WK16 CHAMP MATCH: Plethora (7-2) vs Phalanx (3-0) Pleth Wins

[King]

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@plehora @Phalanx h

[Phalanx]

Check. How many lines you want to go, Pleth?

[plethora]

his custom title says you'll get the point w/ a Spear pictured in the avy..







try that shit with me, soul coming out ur bodyframe & dome
soon as phal Lifts his Spirits gonna feel like god's taking him home
close call last week.. squeaked past Spree, edging dude
beat/Kill by the Skin of ur Teeth, this week u'll resemble animals from rdr2
member since 2013 & no champion accomps listed with you
been seeing the same bitch for 5 years w/ no ring..  thought I had commitment issues
my killers'll butcher, then curb stomp his head for loot
no nba when Phal Out, but he'll take 6 hacks before getting the boot
ima legend, while u'll never have accomps for text shown
only thing under ur name gonna be Nov. 2013 - Dec. 2018 on the headstone
want my title bad, but ain't animal enough to take the bling
had ur Heart set on a Belt, til its across a slaughterhouse conveyer machine
waited for this moment ya whole life, prolly wet urself now
ain't miss universe when u Philippine Sensation going for the crown
ima cut ur wrist like suicide, & continue chopping u hollow
let ur family see it up-close, First Hand..  then the rest of ur body to follow

[Phalanx]

@plethora aka phlegm

Marvel @ the concept as I go viking mode and grab 'em.
I'll have him Loki crashin-- when I leave 'thora thrown like its Odin's passin!
Me & his girl had stupid sex, she let me straight bust in & abuse her neck...
Now dude is wrecked cuz she said she wanna break up Phlegm like Mucinex..
Only half his fam'll come to the funeral but that ain't the embarrassing part..
The titles changing hands after this body n' they wanna know who inherits his car!
I will scramble "Plethora"...think like a fork n some eggs...
Blood stains'll tell a story, bout how "Phal tore" him to shreds!
When it comes to gore & imagery? No way this bum is passin me!
Ya'll think Plethysmographic....til I use the pump to test his lung capacity!
Carson Wentz kinda guy...The 9'll back him up, have an shaking for real..
Cuz I refuse to respect a championship won with out taking the field..
Your girl took the whole team, n was still thirsty....She's an obvious grinder...
Redskin's center....She'll hit that 3point stance with anybody behind her!
You seam pressed, title match means in creased lines, your fate is planned...
Smash through that origami defense n start folding this paper champ.

[Echelon]

@plethora 's verse -

try that shit with me, soul coming out ur bodyframe & dome
soon as phal Lifts his Spirits gonna feel like god's taking him home

Decent opener. Was good for what it was. Wording could've been stronger, but all is good.

close call last week.. squeaked past Spree, edging dude
beat/Kill by the Skin of ur Teeth, this week u'll resemble animals from rdr2

This was pretty decent as-well, but watch for your wording..in close bouts..

member since 2013 & no champion accomps listed with you
been seeing the same bitch for 5 years w/ no ring.. thought I had commitment issues

Decent bar here, wording was nice and exact. Decent.

my killers'll butcher, then curb stomp his head for loot
no nba when Phal Out, but he'll take 6 hacks before getting the boot

Not feeling this one, wasn't too good.

ima legend, while u'll never have accomps for text shown
only thing under ur name gonna be Nov. 2013 - Dec. 2018 on the headstone

Funny, but could've been a bit better.

want my title bad, but ain't animal enough to take the bling
had ur Heart set on a Belt, til its across a slaughterhouse conveyer machine

Good bar, nice one. Good.

waited for this moment ya whole life, prolly wet urself now
ain't miss universe when u Philippine Sensation going for the crown

Wasn't feeling this at all really. Sounds like something a spoiled little kid would say, lmao. Could've been better.

ima cut ur wrist like suicide, & continue chopping u hollow
let ur family see it up-close, First Hand.. then the rest of ur body to follow

Decent closer. Nice.
@Phalanx 's verse -

Marvel @ the concept as I go viking mode and grab 'em.
I'll have him Loki crashin-- when I leave 'thora thrown like its Odin's passin!

Very nice opener. This actually hits pretty nice. Good.

Me & his girl had stupid sex, she let me straight bust in & abuse her neck...
Now dude is wrecked cuz she said she wanna break up Phlegm like Mucinex..

Nice one, here.

Only half his fam'll come to the funeral but that ain't the embarrassing part..
The titles changing hands after this body n' they wanna know who inherits his car!

Damn, this was a nice. Top quality bar here. You could top a lot of people with this kind of bar. Nice.

I will scramble "Plethora"...think like a fork n some eggs...
Blood stains'll tell a story, bout how "Phal tore" him to shreds!

Not really feeling this one, could've been better.

When it comes to gore & imagery? No way this bum is passin me!
Ya'll think Plethysmographic....til I use the pump to test his lung capacity!

Niice one, again. Good.

Carson Wentz kinda guy...The 9'll back him up, have an shaking for real..
Cuz I refuse to respect a championship won with out taking the field..

Not feeling this one, could've been better.

Your girl took the whole team, n was still thirsty....She's an obvious grinder...
Redskin's center....She'll hit that 3point stance with anybody behind her!

This was better, nice.

You seam pressed, title match means in creased lines, your fate is planned...
Smash through that origami defense n start folding this paper champ.

Good closer, nice.

Overall - Twas' a good battle to read. Read it twice for a good look out, and it was close and good. But I believe Phalanx had the more worthy top calibre' verse, and topped plethora by a few notches. Not a bad battle, good work you guys. Nice one, here.

V/ Phalanx

[Greedy]

Plethora:
Opener- dope. Good start
Rdr2- this was good too. Skin/teeth almost hurt the impact, because that phrase is played, bit it was relevant to the concept and it worked imo.
Commitment issues- weak
Foul out- good concept but that nameplay is forced. Thats not now his name is pronounced. So that hurts the impact here imo.
Headstone- weak
Conveyer belt- this one also has played elements to it, but u did enough
Philippine- this forced. Good concept but i cant give u this.
Closer- dope

Vs

Phalanx:
Opener- this whole idea is played. U did throw a NP in there to spice it up a bit.
Mucinex- this was decent. A biiit predictable, but good overall.
Car inheritance- ok. This was heat
Phaltore- creative for sure, but this didnt do it for me.
Plethysmographic- this is nice. Very creative and the wordplay works.
Carson wentz- good personal. I liked it
3pt stance- unfortunately ive seen a few lines like this. So this loses impact for me
Paper champion- i liked the concept, but a lot of the wp tie ins were played. U def coulda done more damage w the paper champ angle.



Vote plethora. Overall, i liked his verse more.
Good shit to both

[Networth]

This was an excellent champ match, with two opposing styles that seemed to face off well against eachother. A thoroughly concieved battle full of 9's and 10's on a scale, but with a few 8's that helped determine for me, the rightful victor.

try that shit with me, soul coming out ur bodyframe & dome
soon as phal Lifts his Spirits gonna feel like god's taking him home
9/10
close call last week.. squeaked past Spree, edging dude
beat/Kill by the Skin of ur Teeth, this week u'll resemble animals from rdr2
8/10
member since 2013 & no champion accomps listed with you
been seeing the same bitch for 5 years w/ no ring.. thought I had commitment issues
10/10
my killers'll butcher, then curb stomp his head for loot
no nba when Phal Out, but he'll take 6 hacks before getting the boot
9/10
ima legend, while u'll never have accomps for text shown
only thing under ur name gonna be Nov. 2013 - Dec. 2018 on the headstone
8/10
want my title bad, but ain't animal enough to take the bling
had ur Heart set on a Belt, til its across a slaughterhouse conveyer machine
9/10
waited for this moment ya whole life, prolly wet urself now
ain't miss universe when u Philippine Sensation going for the crown
8/10
ima cut ur wrist like suicide, & continue chopping u hollow
let ur family see it up-close, First Hand.. then the rest of ur body to follow
9/10

vs


Marvel @ the concept as I go viking mode and grab 'em.
I'll have him Loki crashin-- when I leave 'thora thrown like its Odin's passin!
8/10
Me & his girl had stupid sex, she let me straight bust in & abuse her neck...
Now dude is wrecked cuz she said she wanna break up Phlegm like Mucinex..
9/10
Only half his fam'll come to the funeral but that ain't the embarrassing part..
The titles changing hands after this body n' they wanna know who inherits his car!
10/10
I will scramble "Plethora"...think like a fork n some eggs...
Blood stains'll tell a story, bout how "Phal tore" him to shreds!
8/10
When it comes to gore & imagery? No way this bum is passin me!
Ya'll think Plethysmographic....til I use the pump to test his lung capacity!
9/10
Carson Wentz kinda guy...The 9'll back him up, have an shaking for real..
Cuz I refuse to respect a championship won with out taking the field..
9/10
Your girl took the whole team, n was still thirsty....She's an obvious grinder...
Redskin's center....She'll hit that 3point stance with anybody behind her!
9/10
You seam pressed, title match means in creased lines, your fate is planned...
Smash through that origami defense n start folding this paper champ.
10/10


Again, an excellent example of a champ match, with few to no misses. There were however bars that came off as less effective than others, and that made the slight difference.

V/Phalanx by a small margin.

[CleverWordz]

his custom title says you'll get the point w/ a Spear pictured in the avy..







try that shit with me, soul coming out ur bodyframe & dome
soon as phal Lifts his Spirits gonna feel like god's taking him home
the pronunciation on his name isn't similar to phal? Good try tho
close call last week.. squeaked past Spree, edging dude
beat/Kill by the Skin of ur Teeth, this week u'll resemble animals from rdr2
this was a good reference, but it should've been associated with a guy being interrogated. Since those options pop up during...
member since 2013 & no champion accomps listed with you
been seeing the same bitch for 5 years w/ no ring..  thought I had commitment issues
nice personal jab here.
my killers'll butcher, then curb stomp his head for loot
no nba when Phal Out, but he'll take 6 hacks before getting the boot
again the nameplay doesn't fit well here.. Your using it in the wrong context. Listen to how his name is being said.
ima legend, while u'll never have accomps for text shown
only thing under ur name gonna be Nov. 2013 - Dec. 2018 on the headstone
nah not really feeling this here
want my title bad, but ain't animal enough to take the bling
had ur Heart set on a Belt, til its across a slaughterhouse conveyer machine
nice nice almost my favorite bar yet here
waited for this moment ya whole life, prolly wet urself now
ain't miss universe when u Philippine Sensation going for the crown
eh.. I get it just wasn't a strong jab.
ima cut ur wrist like suicide, & continue chopping u hollow
let ur family see it up-close, First Hand..  then the rest of ur body to follow

I honestly didn't like your closure... Could have been better.

@plethora aka phlegm

Marvel @ the concept as I go viking mode and grab 'em.
I'll have him Loki crashin-- when I leave 'thora thrown like its Odin's passin!
alright some marvel concepts thrown
Me & his girl had stupid sex, she let me straight bust in & abuse her neck...
Now dude is wrecked cuz she said she wanna break up Phlegm like Mucinex..
nice. Not sure on the correlation with his alias name, but still cool
Only half his fam'll come to the funeral but that ain't the embarrassing part..
The titles changing hands after this body n' they wanna know who inherits his car!
this bar had potential but missing some value
I will scramble "Plethora"...think like a fork n some eggs...
Blood stains'll tell a story, bout how "Phal tore" him to shreds!
nah.. The nameplay I wasn't feeling
When it comes to gore & imagery? No way this bum is passin me!
Ya'll think Plethysmographic....til I use the pump to test his lung capacity!
ok ok.. Packing out some big words.
Carson Wentz kinda guy...The 9'll back him up, have an shaking for real..
Cuz I refuse to respect a championship won with out taking the field..
cool reference to the eagles and this battle. Not a high performance bar but definitely stung
Your girl took the whole team, n was still thirsty....She's an obvious grinder...
Redskin's center....She'll hit that 3point stance with anybody behind her!
eh nah... Not feeling this
You seam pressed, title match means in creased lines, your fate is planned...
Smash through that origami defense n start folding this paper champ.

not the best closure, but pretty conservative to say atleas

Overall: This was an interesting champion matchup. Pleth, I thought you had some creative ideas just the nameplay wasn't accurate enough for me. It doesn't sound similar as his name is supposed to say aloud. I did enjoy the RDR2 line along with commitment one. Phalanx, you had a few misses here and there as well. But the most effective lines from you were: the mucinex, title change after decease, and Carson wentz line. The rest weren't that quoting. I still enjoyed reading nonetheless. So with that being said... I have to go far less average with consistency. To me Phalanx had the better edge this battle.. Close tho very close. Good battle guys!

[Zunto]

In a rush for time I’ll edit with breakdown but for now I have plethora winning

[King]

In a rush for time I’ll edit with breakdown but for now I have plethora winning

Don't forget mang.

[Ryno]

his custom title says you'll get the point w/ a Spear pictured in the avy..







try that shit with me, soul coming out ur bodyframe & dome
soon as phal Lifts his Spirits gonna feel like god's taking him home
...ok
close call last week.. squeaked past Spree, edging dude
beat/Kill by the Skin of ur Teeth, this week u'll resemble animals from rdr2
...never played over my head
member since 2013 & no champion accomps listed with you
been seeing the same bitch for 5 years w/ no ring..  thought I had commitment issues
...nasty
my killers'll butcher, then curb stomp his head for loot
no nba when Phal Out, but he'll take 6 hacks before getting the boot
...my type of bar
ima legend, while u'll never have accomps for text shown
only thing under ur name gonna be Nov. 2013 - Dec. 2018 on the headstone
...eh
want my title bad, but ain't animal enough to take the bling
had ur Heart set on a Belt, til its across a slaughterhouse conveyer machine
...ok
waited for this moment ya whole life, prolly wet urself now
ain't miss universe when u Philippine Sensation going for the crown
...ok
ima cut ur wrist like suicide, & continue chopping u hollow
let ur family see it up-close, First Hand..  then the rest of ur body to follow
...i like this

@plethora aka phlegm

Marvel @ the concept as I go viking mode and grab 'em.
I'll have him Loki crashin-- when I leave 'thora thrown like its Odin's passin!
...nah
Me & his girl had stupid sex, she let me straight bust in & abuse her neck...
Now dude is wrecked cuz she said she wanna break up Phlegm like Mucinex..
...ok
Only half his fam'll come to the funeral but that ain't the embarrassing part..
The titles changing hands after this body n' they wanna know who inherits his car!
...cool
I will scramble "Plethora"...think like a fork n some eggs...
Blood stains'll tell a story, bout how "Phal tore" him to shreds!
...nah
When it comes to gore & imagery? No way this bum is passin me!
Ya'll think Plethysmographic....til I use the pump to test his lung capacity!
...sheesh
Carson Wentz kinda guy...The 9'll back him up, have an shaking for real..
Cuz I refuse to respect a championship won with out taking the field..
...eh
Your girl took the whole team, n was still thirsty....She's an obvious grinder...
Redskin's center....She'll hit that 3point stance with anybody behind her!
...nah
You seam pressed, title match means in creased lines, your fate is planned...
Smash through that origami defense n start folding this paper champ.
...dont like this

v. plethora...more consistent, wasnt feeling the tail end of phals verse. still was a good read

[King]

NEEDS VOTES

3-2 phal unless @Pilgrimage edits in a breakdown.

[Bomb Bard]

try that shit with me, soul coming out ur bodyframe & dome
soon as phal Lifts his Spirits gonna feel like god's taking him home
Thought this was dope tbh
close call last week.. squeaked past Spree, edging dude
beat/Kill by the Skin of ur Teeth, this week u'll resemble animals from rdr2
This was cool..not harsh tho... Plus that was a fuckin robbery wack faggots voted for this dude
member since 2013 & no champion accomps listed with you
been seeing the same bitch for 5 years w/ no ring.. thought I had commitment issues
I fuk with this tbh
my killers'll butcher, then curb stomp his head for loot
no nba when Phal Out, but he'll take 6 hacks before getting the boot
this was aight
ima legend, while u'll never have accomps for text shown
only thing under ur name gonna be Nov. 2013 - Dec. 2018 on the headstone
Nah
want my title bad, but ain't animal enough to take the bling
had ur Heart set on a Belt, til its across a slaughterhouse conveyer machine
This is cool but we get it... he hasnt champed
waited for this moment ya whole life, prolly wet urself now
ain't miss universe when u Philippine Sensation going for the crown
Feel a Peen sensation? Am I missing something? this a miss
ima cut ur wrist like suicide, & continue chopping u hollow
let ur family see it up-close, First Hand.. then the rest of ur body to follow
Dope

vs


Marvel @ the concept as I go viking mode and grab 'em.
I'll have him Loki crashin-- when I leave 'thora thrown like its Odin's passin!
No one calls him Thora...this a miss
Me & his girl had stupid sex, she let me straight bust in & abuse her neck...
Now dude is wrecked cuz she said she wanna break up Phlegm like Mucinex..
This was cool... I used a Mucinex bar before shit was nice peep it.
Only half his fam'll come to the funeral but that ain't the embarrassing part..
The titles changing hands after this body n' they wanna know who inherits his car!
I fuk wit this tbh
I will scramble "Plethora"...think like a fork n some eggs...
Blood stains'll tell a story, bout how "Phal tore" him to shreds!
DOpe idea...just wasnt executed right man.
When it comes to gore & imagery? No way this bum is passin me!
Ya'll think Plethysmographic....til I use the pump to test his lung capacity!
SIR! this fire
Carson Wentz kinda guy...The 9'll back him up, have an shaking for real..
Cuz I refuse to respect a championship won with out taking the field..
This was nice
Your girl took the whole team, n was still thirsty....She's an obvious grinder...
Redskin's center....She'll hit that 3point stance with anybody behind her!
Dope concept but u were all over the map with this. Jab at best man
You seam pressed, title match means in creased lines, your fate is planned...
Smash through that origami defense n start folding this paper champ.
Nah... plus u being repetative



Overall - CLose battle here tbh I got Pleth By one Quote. pretty cool read tho from both props

[Unfukwitable]

try that shit with me, soul coming out ur bodyframe & dome
soon as phal Lifts his Spirits gonna feel like god's taking him home
member since 2013 & no champion accomps listed with you
been seeing the same bitch for 5 years w/ no ring.. thought I had commitment issues
want my title bad, but ain't animal enough to take the bling
had ur Heart set on a Belt, til its across a slaughterhouse conveyer machine
ima cut ur wrist like suicide, & continue chopping u hollow
let ur family see it up-close, First Hand.. then the rest of ur body to follow

vs

Marvel @ the concept as I go viking mode and grab 'em.
I'll have him Loki crashin-- when I leave 'thora thrown like its Odin's passin!
Only half his fam'll come to the funeral but that ain't the embarrassing part..
The titles changing hands after this body n' they wanna know who inherits his car!
When it comes to gore & imagery? No way this bum is passin me!
Ya'll think Plethysmographic....til I use the pump to test his lung capacity!


alot of dope material I enjoyed alot of bars but I just quoted which ones I felt were the best of each verse imo, One got the line of the battle , that shit was dope, battles like this get me hype I can't even front props to both one got the edge here for me I could see people having different reasons on their winner but for me one jus had harsher hits by a slight margin. v/Pleth

[King]

4-3