the 'type to talk it out' I'll make a Stephen Hawking twin of you.
    ...lol
    Fuck the Pats?, I hit his hut w/ a Tom & gauge;
    turn his Living-room to Gillette Stadium I left his head center stage
    ...nah
    Let ya loved ones watch helplessly as I use the tech;
    hear his family calling 'n SiQ won't be excused from death.
    ...ok
    Brains arranged got'em out laying slain;
    Twitch'n in a Stream hoping for heart donations, it aint a game.
    ...eh ok
    Those terrible N/S verses should stir up lots of self doubt;
    Tf you got..Caged,For Battling and Knocked yourself out.
    ...nice
    ^^based on my N/S Medals my lips should be zipped as fuck;
    I'm tryna remove those w/ this battle now my 3rd one's a Sittin Duck.
    ...ok
    Let Buck 50s pile on his jaw slashed w/ the arch;
    Smiles on top of Smiles he'll be a Klass sticker chart.
    ...nasty
    It's a Big Gap between each line.. So go and babble on the scene
    Cos ya Structure explains this battle to the T.
    ...no sir
    the RB's M.C Search & that 90s theme fit ya pen schemes perf.
    Ya Bar Break up gon have ya Heart Moniter the opposite of MV's verse.
    ...lol
    v. unfukwitable... nice read from both. SiQ had some really bad misses though imo. Unfuk was more consistent.

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    Re: WK16: Unfukwitable (0-1) vs SiQ (2-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    @siQ -

    ur girl cant stand when u Recycle... Her nerves get to soarin
    But has no problem lettin me crush that box & bein put by the curb in the mornin

    Lmao, pretty good bar. Nice one.

    Talkin shit'll get u Awarded 6 times from deadly squeezes
    So even if u Duck Twice, u'll still get hit wit 4 metal pieces

    This was okay. Could've been better, but alright.

    (^check his awards)


    No matter how tough he acts, just know he's fuckin still soft
    Get U-hauled once I tie him to 1 of their trucks & peel off

    Not too good here, could've been better.

    I'll push ur Scalpin if someone offers a great price
    So take a SeatGeek or ur fam'll score tickets to ur gravesite

    Not too good here, could be better.

    Blowtorch ur kids.. they shouldnt play wit fire, its not a fuckin game
    What a shame, now ur avatar ain't the only thing up in flames

    Lol, pretty decent here.

    (Watch ur mouth when u talk to me, youngin... )

    He tried disrespectin his elders, so my 5 9's got lifted & blew
    But when his limbs Tory ended up singin a whole different tune

    Not too good here, could be better.

    This is where I put an N to UN, so I dare him to tempt me wit heat
    Not havin structure's a SIN & each bar gotta holy should of battled MV this week

    This was better, and it has me in it. Decent. Like..lol

    Wit watered down verses.. U gettin signed is a day-dream
    Claim to be independent until I drown u in a mainstream

    I've seen some mainstream flips, but could be better.


    I'll let the Sig hit u, so ur really tagged wit Do0o0M today
    Got 1-2 many wk16's, so when u faced Bayou.. ur the 1 who got Blue away

    Decent here.

    Unfukwitable -

    Once u in my Visuals I'm turnin u Invisible, I'm Cynical;
    mistake me for the 'type to talk it out' I'll make a Stephen Hawking twin of you.

    Lmao, pretty good. Decent.

    Fuck the Pats?, I hit his hut w/ a Tom & gauge;
    turn his Living-room to Gillette Stadium I left his head center stage

    Nice, decent.

    Let ya loved ones watch helplessly as I use the tech;
    hear his family calling 'n SiQ won't be excused from death.

    Could be better, but okay.

    Brains arranged got'em out laying slain;
    Twitch'n in a Stream hoping for heart donations, it aint a game.

    This was not too good, lol.

    Those terrible N/S verses should stir up lots of self doubt;
    Tf you got..Caged,For Battling and Knocked yourself out.

    Lol, could be better.

    ^^based on my N/S Medals my lips should be zipped as fuck;
    I'm tryna remove those w/ this battle now my 3rd one's a Sittin Duck.

    Good one, nice.

    Let Buck 50s pile on his jaw slashed w/ the arch;
    Smiles on top of Smiles he'll be a Klass sticker chart.

    Decent, nice.

    It's a Big Gap between each line.. So go and babble on the scene
    Cos ya Structure explains this battle to the T.

    This was better, decent.

    the RB's M.C Search & that 90s theme fit ya pen schemes perf.
    Ya Bar Break up gon have ya Heart Moniter the opposite of MV's verse.

    Decent..


    Overall -

    Both had some good bars, both had their ups and downs; but I have to go with the one who had the more better bars..and that's Unfukwitable..for now..lol

    V/ Unfukwitable

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    Re: WK16: Unfukwitable (0-1) vs SiQ (2-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    Ur girl cant stand when u Recycle... Her nerves get to soarin
    But has no problem lettin me crush that box & bein put by the curb in the mornin
    Lmao this is dope
    Talkin shit'll get u Awarded 6 times from deadly squeezes
    So even if u Duck Twice, u'll still get hit wit 4 metal pieces
    Cool
    (^check his awards)
    STFU

    No matter how tough he acts, just know he's fuckin still soft
    Get U-hauled once I tie him to 1 of their trucks & peel off
    Meh this needed more for me
    I'll push ur Scalpin if someone offers a great price
    So take a SeatGeek or ur fam'll score tickets to ur gravesite
    I Fuk wit this
    Blowtorch ur kids.. they shouldnt play wit fire, its not a fuckin game
    What a shame, now ur avatar ain't the only thing up in flames
    Nah man
    (Watch ur mouth when u talk to me, youngin... )

    He tried disrespectin his elders, so my 5 9's got lifted & blew
    But when his limbs Tory ended up singin a whole different tune
    This was secret sick...deff could have been more dope but i fuk wit this
    This is where I put an N to UN, so I dare him to tempt me wit heat
    Not havin structure's a SIN & each bar gotta holy should of battled MV this week
    Reach
    Wit watered down verses.. U gettin signed is a day-dream
    Claim to be independent until I drown u in a mainstream
    This could have been dope man...jab at best
    I'll let the Sig hit u, so ur really tagged wit Do0o0M today
    Got 1-2 many wk16's, so when u faced Bayou.. ur the 1 who got Blue away
    Thought this was aight man...some played shit but the 1-2 many wk 16's was nice...needed a different angle

    Vs


    Once u in my Visuals I'm turnin u Invisible, I'm Cynical;
    mistake me for the 'type to talk it out' I'll make a Stephen Hawking twin of you.
    I fuk wit this bro...
    Fuck the Pats?, I hit his hut w/ a Tom & gauge;
    turn his Living-room to Gillette Stadium I left his head center stage
    had to think about this i fuk with this...could have been better tho
    Let ya loved ones watch helplessly as I use the tech;
    hear his family calling 'n SiQ won't be excused from death.
    Decent... calling N Siq or calling siq?
    Brains arranged got'em out laying slain;
    Twitch'n in a Stream hoping for heart donations, it aint a game.
    Seems a bit basic to me
    Those terrible N/S verses should stir up lots of self doubt;
    Tf you got..Caged,For Battling and Knocked yourself out.
    cool
    ^^based on my N/S Medals my lips should be zipped as fuck;
    I'm tryna remove those w/ this battle now my 3rd one's a Sittin Duck.
    Cool
    Let Buck 50s pile on his jaw slashed w/ the arch;
    Smiles on top of Smiles he'll be a Klass sticker chart.
    nah man
    It's a Big Gap between each line.. So go and babble on the scene
    Cos ya Structure explains this battle to the T.
    nah
    the RB's M.C Search & that 90s theme fit ya pen schemes perf.
    Ya Bar Break up gon have ya Heart Moniter the opposite of MV's verse.
    jab at best man



    OVerall both had some misses and some dope bars... I got Siq with more quotables here plus Fuk dropped lazy bars towards the end prolly just to rush and get it in. I got Siq edging this.

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    Re: WK16: Unfukwitable (0-1) vs SiQ (2-0)

    Quote Originally Posted by .SiQ. View Post
    (I read ur past battles & Holy FUK u like to recycle bro....)


    Ur girl cant stand when u Recycle... Her nerves get to soarin
    But has no problem lettin me crush that box & bein put by the curb in the mornin
    Ehhhh ok
    Talkin shit'll get u Awarded 6 times from deadly squeezes
    So even if u Duck Twice, u'll still get hit wit 4 metal pieces
    Don't love this. Too complicated.
    (^check his awards)
    No matter how tough he acts, just know he's fuckin still soft
    Get U-hauled once I tie him to 1 of their trucks & peel off
    This is kind of clever. I don't love the set up or the wording.
    I'll push ur Scalpin if someone offers a great price
    So take a SeatGeek or ur fam'll score tickets to ur gravesite
    This concept was cool and had way more potential than this punch
    Blowtorch ur kids.. they shouldnt play wit fire, its not a fuckin game
    What a shame, now ur avatar ain't the only thing up in flames
    This is too literal.
    (Watch ur mouth when u talk to me, youngin... )
    He tried disrespectin his elders, so my 5 9's got lifted & blew
    But when his limbs Tory ended up singin a whole different tune
    Too complicated delivery of a really interesting wordplay. YOu didn't need the 5 9 part.
    This is where I put an N to UN, so I dare him to tempt me wit heat
    Not havin structure's a SIN & each bar gotta holy should of battled MV this week
    Eh. DOn't love any of this
    Wit watered down verses.. U gettin signed is a day-dream
    Claim to be independent until I drown u in a mainstream
    No
    I'll let the Sig hit u, so ur really tagged wit Do0o0M today
    Got 1-2 many wk16's, so when u faced Bayou.. ur the 1 who got Blue away
    nope
    Quote Originally Posted by Unfukwitable View Post
    aka Klass
    Once u in my Visuals I'm turnin u Invisible, I'm Cynical;
    mistake me for the 'type to talk it out' I'll make a Stephen Hawking twin of you.
    Nope
    Fuck the Pats?, I hit his hut w/ a Tom & gauge;
    turn his Living-room to Gillette Stadium I left his head center stage
    Nope
    Let ya loved ones watch helplessly as I use the tech;
    hear his family calling 'n SiQ won't be excused from death.
    Ok this is clever
    Brains arranged got'em out laying slain;
    Twitch'n in a Stream hoping for heart donations, it aint a game.
    Like the concept dont like the punch or execution
    Those terrible N/S verses should stir up lots of self doubt;
    Tf you got..Caged,For Battling and Knocked yourself out.
    Nope
    ^^based on my N/S Medals my lips should be zipped as fuck;
    I'm tryna remove those w/ this battle now my 3rd one's a Sittin Duck.
    Nope
    Let Buck 50s pile on his jaw slashed w/ the arch;
    Smiles on top of Smiles he'll be a Klass sticker chart.
    This is pretty cute
    It's a Big Gap between each line.. So go and babble on the scene
    Cos ya Structure explains this battle to the T.
    Eh
    the RB's M.C Search & that 90s theme fit ya pen schemes perf.
    Ya Bar Break up gon have ya Heart Moniter the opposite of MV's verse.
    Hah. This is cute.
    Higher highs and lower lows, but overall IMO a better verse. Vote for Unfuckwithable.

    Both dudes had similar issues --- halfway decent concepts, over complicated and not well worded. They're me 10 weeks ago.

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