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Thread: SIN of Darkness vs. Unfukwitable - UNFUK WINS

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    SIN of Darkness vs. Unfukwitable - UNFUK WINS

    12 lines..due in 24 hrs..or ASP..thanks..let's have it!

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    Re: SIN of Darkness vs. Unfukwitable

    yoUZ sucKz with the verbs, I'm a sEED of life, you're out of LuCK as a HeRB
    As a WhACk MC? You're sucking the worst! I'll DuMP your body in a EaR Canal..Fuck what you HeaRD!
    You can't ArOUse GoDz! You would probably drink HoT Sauce to SOund Hot
    My BlAde firEZ proud Shotz! I'll 'Toss you in the Air' and I'm as fly as Nimbus..you can't ArOuse the ClOud God
    I'm RaPPinG HaZardous! My saliva will have you FaDE away, like taking Baths in AcID bitch!
    RapPing Masochistic! You couldn't 'Fuk wit' Sin' if you PraCticed AbStinence!
    My RaPPIng will be settled, I got twin blades, so you can say I'm 'ClAPPing with the MeTal'
    I'm RaPPing on a level! You're 'ugly as hell' while I'm as HanDSome as a DeVil!
    I'll FaDE! WhOOPsi! I bet this rubber DUcky tastes MuSHY!
    I have ChAins! LOoky! I'll 'put the metal to your chest'..that's a BlaDE pusSy!
    I'm LigHTning's WiTness! You won't hear a sOund but a NiGht with CriCKets!
    SKy's The LiMiT! You're JiREN, but I'm the CLoud God..and you'll never be as FlY as NiMbus!

    12 lines..good luck..this will be good..

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    Re: SIN of Darkness vs. Unfukwitable

    hide ya verse ima post in 24hrs.

    check
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    Re: SIN of Darkness vs. Unfukwitable

    u think ya crafts HOF? the question varies;
    we're skimming 100% & wanna jump off the roof..It’s ledge & dairy
    My nap caps = Bitches slurpin for 4hrs and us chattin for 0;
    Your pillow talks lead to pillow fights w/ an actual pillow.
    I end Life barriers for dwarfs that don't meet the criteria,
    hold a 3by3 photosynthesize of;
    while his casket's surrounded by light carriers;
    A Pinebox for Sin that's just how his prophecy's designed;
    this Bumblebee beyond repair, only hits on the box follow his momma screamin WHY,
    Then I'll post ya organs on the site that day, I'm type eager;
    have his Heart attached to the screen like a Primal Rage life meter.
    I gotta Chopper that doesn't just raise.. it bends hell;
    U HAARP on to the idea of being the cloud god til machines turn u into chem-trails.
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    Re: SIN of Darkness vs. Unfukwitable

    yoUZ sucKz with the verbs, I'm a sEED of life, you're out of LuCK as a HeRB
    As a WhACk MC? You're sucking the worst! I'll DuMP your body in a EaR Canal..Fuck what you HeaRD!
    you will dump his body in an ear canal.....interesting....moving along, it’s a miss btw
    You can't ArOUse GoDz! You would probably drink HoT Sauce to SOund Hot
    My BlAde firEZ proud Shotz! I'll 'Toss you in the Air' and I'm as fly as Nimbus..you can't ArOuse the ClOud God
    man are you trolling? Why do you wRiTe LiKe tHisSs
    I'm RaPPinG HaZardous! My saliva will have you FaDE away, like taking Baths in AcID bitch!
    RapPing Masochistic! You couldn't 'Fuk wit' Sin' if you PraCticed AbStinence!
    My RaPPIng will be settled, I got twin blades, so you can say I'm 'ClAPPing with the MeTal'
    I'm RaPPing on a level! You're 'ugly as hell' while I'm as HanDSome as a DeVil!
    I'll FaDE! WhOOPsi! I bet this rubber DUcky tastes MuSHY!
    I have ChAins! LOoky! I'll 'put the metal to your chest'..that's a BlaDE pusSy!
    I'm LigHTning's WiTness! You won't hear a sOund but a NiGht with CriCKets!
    SKy's The LiMiT! You're JiREN, but I'm the CLoud God..and you'll never be as FlY as NiMbus!
    look man you have a lot of good ideas and the concepts are all here you just have to work on delivery and type like a normal fuckin human being and not a hood rat MySpace slut from 2008


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    u think ya crafts HOF? the question varies;
    we're skimming 100% & wanna jump off the roof..It’s ledge & dairy
    lol I mean I guess this technically works but it’s just so corny..
    My nap caps = Bitches slurpin for 4hrs and us chattin for 0;
    Your pillow talks lead to pillow fights w/ an actual pillow.
    no
    I end Life barriers for dwarfs that don't meet the criteria,
    hold a 3by3 photosynthesize of;
    while his casket's surrounded by light carriers;
    nah
    A Pinebox for Sin that's just how his prophecy's designed;
    this Bumblebee beyond repair, only hits on the box follow his momma screamin WHY,
    this was cool
    Then I'll post ya organs on the site that day, I'm type eager;
    have his Heart attached to the screen like a Primal Rage life meter.
    good again
    I gotta Chopper that doesn't just raise.. it bends hell;
    U HAARP on to the idea of being the cloud god til machines turn u into chem-trails.
    phew, this was sick

    Sinacog idk if you’re just another dia troll or lesnar troll but aside from that, like I said, you have potential and you’re on the right track but you need to fix things. Starting by making your verses not so hard on the eyes. Unfukwitable you started off pretty bad but definitely turned up a gear with your last 3 bars. Your closer was dope, good shit.


    Vote unfukwitable

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    Re: SIN of Darkness vs. Unfukwitable - Open 4 Votes

    smfh
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    Re: SIN of Darkness vs. Unfukwitable - Open 4 Votes

    Quote Originally Posted by Unfukwitable View Post
    smfh
    Drop some votes maybe you’ll get some in return

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    Re: SIN of Darkness vs. Unfukwitable - Open 4 Votes

    Quote Originally Posted by Kill Spree View Post
    Drop some votes maybe you’ll get some in return
    vote links abv try again
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    Re: SIN of Darkness vs. Unfukwitable - Open 4 Votes

    Wasn’t feeling sins verse at all

    Fukushima Open was aight. That heart attached to the screen was dope closer was dope


    Fuk takes this easy

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    Re: SIN of Darkness vs. Unfukwitable - Open 4 Votes

    Obv unfuk takes this. Idk what that other guy was doing but It ain't rap battling. Unfuk took this with an easy verse

    V. Unfuk
    Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.

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    Re: SIN of Darkness vs. Unfukwitable - Open 4 Votes

    Last edited by Zunto; January 21st, 2019 at 12:53 PM

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    Re: SIN of Darkness vs. Unfukwitable

    Quote Originally Posted by Sinacog View Post
    yoUZ sucKz with the verbs, I'm a sEED of life, you're out of LuCK as a HeRB
    As a WhACk MC? You're sucking the worst! I'll DuMP your body in a EaR Canal..Fuck what you HeaRD!
    Concept gas mad potential, as it is? It's an ok jab.
    You can't ArOUse GoDz! You would probably drink HoT Sauce to SOund Hot
    My BlAde firEZ proud Shotz! I'll 'Toss you in the Air' and I'm as fly as Nimbus..you can't ArOuse the ClOud God
    This was weaksauce
    I'm RaPPinG HaZardous! My saliva will have you FaDE away, like taking Baths in AcID bitch!
    RapPing Masochistic! You couldn't 'Fuk wit' Sin' if you PraCticed AbStinence!
    Yeah...on top of being the low hanging fruit with an obvious self-np, it doesn't even work conceptually.
    My RaPPIng will be settled, I got twin blades, so you can say I'm 'ClAPPing with the MeTal'
    I'm RaPPing on a level! You're 'ugly as hell' while I'm as HanDSome as a DeVil!
    Not good
    I'll FaDE! WhOOPsi! I bet this rubber DUcky tastes MuSHY!
    I have ChAins! LOoky! I'll 'put the metal to your chest'..that's a BlaDE pusSy!
    Lackluster..
    I'm LigHTning's WiTness! You won't hear a sOund but a NiGht with CriCKets!
    SKy's The LiMiT! You're JiREN, but I'm the CLoud God..and you'll never be as FlY as NiMbus!
    Yeah...this sucked worse then your other nimbus flip.

    12 lines..good luck..this will be good..
    Quote Originally Posted by Unfukwitable View Post
    u think ya crafts HOF? the question varies;
    we're skimming 100% & wanna jump off the roof..It’s ledge & dairy
    Kinda mild. Seen a nearby identical concept before. The wording was stellar though.
    My nap caps = Bitches slurpin for 4hrs and us chattin for 0;
    Your pillow talks lead to pillow fights w/ an actual pillow.
    Kinda meh...
    I end Life barriers for dwarfs that don't meet the criteria,
    hold a 3by3 photosynthesize of;
    while his casket's surrounded by light carriers;
    Dope idea...but kinda feels like a reach as worded. The pieces are there tgough.
    A Pinebox for Sin that's just how his prophecy's designed;
    this Bumblebee beyond repair, only hits on the box follow his momma screamin WHY,
    Light..
    Then I'll post ya organs on the site that day, I'm type eager;
    have his Heart attached to the screen like a Primal Rage life meter.
    Dope.
    I gotta Chopper that doesn't just raise.. it bends hell;
    U HAARP on to the idea of being the cloud god til machines turn u into chem-trails.
    Nice.
    Easy win for Unfuk. Sin had two good concepts, and a lot of shitty execution.

    Vote - Unfukwitable

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    Re: SIN of Darkness vs. Unfukwitable - OPEN FOR VOTES

    u think ya crafts HOF? the question varies;
    we're skimming 100% & wanna jump off the roof..It’s ledge & dairy

    vs

    I'll FaDE! WhOOPsi! I bet this rubber DUcky tastes MuSHY!
    I have ChAins! LOoky! I'll 'put the metal to your chest'..that's a BlaDE pusSy!
    ( this is a bad bar... I quoted it as the example of what u need to work on... tastes mushy/blade pussy is lazy writing.... u don't take advice, and that's fine, but after a while, folks aren't gonna battle u or only battle u for easy wins...long as YOU like your bars though, I say keep doing ya thing...


    V- UN

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    Re: SIN of Darkness vs. Unfukwitable - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Unfukwitable Wins

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